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|What would I do if I were a billionaire?
5 - Dears Your essay has some gramarical problems . For examle, let's find out what would I do and where...
Writing FeedbackVarlamow - Jan 8, 2017 / maitouyen1 - Jan 27, 2017
|Writing IELTS Task 1 (Diagram) of recreation places in Britain in the last year of the 20th century
4 - dear @ilmuholic firstly, please make sure that your overview is the summation of all that you discuss in your...
Writing Feedbackilmuholic - Jan 8, 2017 / liv_ryu - Jan 9, 2017
|Toefl writing: technology has apparently assisted our kids to become more creative
3 - Hello Olivia Yang, I will give you several suggestions 1. Since this opinion essay, I think you'd better...
Writing Feedbackolivia yang - Jan 7, 2017 / faizunaa17 - Jan 8, 2017
|Introductions and Overviews IELTS
Writing Feedbackkrempetkov - Jan 7, 2017 / Holt - Jan 9, 2017
|IELTS TASK 2 - Compare the merits and demerits of having a car.
3 - Hello, In my opinion, I think it is a well-organized article and answer your question-- I don't think...
Writing Feedbackkrempetkov - Jan 6, 2017 / Arlen - Jan 9, 2017
|Essay about causes of crimes - the main reasons are the lack of education, religion and drugs.
Writing FeedbackAbderrahime - Jan 5, 2017 / Lorelly - Jan 6, 2017
|Many people believe that the internet is very useful for communication, however I disagree...
5 - @ichaa I think you should give your opinion clearly that whether you think the internet is an excellent means...
Writing Feedbackichaa - Jan 5, 2017 / Nuverte0452 - Jan 5, 2017
|The graph below gives information about how much people in the United States and the United Kingdom
2 - About you first sentence - you should always paraphrase the question. Do not give any addition information, neither any...
Writing Feedbackichaa - Jan 5, 2017 / krempetkov - Jan 7, 2017
|Writing Task 2 opinion's people about internet using
Writing FeedbackFiza26 - Jan 5, 2017 / Arlen - Jan 13, 2017
|Citizens impression on the WWW cyberspace
2 - Hi, Mr. septa! actually I appropriate the meaning of your essay, but unfortunately you haven't done your essay 250...
Writing Feedbackseptaafrian0554 - Jan 5, 2017 / ichaa - Jan 5, 2017
|Internet as communication medium and tools for search information.
2 - @gribigribi Hello gribi In this occasion I would give you some of the suggestion to tweak more of...
Writing Feedbackgribigribi - Jan 5, 2017 / Diazalichsan - Jan 5, 2017
|Writing Task 2 Sample for IELTS: Discussion and opinion about Internet
3 - Hello, First of all, I think this article doesn't match the 250 words requirement. The body part (paragraph...
Writing Feedbackbasohamdanianis - Jan 5, 2017 / Arlen - Jan 9, 2017
|The Line graphs of how much people in UK and US to spend on Petrol
8 - Diaz, good work on presenting more than the minimum number of words in your essay. That said, you should...
Writing FeedbackDiazalichsan - Jan 5, 2017 / Holt - Feb 3, 2017
|How much petrol expenditure in US and UK influence budget of these countries
3 - hello mr septa... your writing is so good, but we have some corrections... the first, please write more than...
Writing Feedbackseptaafrian0554 - Jan 5, 2017 / rizal - Jan 5, 2017
|The graph presents information about comparison of spending on petrol between people in the UK & USA
4 - Grienda, for starters, always remember to include a copy of illustration that your report is based on when you...
Writing Feedbackgribigribi - Jan 5, 2017 / Holt - Jan 19, 2017
|Line Graph Task 1 IELTS sample 2017: Petrol expense in USA and UK
2 - Hello Mr.Baso.. Your writing so amazing... unfortunately, your writing less than 150 words, because writing task 1 must...
Writing Feedbackbasohamdanianis - Jan 5, 2017 / Fiza26 - Jan 5, 2017
|Film Spectators in Asian and Europe Countries
2 - Hello mr.@septaafrian0554 I have a few corrections for you . - movie theather - movie theater - ......
Writing Feedbackseptaafrian0554 - Jan 4, 2017 / BiburLicek - Jan 4, 2017
|The cinema viewing vigures for all films, in millions
3 - hai @Diazalichsan i think you should explain bit about other genres like romance and comedy, instead of describing all...
Writing FeedbackDiazalichsan - Jan 4, 2017 / ayuriska - Jan 13, 2017
|Spendings number for various goods in some part of the world
3 - Alright Fiza, I would give you a brief suggestions regarding to your fabulous essay. First, actually, you...
Writing FeedbackFiza26 - Jan 4, 2017 / Diazalichsan - Jan 5, 2017
|The proportion of primary need expenditures in Malaysia and Japan in 2010
2 - @ichaa I've made the following necessary corrections. I would focus more over structuring your article....
Writing Feedbackichaa - Jan 4, 2017 / nandasharma - Jan 4, 2017
|Pie Chart Task 1 IELTS Sample: typical house spendings in Japan and Malaysia
7 - Hi Baso, Despite those grammatical mistakes, I think you essay is not solid enough. The way you compare two...
Writing Feedbackbasohamdanianis - Jan 4, 2017 / MH_tw - Feb 6, 2017
|The average family expenses in Malaysia and Japan
2 - @septaafrian0554 Hello, Septa, It was such a great essay by the way, however, you need to tweak more of...
Writing Feedbackseptaafrian0554 - Jan 4, 2017 / Diazalichsan - Jan 4, 2017
|Pie Chart: Comparison of Household in Japan and Malaysia in 2010
4 - Hello Diaz.. sharing is fun right?, i have some suggestions based on your essay ... was in other...
Writing FeedbackDiazalichsan - Jan 4, 2017 / Fiza26 - Jan 4, 2017
|The pie charts presents the overall family spending in Japan and Malaysia
3 - @gribigribi First and foremost, it was such a good essay for writing task 1 IELTS, all the components have...
Writing Feedbackgribigribi - Jan 4, 2017 / Diazalichsan - Jan 4, 2017
|Ielts task 1 - Information about the sales during an ordinary October week at a small restaurant
Writing Feedbackkrempetkov - Jan 3, 2017 / blueknightiris - Jan 3, 2017
|"When in Rome, do as Romans do" Travelling and promotion of globalisation
2 - Well, there are a few problems with your Introduction paragraph. Your first sentence should paraphrase the question, while...
Writing Feedbackdang200993 - Jan 2, 2017 / krempetkov - Jan 3, 2017
|Zoos are capable of preserving species that are facing extinction.
2 - Hi, your grammar is very good. In your intro, I would not write "This essay will do this, this...
Writing Feedbackquora123 - Jan 1, 2017 / TJLuschen - Jan 1, 2017
|Essay; Relationship between old and young people in the modern world
Writing FeedbackAnna M - Dec 31, 2016 / Anna M - Jan 1, 2017
|The data on how fast world wide population growth in numbers and statistics of urban population
3 - In your introduction, you should explain what information both graphs are presenting. The bar graph provides information about...
Writing FeedbackMuhayyun Mappare - Dec 30, 2016 / krempetkov - Jan 3, 2017
|Comparison of the society growth and urban areas
2 - Hello, Overall, the content of this essay is good and understandable. You draw information from the graphs well...
Writing Feedbackhanasufiarahma - Dec 30, 2016 / lynzee22 - Dec 30, 2016
|People who live in the world and the areas
3 - Hello ayra cantik It would be better to mention the population and the year before the number among them...
Writing Feedbackayrahumairah - Dec 30, 2016 / Muhayyun Mappare - Dec 30, 2016
|World population growth from 1800 to 2100 in developed and developing countries
2 - Since there are the graphs of developed and developing nations, it may add more to your essay by comparing...
Writing Feedbackded15 - Dec 30, 2016 / jcgdbb - Dec 30, 2016
|IELTS Task 1 World Population and Comparison of Developed and Developing Countries
2 - Hi, I thought your report was pretty clear, but I would make the following suggestions: The line graph...
Writing FeedbackCitra07 - Dec 30, 2016 / TJLuschen - Dec 30, 2016
|Commitment and responsibility. Leadership Essay - Leadership skill I posses
4 - Dina, the best way to start off your essay discussion is by revealing to the reviewer what your idea,...
Writing Feedbackhacchani - Dec 30, 2016 / Holt - Dec 30, 2016
|The graphs exhibit the information on world population growth from 1800 to 2100 / Urban Populations
4 - hello lovely, I copied than paste your writing just in case to be you comparasion. The senstences in "()"...
Writing Feedbackl1h4h - Dec 30, 2016 / Muhayyun Mappare - Dec 30, 2016
|The proportion of proficient persons in a foreign language among male and female students
Writing Feedbackhavi105 - Dec 30, 2016 / Citra07 - Dec 30, 2016
|Wrtiting Task 1 IELTS The title of population in developed countries and developing countries
6 - Hi Dayat, It's better for you to avoid using the same words with the question. In addition, you...
Writing FeedbackDayat - Dec 30, 2016 / Janicelo - Feb 3, 2017
|Mothers in Australia over forty years old. Essay Writing task 1
5 - Hallo, good night hanna, i have some corrections to you about grammatical error For the first The...
Writing Feedbackhanasufiarahma - Dec 29, 2016 / Dayat - Dec 30, 2016
|IELTS WRITING TASK 1, Table of Proportion of children in Australia
3 - Hy Mahayyun Mappare, good afternoon, i have some corrections in grammatical of your writing. the correction, this...
Writing FeedbackMuhayyun Mappare - Dec 29, 2016 / Dayat - Dec 30, 2016
|writing IELTS TASK 1 AUSTRALIAN WOMEN BIRTHRATE
NEW - The table gives information about the birth rate from Australian women aged 40-44 in the quarter century. It can...
Writing Feedbackayrahumairah - Dec 29, 2016 / — -
|The figure of children born to 40-44 years old women in Australia for four different years
3 - Hello Mister Dedy.. I have read your writing. In this moment, I will get an attempt to review...
Writing Feedbackded15 - Dec 29, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Dec 30, 2016
|[IELST Task 1] Annual earnings of three bakeries in London, 2000-2010.
3 - @PJmustbebetter To conclude, two out of three Bakeries rose ... To conclude, profits for two out of three Bakeries...
Writing FeedbackPJmustbebetter - Dec 29, 2016 / serikbar - Dec 29, 2016
|The prolificity of women in their forties at the antipodes
4 - @Citra07 Hy Citra, good night, i have some corrections from grammatical error of your writing The first ...
Writing FeedbackCitra07 - Dec 29, 2016 / Dayat - Dec 30, 2016
|Ielts writing task 1 about fish and four types of meat consumption
2 - This is pretty solid writing. There's just one thing I'd like to point out. while the consumption of beef,...
Writing Feedbackbellebelle73 - Dec 29, 2016 / ngokhoa99 - Dec 29, 2016
|Ielts2 - In many countries today there are many highly qualified graduates without employment
Writing Feedbackkrempetkov - Dec 28, 2016 / krempetkov - Jan 3, 2017
|IELTS Task 1 The Pie Charts represent the precentages of changes in the annual dependents
3 - Hello Hana I have some advice for you : - The Pie charts represents the precentages (...) such...
Writing Feedbackhanasufiarahma - Dec 28, 2016 / ded15 - Dec 28, 2016
|IELTS writing task 1 - The spending by local authorities in some land in three different years
2 - ...cost of local authorities, while transport. Transport and environmental service experienced increasing spendingand, while there were gradual reducingreductions in...
Writing Feedbackded15 - Dec 28, 2016 / thugzook - Dec 29, 2016
|LOCAL AUTHORITIES BUDGET in different lands in 1980, 1990 and 2000.
Writing Feedbackayrahumairah - Dec 28, 2016 / Citra07 - Dec 28, 2016
|The spending for education, health and human resources, environmental services and transportation.
Writing FeedbackDayat - Dec 28, 2016 / Citra07 - Dec 28, 2016
|IELTS Task 1 Annual Expenses by Local Bureaucracy in Several Lands
2 - Hallo Mr.Citra, Good night, i have some corrections for you. The correction is (Expenses of environmental services...
Writing FeedbackCitra07 - Dec 28, 2016 / Dayat - Dec 28, 2016
|WRITING TASK 1 THE PROPORTION OF LEISURE ACTIVITIES PREFERENCE IN BOTH GENDER
2 - "A breakdown of the proportion of several ..." A breakdown of several leisure activities taken by both male and...
Writing Feedbackilankelo21 - Dec 28, 2016 / thugzook - Dec 29, 2016
|IELTS TASK 2 - MEDIA CONTROL - an important privilege and tool to manipulate the public
Writing Feedbacklinhledieue - Dec 27, 2016 / linhledieue - Dec 27, 2016
|If I would obtain a chance to go abroad then I would go to China
2 - Hey! A couple of things. First, you ought to capitalize every instance of China in the essay. It'll go...
Writing FeedbackOmerzafar - Dec 26, 2016 / YomanAwe - Dec 26, 2016
|Some researchers analyse and say that, you are not too old to learn new skills
Writing Feedbacklalodhi - Dec 26, 2016 / Omerzafar - Dec 26, 2016
|Any new technological development in the recent years is a boon or curse for the society in general.
2 - hi @lalodhi, you have a good stand point. I'd like to give you some suggestion as follows : 1....
Writing Feedbacklalodhi - Dec 26, 2016 / masktaz - Dec 26, 2016
|Overpopulation of urban areas - problems and solutions
2 - @lalodhi Here are few suggestions from me. ..., there has been significant rise in the urban population... ......
Writing Feedbacklalodhi - Dec 26, 2016 / nandasharma - Dec 26, 2016
|Art can soar economy of the country - spending money for it
Writing FeedbackOmerzafar - Dec 25, 2016 / Omerzafar - Dec 26, 2016
|IELTS task1: spending on different items in the UK (Table)
2 - Ali, when you write the summary overview of the chart, make sure to represent all of the sectors indicated...
Writing Feedbackali98 - Dec 24, 2016 / Holt - Dec 24, 2016
|The total download (in 1000s) from three computer packages in five weeks period
4 - I think you need to work on you summary sentence. ..."and Net less popular among internet users." - that...
Writing Feedbackkiemwanz - Dec 24, 2016 / krempetkov - Dec 26, 2016
|Writing 2: people think that men and women have different qualities to certain jobs
3 - What I didn't like about your second paragraph is that, you have mixed complex and very simple sentences. I...
Writing FeedbackArlen - Dec 22, 2016 / krempetkov - Dec 22, 2016
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