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|Information of Bulgarian people who remain in country after graduation for continuing their studies
3 - Hello sarlindaDS_27 I have a twice advice to you, hope it can help you elementary school or lower...
Writing FeedbackSarlindaDS_27 - Oct 31, 2016 / Mathew88 - Oct 31, 2016
|Air transportation in today's world is popular not only for traveler but also for worker or student
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|The dilemma of practicing the new stuff or merely following the previous approaches.
2 - hello @sinahector there are several suggestions for you. here we go ..., man has made a tremendous amount...
Writing Feedbacksinahector - Oct 31, 2016 / hitam_manis - Oct 31, 2016
|Public libraries should be preserved, and these are not a waste of public money
NEW - Some people say that public libraries are an important public resource and should be free, others say that they...
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|Bulgaria immigrate - is there a relation between intelligence and willingness to immigration?
2 - Hello pramudia27. i think your essay is pretty good. but let me give you some suggestions. i like your...
Writing FeedbackPramudia27 - Oct 31, 2016 / badafebriani17 - Oct 31, 2016
|There is no doubt that air travel takes a part of responsibility to make the air pollution.
Writing Feedbacksasariri - Oct 31, 2016 / alfa7 - Oct 31, 2016
|I agree, that the aircraft can make human avoid the impact of air pollution on the earth.
Writing Feedbackmymelody - Oct 31, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Oct 31, 2016
|Some people think that air transportation usage needs to be cut to lower air pollution.
3 - Hi fauziyah let m give you some correction ... declared that the most agent cause of air pollution...
Writing Feedbackfauziyahtami - Oct 31, 2016 / Yonathan - Oct 31, 2016
|If you want to free your time to start live healthier, just make it happen!
2 - Hello Pramudiana27. i think your essay is pretty good, but this is my suggestion. 1. Meanwhile, others have opposite...
Writing FeedbackPramudia27 - Oct 31, 2016 / badafebriani17 - Oct 31, 2016
|Article Summary - Liberty moves north
3 - Hello, i will give you suggestion: Please check your tense using: Even there are has been a proliferation of...
Writing FeedbackAbrahamlincoln - Oct 31, 2016 / ReskiRamadani88 - Oct 31, 2016
|In the modern era, demanding of aviation company increases dramatically. Impact on the air quality.
3 - aloha @Mathew88 overall, your essay has unclear idea. Therefore, I, as a reader, cannot fully understand what you...
Writing FeedbackMathew88 - Oct 31, 2016 / ibe13 - Oct 31, 2016
|A comparison of the information about the proportion of Bulgarians who want to immigrate
2 - Aloha Meireza (1) "who have" looks common on your essay. You'd better say; "with"//"in"//"having" to change that phrase,...
Writing FeedbackBeauty17 - Oct 31, 2016 / ibe13 - Oct 31, 2016
|I totally disagree that banning air travel is the only strategy to stop air pollution.
7 - Thanks for all the corrections and suggestions from you all guys, I really appreciate the comments. I will try...
Writing Feedbackmisskitty22 - Oct 31, 2016 / misskitty22 - Nov 1, 2016
|There are other elements (than air travel) which contribute most to the atmosphere pollution
3 - Hello, your essay is good enough. You explained you reason and the reasons about this problem in the paragraph...
Writing FeedbackAbrahamlincoln - Oct 31, 2016 / ReskiRamadani88 - Nov 1, 2016
|It will be hard for people who ignore their health to have a healthy lifestyle.
Writing FeedbackBeauty17 - Oct 31, 2016 / ifraanisa05 - Nov 1, 2016
|Fast food eaten by Australia Teenagers over 25-year period
2 - Hello Hope you doing well, lemme give you some suggestion The breakdown of information about [....] dropped dramatically...
Writing Feedbackamrillahmk - Oct 31, 2016 / fauziyahtami - Oct 31, 2016
|The chart shows information about educational stage of Bulgarian who wanted study to overseas
2 - Hi BadaFebriani, Kindly find my remarks below in order to significantly improve your writing skill, especially in writing an...
Writing Feedbackbadafebriani17 - Oct 31, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Oct 31, 2016
|The number of Bulgarian community which move to live overseas, divided into education level
Writing Feedbacknurainiyusuf16 - Oct 31, 2016 / ibe13 - Oct 31, 2016
|Restricting the air travel to prevent air pollution
Writing Feedbackdils - Oct 31, 2016 / nda18 - Oct 31, 2016
|It depends on ourselves, how much efforts we do to be fit and healthy.
4 - Hi ms. Nuraini. Here are my suggestions towards your essay: At present, a healthy life stylelifestylehavehas become a...
Writing Feedbacknurainiyusuf16 - Oct 31, 2016 / IvanMS027 - Oct 31, 2016
|IELTS Writing Task 1: Bulgarians who wanted to live in another country
3 - Hi Annisa, Here's my analysis towards your report summary of IELTS task 1. I hope you can follow through...
Writing Feedbackifraanisa05 - Oct 31, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Oct 31, 2016
|There are opponent statements about how to get a healthy lifestyle in this modern world.
Writing Feedbackifraanisa05 - Oct 31, 2016 / SarlindaDS_27 - Oct 31, 2016
|The percentage of Bulgarians abroad who have secondary education was higher than others
3 - Hello Miss Willy :) Let's discuss your summary :) The chart shows about => (redundant preposition )...
Writing FeedbackWilyaftika23 - Oct 31, 2016 / SarlindaDS_27 - Oct 31, 2016
|Over the years, an issue dealing with air pollution has been emerging.
4 - Hi Sman, I believe this is the first time I will review your essay and just like everyone here...
Writing FeedbackUcha MSN - Oct 31, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 31, 2016
|TOEFL task2: The more money people have, the more they should give away to charity.
2 - Firstly, this is their social responsibilities.The government needs a lot of money to build infrastructures such as schools and...
Writing Feedbackfanceen - Oct 31, 2016 / Pramudia27 - Oct 31, 2016
|It is very difficult for people to have a healthy lifestyle - habits change is necessary.
2 - Hello Septia You have a good summary I have some corrections for you ... people who think about...
Writing Feedbackseptiadara29 - Oct 31, 2016 / andika08 - Nov 1, 2016
|How many educated Bulgarians leave their country - the chart
2 - Hi Septia, Please take a closer look at my contribution below. I hope this would be helpful for your...
Writing Feedbackseptiadara29 - Oct 31, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Oct 31, 2016
|WRITING TASK II - LACK ARTISTIC TALENT ON CHILDREN
3 - a well-structured essay, i love it although there are some grammar mistakes on other creative and practical lessons...
Writing Feedbackkiki23 - Oct 31, 2016 / amrillahmk - Oct 31, 2016
|When we just have a little time for relax after work, we disregard our health sometimes
2 - ... they just have a littleLIMITED time for relaxRELAXING BODY AND REFRESHING BRAIN after doing many activities in...
Writing FeedbackWilyaftika23 - Oct 31, 2016 / Ucha MSN - Oct 31, 2016
|Writing Task II _ Creative and Practical Subjects are Essential for Students' Future
Writing FeedbackHujjatul19 - Oct 31, 2016 / fanceen - Oct 31, 2016
|Arts classes are essential for students when they have an ability of painting and drawing
3 - Hello You have a good summary I have some corrections for you ... essential for student This is...
Writing Feedbackryan31 - Oct 31, 2016 / andika08 - Nov 10, 2016
|The data about educational background of Bulgarian Inhabitants who wanted to stay abroad
2 - Hi Faiz. These are my few corrections for your writing. Please, review them. ... who wanted to stay...
Writing Feedbackfaizunaa17 - Oct 31, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Oct 31, 2016
|Number of Bulgarians who have different background education and want to stay abroad 2002 - 2008
2 - ... period and in 2002 and 2006, WHILE higher education and lower education haveWERE almost AT the same number....
Writing Feedbackmardian24 - Oct 31, 2016 / Ucha MSN - Oct 31, 2016
|There are many kinds of food that spread in our country from local and international cuisine
2 - Hello faiz! I will give you some opinions about your essay. (1) While some people or others argue...
Writing Feedbackfaizunaa17 - Oct 31, 2016 / septiadara29 - Oct 31, 2016
|In this modern era, everything has changed. Writing Task 2 - Difficult and Easy Healthy Lifestyle
2 - One of the problems to be healthy is that people I imagine this is appear think it because due...
Writing Feedbackmardian24 - Oct 31, 2016 / fanceen - Oct 31, 2016
|Why making children, who lack artistic talent, learn painting and drawing in Art classes at school?
2 - Talking about your idea, you said that "I totally disagree with such an idea because they should be thought...
Writing Feedbackmem77 - Oct 31, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Oct 31, 2016
|Children should focus on subjects related to their ability
2 - Aloha Chaca, here are my thoughts; although theyin fact, many of them have a lack ... insteadtherefore, other...
Writing FeedbackCachaaaaaaaa - Oct 31, 2016 / ibe13 - Oct 31, 2016
|Task 1 IELTS; The number of children ever born, Women aged 40-44 years
NEW - The table gives the information about the percentage of women aged 40-44 years gave birth to the different of...
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|The growth rates of global population and the prediction of population number in two different areas
2 - Hallo.. here my suggestion for you.. i hope it works! ... rates of global population from 1800 to...
Writing FeedbackAhmadNashran - Oct 30, 2016 / Beauty17 - Oct 31, 2016
|Many opportunities to communicate in plural, multinational communities, using foreign languages
Writing Feedbacksydneynguyen - Oct 30, 2016 / sydneynguyen - Nov 1, 2016
|The chart presents people's sleep scheme among five professions based on Canadian research result.
4 - Hi, ainunazwaria, I;m trying to give some comments 1. You have a good structure sentence and have an...
Writing Feedbackainunazwaria - Oct 30, 2016 / mardian24 - Oct 31, 2016
|Yearly collected data of kids whose Australian mother is 40-44 years old - statistics since 1981
Writing Feedbackainunazwaria - Oct 30, 2016 / ifraanisa05 - Nov 1, 2016
|The data about global population progress and the proportion of urban areas in several world zones.
2 - Hi, ainunazwaria, I hope I can help you to write an essay 1. ... inhabitant proportion willwould increase...
Writing Feedbackainunazwaria - Oct 30, 2016 / Wilyaftika23 - Oct 31, 2016
|The number of inhabitants in Japan during a century
Writing Feedbackainunazwaria - Oct 30, 2016 / kiki23 - Oct 31, 2016
|The proportion of babies in Australia born from mother aged 40 - 44, during two decades
4 - Hi asmaraj, here is some suggestions for you By contrast, however,redundancy, choose one mothers giving (...) children havehad...
Writing Feedbackasmaraj96 - Oct 30, 2016 / Hujjatul19 - Oct 31, 2016
|Japanese people had the smallest proportion to travel abroad in 1985, but it has changed until 1995
Writing FeedbackAhmadNashran - Oct 30, 2016 / septiadara29 - Oct 31, 2016
|The condition of Japan's population during 75 years
2 - Hey Ahmad, I noticed a few grammatical errors here and there. 1. Replace "in every five years" with...
Writing FeedbackAhmadNashran - Oct 30, 2016 / abhavsar - Oct 30, 2016
|The wallet of Europeans under scrutiny - 6 CONSUMER GOODS IN 4 EUROPEAN COUNTRIES
3 - Hi! I have some feedback for you! The graph illustrates the difference spending towards the six items categorized...
Writing Feedbackhathutran - Oct 30, 2016 / kiki23 - Oct 31, 2016
|The table shows how far an average person travelled by two different ways; walking and driving a car
2 - Hi @AhmadNashran, Here some corrections on your writing task 1: ... the information about how far the...
Writing FeedbackAhmadNashran - Oct 30, 2016 / asmaraj96 - Oct 30, 2016
|A person who I admire - my mother - she belongs to people I trust the most
Writing FeedbackVarlamow - Oct 30, 2016 / ainunazwaria - Oct 30, 2016
|The information about how much time the people of different occupations spend to sleep and awake
Writing FeedbackAhmadNashran - Oct 30, 2016 / ainunazwaria - Oct 30, 2016
|Top ten countries which won medals in the capital of UK 2012 Olympic Games
2 - Hi Hujjatul19, here I have some suggestions for your writing ... information about medals(as I know, there is...
Writing FeedbackHujjatul19 - Oct 30, 2016 / AhmadNashran - Oct 30, 2016
|Writing Task I _ Household's Basic Needs Expenses
2 - Hi Hujjatul19, here I have some suggestion for your writing ... household's basic needs(as I know, there is...
Writing FeedbackHujjatul19 - Oct 30, 2016 / AhmadNashran - Oct 30, 2016
|Medals earned by the best athletes in Olympic Games 2012
3 - Hi chachaaa, here I have some suggestion on your writing ... the total number of medals waswere 104....
Writing FeedbackCachaaaaaaaa - Oct 30, 2016 / AhmadNashran - Oct 30, 2016
|Clothing and health care expenses are not so big as expenditures for food, transportation, housing
2 - Hai Hujjatul19 I have some comments about your writing : The data shows that American, Canadian [...]...
Writing FeedbackHujjatul19 - Oct 30, 2016 / ainunazwaria - Oct 30, 2016
|Writing Task I, Household expenditure over sixty-year period
3 - Hello Chacaaa! Allow me to give you some suggestion :) As it was observed from the data... (You...
Writing FeedbackCachaaaaaaaa - Oct 30, 2016 / nurainiyusuf16 - Oct 31, 2016
|The chart presents a research resulted by a Canadian providing the data about the sleep patterns
4 - HELLO, here my suggestion for you :) The chart presents a research [that was ] resulted by a ......
Writing Feedbackasmaraj96 - Oct 30, 2016 / Anna94 - Oct 31, 2016
|The Japanese tourists in 1995 were much more eager to travel overseas than it was 10 years earlier
2 - @WasishaSisha tourists that traveling abroad ---- who? The overseas tourists are from Japan, Australia, and Canada .----rather their nationalities?...
Writing FeedbackWasishaSisha - Oct 30, 2016 / Varlamow - Oct 30, 2016
|Expenditure in five major categories (Writing Task I)
2 - hai there are some feedback for you ... that the housing is thehighest share of (...) countries except...
Writing FeedbackCachaaaaaaaa - Oct 30, 2016 / Jordansimons - Oct 30, 2016
|The regular distance of travel using various type of transportation, and measured in miles
3 - 1. spelling noticeble------------> noticeable prefered -----------> preferred travelled--------------> traveled accuratelly ---------> accurately inhaitand------------> inhabitant 2. The table shows the...
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