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|HAVE YOUR EATING HABITS CHANGED SINCE YOU'VE BEEN IN COLLEGE?
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|Nothing new under the sun?: Darwinian surprises of skin colours
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|Spread of the jihadist movement in the ligh ethology and Darwinian security
Writing FeedbackFredParisFrance - Jul 15, 2008 / — -
|Sticker-shocked food prices ; Corn Ethanol- Renewable Energy gone bad
3 - Yes, you could do it that way. You could also do: According to Wikipedia, if the complete production...
Writing Feedback2writebetter - Jul 15, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Jul 15, 2008
|Interpretation of "The Road Not Taken" by Robert Frost
Writing Feedbackalexdehaan - Jul 13, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Jul 13, 2008
|should Korean teachers of English be required to pass on speaking test?
2 - Good job! You've got some mechanical errors, and I have made a few word choice changes. Otherwise, you've got...
Writing Feedbackje2ks2 - Jul 13, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Jul 13, 2008
|Gendered Communications Essay
5 - Good morning! You are very welcom! In regards to the (First Female) article reference, since there is no...
Writing Feedbackemilysk8 - Jul 12, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Jul 13, 2008
|vision 2020:A Mirage
2 - Good afternoon. What are the requirements for this assignment? The more information I have about what your instructor...
Writing FeedbackNicodemus - Jul 11, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Jul 11, 2008
|My grandfather is my hero; 'he was kind to his neighbors and homeless people'
Writing Feedback2writebetter - Jul 10, 2008 / 2writebetter - Jul 11, 2008
|Are rich children always happier than those who come from poorer families?
6 - You are very welcome. You will know if you can answer these questions by the "feel" of them; trust...
Writing Feedbacklearningtowrite - Jul 9, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Jul 11, 2008
|Pain at the pump. An electric vehicle should be your next car
4 - Hello! You are very welcome! I enjoy watching as your writing improves, and improving it is! I applaud...
Writing Feedback2writebetter - Jul 8, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Jul 10, 2008
|Sickled red blood cells and homeostasis - essay
Writing FeedbackFredParisFrance - Jul 8, 2008 / — -
|Chemical compounds and human life processes - short lecture
Writing FeedbackFredParisFrance - Jul 7, 2008 / — -
|Youth and Technology combined no doubt will bring a very aspiring future
4 - You are very welcome. Tense is something that all writers, no matter what their level, have to be...
Writing FeedbackGeist - Jul 6, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Jul 7, 2008
|Television essay - "It is all about TV"
Writing Feedbackoranje - Jul 5, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Jul 8, 2008
|"Online plagiarism" - read my paraphrased paragraph!
2 - "A study regarding online plagiarism implied that the acts being committed may be big in number, but not actually...
Writing FeedbackGeist - Jul 5, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Jul 6, 2008
|European Championship - football essay
Writing Feedbackoranje - Jul 4, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Jul 8, 2008
|Establish a duty of care- Tort Law
8 - If you are going to post your essay with the corrections made, I can edit it again for organization...
Writing Feedbackpwincesspink - Jul 4, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Jul 5, 2008
|The three traits of a good essay(Is this essay any good?)
2 - Good morning :) This is a good essay; you give clear, concise information. Just a few suggestions: ...
Writing FeedbackNoethe - Jul 4, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Jul 4, 2008
|Problems are Opportunities in Disguise
NEW - Problems are Opportunities in Disguise topic: Bob Maynard has said that "Problems are opportunities in disguise." Write an...
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|Desbribing a person - Julian, my soul mate
Writing FeedbackSweet - Jun 24, 2008 / truonghong - Sep 5, 2008
|native English teachers vs non-native teachers
NEW - Hello, here is another essay. :-) I am always thankful for your big help! Hope my essay is getting...
Writing Feedbackje2ks2 - Jun 24, 2008 / — -
|Attending service at Pilgrims' Rest Baptist Church - critique my essay
NEW - Attending service at Pilgrims' Rest Baptist Church. On June 6, 2008, I was able to visit the Pilgrims...
Writing Feedbackcrystalcrj310 - Jun 23, 2008 / — -
|The beauty of an individual - essay
6 - If you have run a plagiarism check yourself then you know what is coming back as copied. The solution...
Writing Feedbacksarahmk - Jun 22, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Jun 24, 2008
|Credit Card Invention - essay check
NEW - My professor gave us a prompt about a best or worst invention. I thought credit card would be good....
Writing Feedbackpinks1026 - Jun 21, 2008 / — -
|curriculum vitae - my first essay
5 - Thanks I like this suggestion: I've grown up, passing through both elementary and secondary school"...
Writing Feedbackoranje - Jun 21, 2008 / oranje - Jun 22, 2008
|45 minute essay (teaching and the public school system)
NEW - Hello, I am practicing writing an essay in forty-five minutes because I am preparing for the clep exam....
Writing Feedbackbonechills - Jun 20, 2008 / — -
|Willie Russel - making the cliff scene dramatic
NEW - How does Willie Russell make the cliff scene dramatic and how does he prepare us for it? Our...
Writing Feedbackpwincesspink - Jun 19, 2008 / — -
|Teenagers between the ages thirteen to nineteen should not be allowed to date.
NEW - Teenagers between the ages thirteen to nineteen should not be dating. In their decisions of dating should have considered...
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|"Teenagers nowadays have adopted a consumerist lifestyle."
Writing Feedbacklearningtowrite - Jun 18, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Jun 19, 2008
|the way of nominating homeroom teacher
4 - Thank you so much, Gloria. The essay topic question used the word 'nominate', in fact. The person who made...
Writing Feedbackje2ks2 - Jun 17, 2008 / je2ks2 - Jun 26, 2008
|Essay on "giving up on hope."
NEW - Can you please check this for grammar and spelling errors? thanks soo much If one's world is filled...
Writing Feedbacksarahmk - Jun 16, 2008 / — -
|Essay about the history of the UK
Writing Feedbacklowryder49 - Jun 15, 2008 / — -
|I have been eighteen years existed in this world. Check my essay about myself
NEW - I have been eighteen years existed in this world. Within those years, I had explored every thing to create...
Writing FeedbackCanterbury - Jun 14, 2008 / — -
|"Promised end" the soul yearns for to be thwarted by the demand of history
3 - thanks for everything i just need help with this assignment Can you help me with my grammar and...
Writing Feedbacksarahmk - Jun 13, 2008 / sarahmk - Jun 15, 2008
|Why do you want to do the short course to which you have been admitted?
NEW - "Why do you want to do the short course to which you have been admitted? In Vietnam, accompanied...
Writing Feedbackkitty20111983 - Jun 13, 2008 / — -
|Literary Analysis Comparative Essay - suggestions for improvement welcome!
6 - Good afternoon :) Citation is tricky, but MLA is pretty straight forward and to the point. It looks...
Writing Feedbackjohn - Jun 11, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Jun 12, 2008
|Super Rod - Essay about a super hero, I have a plot.
Writing Feedbackdeniece - Jun 10, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Jun 11, 2008
|Media coursework, comparing 2 articles..
NEW - Media coursework You are asked to compare item 1 and Item 2, explain which item you think will...
Writing Feedbackneedhelp01 - Jun 8, 2008 / — -
|The Short Happy Life Of Francis Macomber Essay
NEW - Mrs. Macomber shot her husband on purpose because she wanted to kill him and stay with his money. Mrs....
Writing Feedbackchimochi - Jun 6, 2008 / — -
|Can You Decide Where to Live?
Writing Feedbackhappyyoora - Jun 6, 2008 / — -
|'Vietnam's natural attractions' - something that make you proud about your country
Writing Feedbacklearningtowrite - Jun 6, 2008 / — -
|Topic 4: prohibite smoking in public places
3 - Let's see: Nowadays, people go to public places such as cinemas,restaurants, or bars after long days at offices....
Writing FeedbackSophie - Jun 5, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Aug 12, 2008
|Topic 3: Any form of education other than co-education...
3 - Thank you your advise, I read ideas from the book in library,I don't know this book is copyrighted from...
Writing FeedbackSophie - Jun 5, 2008 / Sophie - Jun 6, 2008
|"Before Breakfast," Drama Essay
2 - Good morning :) You have a good rough draft so far. You support your viewpoints with the text....
Writing Feedbackbolivartech - Jun 4, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Jun 5, 2008
|'household computers and internet' - Causal Analysis
2 - Good morning :) Adding examples and/or details is always a good way to "beef up" an essay; just...
Writing Feedbacksinginheaven - Jun 3, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Jun 4, 2008
|A Doll House Essay - True Man Wants
NEW - Can someone please check my grammar and see if the essay discusses how their relationship and how it presages...
Writing Feedbackbizkitgirlzc - Jun 3, 2008 / — -
|"America is Great" - Need help fast on argumentation essay
NEW - I have an arumentation essay due tomorrow and I suck at writting so any help would be greatly appreciated....
Writing Feedbacklafayettejohn - Jun 3, 2008 / — -
|Ban Smoking - Help critique my controversial/ethics essay
2 - You have made a very important observation; very frequently writers do reread a work the way they "intended" it;...
Writing Feedbacklucero5 - Jun 2, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Jun 5, 2008
|Qualitative research methods coursework review
NEW - Hello, Can you kindly help me review my attached coursework. The question for the assignment is shown below...
Writing Feedbackmophe - Jun 1, 2008 / — -
|Learning something new is always challenging to many of us - the same applies to a foreign language
Writing Feedbackje2ks2 - Jun 1, 2008 / je2ks2 - Jun 8, 2008
|How did Juno Beach on D-Day effect Canada?
Writing Feedbackerindalestudent - May 29, 2008 / EF_Team5 - May 29, 2008
|Three defining moments in Canadian history - History Argumentative Essay
2 - I'd say probbly a 9 or 9.5; you've got good research and good organization. If you fix the few...
Writing FeedbackRishadNoori - May 28, 2008 / EF_Team5 - May 29, 2008
|One year struggling to be a better mom
Writing Feedbackchonggis - May 28, 2008 / — -
|Essay on "Why do Korean students go abroad to study?"
NEW - Why do more and more Korean students choose to study abroad? Nowadays, more and more students are leaving their...
Writing Feedbackbottletenc - May 28, 2008 / — -
|A new challenge in my forties as an English teacher
2 - You have the beginnings of a very good essay here, though it is a little discombobulated :). Let's work...
Writing FeedbackPark Taesik - May 28, 2008 / EF_Team5 - May 28, 2008
|New Government's Policy on English Education
2 - Good morning :) Thank you for posting your essay. What kind of feedback do you need? Regards,...
Writing Feedbackweonshiin - May 28, 2008 / EF_Team5 - May 28, 2008
|First Essay - D-Day Canadian Contributions
NEW - Ok my first post. This forum is great - helpful people doing good things. Ok I wrote this essay...
Writing FeedbackShardul - May 27, 2008 / — -
|Quality or characteristic that helps be a good parent - my 1st Formal Essay
3 - Gloria, thank you. It's awful kind of you to read, and offer tips on how to fix students essays...
Writing Feedbacknclester - May 25, 2008 / nclester - May 26, 2008
|Smoking ban in all public places - persuasive essay
Writing Feedbackbonechills - May 21, 2008 / EF_Team5 - May 21, 2008
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