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Learn from the past history, ancient people have doubtless law for each crime. Fixed punishments

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The public issue states that it should be decided to fix the punishment level in each crime.

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Cement is made by limestone and clay, besides, concrete is from cement, sand, gravel, and water

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Fixed punishments for each type of crime? The rules must be flexible with the real condition

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Figures that illustrate step by step process and equipment used for creating cement and concrete

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Making cement from limestone and clay while the concrete requires cement, sand, water and gravel

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Giving the Internet Away: Research Proposal

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To punish those committing crimes, the motivation for perpetrating it, should be taken into account

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Government or particularly organizations must improve the punishment for each kind of crime.

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The information about several goods and steps to produce cement, and how to make concrete by cement.

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Every crime has been decided to various categories of people. Fixed punishment essay

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Two processes about how to produce cement and how to make concrete for building

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People can purchase things easily even if those products are not made in their countries

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In recent time, many students decide to exchange study in both short-term courses and whole courses

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Execution punishments for cruel murderers have become a hot issue for debate in recent years

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The information regarding to some steps and tools that are used to produce cement and concrete

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The well-known events like World Cup and other international sporting occasions are essential.

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TOEFL Writing 2: In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions....

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According to many experts, the financial education should play a huge role in every school program

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In the winter of Woodchuck, birds move to the warmer region

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The rising of transportation usage, the traffic and CO2 emission

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It can be seen the variability of the annual expenses by a school in the United Kingdom

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Higher petrol price is not the only way to lower the level of greenhouse gasses

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These pie charts illustrate the total outcome of school in particular sections in 1981, 1991 & 2001

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I believe that the high-priced fossil fuels can solve traffic and pollution cases.

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Too much technology and some parts of us are deteriorating, leaving us with less humanity.

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Nowadays, issues of crowded roads and chemical emissions make countries alarmed

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What other measures do you think might be effective?

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The information regarding to the changes in UK school's funds usage in 1981, 1991 and 2001.

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The percentage of money consumed for several different outgoings by a school in UK

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Traffic congestion makes the amount of pollution rate increasing

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Teachers' salaries rose, however the other workers' wage dropped. Annual spendings by a UK school

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Some literature state that the most factor of air pollution influenced by fuels.

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ILTES W-2: it is better to build new museums and town halls instead of renovating the old ones.

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Schools spent most of money on their teachers and simultaneously the insurance outlay was the lowest

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Too many people have their own vehicle - a lot of cars means problem with traffic and pollution

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There are three pie charts which illustrate the changes in yearly cost of a certain UK's school

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The total cost which particular school in UK spent for its necessities during 30 years.

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Petrol price is not the best way to solve traffic jam and air contamination issue

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The information about the percentage of budget allocated by a school in UK for some aspects

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Big traffic of cars makes congestion and pollution, so high petrol price is the best way to solve it

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Deforestation is the consequence of both population growth and unlimited logging.

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The traffic jam and highly emissions of exhaust fumes are the crucial problems in big cities

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The budget and calculated spendings by a certain UK school during three decades (1981 to 2001)

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Buying furniture and equipment saw a dramatic jump from 1991 to 2001 spending by a UK school

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Forbidding people driving or riding vehicles one by one is the best way to solve pollution problem

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Some people spend a lot of time watching sports programs on TV or following their favorite sports ..

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Decreasing of vehicle's number is a good news for the pollution's problem

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A glance at the three given graphs reveal some differences among the expenditures at an UK school

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Discuss a topic that is relevant to world economy, society issues,... ( approximately 150 words)

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Ielts task 1 - The bar chart provides information about the changes in average house prices

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There are many troubles people can get when move to a new country

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DESCRIPTION OF A PERSON - he is my friend and his dream is to become a professional gamer

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Healthy food is needed by school children to provide their ability to study effectively.

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The level of customer satisfactory in the US when travelled with airplanes

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The Art Gallery in Brighton is not so popular, as it used to be in 1985

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Were customers satisfied using services from nation's major airlines in 1999, 2000, and 2007?

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Children Have to Eat Healthy Food at School

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Results in airlines customer satisfaction levels and comfort for specifics of the flying experience.

Writing Feedbacknurainiyusuf16 - Nov 4, 2016 / SarlindaDS_27 - Nov 4, 2016
Healthy meal is necessary for children, it contains protein, carbohydrate, vitamin, mineral and fat

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