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|Writing Task 1: How satisfied are you with your life? What would make you happiest?
7 - ... satisfaction increases sharply until reach ... ... the n increase gradually ... Starting from 15 to 20 years...
Writing Feedbacknurainiyusuf16 - Oct 28, 2016 / Wilyaftika23 - Oct 29, 2016
|Problems of crime rise and how to solve those
2 - Hello Your text could be improved if you apply the following adjustments to it: which bother [...]...
Writing FeedbackKimichi89 - Oct 28, 2016 / Wolf Larsen - Oct 28, 2016
|How to see the thoughts you don't know you are having - Article Summary - To know your brain
2 - Hi Lincoln.. These are my thoughts. Actually, this is good, but I offer you a few improvements. GOOD LUCK...
Writing FeedbackAbrahamlincoln - Oct 28, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Oct 28, 2016
|The answer people gave about the extent to which they are satisfied with their lives
3 - The graphgphs provide information about (...) that make people happy (health and money) along their ages until 75 +...
Writing Feedbackbadafebriani17 - Oct 28, 2016 / ifraanisa05 - Oct 29, 2016
|The number of student's accommodations (WT 1)
3 - Hello @Fadhilahumar91 I read ur writing . There are some correction that is checked by others ...
Writing FeedbackFadhilahumar91 - Oct 28, 2016 / TANJIN - Nov 2, 2016
|It's not enough for company to provide uniform and to be good looking without workers' competence
5 - Hello, anna, your essay is good, but i will give you some suggestions: 1.Be careful countable and uncountable...
Writing FeedbackAnna94 - Oct 28, 2016 / ReskiRamadani88 - Nov 2, 2016
|Summary TED: The best question that people always say
5 - Hello, i will give you some suggestion: 1. Be careful with your spelling and do personal exerciceexercise like...
Writing FeedbackMathew88 - Oct 28, 2016 / ReskiRamadani88 - Nov 1, 2016
|Some young people are omitting or forgetting to learn many basic skills because of modern technology
NEW - Over-reliance on modern technology means that people are failing to learn, or forgetting, many basic skills. To what extend...
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|There's a good effect of having business suit but the value of performance in job is most important
3 - The famous company usually applied a rule for the employees to look more impressive in every they do work...
Writing Feedbackbadafebriani17 - Oct 28, 2016 / Pramudia27 - Oct 29, 2016
|The unemployment and careless of society have impact on the rise of the crime level
4 - Halo koko.. overall your essay was good and i found some shopisticated words.. However, i looked some words...
Writing FeedbackDioba - Oct 28, 2016 / Beauty17 - Oct 29, 2016
|TED article - David Christian- The history of our world
3 - Dear friend, You wrote: ...differences between human and another beings is human have ... You have used...
Writing FeedbackAbrahamlincoln - Oct 28, 2016 / sydneynguyen - Oct 28, 2016
|Fish Swims to the Same Nest Each Year Just Like Migrating Birds
2 - it disappears for the month and travellingit should be "travels" because it is parallel structure offshore to feed....
Writing FeedbackYonathan - Oct 28, 2016 / amrillahmk - Oct 28, 2016
|The level of cheerfulness in life of spouses and singles based on age groups
2 - Hi Anna Let me give you some correction Overall, wed(married?) people are ... Then in old un-marriedunmarried...
Writing FeedbackAnna94 - Oct 28, 2016 / Yonathan - Oct 28, 2016
|Several possible factors which trigger crime rate and the best action to prevent criminal activity
2 - Hello Brother Let me give you some advices The first factors is poverty in specific place where...
Writing FeedbackYonathan - Oct 28, 2016 / Abrahamlincoln - Oct 28, 2016
|This essay will examine the explanation why the crime rate is enhancing and suggest some ways out.
2 - Helllo Afdhel Let me give you some advices As i learn in writing class. writing task 2 consist...
Writing FeedbackAfdhel - Oct 28, 2016 / Abrahamlincoln - Oct 28, 2016
|Probably the most worrying threat to our lives at the present time is crime - causes and remedies
2 - Hi Sasariri here some corrections for your writing gangster even becoming a killer (much better to use murderer...
Writing Feedbacksasariri - Oct 28, 2016 / Cachaaaaaaaa - Oct 30, 2016
|Formal clothes in a workplace. Quality of work above appearance.
2 - HI, let me give some advice, perhaps useful for you. 1.who use the danger equipmenttools or working in the...
Writing Feedbackifraanisa05 - Oct 28, 2016 / Dioba - Oct 28, 2016
|A combination of difficulties when living in a foreign country
3 - here are my suggestions i suggest you, to put your overview into your first paragraph ... finding...
Writing FeedbackTANJIN - Oct 28, 2016 / ifraanisa05 - Oct 29, 2016
|This essay will examine the reasons why criminal wrongdoing increases annually
3 - Hi Abrahamlinlocn, here's my suggestions for your body 1 ...to access numerous informations ... ...not only search...
Writing FeedbackAbrahamlincoln - Oct 28, 2016 / nda18 - Oct 28, 2016
|The offspring is a happiness factor for married couple.
3 - Hi Ifra, below are my suggestions to enhance your analysis essay; - whichthat camecome from married - married...
Writing Feedbackifraanisa05 - Oct 28, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 28, 2016
|This essay will examine the motives why people commit a crime and discuss some possible solutions
4 - Hi nda18. Here are my suggestions for you. The predominant problem the world face thesethis day is the...
Writing Feedbacknda18 - Oct 28, 2016 / IvanMS027 - Oct 30, 2016
|Quality of work is more important than appearance for certain companies
3 - Hello beauty 17, here my suggestions for you. Employees must [BE] able to give ... ... of this...
Writing FeedbackBeauty17 - Oct 28, 2016 / Anna94 - Oct 28, 2016
|The criminality is continuously growing and threaten societies.
Writing Feedbackfauziyahtami - Oct 28, 2016 / AK354 - Nov 30, 2016
|Some organizations believe that their employees should dress smartly. Others value quality of work
3 - Hello. this is my suggestion 1. missing prepotition There are many types job ---> There are many types...
Writing FeedbackReskiRamadani88 - Oct 28, 2016 / badafebriani17 - Oct 28, 2016
|The charts below show the results of a survey on happiness ratings for married and unmarried people
2 - Hello ReskiRamadani88 I have some advice to you people who are single and have a husband or wife...
Writing FeedbackReskiRamadani88 - Oct 28, 2016 / Mathew8 - Oct 28, 2016
|Time's Summary: Pro-Government Demonstrators Clash With Opposition in Caracas
5 - Hi, let me give some advice, perhaps useful for you. 1.Today , protest wave in Venezuela ...-----> better if...
Writing Feedbackalfa7 - Oct 28, 2016 / Dioba - Oct 28, 2016
|David Christian ask every audience with one question: How does the Universe make complexity?
3 - Hi Yonathan, below are my thoughts to help you out with your revision. - and suddenly the core...
Writing FeedbackYonathan - Oct 28, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 28, 2016
|Increasing number of criminality is certainly a topical issue, as so many felonies are found today.
Writing FeedbackUcha MSN - Oct 28, 2016 / Fadhilahumar91 - Oct 28, 2016
|The government has predominant role to inhibit the crime level increase
4 - Hello Mathew, i will give you suggestion: According to some research, level of crime ... It will be...
Writing FeedbackMathew8 - Oct 28, 2016 / ReskiRamadani88 - Oct 28, 2016
|Understanding entire Universe history just in 18 minutes
2 - ... 18 minutes to read this summary to understandingunderstand the entire universe history. ... and gravity were born...
Writing Feedbackalfa7 - Oct 28, 2016 / Ucha MSN - Oct 28, 2016
|Dress smartly or quality of work? I think it depends on our obligation in occupation.
5 - Hi nurainiyusuf16, let me give some comments on your essay 1. For the first it is better for you...
Writing Feedbacknurainiyusuf16 - Oct 28, 2016 / mardian24 - Oct 29, 2016
|Three approaches to drag crime rate down: authority policy, education and self-awareness
Writing Feedbackalfa7 - Oct 28, 2016 / Yonathan - Oct 28, 2016
|How marital status impact the happiness level between spouses?
2 - Hello, Hope you doing well, lemme give you some suggestion ... single no more than (a) half percent...
Writing FeedbackBeauty17 - Oct 28, 2016 / fauziyahtami - Oct 28, 2016
|The causing related to the escalating number of crime rate and some possible solutions to tackle it.
3 - Hai dils, here are my suggestions about your essay Significantly, the rate of criminality increaseincreases every year. ...
Writing Feedbackdils - Oct 28, 2016 / ifraanisa05 - Oct 28, 2016
|Wearing office-look clothes is important regarding to some enterprises policies.
2 - Hello Faizunaa17 I have some advice, hope it can help you .....there are some condition that you need...
Writing Feedbackfaizunaa17 - Oct 28, 2016 / Mathew8 - Oct 28, 2016
|The universe has begun with the second thermodynamic law of physics
2 - Hi Gigih12, here are my review towards your essay ...complexity increases slightly step by step... ...it called...
Writing FeedbackGigih12 - Oct 28, 2016 / nda18 - Oct 28, 2016
|Happiness degree in percent related to relationship status and the effect of children appearance
2 - Hi Faiz.. These are my corrections to finalize yours. ... about happiness degreeS in percentAGE related to relationship...
Writing Feedbackfaizunaa17 - Oct 28, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Oct 28, 2016
|From the bar graph, we can see the levels of participation in education and science in poor and rich
2 - Hi Maximklopunov99, I want you obtain some suggestion from me, here we go FromAccording to the bar graph...
Writing FeedbackMaximKlopunov99 - Oct 28, 2016 / alfa7 - Oct 28, 2016
|Children should be taught both to co-operate and be a rival with other students
NEW - Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are...
Writing Feedbackamrillahmk - Oct 28, 2016 / — -
|Rules for work-force to wear every day a dress which have company symbols
4 - Hello Mr. Mardian :) Let me give you some suggestions for you ^_^ actually, I like your essay...
Writing Feedbackmardian24 - Oct 28, 2016 / SarlindaDS_27 - Oct 28, 2016
|Happiness ratings for people who have partner and do not have partner in the US
5 - Hi Wily, below are my thoughts on your analysis essay; - percentage of a research on enjoyableenjoyment ratings...
Writing FeedbackWilyaftika23 - Oct 28, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 28, 2016
|Is it important to have a law about uniform standardization for employees?
5 - HELLO WILLY :) Here are my suggestion for you writing, hope it will be useful for you next time...
Writing FeedbackWilyaftika23 - Oct 28, 2016 / SarlindaDS_27 - Oct 28, 2016
|"THEME: CRIME" The reasons why people tend to do criminal action
3 - The increase of criminal action ... This essay will explain the reasons why people ..to make better essay, give...
Writing FeedbackGigih12 - Oct 28, 2016 / Iforsa - Oct 28, 2016
|Writing Task 1 - The graph below and the chart on the next page show the answers people gave
4 - Hi Mardian, I have a few suggestions for your essay; - ... information about the satisfaction rating ofwith...
Writing Feedbackmardian24 - Oct 28, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 28, 2016
|Plenty of books had been read by women and men from 2011 to 2014 at Burnaby Public Library
2 - Hi Edho.. Actually, your writing is a good job. However, I give you a few corrections to enhance the...
Writing Feedbackmem77 - Oct 28, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Oct 28, 2016
|Writing Task 1: Comparison between married and unmarried couple and the effect of children.
4 - Haloo.. hope this works. Good luck ! The bar chartCHARTS (itis due to in the picture there are...
Writing FeedbackIvanMS027 - Oct 28, 2016 / Beauty17 - Oct 28, 2016
|"Marriage is the grave of love". Women don't need to get married.
Writing Feedbacksydneynguyen - Oct 27, 2016 / sydneynguyen - Oct 30, 2016
|Do you support or oppose building a powerful military?
4 - The grammatical errors lie mostly in sentence structure and development. The way development of the sentence is not as...
Writing FeedbackActivelung - Oct 27, 2016 / Holt - Oct 28, 2016
|Leadership is one of my favorite subject study and my passion to influence people - Chevening essay
Writing FeedbackFatrya - Oct 27, 2016 / Fatrya - Oct 27, 2016
|Playing games can teach us lessons which sometimes are very valuable and useful.
2 - Hi Sydney, this is a pretty good presentation for an opinion essay. the message is clear and your opinion...
Writing Feedbacksydneynguyen - Oct 27, 2016 / Holt - Oct 28, 2016
|Readmit essay: "personal information that you want considered"
2 - Agatha, please consider posting the guidelines for the readmission essay. I am wondering what the prompt's full requirement was...
Writing Feedbacktamuaggie39132 - Oct 27, 2016 / Holt - Oct 27, 2016
|The number of plants and animals species in the tropical forest which closed to extinction (WT 1)
2 - Hello, Hope you doing well, lemme give you some suggestion A breakdown which presents in the graph [....]...
Writing FeedbackFadhilahumar91 - Oct 27, 2016 / fauziyahtami - Oct 28, 2016
|A large number of experts claim that a color gives a certain impact in the people's mood
2 - Fadhil, you got your introduction and your conclusion mixed up. Your closing statement works best as part of the...
Writing FeedbackFadhilahumar91 - Oct 27, 2016 / Holt - Oct 28, 2016
|It is essential to choose the right color scheme for hospital and office decor
2 - Hello! I will give you some opinions about your essay. Introduction: (1) ... its effect foron people's health...
Writing Feedbackashelarisa48 - Oct 27, 2016 / septiadara29 - Oct 28, 2016
|Do the advantages for starting their own business outweigh the disadvantages?
Writing FeedbackIvanMS027 - Oct 27, 2016 / nda18 - Nov 12, 2016
|Human impact gives the bigger influence as the threat to plant life rather than the natural events.
2 - Hi ashelarisa48. Here are my suggestions for you. You can paraphrase the plant and animal to flora...
Writing Feedbackashelarisa48 - Oct 27, 2016 / IvanMS027 - Oct 27, 2016
|It\s hard for some people to build their first business enterprise instead of working as an employee
2 - Hi Anna.. These are my corrections to make yours better. Please, review them ^_^ ... instead of working...
Writing FeedbackAnna94 - Oct 27, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Oct 28, 2016
|To become an employee, working man or having business are available choices for people.
Writing FeedbackReskiRamadani88 - Oct 27, 2016 / mardian24 - Oct 28, 2016
|The educated people are afraid to show their creativity. Do schools kill it in them?
2 - National education systems set said that ... The result was that educating educated people (...) show their...
Writing FeedbackKimichi89 - Oct 27, 2016 / chikomm16 - Oct 28, 2016
|The only way to enhance the safeness on roads is to have stricter punishment for driving offenders
2 - I would say that your opening parenthesis is wrong. There are lots grammatical errors. i suggest you should...
Writing Feedbackfadhilmd25 - Oct 27, 2016 / chikomm16 - Oct 28, 2016
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