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TOEFL: Spending time with a large number of friends can add more to one's life.

4 - Thank you very much, guys!!! Kevin, thanks!!! Now I am doing some practice on the Integrated Writing task...

Writing Feedbackinrockuptible - Nov 29, 2009 / inrockuptible - Dec 6, 2009
I can not arcoss the gap

2 - The twenty first century witnessed a world transforma tion. With the development of society ,our lives are more...

Writing Feedbackwyl_steven - Nov 29, 2009 / protesturhero - Nov 29, 2009
Face-to-face communication is not anymore the more effective way to communicate.

4 - Parthew and Kevin, I really appretiate your feedback. Kevin, thanks so much for letting me see and understand...

Writing Feedbackmargarita - Nov 28, 2009 / margarita - Dec 1, 2009
Essay about city living and country living

2 - In opposite, persons who live in a country, don't do not have wide choice of shops. "Do not"...

Writing FeedbackJannaiska - Nov 28, 2009 / ayida365 - Nov 28, 2009
Spirits and rituals concept essay

7 - Not gonna lie, didn't understand most of it...but the admin might. so it's not a college essay?...

Writing Feedbacksoul997 - Nov 27, 2009 / yang - Nov 30, 2009
TOEFL Why do some students study abroad?

3 - Thanks Susan! I appreciate your help on my writing. It will be great if you can,please, take a look...

Writing Feedbackmargarita - Nov 27, 2009 / margarita - Nov 29, 2009
Argument Essay on Security Cameras - Feedback / Revision

2 - The growing use of surveillance cameras in today's society has led to several privacy issues being raised. The...

Writing Feedbacksonic_fanrs - Nov 27, 2009 / EF_Susan - Nov 28, 2009
An IELTS about ads targeting younger and younger children

3 - I agree with your idea! You have introduced your topic clearly. Just pay attetion to grammer mistakes like "Parents...

Writing Feedbackleonardo092 - Nov 27, 2009 / linhexi - Dec 26, 2009
TOEFL "Building a new movie theater in nighborhood.."

2 - When I saw the announcement about a plan for building a new cinema near my house , I became...

Writing Feedbackhitchhike - Nov 26, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 27, 2009
'A few years ago, boarding school was a fresh coming thing for us' - IELTS: Boarding school

3 - Hi maymay513,thanks for helping me. You help me find some errors which I did not realize. Thanks again!!! You...

Writing Feedbacksupersophie - Nov 26, 2009 / supersophie - Nov 27, 2009
Today people are using nuclear energy and interested in it!

2 - issue. Moreuse. Then clean and cheap energy [cheaper* really? didn't know that. I thought uranium is very expensive.] choose...

Writing Feedbackchile - Nov 26, 2009 / meisj0n - Nov 26, 2009
The lifestyle we live today is leading us down the path of an evolutionary disaster; choices we made

2 - Yes, the second para is much stronger than the first. Often, we need to cut the first para, because...

Writing Feedbackneuromancer - Nov 25, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 26, 2009
TOEFL "Some people are always in a hurry to go places and get things done."

4 - Hi, s011208, One thing that catch my eye in your essay is the expressions "suffer from pressure", "not...

Writing Feedbacks011208 - Nov 25, 2009 / kooka - Nov 30, 2009
IELTS:Are International Sporting Occasions a Safe Way for Releasing Emotions??

2 - Above, there are 2 spelling errors, so be sure to run this through a spell checker. Also, in...

Writing FeedbackRuah - Nov 24, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 26, 2009
TOEFL "why is music important?"

2 - In the beginning of this essay, it is not quite right to say it is impossible to imagine a...

Writing Feedbackhitchhike - Nov 24, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 26, 2009
A Descriptive essay about Beauty feedback

2 - Use a comma: Beauty is not always what people think it may be, especially... It helps if an...

Writing Feedbacknursehelp - Nov 24, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 26, 2009
Skepticism in students' study---GRE ISSUE

2 - Doubts lead to experiments, and experiments lead to deeper understanding, to solution, it and in this way skepticism can...

Writing Feedbackbluebonnet - Nov 24, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 25, 2009
My grandfather - Essay for school.

8 - Thank you for your time commet2000 and Kevin....

Writing Feedbackjgv115 - Nov 24, 2009 / jgv115 - Jan 25, 2010
Advertisement is not a waste of money but an effective method of sales promotion

3 - Hi, ...people can hardly know ... when we use hardly, scarcely and some negative adverbial, inversion structure would...

Writing Feedbackpretty0407 - Nov 24, 2009 / hitchhike - Nov 24, 2009
Germany, Italy, France, Britain - The Amount Spent on Consumer Goods

5 - Thank you very much Tim , that was really helpful :) hope you could give me your opinion on...

Writing FeedbackRuah - Nov 23, 2009 / Ruah - Nov 24, 2009
TOEFL EASSY-- the ability of planning and organizing is essential for young

4 - Thanks for your advice!...

Writing Feedbackpretty0407 - Nov 21, 2009 / pretty0407 - Nov 22, 2009
marriages should be arranged by the parents or not?

6 - Yes, I'm getting to them all as quickly as I can. Are there any particularly urgent ones? Also,...

Writing Feedbackthinhtvdhtm - Nov 21, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Jan 25, 2010
essay about Siddhartha's Teachers

3 - 1 you have used "siddhartha" a lot of times try to use more of pronouns. 2 i liked your...

Writing Feedbackluny - Nov 20, 2009 / harsha9 - Nov 21, 2009
TOEFL: "Studying alone or in a group"/ Which do you prefer?

NEW - Some students prefer to study alone. Others prefer to study with a group of students. Which do you prefer?...

Writing Feedbackhitchhike - Nov 20, 2009 / — -
"Categories of Criminals" - Stanford Intellectual Vitality Essay

5 - wow, i really like yours. its interesting, but is it related to what major you're applying for? also, i...

Writing Feedbackfallen92 - Nov 20, 2009 / luu123 - Nov 29, 2009
IELTS essay"people think children's spending time on TV, video..is good,while.."

NEW - Some people think children's spending time on TV, video and PC games is good, while others think it is...

Writing Feedbackleonyan938 - Nov 20, 2009 / — -
Humankind has undergone many changes in the eating habit - food is easier to prepare

2 - gahhhh! I spent an hour typing stuff up and the browser messed up. o well, guess u'll have to...

Writing Feedbackthinhtvdhtm - Nov 20, 2009 / meisj0n - Nov 21, 2009
Do you agree to "Watching Television is bad for children"?

5 - Today, children prefer to got go overseas for their education , and for this reason it is necessary...

Writing Feedbacklucidmanner - Nov 20, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Dec 25, 2009
COUNTRY BOYS - REACTION PAPER - edit this essay, I'm non native English speaker

2 - "Country boys" is the most unique type of documentary movie that I have ever watched, because it is not...

Writing Feedbackjhung620 - Nov 19, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 21, 2009
Literary Analysis on The Haunting of Hill House

4 - Pheelks, good call! I agree....

Writing Feedbackkparham322 - Nov 19, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 22, 2009
Toefl essay - "Learning about past has its significance"

2 - Can knowledge about the past be beneficial for those of us livin g in present? I think that...

Writing FeedbackPoojasugandhi - Nov 19, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 20, 2009
Multi-Language Clash Synthesis essay

6 - Well... in order to see how it actually is an independent clause, think of this sentence: However,...

Writing FeedbackJoeyson - Nov 19, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 24, 2009
TOEFL living in places different weather condition vs same weather condition

6 - Margarita, one of my teacher, who taught writing, told about this limitations. By taking into consideration of time we...

Writing Feedbackmargarita - Nov 18, 2009 / hitchhike - Nov 26, 2009
Toefl Integrated task" William shakespeare"

2 - Thanks, Mashhadi, for this great work. I know that takes a long time! I hope your teachers will someday...

Writing FeedbackPoojasugandhi - Nov 18, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 20, 2009
Studying people and events of the past time is very useful

8 - I do not think is wrong to use those if you have an antecedent. However, i thing is better...

Writing Feedbackhitchhike - Nov 18, 2009 / margarita - Nov 25, 2009
TOEFL:::working for a small company - more chances are to boost in your job

2 - You did a good job of making clear your thesis statement at the end of the first paragraph. Your...

Writing Feedbackmashhadi - Nov 18, 2009 / EF_Susan - Nov 20, 2009
TOEFL preference essay " sports vs.arts" - feedback welcomed :)

4 - I believe when you are asked to stay and support your preference about two o more topics, subjects or...

Writing Feedbackeng_student - Nov 18, 2009 / margarita - Nov 23, 2009
Toefl : lifestyle individualism VS collectivism

2 - This is coming out very well, but I did find a few mistakes; Living in community based upon...

Writing FeedbackBabies - Nov 18, 2009 / EF_Susan - Nov 20, 2009
Toefl essay on Silvio Berlusconi.

4 - Yes, I know what you mean!! You are great, I'm inspired by bilingual people. You wrote know...

Writing Feedbackdar81 - Nov 18, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 20, 2009
Toefl essay which changed people's lives automobiles bicycles airplanes

3 - Although new invention will changed the world more or less, only a few inventions can take the significant change...

Writing Feedbackrmli - Nov 18, 2009 / Jin - Nov 18, 2009
[TOEFL]Tidal Power_Integrated task.

3 - This is perfect English! You don't have any mistakes that I can see. I just have some ideas...

Writing Feedbackyin - Nov 18, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 20, 2009
My Two Sons - Thesis statement for Comparison essay

5 - I have two fantastic boys in my family that were born four years apart and are as different as...

Writing Feedbackbmerrell - Nov 17, 2009 / TFS109201 - Nov 19, 2009
Toefl - "not everything in life is according to our wish"

2 - This is basic part of our life. There are many things in our lives which are forced to...

Writing FeedbackPoojasugandhi - Nov 17, 2009 / EF_Susan - Nov 18, 2009
International Studies Paper on the effects of war.......

2 - How true and terrible that Twain quote is! Hey, I don't understand that last sentence of the first...

Writing FeedbackMGH1989 - Nov 17, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 18, 2009
Toefl"A person you know is planning to move to your town. What do you think..

4 - The beginning is great! It is actually quite interesting at the start, because I think it is intriguing that...

Writing FeedbackPoojasugandhi - Nov 17, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 19, 2009
Experience is the best teacher; influential person - Preparing for the Clep exam

4 - Susan and Kevin - thank you for the feedback. I studied the mistakes you pointed out and understand now...

Writing Feedbackpaula - Nov 17, 2009 / paula - Nov 23, 2009
TOEFL ; Recent story that affected me the most was Pig Flu

4 - I don't know the name of the rule associated with this. You can write, "My jacket is here." and...

Writing FeedbackHelin - Nov 17, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 22, 2009
Forward or first page - A Book I am Writing

18 - Much more to come; I appreciate this venue to at least get over my fear of never being good...

Writing FeedbackJeannie - Nov 17, 2009 / Jeannie - Nov 29, 2009
Essay on events that have changed Australia's multicultural society - feedback.

3 - Looking good. If you get inspired, maybe you will come up with a more intriguing first line. This is...

Writing Feedbackdubulee - Nov 17, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 19, 2009
my art essay, parthenon vs pantheon

6 - omg i think you are in my class! i have the same thing... 4 exam questions too for my...

Writing Feedbackstockwell - Nov 17, 2009 / sesudita - Nov 19, 2009
TOEFL ESSAY " Shools should ask students to evaluate their teachers"

13 - thanks a lot...

Writing Feedbacklyhongyen - Nov 16, 2009 / lyhongyen - Nov 30, 2009
Toefl- Do you think it is good for teenagers to work while schooling?

3 - Good corrections! But, you are wrong to think they can be corrected by reading aloud. People learning English...

Writing FeedbackPoojasugandhi - Nov 16, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 18, 2009
compare between your childhood and right now.

16 - learned to live in the "jungle"? [note: that was a metaphor? or really where you live?] hahah. what...

Writing Feedbackbilal ABUZENAH - Nov 16, 2009 / bilal ABUZENAH - Nov 22, 2009
What are the problems with English Education in Korea?

9 - Throughout my middle school and high school educational courses, I had a good grade in English. I earned good...

Writing Feedbackkimster79 - Nov 16, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 18, 2009
Toefl essay"What are the qualities of the good coworker?"

4 - Throughout in my experience, I noticed that good co worker should have certain qualities. She or he should work...

Writing FeedbackPoojasugandhi - Nov 16, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 18, 2009
Important teenage decisions should be taken by parents or elders

3 - Thanks, Arjun, I noticed some of the same things. The age of fifteen is a time of numerous...

Writing Feedbackhatung94 - Nov 16, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 17, 2009
Are human needs for farmland, housing, industry more important than saving lands

3 - Nowadays, a growing number of people focus on an issue that which is the most important for human beings...

Writing Feedbacktiantianwenzi - Nov 16, 2009 / EF_Susan - Nov 17, 2009
TOEFL Parents are natural teachers

16 - hitchhike, no problem, we are learners. Thanks for your thoughts on my writing. kevin, thanks for helping us!...

Writing Feedbackmargarita - Nov 15, 2009 / margarita - Nov 29, 2009
Failed Descriptive Essay Subject Costa Rica

2 - No using cliches at EssayForum! :-) Just kidding... cliches are people, too. By the way, thanks so...

Writing FeedbackMaethirion - Nov 15, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 17, 2009
Comparative Essay for ENG 1100... subject: Depression

3 - thanks for the help...

Writing FeedbackMaethirion - Nov 15, 2009 / Maethirion - Nov 17, 2009

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