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|Why do you want to do the short course to which you have been admitted?
NEW - "Why do you want to do the short course to which you have been admitted? In Vietnam, accompanied...
Writing Feedbackkitty20111983 - Jun 13, 2008 / — -
|Literary Analysis Comparative Essay - suggestions for improvement welcome!
6 - Good afternoon :) Citation is tricky, but MLA is pretty straight forward and to the point. It looks...
Writing Feedbackjohn - Jun 11, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Jun 12, 2008
|Super Rod - Essay about a super hero, I have a plot.
Writing Feedbackdeniece - Jun 10, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Jun 11, 2008
|Media coursework, comparing 2 articles..
NEW - Media coursework You are asked to compare item 1 and Item 2, explain which item you think will...
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|The Short Happy Life Of Francis Macomber Essay
NEW - Mrs. Macomber shot her husband on purpose because she wanted to kill him and stay with his money. Mrs....
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|Can You Decide Where to Live?
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|'Vietnam's natural attractions' - something that make you proud about your country
Writing Feedbacklearningtowrite - Jun 6, 2008 / — -
|Topic 4: prohibite smoking in public places
3 - Let's see: Nowadays, people go to public places such as cinemas,restaurants, or bars after long days at offices....
Writing FeedbackSophie - Jun 5, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Aug 12, 2008
|Topic 3: Any form of education other than co-education...
3 - Thank you your advise, I read ideas from the book in library,I don't know this book is copyrighted from...
Writing FeedbackSophie - Jun 5, 2008 / Sophie - Jun 6, 2008
|"Before Breakfast," Drama Essay
2 - Good morning :) You have a good rough draft so far. You support your viewpoints with the text....
Writing Feedbackbolivartech - Jun 4, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Jun 5, 2008
|'household computers and internet' - Causal Analysis
2 - Good morning :) Adding examples and/or details is always a good way to "beef up" an essay; just...
Writing Feedbacksinginheaven - Jun 3, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Jun 4, 2008
|A Doll House Essay - True Man Wants
NEW - Can someone please check my grammar and see if the essay discusses how their relationship and how it presages...
Writing Feedbackbizkitgirlzc - Jun 3, 2008 / — -
|"America is Great" - Need help fast on argumentation essay
NEW - I have an arumentation essay due tomorrow and I suck at writting so any help would be greatly appreciated....
Writing Feedbacklafayettejohn - Jun 3, 2008 / — -
|Ban Smoking - Help critique my controversial/ethics essay
2 - You have made a very important observation; very frequently writers do reread a work the way they "intended" it;...
Writing Feedbacklucero5 - Jun 2, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Jun 5, 2008
|Qualitative research methods coursework review
NEW - Hello, Can you kindly help me review my attached coursework. The question for the assignment is shown below...
Writing Feedbackmophe - Jun 1, 2008 / — -
|Learning something new is always challenging to many of us - the same applies to a foreign language
Writing Feedbackje2ks2 - Jun 1, 2008 / je2ks2 - Jun 8, 2008
|How did Juno Beach on D-Day effect Canada?
Writing Feedbackerindalestudent - May 29, 2008 / EF_Team5 - May 29, 2008
|Three defining moments in Canadian history - History Argumentative Essay
2 - I'd say probbly a 9 or 9.5; you've got good research and good organization. If you fix the few...
Writing FeedbackRishadNoori - May 28, 2008 / EF_Team5 - May 29, 2008
|One year struggling to be a better mom
Writing Feedbackchonggis - May 28, 2008 / — -
|Essay on "Why do Korean students go abroad to study?"
NEW - Why do more and more Korean students choose to study abroad? Nowadays, more and more students are leaving their...
Writing Feedbackbottletenc - May 28, 2008 / — -
|A new challenge in my forties as an English teacher
2 - You have the beginnings of a very good essay here, though it is a little discombobulated :). Let's work...
Writing FeedbackPark Taesik - May 28, 2008 / EF_Team5 - May 28, 2008
|New Government's Policy on English Education
2 - Good morning :) Thank you for posting your essay. What kind of feedback do you need? Regards,...
Writing Feedbackweonshiin - May 28, 2008 / EF_Team5 - May 28, 2008
|First Essay - D-Day Canadian Contributions
NEW - Ok my first post. This forum is great - helpful people doing good things. Ok I wrote this essay...
Writing FeedbackShardul - May 27, 2008 / — -
|Quality or characteristic that helps be a good parent - my 1st Formal Essay
3 - Gloria, thank you. It's awful kind of you to read, and offer tips on how to fix students essays...
Writing Feedbacknclester - May 25, 2008 / nclester - May 26, 2008
|Smoking ban in all public places - persuasive essay
Writing Feedbackbonechills - May 21, 2008 / EF_Team5 - May 21, 2008
|Death penalty in the code of King Hammurabi of Babylon
NEW - i have written the directions for my assignment. is my research paper ok? Direction: in a 10-12 page...
Writing Feedbackice tea - May 20, 2008 / — -
|Mr. Nowack - need help with grammar for a narrative essay
NEW - This scruffy looking guy won't quit staring at me. I look away from him and then back again and...
Writing Feedbacklafayettejohn - May 18, 2008 / — -
|Natural fiber-reinforced composites paragraph (improve grammar question)
2 - Good morning! OK, how about, "This, coupled with the distinctiveness of being an environmentally friendly option in that...
Writing FeedbackLovely Girl - May 18, 2008 / EF_Team5 - May 18, 2008
|Reflective Writing - A Reflection Essay On My Writing
2 - Good evening Randy! I'd like to give you my impressions before the mechanics. I don't believe I've ever...
Writing Feedbackbonechills - May 12, 2008 / EF_Team5 - May 12, 2008
|Thesis essay on "Adoption issues"
11 - Good afternoon! A thesis statement usually lets the reader know right away what your stance on an issue...
Writing Feedbackbabydoll - May 11, 2008 / EF_Team5 - May 20, 2008
|Abortion and same-sex marriage
Writing Feedbackdavidplague - May 10, 2008 / EF_Team5 - May 10, 2008
|Proving Dracula is a monster...
2 - Good evening! I think this is a good essay; you are exploring the different aspects that make Dracula...
Writing FeedbackHyperfast - May 10, 2008 / EF_Team5 - May 10, 2008
|Critical Essay on Developmental Psych. in Infants
2 - Good morning! When we write critical essays, we are judging or evaluating a specific work or idea. Your...
Writing Feedbackblossom12 - May 9, 2008 / EF_Team5 - May 10, 2008
|Essay on the result of poverty
2 - "At the end of the 20th centery (century), the Mongolian political and economic system completely changed to the democratical...
Writing Feedbackkhzul - May 9, 2008 / EF_Team5 - May 9, 2008
|How to say sorry Essay for English?
5 - I think that you do provide readers with some good insight into respect with regards to each other, and...
Writing Feedbacklowryder49 - May 6, 2008 / EF_Team5 - May 7, 2008
|the death boat speaks
4 - I see. I'm afraid I won't be able to help you on non-academic projects. If you have something academic...
Writing Feedbackmahmoud - May 4, 2008 / EF_Team5 - May 5, 2008
|The defametory Cartoons; Beyond Freedom of Speech - insightful suggestions
2 - Good morning! This essay does make some interesting points; however, it is difficult to follow because it is...
Writing Feedbackmahmoud - May 4, 2008 / EF_Team5 - May 4, 2008
|Selfishness and politics research paper and outline
13 - Good evening! You are welcome. For examples of MLA in text and work cited pages, do an internet...
Writing Feedbackramses0206 - May 3, 2008 / EF_Team5 - May 20, 2008
|Feed Your Soul; first trip by plane - give me your impression on the essay
NEW - Feed your Soul...get satisfaction It was my first trip by plane. I did the best within my power...
Writing Feedbackmahmoud - May 3, 2008 / — -
|Essay on the Greate Gatsby novel
4 - ...and he also provides a contradictory view: "The whole town is desolate. You can take out the word...
Writing Feedbackyahman - May 1, 2008 / EF_Kevin - Dec 20, 2008
|Research Essay about volcano experiment
Writing Feedbackmasamuneshirow2 - May 1, 2008 / — -
|help- topic: problems encounter with not speaking english in america
6 - Good evening! This is a very well organized, wonderfully articulated essay. Nice work. I have very few suggestions:...
Writing Feedbackpinks1026 - Apr 29, 2008 / EF_Team5 - May 5, 2008
|having native English teachers in all English classes?
4 - That is a great idea! Thank you for sharing your knowledge and experience about this! Regards, Gloria Moderator,...
Writing Feedbackje2ks2 - Apr 29, 2008 / EF_Team5 - May 1, 2008
|Dangerous Minds Assignment Paragraph Writing; vivid deep movie as a grade 11 poetry unit startup.
3 - Dangerous Minds Movie character comparison Film Focus #2: Character Connections: Write a 50-75 wd paragraph on the main...
Writing FeedbackGeist - Apr 29, 2008 / Geist - May 4, 2008
|Revise essay about swimming
NEW - hey Can you please revise this essay on swimming activity for me ... thanks lots!!:) Recordings of...
Writing Feedbackunidentified - Apr 28, 2008 / — -
|A True Soccer Mom. There are many ways to learn, improve and fail at something.
5 - Good morning! I like the concept of your conclusion, and I think with a little help cleaning it...
Writing Feedbackjrobertson49 - Apr 26, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Apr 27, 2008
|How to Cheat on The Exam - Process Analysis essay
Writing Feedbackmacho - Apr 23, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Apr 24, 2008
|Hitler and Stalin - Essay about the Most Ferocious Dictators
3 - Allies defeated the Hitler's army. - Allies defeated Hitler's army. [This time, the apostrophe is correct!] the holocaust....
Writing Feedbackhannah1821 - Apr 22, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Apr 22, 2008
|An Unexamined life is not worth living - essay
2 - Greetings! I think your idea is good! I love that old Socrates. ;-) You've chosen some good quotations...
Writing Feedbackdejavu - Apr 21, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Apr 21, 2008
|You know life moves on - doesn't it? ; A Farewell Note to the Class
5 - A note to the same people addressed in the note above, after the class dispersed. This is an attempt...
Writing FeedbackRajiv - Apr 20, 2008 / Rajiv - Jun 9, 2008
|Topic: Every rule has its exceptions; SAT essay
Writing FeedbackPurcell - Apr 19, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Apr 22, 2008
|Narrative Essay (It all started when someone said PIZZA)
2 - Greetings! It sounds like you have a family full of good cooks! Let me answer your three opening...
Writing Feedbackbonechills - Apr 17, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Apr 17, 2008
|Running away - essay writing
Writing Feedbacklearningtowrite - Apr 17, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Apr 17, 2008
|Inflation, a small change causes huge impacts - Causes and Effects essay.
4 - You're certainly welcome. :-) Your English is very good, so please don't be discouraged! English is a difficult language,...
Writing Feedbackmacho - Apr 16, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Apr 17, 2008
|"All Quiet on the Western Front"
Writing Feedbackkaylilah - Apr 16, 2008 / kaylilah - Apr 19, 2008
|"You do not understand me at all!"; Trapped Essay
4 - Greetings! I was always puzzled about the "I" vs. "me" thing until a very wise teacher taught me...
Writing Feedbacklearningtowrite - Apr 16, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Apr 17, 2008
|Argumentative Essay on Nuclear Power - danger of switching to nuclear energy
4 - Quite right, Amalie. It is often the details that make an argument convincing, especially since they indicate good research....
Writing Feedbackinvisible7959 - Apr 16, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Apr 22, 2008
|negative correlation between TOEIC and proficiency.
2 - Greetings! You've written a very good, concise essay! Here are some editing tips: Judging one's language proficiency...
Writing Feedbackje2ks2 - Apr 14, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Apr 15, 2008
|How Industrial Design is important to society
3 - Greetings! We try to answer posts within 24 hours, but can't always do so immediately. I hope this...
Writing Feedbackmasamuneshirow2 - Apr 14, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Apr 15, 2008
|'The eggs' - My Narrative Essay
4 - Greetings! I like your ending! It gives good insight into her character. For better comprehension, you might want...
Writing FeedbackRuby3561 - Apr 14, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Apr 16, 2008
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