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|Learning English has become a basic need for better life around the world.
Writing Feedbackibe13 - Nov 15, 2016 / justivy03 - Nov 15, 2016
|Daylight Saving Time Bears A Unique Matter
3 - Mujaddidah, I am not really sure whether this is an acceptable a summary or not. It might quite...
Writing FeedbackHujjatul19 - Nov 15, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Nov 15, 2016
|Summary TED - What can we learn from shortcuts?
3 - HI brother, let me give several advice, perhaps useful for you. 1. ... to reach our destination faster,[/s --->More...
Writing FeedbackAbrahamlincoln - Nov 15, 2016 / Dioba - Nov 16, 2016
|Summarize article : earthquake happen in New Zealand
4 - Hi Andika. These are my thoughts to fin alize your summary Note: You should reread your summary so...
Writing Feedbackandika08 - Nov 15, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Nov 16, 2016
|Getting better life with English mania
4 - Hi Nina, below are my thoughts on your essay. - Mania can be good,however, alarmingly, and unfortunately deadly....
Writing FeedbackNinaJoesuf25 - Nov 15, 2016 / justivy03 - Nov 15, 2016
|Article Summary : Monday's bright supermoon will be closest to Earth in 68 years
2 - Nurul, you will have to be careful about plagiarizing content in you summary. I caught a few cut and...
Writing Feedbacknda18 - Nov 15, 2016 / Holt - Nov 15, 2016
|Owner of Gudeg Yu Djum passes away
2 - Mohamed, let's get some of your error information clarified here. For starters, the body of Yu Djum was not...
Writing Feedbackmem77 - Nov 15, 2016 / Holt - Nov 15, 2016
|People may become crazy over such things as sports, religion and learning English
3 - Hi Miss Mujadiddah. I have read you summary closely and found some which you should develop to show better...
Writing FeedbackHujjatul19 - Nov 15, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Nov 16, 2016
|Chinese children Learning English by screaming it.
5 - Hi, let me give several advice for you. Feel free to correct me. 1.Ted's video talking about mania especially...
Writing Feedbackryan31 - Nov 15, 2016 / Dioba - Nov 16, 2016
|The electronic games are preferred by children for a number of factors and has bad effect on them
Writing Feedbackm7mdbsheer - Nov 15, 2016 / nda18 - Nov 15, 2016
|Recently, the world has new kinds of mania, mania for learning new languages, especially English
2 - Hi Nda, Among thousands of TED Talks videos, why did most of the members here choose this video? Is...
Writing Feedbacknda18 - Nov 15, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Nov 15, 2016
|These days, many people are trying to learn English, approximately 2 billions of students
3 - I WAS WODERING WHO IS THE SPEAKER ?? The is an interesting topic about mania. ( CONFUSING SENTENCE)...
Writing Feedbackandika08 - Nov 15, 2016 / Bams17 - Nov 15, 2016
|TED Summary : The World's English Mania
3 - Your writing is great but there are some correction ... opened his speech withINTRODUCING REGARDING mania. ..., education,...
Writing Feedbackmem77 - Nov 15, 2016 / NinaJoesuf25 - Nov 15, 2016
|It is the teacher's responsibility to make a student learn the material.
5 - Kinnie, in order to make your argument even stronger in this essay, you should have taken the time to...
Writing Feedbackkinnie81 - Nov 15, 2016 / Holt - Nov 15, 2016
|Mathematic and science as the main features in the industrial revolution era
3 - Hello, this is my correction for you. Mathematic and science are as main features in industrial revolution ......
Writing Feedbackyurikeyuri - Nov 15, 2016 / alfinkurnia - Nov 16, 2016
|The Building of Recent English Words in Our Brain
4 - -The English language ENGLISH is AN international toolsof communication TOOL USED BY to another people in AROUND...
Writing Feedbackyurikeyuri - Nov 15, 2016 / RAY93 - Nov 16, 2016
|IELTS summary task Papua New Guinea Hides Some of the Most Dangerous Volcanoes on Earth
4 - Hi Dioba, here is some suggestions for you ... in Papua New Guinea which producedproduces (since it is...
Writing FeedbackDioba - Nov 15, 2016 / Hujjatul19 - Nov 15, 2016
|Summary Article - Speedy bat flies at 160km/h, smashing bird speed record
4 - Hello I will give my correction for you. Brazilian bat has became the fastest (...) of speed around...
Writing FeedbackAbrahamlincoln - Nov 15, 2016 / alfinkurnia - Nov 16, 2016
|British societies facing more problems caused by globalisation. WHY BREXIT HAPPENED?
3 - Hi Bambang, I think that you forgot something that matters in a summary. You forgot to mention WHO...
Writing FeedbackBams17 - Nov 15, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Nov 15, 2016
|IELTS summary TED Celeste Headlee 10 ways to have a better conversation
2 - Hi Dioba, ... develop an argument and trivialbig, burning, central, critical, crucial, important, key, main, major, vital |...
Writing FeedbackDioba - Nov 15, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Nov 15, 2016
|Rogerian Essay on Social Networking - The pros and cons of being a part of it
2 - Kevin, I think that you should consider omitting the portion that discusses the health drawbacks of social media because...
Writing FeedbackFoxTrot05 - Nov 15, 2016 / Holt - Nov 15, 2016
|(Summary Article) Why Mark Zuckerberg Is Fortune's Businessperson of the Year
11 - Facebook, one of the most enormouscompany(biggest companies has)was surprised people in the world. (this is ) Because the chairman(of...
Writing Feedbackalfinkurnia - Nov 15, 2016 / Wilyaftika23 - Nov 19, 2016
|Animal experiments are ruthless but necessary. Should animals be used in research? IELTS Writing T2
2 - Hi Chen, I can see that you have gotten a comprehensive feedback from one of the members in EF....
Writing FeedbackRamen - Nov 15, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Nov 15, 2016
|Bringing up successful kids without over parenting
2 - Hi Miss Imanina.. These are my thoughts towards your summary. IN VIDEO OF TED, Julio Lycott-Haims explains regarding...
Writing FeedbackNinaJoesuf25 - Nov 14, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Nov 14, 2016
|A healthy life for children - giving juice is not quite good beverage for maintaining their health
Writing FeedbackNinaJoesuf25 - Nov 14, 2016 / Lola12 - Nov 14, 2016
|A place with Big Ideas to Get Rid of Fossil Fuels
2 - Hi Mujaddidah, - The most noticeable thingmatter/issue("thing" is quite informal) in Costa Rica is that they... - ......
Writing FeedbackHujjatul19 - Nov 14, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Nov 15, 2016
|An Easy Brand New Approach for Gardeners
3 - Hello, I give you my correction. thanks ... farming field is appeared will be true, Aquaponics. It is...
Writing FeedbackHujjatul19 - Nov 14, 2016 / alfinkurnia - Nov 15, 2016
|Summary New Scientist - Food made from natural gas
3 - Hi Ibe, here are some suggestions as far as I can notice: - ... called Methylococcus C apsulatus....
Writing Feedbackibe13 - Nov 14, 2016 / m7mdbsheer - Nov 15, 2016
|Am I Really A Visual Learner? - Alexandra Panzer
2 - Most of people consider that they are visual learners. change "that they are" to "themselves" However, others argue...
Writing Feedbackibe13 - Nov 14, 2016 / annikaacuna - Nov 15, 2016
|Article Summary : First home brain implant lets 'locked-in' woman communicate
Writing Feedbacknda18 - Nov 14, 2016 / alfinkurnia - Nov 14, 2016
|TED Summary : The discovery that could rewrite physics - Allan Adams
2 - Hi Nurul. these are my thoughts to finalize your summary Allan Adams is a MIT'S associate professor who...
Writing Feedbacknda18 - Nov 14, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Nov 15, 2016
|Art Theft in relation to Society's Influence
2 - Ethan, the reason that you have a difficult time developing your closing argument is because your earlier work lacks...
Writing FeedbackEthanchen1998 - Nov 14, 2016 / Holt - Nov 14, 2016
|(Summary article) It Just Got Easier to Shop Directly on Instagram
3 - Hi Alfin, please find additional suggestions below; - Neverthe less, sinceas instagram appeared many years ago - a...
Writing Feedbackalfinkurnia - Nov 14, 2016 / justivy03 - Nov 14, 2016
|Antony Goldbloom, A machine can work like human, and substitute his work
5 - Dear Alan Those are my comments toward your writing 1. Please kindly attach the link of the article...
Writing Feedbackalfinkurnia - Nov 14, 2016 / Abrahamlincoln - Nov 15, 2016
|IELTS writing task II most inhabitants where everyone knew each stayed in suburban.
4 - hi dio, these are my thought towards your essay ...most inhabitants stayedstaying in suburban knew each other. ...
Writing FeedbackDioba - Nov 14, 2016 / nda18 - Nov 14, 2016
|Commuting in Houston using various modes of transportation
NEW - The table shows essential information about commuting to office in Houston and measured by percent and the number of...
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|Nowadays, as the world becomes more global, there is a new tendency to learn English
Writing Feedbackdils - Nov 14, 2016 / justivy03 - Nov 14, 2016
|Mania can be good, warming, and deathly. Nowadays, a novel mania is arising...
3 - Hello Shisha! In addition to the above comments, below are my inputs toward your essay; hope you will gain...
Writing FeedbackWasishaSisha - Nov 14, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Nov 14, 2016
|English is used as a second language in some countries
3 - hi eiraj, these are my thought towards your summary Jay Walker, one of the TED-Talk speakers, Jay Walker,...
Writing FeedbackEiraj - Nov 14, 2016 / nda18 - Nov 14, 2016
|Manias can be expressed by various ways. Have your ever heard about English mania?
4 - Hello, this is my correction for you. thanks Maniacs can be expressed ... ..., for example, shows their...
Writing Feedbackabangabul93 - Nov 14, 2016 / alfinkurnia - Nov 14, 2016
|The community can come from villages or cities. Merits and demerits of Living in a Small Community
5 - ... to help other people FOR solving many problems... Secondly, the other advantagebenefit is giving fast respon ... Different...
Writing Feedbackyurikeyuri - Nov 14, 2016 / NinaJoesuf25 - Nov 14, 2016
|Article Summary about Christine Corbett Moran
3 - Hello. I give you my correctio for your writing. ... Moran is a coder and a theoretical astrophysicist...
Writing FeedbackDioba - Nov 14, 2016 / alfinkurnia - Nov 14, 2016
|The Relation of Kind of Vehicle and The CO2 Emission is Illustrated on The Given Data
Writing Feedbackyurikeyuri - Nov 14, 2016 / alfinkurnia - Nov 14, 2016
|A good environment with humble people only in a small village - english studio
6 - Dear Alfian i think you have good enough skill to write in English. However, there are several improvements...
Writing Feedbackalfinkurnia - Nov 14, 2016 / Abrahamlincoln - Nov 15, 2016
|Summary TED - An engineer's vision for tinty forests, everywhere
3 - hi abraham lincoln i'd like to make some reviews here.. ... problem of the world, it(which) effects on...
Writing FeedbackAbrahamlincoln - Nov 14, 2016 / Kimichi89 - Nov 14, 2016
|The kind of transport to go to work in Houston, Texas. Writing test 1 in English studio
6 - Dear alfin, here some advice for your writing and feel free to correct me too! The table shows...
Writing Feedbackalfinkurnia - Nov 14, 2016 / mem77 - Nov 16, 2016
|To find work you love, don't follow your passion. TED 12 How could we choose a fulfilling career?
2 - Nurul, your essay offers incomplete information. You should have included a few sentences about the method of the study,...
Writing Feedbacknurul66 - Nov 14, 2016 / Holt - Nov 14, 2016
|The debatable issue regarding to what is the primary function of post-secondary education
2 - Hi Amril, Here's my feedback based on IELTS band descriptors. Task Response: - The absence of examples...
Writing Feedbackamrillahmk - Nov 14, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Nov 14, 2016
|The Human Speech Origin was Learned from Old Fish Sound
Writing Feedbackyurikeyuri - Nov 14, 2016 / faizunaa17 - Nov 14, 2016
|TED Summary Joshua Prager Wisdom from great writers on every year of life
Writing FeedbackDioba - Nov 14, 2016 / alfinkurnia - Nov 14, 2016
|The Developing on Human Genetic Research
2 - Hello I applied some corrections to your text so that it sounds better. They are as follows: ...
Writing Feedbackyurikeyuri - Nov 14, 2016 / Wolf Larsen - Nov 14, 2016
|IELTS Writing T2: Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and ...
3 - @ichanpants89 thanks for your help! I am struggling to learn new vocabularies and I hardly read books, but...
Writing Feedbacksiurae - Nov 14, 2016 / siurae - Nov 15, 2016
|A lot of people want to have a better life and it requires a good amount of educational background
5 - I have to point out that while the overall essay is informative and has a point, the basis for...
Writing Feedbackrei2141968 - Nov 14, 2016 / Holt - Nov 28, 2016
|Summary Article - Trumps presidency could be good news for science
2 - Hi Lincoln, Here's my inputs and remarks towards your article summary. I hope you can follow through. -...
Writing FeedbackAbrahamlincoln - Nov 14, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Nov 14, 2016
|Anti-Trump protests continue across America
2 - here are some suggestions: They have scheduled(gathered, crowded ) to protest in the ... ...because many people...
Writing FeedbackBams17 - Nov 14, 2016 / m7mdbsheer - Nov 15, 2016
|Summary The chart shows components of GDP in the UK from 1992 to 2000
Writing Feedbackalfinkurnia - Nov 14, 2016 / Ethanchen1998 - Nov 16, 2016
|Some people believe that violence on television and in computer games has ..
2 - Hi Ivan.. These are my thoughts towards your essay. Please, you check them> The rising livels LEVELS(Be careful...
Writing FeedbackLola12 - Nov 13, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Nov 13, 2016
|Angela Lee Duckworth found a way to be a better person and shared her experience
Writing Feedbackandika08 - Nov 13, 2016 / ryan31 - Nov 16, 2016
|Some interesting facts about a huge reservoir of water that was found inside the Volcano in Andes
2 - Andika, the essay seems to be better developed than your other attempt today. I wish that you had added...
Writing Feedbackandika08 - Nov 13, 2016 / Holt - Nov 13, 2016
|TED Summary : We Train Soldiers for War. Let's Train Them to Come Home, too.
2 - Hi Edho, Here's my analysis towards your report summary of TED Talks. - In this TED video, the...
Writing Feedbackmem77 - Nov 13, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Nov 13, 2016
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