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|Summary TED - nine life lessons from rock climbing
5 - ... professional climber WHO has been climbing ... ... he reveals THAT there are 9 values... 1) Fear...
Writing FeedbackAbrahamlincoln - Nov 10, 2016 / RAY93 - Nov 11, 2016
|Alumni's proportion based on gender in Canada from 1992 to 2007
2 - Dear Hujjatul, here are some advices for your writing, feel free to correct my responds, figures experienced an...
Writing FeedbackHujjatul19 - Nov 10, 2016 / fadhilmd25 - Nov 10, 2016
|Guests' quantities on two music sites
4 - Hello! I will give you some opinions about your essay. (1) ... regarding to new music sites is...
Writing FeedbackHujjatul19 - Nov 10, 2016 / septiadara29 - Nov 28, 2016
|writing task 1 : the number of guests visiting music on the internet
2 - Dear Riandi, here some advice for your writing and feel free to correct me too! ... occupied by...
Writing Feedbackryan31 - Nov 10, 2016 / mem77 - Nov 10, 2016
|The Line Chart : The number of University Alumni in Canada for 15-year Period
2 - hai edho I have some suggestions for you hope it helps ... alumni in Canada for THE fifteen-year...
Writing Feedbackmem77 - Nov 10, 2016 / ryan31 - Nov 10, 2016
|Article Summary: Hundreds More Species than We Thought Might Be Endangered
3 - Hi Asmawati, below are my thoughts for your summary essay. - is found in most parts of Colombia...
Writing Feedbackasmaraj96 - Nov 10, 2016 / justivy03 - Nov 10, 2016
|The Global Dangers of Trump's Climate Denial
2 - Aloha Riandi, here is my thought; (1) Donald Trumpwho is selected as president on America's election.(your sentence need...
Writing Feedbackryan31 - Nov 10, 2016 / ibe13 - Nov 10, 2016
|Between the 2030 and 2040, the percentage of old people in Japan will rise sharply
2 - Hi Muhamad, below are my suggestions to enhance your analysis. - A breakdown of the information abouton the...
Writing Feedbackmem77 - Nov 10, 2016 / justivy03 - Nov 28, 2016
|A breakdown of the information about the number of visits on the two fresh created music websites
2 - Aloha, here is my thoughts; (1) A breakdown of the information about the number of visits on the...
Writing Feedbackmem77 - Nov 10, 2016 / ibe13 - Nov 10, 2016
|The Republic of China: A state-backed up a firm that is developing a gigantic space ship
4 - MESMERIZED BY YOUR OUTSTANDING VOCABULARY AND STRUCTURE ON YOUR SUMMARY, I TYPE THESE SENTENCES ON GOOGLE AND, GOTCHA,...
Writing FeedbackDioba - Nov 10, 2016 / RAY93 - Nov 10, 2016
|It has been 2 decades since Canadian government happily admits immigrants
2 - It has been 2 decades since Canadian government happily admits immigrants. Even there are has been [DOUBLE VERB] a...
Writing FeedbackAbrahamlincoln - Nov 10, 2016 / RAY93 - Nov 10, 2016
|People have more attention for a look and not what kind a person someone is. Cameron Russell summary
8 - hi dioba here is my correction for your summary Imagethe cutting-edge technology can transform a human mindset of...
Writing FeedbackDioba - Nov 10, 2016 / eve01 - Nov 10, 2016
|(Summary Article) Donald Trump wins the presidential election
3 - Hi @alfinkurnia, Here some corrections on your summary: As we know, B before Donald Trump (...) of...
Writing Feedbackalfinkurnia - Nov 10, 2016 / asmaraj96 - Nov 10, 2016
|Reading every day. The law of 33% - Tai Lopez
2 - Sari, your writing above is good; you are able to express your ideas orderly. This is the strength of...
Writing Feedbacksasariri - Nov 10, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Nov 10, 2016
|IELTS Writing Task 2 : Is the school subject to academic in orientation ......
Writing Feedbackleopar187 - Nov 10, 2016 / sasariri - Nov 10, 2016
|ARTICLE SUMMARY - Obama Congratulates Trump
2 - Sman, you misunderstood the reason for President Obama's invitation to Donald Trump to join him for breakfast at the...
Writing FeedbackUcha MSN - Nov 10, 2016 / Holt - Nov 10, 2016
|TED Summary - How to Build Good Life
Writing FeedbackUcha MSN - Nov 10, 2016 / eve01 - Nov 10, 2016
|The controversial of Trump was elected as USA president
Writing Feedbackhitam_manis - Nov 10, 2016 / ryan31 - Nov 10, 2016
|Reading a lot of books is beneficial - it will make you a tough person
2 - ... they do not have right roles PRECEPTS. ... happiness are a couple of people's INHABITANTS' goals ... To...
Writing Feedbackabangabul93 - Nov 10, 2016 / Ucha MSN - Nov 10, 2016
|Article Summary: Apple has a new way to get a cheaper iPhone
4 - Hello My Friend Let me give some inputs towards your writing. please pay attention to your subject+verb agreement...
Writing Feedbackorestes - Nov 10, 2016 / Abrahamlincoln - Nov 10, 2016
|Tai Lopez shared his experience how to be successful person
4 - Hi, let me give several advice, perhaps useful for you. 1.He suggests to the people to ...----> suggested (...
Writing Feedbackasmaraj96 - Nov 10, 2016 / Dioba - Nov 10, 2016
|Reading books help to extend knowledge without wasting much money. TED summary
3 - Rahasia, it is really important that you provide us with the link to the article, video, or audio file...
Writing Feedbackhitam_manis - Nov 10, 2016 / Holt - Nov 10, 2016
|Summary Article: Animals Eat Ocean Plastic because it Smells Like Food
3 - Abul, first up, you need to remember that when you write a summary essay, you must always include the...
Writing Feedbackabangabul93 - Nov 10, 2016 / Holt - Nov 10, 2016
|TED SUMMARY about the necessity of reading
3 - Orestes, the next time you post your summary, please include a link to the original article or video so...
Writing Feedbackorestes - Nov 10, 2016 / Holt - Nov 10, 2016
|Should I read one book daily? Why? - Tai Lopez TED summary
3 - Dear Abdul Hakim, here some advice for your writing and feel free to correct me too! In Hollywood...
Writing FeedbackKimichi89 - Nov 10, 2016 / mem77 - Nov 10, 2016
|Mentor or role model can change our life. TED 13: Why I Read A Book A Day?
Writing Feedbackmeryaniranggi - Nov 10, 2016 / nda18 - Nov 13, 2016
|Getting new knowledge from book is good choice. TED 13 Why I read a book a day
2 - Hai @nurul66, I got some suggestions for your writing: 1. but they don't (DO NOT) know .. (in...
Writing Feedbacknurul66 - Nov 10, 2016 / abangabul93 - Nov 10, 2016
|Study of Sociology Aspects of Art Theft
Writing FeedbackEthanchen1998 - Nov 10, 2016 / Holt - Nov 14, 2016
|Subjectivities in news make it gain less reliability.
2 - hi ekalamarsyari, i'd like to correct this good article.. Indonesian Presidential candidates in 2004 had some supported (from)...
Writing Feedbackekalamarsyari11 - Nov 10, 2016 / Kimichi89 - Nov 10, 2016
|It can't be denied that internet has currently become the main method for obtaining information
3 - Here are some changes I would make to make your essay more concise... The internet is efficient and...
Writing FeedbackArlen - Nov 10, 2016 / yjung17 - Nov 17, 2016
|Does the rising popularity of telecommuting affect society's lives? IELTS writing Task 2
3 - ... the office thingy from a computer... ... activity is presumably near bynearby the development of ... ...
Writing Feedbacklanazaldo - Nov 10, 2016 / hitam_manis - Nov 10, 2016
|Children's manners and violent games - IELTS WRITING TASK2
2 - Hi Naoki, overall it is a good, well-written essay. However, here are some suggestion from me. Honestly, I am...
Writing FeedbackNaoki28 - Nov 10, 2016 / amrillahmk - Nov 10, 2016
|Students should be allowed to study whatever they like
3 - Hi Amrillah, here is some suggestions for you ... on what subjects that students like the most. ...
Writing Feedbackamrillahmk - Nov 9, 2016 / Hujjatul19 - Nov 10, 2016
|Modern communications mean that it's no longer necessary to write letters
2 - Fadhil, due to the gravity of the confusion caused by the way you developed your essay, I do not...
Writing Feedbackfadhilmd25 - Nov 9, 2016 / Holt - Nov 9, 2016
|Today with the help from technologies, people can solve more problems than they used to.
3 - @Holt Thank you very much. The full instruction is " Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?...
Writing Feedbackfanceen - Nov 9, 2016 / fanceen - Nov 9, 2016
|The importance of having both the certificate of TOEFL and IELTS
3 - Thank you for the great compliment as well as the constructive suggestion Mr. Holt. I will learn it more...
Writing FeedbackKholil_PullnBear - Nov 9, 2016 / Kholil_PullnBear - Nov 9, 2016
|The university should not discriminate people based on gender, religion, culture, etc.
4 - Hello festivo, here is my correction for your essay >>you write very clearly but it is showed you...
Writing Feedbackfestivo - Nov 9, 2016 / eve01 - Nov 10, 2016
|Sources of person's understanding; the comparison of knowledge based on the gaining process
6 - For your Task Achievement, I believe you would get a 4 because you failed to indicate / restate the...
Writing Feedbacklanazaldo - Nov 8, 2016 / Holt - Nov 10, 2016
|The fitness membership between men and women from 1970 to 2000
3 - Amril, are you really sure that this essay was created in less or approximately 20 minutes? This essay has...
Writing Feedbackamrillahmk - Nov 8, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Nov 17, 2016
|Does tourism has greater advantages? No doubt it has direct impact on the socio-economic condition
4 - Hi, I supposed your paragraph 2 tried to talk the advantages of the tourism. It seems too less...
Writing Feedbackfestivo - Nov 8, 2016 / Arlen - Nov 9, 2016
|Writing Task 2: young people have no leisure time and are under a lot of pressure to study hard
2 - Arlen, this essay reads like a solid 5 to me in the scoring band. While the introductory paragraph is...
Writing FeedbackArlen - Nov 8, 2016 / Holt - Nov 8, 2016
|Epistemology--Worldview--Ideology. We should learn philosophy to be open minded.
3 - @Holt I really thank to you for your kindness by giving me feedback. I will rewrite this essay to...
Writing FeedbackAskarie26 - Nov 8, 2016 / Askarie26 - Nov 9, 2016
|Every person is different. The happiness depends on people's own.
4 - Hi Reski, you have needed improvement for your writing. I am gonna offer you a few suggestions. Firstly, pay...
Writing FeedbackReskiRamadani88 - Nov 8, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Mar 5, 2017
|Reports show that diets and leisure, study were most popular in Sweden
3 - hi.. I have some views about your essay.. The table compares the amount[number] [amount is for uncountable...
Writing FeedbackReskiRamadani88 - Nov 8, 2016 / lanazaldo - Nov 9, 2016
|After having experience for a year, students are finally understand and know their skills
4 - Other than that, people who are traveling on the other Cities ...>>... people who travel to the other Cities...
Writing FeedbackReskiRamadani88 - Nov 8, 2016 / alfinkurnia - Nov 10, 2016
|The amount of merchandise in million tones that has been carried in UK by four modes of transport
5 - hello reski I have some suggestions for you hope it works The line chart gives the information...
Writing FeedbackReskiRamadani88 - Nov 8, 2016 / ryan31 - Nov 11, 2016
|The types of things purchased in five regions of the world in 2002 is provided by the table
Writing FeedbackAnna94 - Nov 8, 2016 / yurikeyuri - Nov 10, 2016
|People have trouble to explain the meaning of happiness
Writing FeedbackAnna94 - Nov 8, 2016 / Holt - Nov 8, 2016
|There are several predominant factors to reach happiness
3 - Hi Meireza.. Here are my corrections towards your essay THAT HAPPINESS IS CONSIDERED HAPPINESS IS...
Writing FeedbackBeauty17 - Nov 8, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Nov 9, 2016
|We should use the time wisely and give our love to the others, in order to attract the happiness
Writing Feedbackbadafebriani17 - Nov 8, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Nov 9, 2016
|Customers spent their money for different things. What was the common shopping preference in 2002?
2 - Bada, when you summarize your report, you should make sure to mention a complete overview of the information in...
Writing Feedbackbadafebriani17 - Nov 8, 2016 / Holt - Nov 8, 2016
|Food, drink and tobacco were the highest demanded products in some countries during the year 2002
2 - Meireza, the first and foremost problem that I can see in the way that this essay was written lies...
Writing FeedbackBeauty17 - Nov 8, 2016 / Holt - Nov 8, 2016
|People have difference ways to achieve satisfaction - holiday assignment on the happiness
2 - Hello Pram! I want to give you suggestions. I guess your introduction do not answer the prompt....
Writing FeedbackPramudia27 - Nov 8, 2016 / ReskiRamadani88 - Nov 8, 2016
|Happiness is the essential matter that it complicate to explain - there are several ways to be happy
3 - Hello Wily! I want give you some suggestions. Satisfaction is the purpose all of ... Happiness is...
Writing FeedbackWilyaftika23 - Nov 8, 2016 / ReskiRamadani88 - Nov 8, 2016
|The happiness is hard to characterize - there are different answers and conclusions about this.
Writing Feedbackfaizunaa17 - Nov 8, 2016 / Holt - Nov 8, 2016
|The table gives a clue on consumer spending on different articles
3 - Hello Mardian! I want to give you some suggestion. food/drink/tobacco = diet it can be seen that...
Writing Feedbackmardian24 - Nov 8, 2016 / ReskiRamadani88 - Nov 8, 2016
|The facts about expenditure of European People in five countries in 2002 revealed in the table.
2 - Hai @Faizzuna17, I got some advice for your writing: 1. There is (WAS) some information about expenditure of...
Writing Feedbackfaizunaa17 - Nov 8, 2016 / abangabul93 - Nov 10, 2016
|There are some reasons why the happiness is hard to be explained
4 - Dear Ivan, here some advice for your writing and feel free to correct me too! Some people want...
Writing FeedbackIvanMS027 - Nov 8, 2016 / mem77 - Nov 10, 2016
|The wares on which consumer spends in five countries, located in Europe in 2002.
3 - Hi Mr Ivan, Here are my correction 1. ... goods on which consumer spend in five countries ......
Writing FeedbackIvanMS027 - Nov 8, 2016 / nda18 - Nov 10, 2016
|Happiness is a magic which is very hard to describe
2 - Hello, For instance, a business man (it can be connected ) who has many companies never feel (fell...
Writing Feedbackmardian24 - Nov 8, 2016 / Anna94 - Nov 8, 2016
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