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'Young people are no longer interested in religion.' What is your view?

6 - ThuyChi, You are a very good judge of character, as I have been a teacher and am currently...

Writing FeedbackThuyChi - Oct 23, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 24, 2008
Diversity to me is an intrinsic part of life; a lifelong learning essay

3 - Good afternoon. It seems a bit disorganized. Are you trying to explain these events in the order in...

Writing Feedbacklilveni - Oct 23, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 24, 2008
Essay: What dish holds a strong associative power for you?

5 - Thank you for your help. Now i have more words to work with so i can elaborate more on...

Writing Feedbacknikokoskinas - Oct 22, 2008 / nikokoskinas - Oct 23, 2008
Toefl Essay - increasing the price of gasoline and electricity

4 - Hi Prakash, I found a similar topic in the part of integrated writing. The topic discusses the rising gas...

Writing Feedbacktoefl_guy - Oct 22, 2008 / camellia2008 - Dec 8, 2008
Check for my essay about my holiday trip to Singapore

2 - Good afternoon. OK, let's see: It is the smallest nation in SoutheastAs this is neither a proper...

Writing Feedbackwindcloud232 - Oct 22, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 22, 2008
Argumentative essay on social justice issues, I have questions!

3 - I am having so much trouble. I am to write an essay (argumentative) on Justice. I was assigned...

Writing Feedbackelisahunter - Oct 21, 2008 / alliewallace - Nov 25, 2012
Machine Learning versus Learning by Humans   2

51 - Maya is the beguiler -- let me give her this gender as she often is represented in Indian...

Writing FeedbackRajiv - Oct 21, 2008 / Rajiv - May 31, 2009
Twin Pregnancies-Impact on the family

2 - Please help me shorten this paragraph, is it possible? My biggest problem is staying within the page limits, is...

Writing Feedbackhunnybun39 - Oct 21, 2008 / hunnybun39 - Oct 21, 2008
Essay: What will you bring along to Sahara + unforgettable experience

5 - Thank you, Glolia! You don't know how helpful you are to me!!!^_^...

Writing Feedbacksweetbitterrose - Oct 21, 2008 / sweetbitterrose - Oct 22, 2008
It is better to have one long school vacation than to have a few short one?

6 - I think your organization is fine. You start off with a good introduction followed by a body that explains...

Writing FeedbackThuyChi - Oct 21, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 23, 2008
This is my 9/11 essay intro - is it OK?

NEW - Hey there!! I would really appreciate it if someone can please take a look at the inroduction of...

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Without academic excellence, most students nowadays are squeezed out of the competition

3 - I think your paragraphs are appropriate lengths; if you divide the essay further you risk making the flow too...

Writing FeedbackshatterX - Oct 20, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 24, 2008
Describe a person... A rough draft thrown together i need some insight

3 - Thank you for reading my essay and responding...

Writing FeedbackJoel - Oct 20, 2008 / Joel - Oct 20, 2008
"Wild animals never kill for sport"; killing animals (argument synthesis)

NEW - British historian James A. Froude once wrote, "Wild animals never kill for sport. Man is the only one to...

Writing Feedbackldixon - Oct 20, 2008 / — -
the effort involved in pursuing any goal -advise, corrections are welcomed!

NEW - Assignment: Is the effort involved in pursuing any goal valuable, even if the goal is not reached? Although...

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[Analysis of Issue] Schools should be only responsible for academic skills

2 - "How to become a useful person for society?" There shouldn't be a comma after this, and "people" should be...

Writing Feedbackfranklamparden - Oct 20, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 20, 2008
Responsibility- through example or behavior of others?

3 - Thank you very much. I will remember to stay in one tense in my essay!...

Writing Feedbackhelenalqy - Oct 20, 2008 / helenalqy - Oct 23, 2008
First Nations Ambitions Triumph

NEW - Running Brave is an intriguing and inspirational movie which is based on a true story about a American...

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the juxtaposition of christian and Pagan elements in Beowulf

NEW - The Juxtaposition of Christian and Pagan elements in Beowulf mirror the mix of religious practices occurring in Anglo-Saxon society.,...

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Essay on labor and Delivery Pain

2 - Good morning. You have a very nice introduction; it lays the groundwork for what you will discuss in...

Writing Feedbackhunnybun39 - Oct 19, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 19, 2008
[Analysis of Issue] Humans are becoming subservient to machines

4 - No, I don't think you lack examples; in fact, I think quite the opposite. My concern is that your...

Writing Feedbackfranklamparden - Oct 18, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 19, 2008
Essay about my weekend activities

3 - Hello Gloria, I really don't have words how much appreciated your comments and feedback. I wish I knew about...

Writing Feedbacksol - Oct 17, 2008 / sol - Oct 18, 2008
Cigarretes has been banned from public environment. Agree or Disagree?

NEW - Essay topic: Cigarretes has been banned from public environment. Agree or Disagree?? Around the world people are concerned...

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essay about myself, when/where I was born, my study, hobbies, etc.

2 - "...I am the baggiest one." What does "baggiest" describe here? Do you mean biggest? I'm not sure... :) ...

Writing Feedbackcrawling - Oct 17, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 17, 2008
Essay: On Artificial Intelligence

8 - As in, being worth studying in schools in the US ? If that's the point, I see that...

Writing FeedbackRajiv - Oct 17, 2008 / Rajiv - Oct 19, 2008
Take advantage of every moment ; Colombia Essay/ Rutgers

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Private Eloquence/ PAST EXPERIENCE

3 - I like the changes. It is more streamlined and much cleaner. A good response to the prompt....

Writing Feedbackcowman809 - Oct 16, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 17, 2008
'Love is the answer to world's questions' - Essay on why love is important in life?

8 - You're very welcome. Feel free to post here not only for feedback on essays, but any general language...

Writing Feedbackvipao - Oct 16, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 18, 2008
What experiences have led you to select your professional field?

2 - "Zip, zap, zoom! " went my..." "...does my Play Station give way every..." I suggest wrapping the...

Writing Feedbackkimaya - Oct 16, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 16, 2008
Land for human's purpose or left in its natural conditions ?

NEW - In your country, is there more need for land to be left in its natural conditions or is there...

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What must we do to truly understand ourselves? Difficult for people to judge themselves evenhandedly

6 - In regards to usage, I suggest one of the books from the "Prentice Hall Guide for College Writers" series...

Writing Feedbackhelenalqy - Oct 15, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 20, 2008
Essay: "There's no place like home."

3 - Thanks a lot Gloria!...

Writing Feedbacklearningtowrite - Oct 15, 2008 / learningtowrite - Oct 15, 2008
An unexpected act of kindness

4 - Good afternoon. Putting this piece at the beginning would be a great idea; it's a "hook" and sets...

Writing Feedbacklearningtowrite - Oct 15, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 16, 2008
Should we celebrate Halloween? - essay help

NEW - Should we celebrate Halloween? Halloween has become the second most anticipated holiday for children after Christmas and Chanukah....

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Essay on the short story "Rock Springs" by Richard Ford

2 - Good afternoon. In regards to spelling, I suggest you run the piece through a program with a spell...

Writing Feedbacksarahmk - Oct 14, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 14, 2008
Creativity is one of the highly concerned points to those aspired people

3 - Thank you very much! I will try my best to avoid these usage errors in my later essays!...

Writing Feedbackhelenalqy - Oct 13, 2008 / helenalqy - Oct 15, 2008
Impacts of Senior Citizens in their Choices for Healthcare - essay edit

2 - Good afternoon. As the prompt and/or requirements for this piece were not included in the posting, I can...

Writing Feedbackkcbisslessi - Oct 13, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 14, 2008
A WONDERFUL CAREER - 'I am ready for my interview'

4 - Good evening. There are some main things I am concerned about in this essay. For instance, with the...

Writing Feedbackbadgrammer - Oct 13, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 14, 2008
Motivations of buying a product - Toefl Essay

3 - Thanks Gloria! Your comments are really helpful. Regards, Prakash...

Writing Feedbacktoefl_guy - Oct 13, 2008 / toefl_guy - Oct 14, 2008
Lost And Found - Narrative Essay

3 - Thank you very much!!!! My teacher said if I had any Misplaced commas. My grade would be automatic D....

Writing Feedbackeeyore_lover29 - Oct 13, 2008 / eeyore_lover29 - Oct 14, 2008
We can guess the nature of a person according to there dress but we cant make opinion.

NEW - It is possible to know something about a person by the way of he or she dressess. - TOEFL...

Writing Feedbacksonali - Oct 13, 2008 / — -
Observation paper for HRT 101 Benson

4 - Good afternoon. As I have previously commented, check for capitalization. Things that are not proper nouns (specific ...

Writing Feedbackbensonm - Oct 13, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 14, 2008
The Act of Revenge, The Cask of Amontillado Essay

4 - Good afternoon. "In pace requiescat!" (1) Is correct. Regards, Gloria Moderator, EssayForum.com...

Writing FeedbackBradlays - Oct 13, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 15, 2008
"Zoo Rejection" - my essay

3 - Thanks for your help, Gloria....

Writing FeedbackTabor - Oct 12, 2008 / Tabor - Oct 13, 2008
'The ability to learn makes us human' - Rubiks Cube Essay

2 - Good evening. As the requirements to the assignment were not included in the posting, I will focus on...

Writing Feedbackweezer878 - Oct 12, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 12, 2008
'This woman is my mother' - discuss a person and his or her influence on you

2 - Good evening. You've got a good piece here, but I have a couple of concerns. First, is...

Writing Feedbackzhangyi - Oct 12, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 12, 2008
Praising others - necessary part of life? Sat Essay

2 - Good morning. This is a great essay; your example of the experiment with the kids highlights your stance...

Writing FeedbackgodsendE - Oct 10, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 10, 2008
"An for an eye will make the whole world blind" - Method of punishing criminals

NEW - Topic: By punishing murderers with the death penalty, society is also guilt of committing murder. Therefore, life in prison...

Writing Feedbacktoefl_guy - Oct 9, 2008 / — -
The biggest change in my life - Narrative introduction help

5 - ya .its easy you ,must be think about your last night dream and sometime we have very exciting dream...

Writing Feedbackasdfghjkl - Oct 9, 2008 / gyal - Mar 20, 2013
which airplane flies the farthest- science report

NEW - This is my science report I just need to make sure the grammar and writing make sense. Thank you....

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"The Great Gatsby is seen in two ways" - Help with Essay Writing -

10 - Hello! If someone pastes material from other websites, it causes problems for us and can possibly lead to...

Writing Feedbacksara213 - Oct 9, 2008 / EF_Kevin - Feb 9, 2009
Summary On Pain Meds - paper

2 - Good evening. This looks like the start of a really great paper. You have solid information provided from...

Writing Feedbackhunnybun39 - Oct 9, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 9, 2008
"The Voting Age" essay

4 - Much nicer; much more believable. Regards, Gloria Moderator, EssayForum.com...

Writing Feedbacktaiyaki - Oct 9, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 11, 2008
Toefl Essay - approach to problem-solving- How it works for you?

NEW - What is your approach to problem-solving, and how does it work for you? Every problem will have a solution....

Writing Feedbacktoefl_guy - Oct 8, 2008 / — -
Essay on what you read (Plato, Machiavelli)

2 - Your conclusion should be a wrap-up of your essay. You could quickly rephrase each of these three philosophies and...

Writing Feedbackwordlesstu - Oct 8, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 8, 2008
Ending Underage Drinking by Making It Legal. Should underage drinking laws be changed.

5 - Thank you for all your help I received an A on this paper your services are awesome!...

Writing Feedbackcarebear - Oct 8, 2008 / carebear - Jan 13, 2009
Character of a Man - Essay

NEW - Please check for grammar and also for the use third person only. This essay was to evaluate the character...

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Proofread Essay on Innocent Erendira and Her Heartless Grandmother

NEW - Hi, this is somewhat raw and i want to rework it, but it is due in 18 hours and...

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Tattoos essay: Our Newest Problem?

4 - You will need to return to the places where you originally found the information. For each of the facts...

Writing Feedbacksilent - Oct 6, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 7, 2008
Argumentative Essay: Its no ones word

4 - the essay is aiming at people to stop using the N word...

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