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|Result of survey in 1997 and 2006 based on the communication skills which are important in a work
2 - Hi Pramudia, Here's my inputs and remarks on your writing. Hopefully, it can be used as a guidance for...
Writing FeedbackPramudia27 - Nov 1, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Nov 1, 2016
|The electronic media make access to communicate with other people. It's good for mutual relations
2 - Hello Your text could use being refined stylistically so that it sounds better: advancecommunication technology [...] appears...
Writing FeedbackPramudia27 - Nov 1, 2016 / Wolf Larsen - Nov 1, 2016
|A questionnaire for people that related to communication capacities important in their jobs
2 - Hallo @badafebriani17, I got some advice for your writing: Based on the table (, IT) can be seen...
Writing Feedbackbadafebriani17 - Nov 1, 2016 / abangabul93 - Nov 1, 2016
|Devouring of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030
2 - Hi Pujiati, I have some suggestions for you. 1. The words "units", "petroleum", "oil", "natural gas" etc. are...
Writing FeedbackPJmustbebetter - Nov 1, 2016 / nyanpasu - Nov 1, 2016
|Without action to solve this problem, electronics may destroy a relationship between loved people
2 - Hi bada, I'm trying to make some comments Introduction In introduction, you have told about general statement,paraphrase...
Writing Feedbackbadafebriani17 - Nov 1, 2016 / mardian24 - Nov 1, 2016
|Perspective of Electronic Media Effect in People Relationship
4 - Hello indah! I will give you some opinions about your essay. (1) TodayNowadays, the electronic media ... (2)...
Writing FeedbackSarlindaDS_27 - Nov 1, 2016 / septiadara29 - Nov 2, 2016
|Various principal communication skills of an employee in a workplace
2 - Hello indah! I will give you some opinions about your essay. (1) ... common communication skills werewhich the...
Writing FeedbackSarlindaDS_27 - Nov 1, 2016 / septiadara29 - Nov 1, 2016
|The external and internal communication, essential in work, in 1997 and 2002.
3 - Hi nurainiyusuf16, I want to give some comments 1. ... internal communication skills were more essential by .....
Writing Feedbacknurainiyusuf16 - Nov 1, 2016 / mardian24 - Nov 1, 2016
|Over the time, the emergence of sophisticated electronic media brought many advantages for people
3 - Hello @septiadara, I got some suggestions for your writing: 1. ... electronic media has bring(BROUGHT) many advantages ......
Writing Feedbackseptiadara29 - Nov 1, 2016 / abangabul93 - Nov 1, 2016
|Researching particular contacting skills in business.
2 - Aloha Septiadara, Here are my thoughts; (1) ... the proportion forof people who were(you can reduce this) asked...
Writing Feedbackseptiadara29 - Nov 1, 2016 / ibe13 - Nov 1, 2016
|Electronic media has stronger good impact than a negative - it's best for regular communication
Writing Feedbacknurainiyusuf16 - Nov 1, 2016 / SarlindaDS_27 - Nov 1, 2016
|Several kinds of communication skills which were significant in a vacancy; the results of two survey
4 - Hi wilyaftika23, the word is too common, you should utilize another advance vocabulary - "regarding" - The table...
Writing FeedbackWilyaftika23 - Nov 1, 2016 / WasishaSisha - Nov 1, 2016
|Personal relationship between people has come withering away, since they using electronic media
3 - Hello willy! I will give you some opinions about your essay. (1) Nowadays, technologies are becoming more developeddeveloping...
Writing FeedbackWilyaftika23 - Nov 1, 2016 / septiadara29 - Nov 1, 2016
|According to cyclical chart, the life of silkworm is started with the moth producing the moth's egg
Writing Feedbackkiki23 - Nov 1, 2016 / SarlindaDS_27 - Nov 1, 2016
|There are many bad effects instead of advantages for people who use electronic media excessively
2 - Hello, Mr. Mardian :) Let me give you some corrections :) .....Because of THE electronic device, sometimes ......
Writing Feedbackmardian24 - Nov 1, 2016 / SarlindaDS_27 - Nov 1, 2016
|Information about people's opinion related to communication ability very useful in their occupation
2 - Hi Faiz. These are a few of corrections. ... related to communication ability that(If you wanna omit, you...
Writing Feedbackfaizunaa17 - Nov 1, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Nov 1, 2016
|There are four natural circle stages. Process of Silkworm's Life and Silk Cloth
2 - Hi Mujadiddah, Here's my analysis towards your report summary of IELTS task 1. I hope you can follow through....
Writing FeedbackHujjatul19 - Nov 1, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Nov 1, 2016
|If we can use it in appropriate way, the social networking can really narrow the gap between people
2 - Aloha Faiz, let me share my thoughts with you; (1) Actually, we cannot lie that the messaging tools...
Writing Feedbackfaizunaa17 - Nov 1, 2016 / ibe13 - Nov 1, 2016
|Silkworm and Silk cloth diagrams (Writing Task I)
3 - Hello! I will give you some opinions about your essay. (1) Then there are fivethe steps ofin producing...
Writing FeedbackCachaaaaaaaa - Nov 1, 2016 / septiadara29 - Nov 1, 2016
|People's were asked about communication ability which they needed and used in their job
2 - Hi Mr. Mardian. These are my thoughts for your writing. Please, review my notes. ... percentage of people's...
Writing Feedbackmardian24 - Nov 1, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Nov 1, 2016
|We should take notice that some insects are important in our daily life. One of them is the silkworm
2 - ... eggs again during 16 days. MEANWhile the process of silk cloth production ...pay attention about the difference between...
Writing Feedbackryan31 - Nov 1, 2016 / Pramudia27 - Nov 1, 2016
|Some say that teaching untalented children art in class does not have any benefits for their sake
5 - Hello andika. actually your essay is really good. but let me give you some suggestions 1. there is...
Writing Feedbackandika08 - Nov 1, 2016 / badafebriani17 - Nov 3, 2016
|Article Summary - Overworking style in Japan
3 - Hello! I will give you some opinions about your summary (1) ... almost suicide case isin Japan, It...
Writing FeedbackAbrahamlincoln - Oct 31, 2016 / septiadara29 - Nov 1, 2016
|Article Summary - Did China discover America
4 - Hi Lincoln. these are a few improvements for your summary. GOOD LUCK The majority OF people argue (...) before...
Writing FeedbackAbrahamlincoln - Oct 31, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Nov 1, 2016
|'Since I was paralyzed..' - College Essay, give advice
5 - HI Lydia, I do suggest removing that line because it doesn't really offer much of a relation to the...
Writing FeedbackLydiaFigueroa - Oct 31, 2016 / Holt - Nov 4, 2016
|I believe that everyone is a leader because every great leadership start from self-leadership
Writing Feedbackdebby17 - Oct 31, 2016 / debby17 - Nov 1, 2016
|Over 200 million people are suffering from Malaria, the disease caused by mosquitos; TED summary
4 - Hello inda18. actually, your essay has interesting topic. but let me give you some suggestions: 1. don't forget...
Writing Feedbacknda18 - Oct 31, 2016 / badafebriani17 - Nov 1, 2016
|Article Summary : The Causes of Acne
3 - Hello. inda18. this is my suggestion. (...) form new structure called bio films making the ... 3....
Writing Feedbacknda18 - Oct 31, 2016 / badafebriani17 - Nov 1, 2016
|How to stop the deadly disease that is spread by mosquitoes? Mosquito, malaria, and education
4 - @dils I think you should try an oppening that invites the reader to engage to your story, try something...
Writing Feedbackdils - Oct 31, 2016 / Lixtik - Oct 31, 2016
|The peak of malarial death was a bit over 5 million in 1930.
2 - Dear misskitty, you have a good summary, however I have some advice for you It is essential to...
Writing Feedbackmisskitty22 - Oct 31, 2016 / Hujjatul19 - Nov 1, 2016
|Governments should invest more in public services, but arts cannot be neglected
4 - Hellooo! Allow me to give you some suggestion. ... in which most of government investments ... ... not...
Writing Feedbackamrillahmk - Oct 31, 2016 / nurainiyusuf16 - Nov 2, 2016
|Extreme sports such as sky diving and skiing are very dangerous and should be banned.
2 - Hi Muhammad, below are my thoughts on your essay with the focus on the right words to incorporate in...
Writing Feedbacknaelendra - Oct 31, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 31, 2016
|In the modern world, we compete each other to grab the level of success. We forget about our health
2 - Next cause --> you should use more coherence words such as In addition, moreover (maybe it would make your...
Writing FeedbackIvanMS027 - Oct 31, 2016 / intanrahayu11 - Oct 31, 2016
|The information about the grade of education of Bulgarian who looked for a chance to live abroad
3 - Hello ivan! I will give you some opinions about your essay. (1) ... grade of education of Bulgarian...
Writing FeedbackIvanMS027 - Oct 31, 2016 / septiadara29 - Nov 1, 2016
|To persuade the policymakers and influential people in the government - Chevening "Networking"
3 - @ichanpants89 Hi, Thank you very much for your remark, and it was certainly very helpful. One more question, do...
Writing Feedbackarifkoushik - Oct 31, 2016 / arifkoushik - Nov 1, 2016
|Being healthy is not an easy task today, but there are always ways to manage this
3 - Aloha ichanpants89, thank you for your suggestion, I hope you want to double check my essay. Here is my...
Writing Feedbackibe13 - Oct 31, 2016 / ibe13 - Oct 31, 2016
|Lightbulb made of modified E. coli fuses Biology and Electronics
2 - @Yonathan Hi Jonathan, I think you have a really good entry here. try to pay a bit more attention...
Writing FeedbackYonathan - Oct 31, 2016 / Lixtik - Oct 31, 2016
|Not many high educated Bulgarians are interested emmigration abroad
4 - ... while higher education and primary and lower education ... 1) The repetition make it not look effective....
Writing Feedbackibe13 - Oct 31, 2016 / faizunaa17 - Nov 1, 2016
|An appropriate colour can result in comfort and motivation, therefore capacity for work and health
Writing Feedbackekalamarsyari11 - Oct 31, 2016 / naelendra - Oct 31, 2016
|Bulgarian citizens who lived outside their country, based on school level
Writing FeedbackAnna94 - Oct 31, 2016 / eve01 - Nov 1, 2016
|A new study reveals that happy people have a great sense to cheer their spouse up
3 - Hi Dila, here's another one from my end; - Happiness is related to the physical - happier are...
Writing Feedbackdils - Oct 31, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 31, 2016
|Nowadays it is very difficult to stay healthy in this modern world
3 - Hi Nur, below are my thoughts on your essay, first of all, the tittle, it's missing a word or...
Writing FeedbackAnna94 - Oct 31, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 31, 2016
|The increasing damage of pollution caused by aero transport emerges an opinion to reduce air travel
Writing Feedbacklanazaldo - Oct 31, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 31, 2016
|The decreasing figure of animals and plants in tropical forests / threats to plant life
NEW - The graph and chart below give information about species extinctions and threats to plant life. Data of decreasing...
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|The Economist - What are the candidates' plans for America's budget?
3 - ... between Barack Obama and one candidate of Amerika president selectionAmerica presidential election. When the Barack Obama's era, they...
Writing FeedbackMathew88 - Oct 31, 2016 / amrillahmk - Oct 31, 2016
|Air pollution and planes. The government should look for a solution in the industrial sector instead
2 - @Kimichi89 Hi Kimichi, I would say that argument against factories are not strong enough. You might want to elaborate...
Writing FeedbackKimichi89 - Oct 31, 2016 / arifkoushik - Oct 31, 2016
|Although air travel becomes the easiest way for massive people to transport, it should be reduced
4 - Hello Gigih12! Allow me to give you some suggestion. air pollution become become (...) that people face...
Writing FeedbackGigih12 - Oct 31, 2016 / nurainiyusuf16 - Nov 1, 2016
|The developing, modern world makes very difficult for people to have a healthy lifestyle
Writing FeedbackReskiRamadani88 - Oct 31, 2016 / ryan31 - Nov 1, 2016
|A number of Bulgarians with different education, who plan to continue their live in other countries
3 - HELLO, here my suggestions for you Although, there is[was a] small decrease in the percentage [in] every category...
Writing FeedbackReskiRamadani88 - Oct 31, 2016 / Anna94 - Nov 1, 2016
|The perspective of the people about a healthy lifestyle
Writing Feedbackbadafebriani17 - Oct 31, 2016 / nurainiyusuf16 - Nov 3, 2016
|I disagree that the air travel is the big cause to generate big air pollution across the globe
Writing Feedbackhitam_manis - Oct 31, 2016 / Kimichi89 - Oct 31, 2016
|The idea of banned air transportation is not the best solution for air pollution
4 - Nowadays, many people travelled around the world faster and more easilyeasier, thanks to air transportation. ... of their efficiency...
Writing FeedbackYonathan - Oct 31, 2016 / amrillahmk - Oct 31, 2016
|Over time, the people's lifestyle had been changed. The technology can be a main factor for it
2 - hi.. good writing.. I have some suggestions.. ... people's lifestyle had been[you mean that you want to make...
Writing FeedbackSarlindaDS_27 - Oct 31, 2016 / lanazaldo - Oct 31, 2016
|The plane contributes to pollute the atmosphere because it uses the fossil fuel
3 - Hi nda18. Here are my suggestions for your essay. Some people think that the only way to prevent...
Writing Feedbacknda18 - Oct 31, 2016 / IvanMS027 - Nov 1, 2016
|Information of Bulgarian people who remain in country after graduation for continuing their studies
3 - Hello sarlindaDS_27 I have a twice advice to you, hope it can help you elementary school or lower...
Writing FeedbackSarlindaDS_27 - Oct 31, 2016 / Mathew88 - Oct 31, 2016
|Air transportation in today's world is popular not only for traveler but also for worker or student
Writing Feedbackalfa7 - Oct 31, 2016 / Abrahamlincoln - Nov 14, 2016
|The dilemma of practicing the new stuff or merely following the previous approaches.
2 - hello @sinahector there are several suggestions for you. here we go ..., man has made a tremendous amount...
Writing Feedbacksinahector - Oct 31, 2016 / hitam_manis - Oct 31, 2016
|Public libraries should be preserved, and these are not a waste of public money
NEW - Some people say that public libraries are an important public resource and should be free, others say that they...
Writing Feedbackamrillahmk - Oct 31, 2016 / — -
|Bulgaria immigrate - is there a relation between intelligence and willingness to immigration?
2 - Hello pramudia27. i think your essay is pretty good. but let me give you some suggestions. i like your...
Writing FeedbackPramudia27 - Oct 31, 2016 / badafebriani17 - Oct 31, 2016
|There is no doubt that air travel takes a part of responsibility to make the air pollution.
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