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|Dress smartly or quality of work? I think it depends on our obligation in occupation.
5 - Hi nurainiyusuf16, let me give some comments on your essay 1. For the first it is better for you...
Writing Feedbacknurainiyusuf16 - Oct 28, 2016 / mardian24 - Oct 29, 2016
|Three approaches to drag crime rate down: authority policy, education and self-awareness
Writing Feedbackalfa7 - Oct 28, 2016 / Yonathan - Oct 28, 2016
|How marital status impact the happiness level between spouses?
2 - Hello, Hope you doing well, lemme give you some suggestion ... single no more than (a) half percent...
Writing FeedbackBeauty17 - Oct 28, 2016 / fauziyahtami - Oct 28, 2016
|The causing related to the escalating number of crime rate and some possible solutions to tackle it.
3 - Hai dils, here are my suggestions about your essay Significantly, the rate of criminality increaseincreases every year. ...
Writing Feedbackdils - Oct 28, 2016 / ifraanisa05 - Oct 28, 2016
|Wearing office-look clothes is important regarding to some enterprises policies.
2 - Hello Faizunaa17 I have some advice, hope it can help you .....there are some condition that you need...
Writing Feedbackfaizunaa17 - Oct 28, 2016 / Mathew8 - Oct 28, 2016
|The universe has begun with the second thermodynamic law of physics
2 - Hi Gigih12, here are my review towards your essay ...complexity increases slightly step by step... ...it called...
Writing FeedbackGigih12 - Oct 28, 2016 / nda18 - Oct 28, 2016
|Happiness degree in percent related to relationship status and the effect of children appearance
2 - Hi Faiz.. These are my corrections to finalize yours. ... about happiness degreeS in percentAGE related to relationship...
Writing Feedbackfaizunaa17 - Oct 28, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Oct 28, 2016
|From the bar graph, we can see the levels of participation in education and science in poor and rich
2 - Hi Maximklopunov99, I want you obtain some suggestion from me, here we go FromAccording to the bar graph...
Writing FeedbackMaximKlopunov99 - Oct 28, 2016 / alfa7 - Oct 28, 2016
|Children should be taught both to co-operate and be a rival with other students
NEW - Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are...
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|Rules for work-force to wear every day a dress which have company symbols
4 - Hello Mr. Mardian :) Let me give you some suggestions for you ^_^ actually, I like your essay...
Writing Feedbackmardian24 - Oct 28, 2016 / SarlindaDS_27 - Oct 28, 2016
|Happiness ratings for people who have partner and do not have partner in the US
5 - Hi Wily, below are my thoughts on your analysis essay; - percentage of a research on enjoyableenjoyment ratings...
Writing FeedbackWilyaftika23 - Oct 28, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 28, 2016
|Is it important to have a law about uniform standardization for employees?
5 - HELLO WILLY :) Here are my suggestion for you writing, hope it will be useful for you next time...
Writing FeedbackWilyaftika23 - Oct 28, 2016 / SarlindaDS_27 - Oct 28, 2016
|"THEME: CRIME" The reasons why people tend to do criminal action
3 - The increase of criminal action ... This essay will explain the reasons why people ..to make better essay, give...
Writing FeedbackGigih12 - Oct 28, 2016 / Iforsa - Oct 28, 2016
|Writing Task 1 - The graph below and the chart on the next page show the answers people gave
4 - Hi Mardian, I have a few suggestions for your essay; - ... information about the satisfaction rating ofwith...
Writing Feedbackmardian24 - Oct 28, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 28, 2016
|Plenty of books had been read by women and men from 2011 to 2014 at Burnaby Public Library
2 - Hi Edho.. Actually, your writing is a good job. However, I give you a few corrections to enhance the...
Writing Feedbackmem77 - Oct 28, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Oct 28, 2016
|Writing Task 1: Comparison between married and unmarried couple and the effect of children.
4 - Haloo.. hope this works. Good luck ! The bar chartCHARTS (itis due to in the picture there are...
Writing FeedbackIvanMS027 - Oct 28, 2016 / Beauty17 - Oct 28, 2016
|"Marriage is the grave of love". Women don't need to get married.
Writing Feedbacksydneynguyen - Oct 27, 2016 / sydneynguyen - Oct 30, 2016
|Do you support or oppose building a powerful military?
4 - The grammatical errors lie mostly in sentence structure and development. The way development of the sentence is not as...
Writing FeedbackActivelung - Oct 27, 2016 / Holt - Oct 28, 2016
|Leadership is one of my favorite subject study and my passion to influence people - Chevening essay
Writing FeedbackFatrya - Oct 27, 2016 / Fatrya - Oct 27, 2016
|Playing games can teach us lessons which sometimes are very valuable and useful.
2 - Hi Sydney, this is a pretty good presentation for an opinion essay. the message is clear and your opinion...
Writing Feedbacksydneynguyen - Oct 27, 2016 / Holt - Oct 28, 2016
|Readmit essay: "personal information that you want considered"
2 - Agatha, please consider posting the guidelines for the readmission essay. I am wondering what the prompt's full requirement was...
Writing Feedbacktamuaggie39132 - Oct 27, 2016 / Holt - Oct 27, 2016
|The number of plants and animals species in the tropical forest which closed to extinction (WT 1)
2 - Hello, Hope you doing well, lemme give you some suggestion A breakdown which presents in the graph [....]...
Writing FeedbackFadhilahumar91 - Oct 27, 2016 / fauziyahtami - Oct 28, 2016
|A large number of experts claim that a color gives a certain impact in the people's mood
2 - Fadhil, you got your introduction and your conclusion mixed up. Your closing statement works best as part of the...
Writing FeedbackFadhilahumar91 - Oct 27, 2016 / Holt - Oct 28, 2016
|It is essential to choose the right color scheme for hospital and office decor
2 - Hello! I will give you some opinions about your essay. Introduction: (1) ... its effect foron people's health...
Writing Feedbackashelarisa48 - Oct 27, 2016 / septiadara29 - Oct 28, 2016
|Do the advantages for starting their own business outweigh the disadvantages?
Writing FeedbackIvanMS027 - Oct 27, 2016 / nda18 - Nov 12, 2016
|Human impact gives the bigger influence as the threat to plant life rather than the natural events.
2 - Hi ashelarisa48. Here are my suggestions for you. You can paraphrase the plant and animal to flora...
Writing Feedbackashelarisa48 - Oct 27, 2016 / IvanMS027 - Oct 27, 2016
|It\s hard for some people to build their first business enterprise instead of working as an employee
2 - Hi Anna.. These are my corrections to make yours better. Please, review them ^_^ ... instead of working...
Writing FeedbackAnna94 - Oct 27, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Oct 28, 2016
|To become an employee, working man or having business are available choices for people.
Writing FeedbackReskiRamadani88 - Oct 27, 2016 / mardian24 - Oct 28, 2016
|The educated people are afraid to show their creativity. Do schools kill it in them?
2 - National education systems set said that ... The result was that educating educated people (...) show their...
Writing FeedbackKimichi89 - Oct 27, 2016 / chikomm16 - Oct 28, 2016
|The only way to enhance the safeness on roads is to have stricter punishment for driving offenders
2 - I would say that your opening parenthesis is wrong. There are lots grammatical errors. i suggest you should...
Writing Feedbackfadhilmd25 - Oct 27, 2016 / chikomm16 - Oct 28, 2016
|China plans launch the biggest space plane to carry 20 tourists - IELTS summary
3 - Hello Dioba There are some comments from me, hope it can help you developing and design ...pararell and...
Writing FeedbackDioba - Oct 27, 2016 / Mathew8 - Oct 27, 2016
|Smart camera system checks patients' vital signs from afar
4 - Hi Nurul, I would like to share a few insights to your essay; - Oxehealth, accompany spuna company...
Writing Feedbacknda18 - Oct 27, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 28, 2016
|An extraordinary capacity of creativity can be obtained by having a willing to be wrong
Writing Feedbacknda18 - Oct 27, 2016 / IvanMS027 - Oct 30, 2016
|Is pain catching? First clues that it might spread to others
2 - Hi sari, I have some advice for you The result illustrated that the healthy mice that experienced pain...
Writing Feedbacksasariri - Oct 27, 2016 / vinau - Oct 27, 2016
|How the parents endangering their children imagination
2 - Hi, let me give some advice, perhaps useful for you. 1.Children nowadays are becoming overwhelm with ... ---> transition...
Writing Feedbackdils - Oct 27, 2016 / Dioba - Oct 27, 2016
|Students are not given a freedom to express what they think, and it kills their creativeness
3 - hello abraham here is my suggestions for you hope it helps ... implemented in their life, then...
Writing FeedbackAbrahamlincoln - Oct 27, 2016 / ryan31 - Oct 28, 2016
|School is killing the creativity of a student. Humanity and arts subjects are negligible.
2 - hi dio,i will try to correct of what you wrote In the fact, creativity (is) only unessential and...
Writing FeedbackDioba - Oct 27, 2016 / Kimichi89 - Oct 27, 2016
|Article Summary - Why Uganda is a model for dealing with refugees
2 - hi Abe this is my review The EU countries committee to provide abodes (...) even it has beenbecome...
Writing FeedbackAbrahamlincoln - Oct 27, 2016 / nda18 - Oct 27, 2016
|TED SUMMARY: KEN ROBINSON - DO SCHOOLS KILL CREATIVITY
2 - Hi Vinau... ... his TED stage talked about education and creativity. Every education system on the earth has...
Writing Feedbackvinau - Oct 27, 2016 / sasariri - Oct 27, 2016
|Obstruction of the education progress - there are no specific colleges
2 - Hi Mathew8.. ... Ken Robinson, at that time they(it does not refer to anything, since you never mention...
Writing FeedbackMathew8 - Oct 27, 2016 / sasariri - Oct 27, 2016
|Our Ice Age ancestors skinned cave lions to make roofs for huts
2 - Dear friend, You wrote: ... a minor contribution to their extinction. You need a plural form when there is...
Writing FeedbackYonathan - Oct 27, 2016 / sydneynguyen - Oct 27, 2016
|Becoming an entrepreneur has been chosen by many people instead of being an employee
3 - Hi, who has the similar company that attack our business In this sentence, attack is verb, so it...
Writing Feedbackifraanisa05 - Oct 27, 2016 / Wilyaftika23 - Oct 29, 2016
|BBC News Summary; world wildlife 'falls by 58% since 1970'
2 - Helllo Brother Let me give you some advices ... necessary point to gain concern in this statistic is...
Writing Feedbacklanazaldo - Oct 27, 2016 / Abrahamlincoln - Oct 27, 2016
|Every child has their own tremendous talents to be more creative. Education should protect it.
2 - Hello lanazaldo i have an advice to you their own tremendous talent to be more creative. ....tremendous have...
Writing Feedbacklanazaldo - Oct 27, 2016 / Mathew8 - Oct 27, 2016
|Connection between language and culture. Communication is important.
Writing FeedbackKimichi89 - Oct 27, 2016 / Cachaaaaaaaa - Oct 30, 2016
|Sir Ken Robinson stated that every child is born as a talented artist.
Writing Feedbackdils - Oct 27, 2016 / Kimichi89 - Oct 27, 2016
|Cosmopolitan summary- Sharing a Bed with Your Kids Is Not So Great for Their Mental Health
Writing Feedbackfauziyahtami - Oct 27, 2016 / ifraanisa05 - Oct 27, 2016
|All in all, I disagree that a person should be able to speak language to understand other cultures
Writing FeedbackDioba - Oct 27, 2016 / Abrahamlincoln - Oct 28, 2016
|There are no people born with creativity in their mothers' stomach
4 - Dear friend You wrote: ... with creativity in their mother stomach. Revise: ''in their mothers' stomach''. You...
Writing Feedbackalfa7 - Oct 27, 2016 / sydneynguyen - Oct 27, 2016
|Writing Task 2 - speaking local language helps to understand culture of a country?
3 - hi mr lincoln.. please let me.. please.. to suggest you some advice.. :) The majority of people regard...
Writing FeedbackAbrahamlincoln - Oct 27, 2016 / lanazaldo - Oct 27, 2016
|Communication via Internet - it simulates a simple dialogue like people had done in the past.
2 - this essay would be able to discuss about ... ... some discussions via internet more easy.is because it...
Writing FeedbackMathew8 - Oct 27, 2016 / amrillahmk - Oct 27, 2016
|Summary of TIME The USA Election News about Last Presidential Debate
2 - Hello Brother This is my advice towards your first sentence. Two of the major party, (you need plural...
Writing Feedbackalfa7 - Oct 27, 2016 / Abrahamlincoln - Oct 27, 2016
|Is it true, that in order to understand the culture of a country, we must speak the local language?
3 - Hi Yonathan, let me give some advice, perhaps useful for you. 1. For instance, nowadays the college students learn...
Writing FeedbackYonathan - Oct 27, 2016 / Dioba - Oct 27, 2016
|I believe that become an entrepreneur is good choice - business instead of working for a company.
4 - Hello Badafebriani17 here my suggestions for you 1. Development in business sector grow rapidly, recently. You have to...
Writing Feedbackbadafebriani17 - Oct 27, 2016 / Anna94 - Oct 28, 2016
|IELTS essay TASK 2; it is easier to understand culture by speaking the language
2 - Hi Rizaldo Let me give you some correction ... able to reflect the way of the communitiescollective thinking...
Writing Feedbacklanazaldo - Oct 27, 2016 / Yonathan - Oct 27, 2016
|Sir Ken Robinson, in his presentation on TED Talk, discussed about education that kills creativity
2 - Hello Sasariri i have a twice of advice to you ... human creativity in (the) world education systems...
Writing Feedbacksasariri - Oct 27, 2016 / Mathew8 - Oct 27, 2016
|Comprehending communication relies on cultural mastery of the local language.
Writing Feedbackdils - Oct 27, 2016 / Yonathan - Oct 27, 2016
|Learn Culture from its Language which is the utmost important instrument to communicate with people
3 - Hi nda18. Here are my suggestions for you. ... language is the utmost important(you can also write utmost...
Writing Feedbacknda18 - Oct 27, 2016 / IvanMS027 - Oct 27, 2016
|Being an employee makes people less creative since all of major activity is set by a company.
6 - hai aini, here are my suggestions for your essay Some societysocieties argue, it will muchbe better if they...
Writing Feedbacknurainiyusuf16 - Oct 27, 2016 / ifraanisa05 - Oct 27, 2016
|Both deforestation and global warming are very important issues of human beings in today's world.
3 - Hello Alfa7 there are some advice to you, pay attention if you wish There are lot of problem(s)...
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