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|essay about myself, when/where I was born, my study, hobbies, etc.
2 - "...I am the baggiest one." What does "baggiest" describe here? Do you mean biggest? I'm not sure... :) ...
Writing Feedbackcrawling - Oct 17, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 17, 2008
|Essay: On Artificial Intelligence
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|Take advantage of every moment ; Colombia Essay/ Rutgers
NEW - Take advantage of every moment is what my older sister would always tell me. When I was 14 years...
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|Private Eloquence/ PAST EXPERIENCE
Writing Feedbackcowman809 - Oct 16, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 17, 2008
|'Love is the answer to world's questions' - Essay on why love is important in life?
8 - You're very welcome. Feel free to post here not only for feedback on essays, but any general language...
Writing Feedbackvipao - Oct 16, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 18, 2008
|What experiences have led you to select your professional field?
2 - "Zip, zap, zoom! " went my..." "...does my Play Station give way every..." I suggest wrapping the...
Writing Feedbackkimaya - Oct 16, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 16, 2008
|Land for human's purpose or left in its natural conditions ?
NEW - In your country, is there more need for land to be left in its natural conditions or is there...
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|What must we do to truly understand ourselves? Difficult for people to judge themselves evenhandedly
6 - In regards to usage, I suggest one of the books from the "Prentice Hall Guide for College Writers" series...
Writing Feedbackhelenalqy - Oct 15, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 20, 2008
|Essay: "There's no place like home."
Writing Feedbacklearningtowrite - Oct 15, 2008 / learningtowrite - Oct 15, 2008
|An unexpected act of kindness
4 - Good afternoon. Putting this piece at the beginning would be a great idea; it's a "hook" and sets...
Writing Feedbacklearningtowrite - Oct 15, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 16, 2008
|Should we celebrate Halloween? - essay help
NEW - Should we celebrate Halloween? Halloween has become the second most anticipated holiday for children after Christmas and Chanukah....
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|Essay on the short story "Rock Springs" by Richard Ford
2 - Good afternoon. In regards to spelling, I suggest you run the piece through a program with a spell...
Writing Feedbacksarahmk - Oct 14, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 14, 2008
|Creativity is one of the highly concerned points to those aspired people
Writing Feedbackhelenalqy - Oct 13, 2008 / helenalqy - Oct 15, 2008
|Impacts of Senior Citizens in their Choices for Healthcare - essay edit
2 - Good afternoon. As the prompt and/or requirements for this piece were not included in the posting, I can...
Writing Feedbackkcbisslessi - Oct 13, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 14, 2008
|A WONDERFUL CAREER - 'I am ready for my interview'
4 - Good evening. There are some main things I am concerned about in this essay. For instance, with the...
Writing Feedbackbadgrammer - Oct 13, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 14, 2008
|Motivations of buying a product - Toefl Essay
Writing Feedbacktoefl_guy - Oct 13, 2008 / toefl_guy - Oct 14, 2008
|Lost And Found - Narrative Essay
3 - Thank you very much!!!! My teacher said if I had any Misplaced commas. My grade would be automatic D....
Writing Feedbackeeyore_lover29 - Oct 13, 2008 / eeyore_lover29 - Oct 14, 2008
|We can guess the nature of a person according to there dress but we cant make opinion.
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|Observation paper for HRT 101 Benson
4 - Good afternoon. As I have previously commented, check for capitalization. Things that are not proper nouns (specific ...
Writing Feedbackbensonm - Oct 13, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 14, 2008
|The Act of Revenge, The Cask of Amontillado Essay
4 - Good afternoon. "In pace requiescat!" (1) Is correct. Regards, Gloria Moderator, EssayForum.com...
Writing FeedbackBradlays - Oct 13, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 15, 2008
|"Zoo Rejection" - my essay
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|'The ability to learn makes us human' - Rubiks Cube Essay
2 - Good evening. As the requirements to the assignment were not included in the posting, I will focus on...
Writing Feedbackweezer878 - Oct 12, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 12, 2008
|'This woman is my mother' - discuss a person and his or her influence on you
Writing Feedbackzhangyi - Oct 12, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 12, 2008
|Praising others - necessary part of life? Sat Essay
2 - Good morning. This is a great essay; your example of the experiment with the kids highlights your stance...
Writing FeedbackgodsendE - Oct 10, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 10, 2008
|"An for an eye will make the whole world blind" - Method of punishing criminals
NEW - Topic: By punishing murderers with the death penalty, society is also guilt of committing murder. Therefore, life in prison...
Writing Feedbacktoefl_guy - Oct 9, 2008 / — -
|The biggest change in my life - Narrative introduction help
5 - ya .its easy you ,must be think about your last night dream and sometime we have very exciting dream...
Writing Feedbackasdfghjkl - Oct 9, 2008 / gyal - Mar 20, 2013
|which airplane flies the farthest- science report
NEW - This is my science report I just need to make sure the grammar and writing make sense. Thank you....
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|"The Great Gatsby is seen in two ways" - Help with Essay Writing -
10 - Hello! If someone pastes material from other websites, it causes problems for us and can possibly lead to...
Writing Feedbacksara213 - Oct 9, 2008 / EF_Kevin - Feb 9, 2009
|Summary On Pain Meds - paper
2 - Good evening. This looks like the start of a really great paper. You have solid information provided from...
Writing Feedbackhunnybun39 - Oct 9, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 9, 2008
|"The Voting Age" essay
Writing Feedbacktaiyaki - Oct 9, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 11, 2008
|Toefl Essay - approach to problem-solving- How it works for you?
NEW - What is your approach to problem-solving, and how does it work for you? Every problem will have a solution....
Writing Feedbacktoefl_guy - Oct 8, 2008 / — -
|Essay on what you read (Plato, Machiavelli)
2 - Your conclusion should be a wrap-up of your essay. You could quickly rephrase each of these three philosophies and...
Writing Feedbackwordlesstu - Oct 8, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 8, 2008
|Ending Underage Drinking by Making It Legal. Should underage drinking laws be changed.
Writing Feedbackcarebear - Oct 8, 2008 / carebear - Jan 13, 2009
|Character of a Man - Essay
NEW - Please check for grammar and also for the use third person only. This essay was to evaluate the character...
Writing Feedbackmichaelfrye1970 - Oct 6, 2008 / — -
|Proofread Essay on Innocent Erendira and Her Heartless Grandmother
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|Tattoos essay: Our Newest Problem?
4 - You will need to return to the places where you originally found the information. For each of the facts...
Writing Feedbacksilent - Oct 6, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 7, 2008
|Argumentative Essay: Its no ones word
Writing Feedbackobama - Oct 6, 2008 / obama - Oct 6, 2008
|Help starting and brainstorming history paper [essay question]
NEW - The paper is expected to be between 5-7 pages. I'm in the process of brainstorming for it. The instructor...
Writing Feedbackkorr2221 - Oct 6, 2008 / — -
|Essay Based on an Essay You Read
Writing FeedbackFissionMailed - Oct 5, 2008 / FissionMailed - Oct 6, 2008
|Tattoos and piercings essay. Audacious Alterations.
2 - My main concern with this essay is that there is a lot of uncited information here, opening the door...
Writing FeedbackFayFua - Oct 5, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 6, 2008
|Modern brigade de cuisine system..
NEW - I really think that writing is my weakness. Regarding this essay, I wanna explain the different kinds of chefs...
Writing Feedbackeng1 - Oct 5, 2008 / — -
|Comparing Christine and Penny essay
Writing Feedbackeng1 - Oct 5, 2008 / — -
|Argumentative essay - Rich and poor children - school work
4 - Good morning. You're welcome; good luck! I think it's a great idea for international students to study...
Writing FeedbackThuyChi - Oct 5, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 9, 2008
|"Designing a hero" - essay about Linda Segers, "Creating the Myth"
2 - Good afternoon. Because this essay deals with specific material that you and your classmates have exclusive access to...
Writing Feedbacksweetcherokee74 - Oct 4, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 4, 2008
|My teachers and the teacher's day - essay
NEW - Students and teachers are always on the different bank of the lake. Just like how it goes in my...
Writing Feedbackzhaoyuyu - Oct 4, 2008 / — -
|"Teen Gangs: The World of Canadian Street Gangs" --- Does it flow?
4 - Good afternoon. This is a great essay. The content is good and well cited, the paragraphs are very...
Writing Feedbackjordanlee - Oct 2, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 13, 2008
|Choices that define us and Haunt Us Essay
2 - Good morning. The second essay is better constructed and more organized, so I have edited it here: ...
Writing Feedbacktomotomo - Sep 30, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 1, 2008
|Writing an essay about essay - Revising
2 - Good morning. Since the prompt for this assignment was not posted, I can edit for grammar and mechanics...
Writing Feedbacksexy1984 - Sep 30, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 1, 2008
|Four ways to control stress, take up a hobbies, exercise regularly, set realistic goals, etc.
2 - Controlling Stress In other words, having fun with family and friends ...If this is the conclusion to the...
Writing Feedbacktimka - Sep 30, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Sep 30, 2008
|Three main reasons that have inspired me to continue my education
4 - I think with the corrections this essay will answer the prompt easily. Your thinking and writing skills are illustrated,...
Writing Feedbackvaldezs - Sep 29, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Sep 29, 2008
|Memoir - Analysis of how music changed my life for AP11 English
NEW - Sarah Joncas Nothing's Gonna Change My World Everyone has a favorite song, one that he or she...
Writing Feedbacksarahjoncas - Sep 28, 2008 / — -
|obstacles (definition essay)
2 - Good evening. What is/are the prompt/specifics for this assignment? I am afraid I will need more details to...
Writing Feedbackestherq0901 - Sep 28, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Sep 28, 2008
|"americanism means to be proud" - essay
Writing Feedbackrivoltaleandro - Sep 28, 2008 / — -
|Naturalism in all of its naked horror - essay
2 - Good evening. Well, you've definately gotten a topic, haven't you? :) Don't be afraid, it's just a fancy...
Writing Feedbackkaytee - Sep 27, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Sep 27, 2008
|Speed essay - free interpretation
NEW - Hi, can you help me look through this? Thank you! Racing Speed Daemons The rain slicked down...
Writing Feedbacklearningtowrite - Sep 27, 2008 / — -
|Essay about the effects of participation in a sport?
Writing Feedbackconchonho - Sep 25, 2008 / — -
|Debate Essay: Human Cloning Research
NEW - Human Cloning Research The scene of this conversation takes place at Sacramento State University science clubroom. This is...
Writing Feedbacktaiyaki - Sep 24, 2008 / — -
|Diego Maradona. When people succeed, it is because of hard work.
NEW - " When people succeed, it is because of hard work. Luck has nothing to do with success". Do you...
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|'Suicide / LA Diaries' - Essay On A Time In My Life I Felt Desperate
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|Rubik's cube - having trouble with a conclusion
NEW - Could you please give me any grammar mistakes in this essay. Also I am having trouble writing the conclusion,...
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