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|Essay: What will you bring along to Sahara + unforgettable experience
Writing Feedbacksweetbitterrose - Oct 21, 2008 / sweetbitterrose - Oct 22, 2008
|It is better to have one long school vacation than to have a few short one?
6 - I think your organization is fine. You start off with a good introduction followed by a body that explains...
Writing FeedbackThuyChi - Oct 21, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 23, 2008
|This is my 9/11 essay intro - is it OK?
NEW - Hey there!! I would really appreciate it if someone can please take a look at the inroduction of...
Writing FeedbackNeelam - Oct 20, 2008 / — -
|Without academic excellence, most students nowadays are squeezed out of the competition
3 - I think your paragraphs are appropriate lengths; if you divide the essay further you risk making the flow too...
Writing FeedbackshatterX - Oct 20, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 24, 2008
|Describe a person... A rough draft thrown together i need some insight
Writing FeedbackJoel - Oct 20, 2008 / Joel - Oct 20, 2008
|"Wild animals never kill for sport"; killing animals (argument synthesis)
NEW - British historian James A. Froude once wrote, "Wild animals never kill for sport. Man is the only one to...
Writing Feedbackldixon - Oct 20, 2008 / — -
|the effort involved in pursuing any goal -advise, corrections are welcomed!
NEW - Assignment: Is the effort involved in pursuing any goal valuable, even if the goal is not reached? Although...
Writing Feedbackhelenalqy - Oct 20, 2008 / — -
|[Analysis of Issue] Schools should be only responsible for academic skills
2 - "How to become a useful person for society?" There shouldn't be a comma after this, and "people" should be...
Writing Feedbackfranklamparden - Oct 20, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 20, 2008
|Responsibility- through example or behavior of others?
Writing Feedbackhelenalqy - Oct 20, 2008 / helenalqy - Oct 23, 2008
|First Nations Ambitions Triumph
NEW - Running Brave is an intriguing and inspirational movie which is based on a true story about a American...
Writing Feedbackalyssa_amy - Oct 19, 2008 / — -
|the juxtaposition of christian and Pagan elements in Beowulf
NEW - The Juxtaposition of Christian and Pagan elements in Beowulf mirror the mix of religious practices occurring in Anglo-Saxon society.,...
Writing Feedbackbrit12 - Oct 19, 2008 / — -
|Essay on labor and Delivery Pain
2 - Good morning. You have a very nice introduction; it lays the groundwork for what you will discuss in...
Writing Feedbackhunnybun39 - Oct 19, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 19, 2008
|[Analysis of Issue] Humans are becoming subservient to machines
4 - No, I don't think you lack examples; in fact, I think quite the opposite. My concern is that your...
Writing Feedbackfranklamparden - Oct 18, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 19, 2008
|Essay about my weekend activities
3 - Hello Gloria, I really don't have words how much appreciated your comments and feedback. I wish I knew about...
Writing Feedbacksol - Oct 17, 2008 / sol - Oct 18, 2008
|Cigarretes has been banned from public environment. Agree or Disagree?
NEW - Essay topic: Cigarretes has been banned from public environment. Agree or Disagree?? Around the world people are concerned...
Writing Feedbackvipao - Oct 17, 2008 / — -
|essay about myself, when/where I was born, my study, hobbies, etc.
2 - "...I am the baggiest one." What does "baggiest" describe here? Do you mean biggest? I'm not sure... :) ...
Writing Feedbackcrawling - Oct 17, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 17, 2008
|Essay: On Artificial Intelligence
Writing FeedbackRajiv - Oct 17, 2008 / Rajiv - Oct 19, 2008
|Take advantage of every moment ; Colombia Essay/ Rutgers
NEW - Take advantage of every moment is what my older sister would always tell me. When I was 14 years...
Writing Feedbackcynthia180 - Oct 17, 2008 / — -
|Private Eloquence/ PAST EXPERIENCE
Writing Feedbackcowman809 - Oct 16, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 17, 2008
|'Love is the answer to world's questions' - Essay on why love is important in life?
8 - You're very welcome. Feel free to post here not only for feedback on essays, but any general language...
Writing Feedbackvipao - Oct 16, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 18, 2008
|What experiences have led you to select your professional field?
2 - "Zip, zap, zoom! " went my..." "...does my Play Station give way every..." I suggest wrapping the...
Writing Feedbackkimaya - Oct 16, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 16, 2008
|Land for human's purpose or left in its natural conditions ?
NEW - In your country, is there more need for land to be left in its natural conditions or is there...
Writing Feedbacknezzaru - Oct 16, 2008 / — -
|What must we do to truly understand ourselves? Difficult for people to judge themselves evenhandedly
6 - In regards to usage, I suggest one of the books from the "Prentice Hall Guide for College Writers" series...
Writing Feedbackhelenalqy - Oct 15, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 20, 2008
|Essay: "There's no place like home."
Writing Feedbacklearningtowrite - Oct 15, 2008 / learningtowrite - Oct 15, 2008
|An unexpected act of kindness
4 - Good afternoon. Putting this piece at the beginning would be a great idea; it's a "hook" and sets...
Writing Feedbacklearningtowrite - Oct 15, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 16, 2008
|Should we celebrate Halloween? - essay help
NEW - Should we celebrate Halloween? Halloween has become the second most anticipated holiday for children after Christmas and Chanukah....
Writing Feedbackkichikov22 - Oct 14, 2008 / — -
|Essay on the short story "Rock Springs" by Richard Ford
2 - Good afternoon. In regards to spelling, I suggest you run the piece through a program with a spell...
Writing Feedbacksarahmk - Oct 14, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 14, 2008
|Creativity is one of the highly concerned points to those aspired people
Writing Feedbackhelenalqy - Oct 13, 2008 / helenalqy - Oct 15, 2008
|Impacts of Senior Citizens in their Choices for Healthcare - essay edit
2 - Good afternoon. As the prompt and/or requirements for this piece were not included in the posting, I can...
Writing Feedbackkcbisslessi - Oct 13, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 14, 2008
|A WONDERFUL CAREER - 'I am ready for my interview'
4 - Good evening. There are some main things I am concerned about in this essay. For instance, with the...
Writing Feedbackbadgrammer - Oct 13, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 14, 2008
|Motivations of buying a product - Toefl Essay
Writing Feedbacktoefl_guy - Oct 13, 2008 / toefl_guy - Oct 14, 2008
|Lost And Found - Narrative Essay
3 - Thank you very much!!!! My teacher said if I had any Misplaced commas. My grade would be automatic D....
Writing Feedbackeeyore_lover29 - Oct 13, 2008 / eeyore_lover29 - Oct 14, 2008
|We can guess the nature of a person according to there dress but we cant make opinion.
Writing Feedbacksonali - Oct 13, 2008 / — -
|Observation paper for HRT 101 Benson
4 - Good afternoon. As I have previously commented, check for capitalization. Things that are not proper nouns (specific ...
Writing Feedbackbensonm - Oct 13, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 14, 2008
|The Act of Revenge, The Cask of Amontillado Essay
4 - Good afternoon. "In pace requiescat!" (1) Is correct. Regards, Gloria Moderator, EssayForum.com...
Writing FeedbackBradlays - Oct 13, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 15, 2008
|"Zoo Rejection" - my essay
Writing FeedbackTabor - Oct 12, 2008 / Tabor - Oct 13, 2008
|'The ability to learn makes us human' - Rubiks Cube Essay
2 - Good evening. As the requirements to the assignment were not included in the posting, I will focus on...
Writing Feedbackweezer878 - Oct 12, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 12, 2008
|'This woman is my mother' - discuss a person and his or her influence on you
Writing Feedbackzhangyi - Oct 12, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 12, 2008
|Praising others - necessary part of life? Sat Essay
2 - Good morning. This is a great essay; your example of the experiment with the kids highlights your stance...
Writing FeedbackgodsendE - Oct 10, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 10, 2008
|"An for an eye will make the whole world blind" - Method of punishing criminals
NEW - Topic: By punishing murderers with the death penalty, society is also guilt of committing murder. Therefore, life in prison...
Writing Feedbacktoefl_guy - Oct 9, 2008 / — -
|The biggest change in my life - Narrative introduction help
5 - ya .its easy you ,must be think about your last night dream and sometime we have very exciting dream...
Writing Feedbackasdfghjkl - Oct 9, 2008 / gyal - Mar 20, 2013
|which airplane flies the farthest- science report
NEW - This is my science report I just need to make sure the grammar and writing make sense. Thank you....
Writing Feedbackrnc3333 - Oct 9, 2008 / — -
|"The Great Gatsby is seen in two ways" - Help with Essay Writing -
10 - Hello! If someone pastes material from other websites, it causes problems for us and can possibly lead to...
Writing Feedbacksara213 - Oct 9, 2008 / EF_Kevin - Feb 9, 2009
|Summary On Pain Meds - paper
2 - Good evening. This looks like the start of a really great paper. You have solid information provided from...
Writing Feedbackhunnybun39 - Oct 9, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 9, 2008
|"The Voting Age" essay
Writing Feedbacktaiyaki - Oct 9, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 11, 2008
|Toefl Essay - approach to problem-solving- How it works for you?
NEW - What is your approach to problem-solving, and how does it work for you? Every problem will have a solution....
Writing Feedbacktoefl_guy - Oct 8, 2008 / — -
|Essay on what you read (Plato, Machiavelli)
2 - Your conclusion should be a wrap-up of your essay. You could quickly rephrase each of these three philosophies and...
Writing Feedbackwordlesstu - Oct 8, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 8, 2008
|Ending Underage Drinking by Making It Legal. Should underage drinking laws be changed.
Writing Feedbackcarebear - Oct 8, 2008 / carebear - Jan 13, 2009
|Character of a Man - Essay
NEW - Please check for grammar and also for the use third person only. This essay was to evaluate the character...
Writing Feedbackmichaelfrye1970 - Oct 6, 2008 / — -
|Proofread Essay on Innocent Erendira and Her Heartless Grandmother
Writing FeedbackAl44ex - Oct 6, 2008 / — -
|Tattoos essay: Our Newest Problem?
4 - You will need to return to the places where you originally found the information. For each of the facts...
Writing Feedbacksilent - Oct 6, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 7, 2008
|Argumentative Essay: Its no ones word
Writing Feedbackobama - Oct 6, 2008 / obama - Oct 6, 2008
|Help starting and brainstorming history paper [essay question]
NEW - The paper is expected to be between 5-7 pages. I'm in the process of brainstorming for it. The instructor...
Writing Feedbackkorr2221 - Oct 6, 2008 / — -
|Essay Based on an Essay You Read
Writing FeedbackFissionMailed - Oct 5, 2008 / FissionMailed - Oct 6, 2008
|Tattoos and piercings essay. Audacious Alterations.
2 - My main concern with this essay is that there is a lot of uncited information here, opening the door...
Writing FeedbackFayFua - Oct 5, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 6, 2008
|Modern brigade de cuisine system..
NEW - I really think that writing is my weakness. Regarding this essay, I wanna explain the different kinds of chefs...
Writing Feedbackeng1 - Oct 5, 2008 / — -
|Comparing Christine and Penny essay
Writing Feedbackeng1 - Oct 5, 2008 / — -
|Argumentative essay - Rich and poor children - school work
4 - Good morning. You're welcome; good luck! I think it's a great idea for international students to study...
Writing FeedbackThuyChi - Oct 5, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 9, 2008
|"Designing a hero" - essay about Linda Segers, "Creating the Myth"
2 - Good afternoon. Because this essay deals with specific material that you and your classmates have exclusive access to...
Writing Feedbacksweetcherokee74 - Oct 4, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 4, 2008
|My teachers and the teacher's day - essay
NEW - Students and teachers are always on the different bank of the lake. Just like how it goes in my...
Writing Feedbackzhaoyuyu - Oct 4, 2008 / — -
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