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|The different condition of American town in 1948 and 1950
Writing Feedbackkoganta - Mar 27, 2017 / agus_mono - Mar 27, 2017
|Writing IELTS TASK 2 - Topic: Paper NEWS importance
Writing FeedbackDatnguyen - Mar 26, 2017 / Datnguyen - Mar 26, 2017
|Fastfood is good or bad for our lives?
5 - @mastindersingh Thank you so much for your support, your comment is very precious to me. I hope next essays...
Writing FeedbackAndreiWindy - Mar 26, 2017 / AndreiWindy - Mar 26, 2017
|Sentence Outline- Top 7 Steps To Make Your IoT More Secure
2 - Roy, your steps 2 and 3 are redundant. If you read the outlines very well, you will discover that...
Writing Feedbacknezumi - Mar 26, 2017 / Holt - Mar 26, 2017
|"The importance of biodiversity" task 2 writng module IELTS
4 - Hi @Sabrena_amal It is really alike with the prompt, even so you really need to paraphrase the...
Writing FeedbackSabrena_amal - Mar 25, 2017 / yuukinohan4 - Mar 26, 2017
|Cars on road, climate, and the level of pollution in many cities.
2 - Mayank, save for a number of grammatical problems related to sentence structure and lexical resources, you have presented a...
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|How to support developing countries ?
Writing Feedbackfrenchfries - Mar 25, 2017 / frenchfries - Mar 25, 2017
|Ielts task 2 - An increasing trend of living or studing abroad
Writing FeedbackMaitouyen282 - Mar 25, 2017 / yuukinohan4 - Mar 26, 2017
|Should children do household chares?
Writing FeedbackHilary88 - Mar 24, 2017 / Holt - Mar 25, 2017
|Writing IELTS Task2: Topic Food products. Imported or local?
Writing Feedbacknguyensonhdtk94 - Mar 24, 2017 / nguyensonhdtk94 - Mar 24, 2017
|SOLUTIONS ON CLIMATE CHANGE
5 - Your idea, grammar and vocabulary are really good. But you seem to get the essay requirement wrong. In your...
Writing Feedbackfrenchfries - Mar 24, 2017 / blu - Mar 24, 2017
|TOEFL IBT Independent Writing: Owning smart phones or not? Your point of view
3 - @Holt Thank you, it was very helpful. I will try to rewrite this essay. Could you please take your...
Writing Feedbackhain3dessay - Mar 24, 2017 / hain3dessay - Mar 25, 2017
|People can be closer eachother. How Internet affect on our life?
6 - @hain3dessay @Holt @thunga251090 Thank you very much for your opinions, I will try to improve my writing skill....
Writing FeedbackAndreiWindy - Mar 24, 2017 / AndreiWindy - Mar 25, 2017
|"Pen and Paper Exams - IELTS exam task 2
Writing Feedbackmaya_diab - Mar 23, 2017 / maya_diab - Mar 24, 2017
|Writing IELTS TASK 2 - Topic: Tourism - influence for visited places.
6 - @yuukinohan4 Thank for your comment, it is very precious with me. I will try to improve in next essay....
Writing FeedbackDatnguyen - Mar 23, 2017 / Datnguyen - Mar 27, 2017
|Railroads vs Road Budget - IETLS CAMBRIDGE 11 TASK 2
5 - hi @daiha20082009 it should be better to say "carbon dioxide" rather than write the formula Sometimes i...
Writing Feedbackdaiha20082009 - Mar 23, 2017 / yuukinohan4 - Mar 26, 2017
|There are several reasons why nuclear technology is really worthwhile for humans life
3 - Hi @anonym28 First of all, please insert the prompt so that essay forum members are able to give you...
Writing Feedbackanonym28 - Mar 23, 2017 / yuukinohan4 - Mar 26, 2017
|Convenience food / city people for writing IELTS task 2
2 - Heru, your essay failed to answer the prompt as it seems you did not understand the requirements of the...
Writing FeedbackTongalere - Mar 22, 2017 / okorobiadimma14 - Mar 23, 2017
|Writing 2: Computers replacing teachers / Money Education
2 - Arlenliu, it is of utmost importance that you post the exact prompts of your essay alongside your draft so...
Writing FeedbackArlen - Mar 22, 2017 / okorobiadimma14 - Mar 23, 2017
|Unhealthy convenience food - Task 2 IELTS Writing module
Writing Feedbackhadeelhekmat - Mar 22, 2017 / blu - Mar 24, 2017
|Writing IELTS task 2 : Convenience Food and Preparation Time
2 - Frisilia, with this kind of sloppy sentence development and lack of focus on proper grammar presentation, your essay is...
Writing FeedbackFrisilia - Mar 22, 2017 / Holt - Mar 23, 2017
|High school graduate or experience which important to get job?
3 - Nisa, it is very unfortunate that the errors in this essay limits your score to a failing mark of...
Writing FeedbackNisa_sultan - Mar 22, 2017 / Holt - Mar 23, 2017
|Don't be a victim of interview bias
3 - Thien, the clarity of your opinion is lost due to the manner of your discussion. You failed to make...
Writing FeedbackRogerPham - Mar 21, 2017 / Holt - Mar 23, 2017
|IELTS Writing Task 2 - Is it useless to keep traditional skills and ways of life?
4 - I think you are conscious of using connected words, that is so valuable in your essay. From my experience,...
Writing Feedbackenglishholic - Mar 21, 2017 / daiha20082009 - Mar 24, 2017
|The first day of learning oral English
Writing FeedbackZona - Mar 21, 2017 / d2ny - Mar 22, 2017
|Celebrating Food - Traditional food will change by fast food ?
2 - Nisa, there are a large number of problems related to this particular essay. It has both good and bad...
Writing FeedbackNisa_sultan - Mar 20, 2017 / Holt - Mar 20, 2017
|IELTS writing the topic is about laws and society
3 - Hi Michele, I have read your writing closely and found some you have to improve. Please, meet my notes...
Writing Feedbackmichele - Mar 20, 2017 / akbarmappiare - Mar 20, 2017
|Factors which have an influence on men and women
3 - Hi Maitou, there were a few improvements you needed. First, make sure that you write is in your mind....
Writing FeedbackMaitouyen282 - Mar 19, 2017 / akbarmappiare - Mar 19, 2017
|IELTS Writing Task 1 - Reference Letter for a job - Request from a Teacher
Writing Feedbacktanner - Mar 19, 2017 / Maitouyen282 - Mar 19, 2017
|Smart phones prohibition among kids
4 - A proper academic essay is composed of 5 parts. That description for these paragraphs are the introduction, 3 body...
Writing Feedbackdesign4cracker - Mar 19, 2017 / Holt - Mar 19, 2017
|(Russian National Exam) Agree or disagree? The clothes people wear influence their behavior
7 - @Holt, I am sorry. I wasn`t going to teach you. I just wanted to provide you this structure to...
Writing Feedbackalinavaky - Mar 19, 2017 / alinavaky - Mar 19, 2017
|New technology devices and software make students can not concentrate on class
Writing FeedbackERIC SUNG - Mar 19, 2017 / ERIC SUNG - Mar 19, 2017
|The honesty importance in a relationship
3 - For me, I CONSIDER HONESTY ESSENTIAL IN ALL ASPECTS OF LIFE, AND TELLING THE TRUTH FORMS A LARGE PART...
Writing Feedbackcheniki - Mar 19, 2017 / Guderian455 - Mar 19, 2017
|Discussion about young people ignoring some traditional beliefs
Writing Feedbackzeal - Mar 19, 2017 / zeal - Mar 24, 2017
|Household expenditure in Hong Kong and Britain - charts give the breakdown of the percentage
4 - You counted sentences only for the first two paragraphs. Review the third paragraph and you will see that you...
Writing FeedbackMaitouyen282 - Mar 18, 2017 / Holt - Mar 19, 2017
|Team work; Summarize the points made in the lecture you just heard
Writing Feedbackabderraouf2che - Mar 18, 2017 / abderraouf2che - Mar 18, 2017
|Education from parents and diversity - whether parents are the best teachers?
3 - Anh, what is the actual prompt requirement that you are responding to? Kindly indicate it in your response to...
Writing Feedbackantonie8x - Mar 17, 2017 / Holt - Mar 18, 2017
|IELTS task 2 about "What are the changes of family structures and family roles"
2 - Yolanda, the main problem with this essay is that it focused itself on the "Once Child Policy" of China....
Writing FeedbackYolandaessay - Mar 17, 2017 / Holt - Mar 17, 2017
|Lights and shadows of being a known person
4 - @xuancuong Hi I am learning ielts so i am really glad to help you in this essay. firstly, you...
Writing Feedbackxuancuong - Mar 17, 2017 / Maitouyen282 - Mar 18, 2017
|Second language learning at primary school. Both positive and negative aspects.
Writing Feedbackmaruko chan - Mar 16, 2017 / maruko chan - Mar 17, 2017
|workers commuting to work. IELTS Writing Task 1 - Paraphrasing INTRODUCTION
4 - Thao, I have already corrected your one sentence opening statement in my previous thread. So I will not be...
Writing Feedbackdreamof90 - Mar 16, 2017 / Holt - Mar 17, 2017
|Protecting wildlife through zoos?
2 - Hoang, since this is the very first essay that you have written for the IELTS practice test, I will...
Writing Feedbackhoangvutran123 - Mar 15, 2017 / Holt - Mar 15, 2017
|CLEP English Comp essay - discuss potential merits of various learning forms
3 - @Holt, thank you again for your fast and insightful comments. I am planning to take my test next Wednesday,...
Writing FeedbackPeterson123 - Mar 15, 2017 / Peterson123 - Mar 15, 2017
|CLEP English comp essay point of view: curriculum in education
3 - @Holt, thank you very much for your great feedback. This process is so helpful, and I want to improve...
Writing FeedbackPeterson123 - Mar 14, 2017 / Peterson123 - Mar 15, 2017
|CLEP English Comp essay point of view: "Is it easier now than ever before to form friendships?"
Writing FeedbackPeterson123 - Mar 14, 2017 / Peterson123 - Mar 14, 2017
|Writing 2: Should the government encourage a certain percentage of jobs to be reserved for women?
3 - Arlen, in your opening statement, you strongly support the idea that positions should be reserved for women. However, you...
Writing FeedbackArlen - Mar 14, 2017 / Holt - Mar 14, 2017
|Online sales for retail sectors in New Zealand in 2003 and 2013
2 - Nur, while it is good that you have learned how to remove the mechanical representation of information in your...
Writing Feedbackyuukinohan4 - Mar 14, 2017 / Holt - Mar 14, 2017
|TOEFL independent writing task 1. A new restaurant may be built in your neighorhood.
Writing Feedbackfufuleilei - Mar 14, 2017 / fufuleilei - Mar 15, 2017
|IELTS writing task 2. Do you think it is important to protect animals? What measures can be taken?
Writing Feedbackblu - Mar 14, 2017 / Maitouyen282 - Mar 25, 2017
|Body image promoted and shared by social media is harmful to user
4 - Henry, your essay shows that you were given a topic to write about which is of huge importance or...
Writing Feedbackarsenal4life - Mar 14, 2017 / Holt - Mar 14, 2017
|Intercultural Communication connecting the societes. Final essay.
3 - Hello Suya, You have written a well-reasoned essay on intercultural communication based on your personal experiences. I think...
Writing FeedbackSUYA - Mar 14, 2017 / Peterson123 - Mar 14, 2017
|CLEP English Comp essay prep - agree/ disagree "no goals so impossible as ones we set for ourselves"
4 - Thank you bontonsoup1 and Holt, I especially appreciate the suggestion to sharpen my focus to one side of...
Writing FeedbackPeterson123 - Mar 13, 2017 / Peterson123 - Mar 14, 2017
|The way international associations help developing countries
4 - First of all, I would like to thank you for your precious comment. I would like to empathize that...
Writing Feedbackhiencute - Mar 13, 2017 / hiencute - Mar 13, 2017
|Essay about the importance of spending money on the arts
3 - Hi Martina, I have read your essay and found some errors which you are supposed to improve. Hopefully, you...
Writing FeedbackWarda1992 - Mar 13, 2017 / akbarmappiare - Mar 13, 2017
|Unveiling crimes using sophisticated technology
6 - I agree that your opinion is presented early, before a proper introduction of your topic. You make good...
Writing Feedbackyuukinohan4 - Mar 13, 2017 / Peterson123 - Mar 15, 2017
|The talk about your favorite language
Writing Feedbackdoanquoc - Mar 13, 2017 / Arlen - Mar 14, 2017
|It is difficult to imagine a life without music. Traditional or popular, modern music?
3 - Nutwarara, the essay that you wrote will earn you a score of 4 because you did not properly discuss...
Writing Feedbacknutwararat - Mar 12, 2017 / Holt - Mar 13, 2017
|There is a nexus between corruption and terrorism
Writing FeedbackFAHADKHAN185 - Mar 12, 2017 / Holt - Mar 12, 2017
|Finacial Aid VS Practical Aid And Advice
4 - No bother at all Anais. I think you will see where your faulty paraphrasing came in with the example...
Writing FeedbackAnais - Mar 12, 2017 / Holt - Mar 12, 2017
|Environment problems, who would be responsible for this? - IELTS essay topic
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