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|Rural life and modern life. What is better ?
3 - Hello Qtraam, I would like to give some corrections to you essay. 1. These sentences: "So, which is...
Writing FeedbackQtraam - Oct 10, 2016 / Asma Raj - Oct 10, 2016
|The importance of balancing our income and expense. Money Management.
5 - Hi Killua Let me give you some correction ... numerous bills, all of these showshowed the increasing importance...
Writing FeedbackKillua - Oct 10, 2016 / Yonathan - Oct 10, 2016
|Bird Migration - Animals normally move to a land to breeding
3 - Helo Fauziah, I want to gige some suggestions Birds travel to higher traverse ... (Birds travel to higher...
Writing Feedbackfauziyahtami - Oct 10, 2016 / Afdhel - Oct 10, 2016
|Each species respond to develop and spread out into an ecological niche. Bird Migration
2 - aloha, here are my thoughts; - Several kindkinds(several+plural noun) of animals do migration, ... -a Bird migration (...)...
Writing Feedbacksasariri - Oct 10, 2016 / ibe13 - Oct 10, 2016
|Plenty of trees are cutted. Paraphrase from "Environmental Impacts from Logging"
NEW - Logging has serious damage to natural environment such as habitat loss, pollution and climate. However, the cutting down trees...
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|Haitians Worship Among Devastation Caused by Hurricane Matthew
2 - According to current official reports , approximately 522 inhabitants died due to this tragedy; moreover, it is, not included...
Writing FeedbackAris05 - Oct 10, 2016 / angga93 - Oct 10, 2016
|Nowadays, people like living in big and developed cities.
3 - Hi Snowrussia Let me give you some correction ... and disadvantages to having livinglive in small communities. ...
Writing Feedbacksnowrussia95 - Oct 10, 2016 / Yonathan - Oct 10, 2016
|Let's All Obsess Over This Intricate Map of Alt Music History
3 - The history of band music performance started to ... The history of band music performance dates back to 4...
Writing FeedbackPHA2016 - Oct 10, 2016 / angga93 - Oct 10, 2016
|There are many industries that have to cut down the trees to fulfill their materials
3 - Hi Goldvina.. Your writing is increadible. Let me give you some advice... Trees are become a home for...
Writing Feedbackgldvn - Oct 10, 2016 / sasariri - Oct 10, 2016
|Let is simplify legal jargon By Alan Siegel
2 - Hi, pha. Here are my thoughts ... talked that today government was complexity responsible has complex responsibility which...
Writing FeedbackPHA2016 - Oct 10, 2016 / Aris05 - Oct 10, 2016
|IDEAS WORTH DATING, ideas which will be matched with character,
3 - Helo rosa, hope you doing well well, you've done graet (great), yet lemme give you some suggestion ==>...
Writing Feedbackrosadesiana - Oct 10, 2016 / fauziyahtami - Oct 10, 2016
|AN ARTIST'S UNFLICHING LOOK AT RACIAL VIOLENCE
3 - hi i enjoy reading your essay.keep spirit In 2005, one of the black race arts's created six (...),...
Writing FeedbackBams17 - Oct 10, 2016 / ondemande20 - Oct 10, 2016
|People use their voice to tell others what they want to hear, instead of what they need
3 - Nowadays, most of people use their voice to telling people the things they wanted to hear instead of the...
Writing Feedbackfauzankrn - Oct 10, 2016 / angga93 - Oct 10, 2016
|A sister is worth a thousand friendships- Comparison/ Contrast essay
2 - Hi,leldredge,nice to see your essay.Here are some corrections for you,hope these may help you. Everyone has heard the...
Writing Feedbackleldredge - Oct 9, 2016 / Killua - Oct 10, 2016
|Selection (out of 5) for Summative Essay (1)
Writing FeedbackJustin13601 - Oct 9, 2016 / elonbrahm - Oct 10, 2016
|Housing and economic. Summarise the information and make comparisons where relevant
3 - Thank you for your corrections!Actually I couldn't find many relation between the two charts so I had to write...
Writing FeedbackKillua - Oct 9, 2016 / Killua - Oct 10, 2016
|People nowadays spend much more time, than they should, using text messages and new technology
2 - ... it stimulates people to contact with each other more . However, some others may take an opposite ......
Writing Feedbackmarzbanm - Oct 9, 2016 / Ifan21 - Oct 10, 2016
|The online shopping sales for retail sectors in New Zealand's market, in 2003 and 2013; Task 1
Writing Feedbacksasariri - Oct 9, 2016 / ryan31 - Oct 9, 2016
|'4 reasons to learn a new language' by John McWhorter - Summary of TED
2 - Hi Ifan.. these are my thoughts for summary grammatically. Check it out "English WHICH is taking over" is...
Writing FeedbackIfan21 - Oct 9, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Oct 9, 2016
|TOEFL independent writing: People now can better protect the environment than they could in the past
3 - Thank you so much! The unidiomatic sentences like "intenser sense of protecting the environment" are my headaches, I can't...
Writing Feedbackthinkhowxh - Oct 8, 2016 / thinkhowxh - Oct 12, 2016
|Some parents order their children to work hard for their physical and mental improvement
Writing FeedbackTimur_Ergashev - Oct 8, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 9, 2016
|Before I lived in Canada, I was born in South Korea. Past choices and your life.
Writing Feedbackblizzard49 - Oct 8, 2016 / ryan31 - Oct 9, 2016
|'American dream' Writing a Synthesized Essay, tips, help, guidance or advice?
3 - Hi Danny, first of all, I believe you have understood what is asked of the prompt and the hindrance...
Writing FeedbackNiuWang - Oct 8, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 9, 2016
|Bringing enjoyment. Movies take us to the world of imagination.
4 - By providing the context when language is used, movies support us so that we can study the language faster...
Writing Feedbackwaterforce1205 - Oct 8, 2016 / Huynh Anh - Oct 12, 2016
|Why are group study sessions more helpful and efficient than studying alone?
6 - Rick, it sounds to me like you were supposed to write a comparison essay based upon the title that...
Writing FeedbackActivelung - Oct 8, 2016 / Holt - Oct 17, 2016
|A number of large cities with skyscrapers and shopping centres replacing small villages
2 - Hi.. Let me help you to finalize your essay. In this moment, I only focus on your contents of...
Writing Feedbacknguyeneze7496 - Oct 8, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Oct 9, 2016
|People from small villages or remote areas are trying to seek a way to live and work in large cities
2 - BesidesAfter all , there are many advantages ... ... chances for them to contact withapproach the global knowledge...
Writing FeedbackHuynh Anh - Oct 7, 2016 / waterforce1205 - Oct 8, 2016
|Writting TASK II The criminality is one of the crucial problems faced by people recently
Writing Feedbackarisandy14 - Oct 7, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 9, 2016
|Daniel Levitin tells how to figure out a problem before it happens or how to minimise the damage
3 - Ho Yonathan Here some suggestions for your writing and he shared his experience when he cannot could not...
Writing FeedbackYonathan - Oct 7, 2016 / Cachaaaaaaaa - Oct 20, 2016
|TED Summary - Rory Steart: Time to end the war in Afghanistan
2 - The war in Afghanistan has been existing for decades. However, Afghanistan does not to pose and existential threat to...
Writing FeedbackAbrahamlincoln - Oct 7, 2016 / RAY93 - Oct 8, 2016
|People have different views about the decision-making to sentence the crime action nowadays
2 - ... to sentence the crime action PERPETRATORS nowadays. .., I believe that adjudication ADJUDICATORS have to...
Writing Feedbackfauzankrn - Oct 7, 2016 / RAY93 - Oct 8, 2016
|The punishment depends from different circumstances and motivations of the crime
2 - at first, it is evident that you need to practice and learn more on how to compose a well-structured...
Writing FeedbackPHA2016 - Oct 7, 2016 / RAY93 - Oct 8, 2016
|Essay about issue of the crime punishment - evaluation of the guilt
2 - overall, it is evidence that you already have a good pattern on composing essay while write your sentences with...
Writing FeedbackAris05 - Oct 7, 2016 / RAY93 - Oct 8, 2016
|Earliest grade students are required to learn foreign language
Writing FeedbackUcha MSN - Oct 7, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 7, 2016
|IELTS Summary Task U.S. Hasn't Gone This Long Without a Big Hurricane in 150 Years
3 - Hi Dioba, here's another one from my end. - NowadaysToday , Hurricane Matthew slams - into Haiti and...
Writing FeedbackDioba - Oct 7, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 7, 2016
|The punishment should be fixed without considering the background of the criminal crime
2 - Hi Bambang, please find additional help below; - Several humanspeople think of - that crimes must have punishment...
Writing FeedbackBams17 - Oct 7, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 7, 2016
|Article Review: Weird Orange Crocodiles found Gorging on Bats in Gabon Caves
3 - Hi Yonathan, below are a few suggestions for your summary essay. - In part of anthe expedition into...
Writing FeedbackYonathan - Oct 7, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 7, 2016
|Article Summary - Google Introduces the Pixel, Its Own Smartphone
4 - Hi Lincoln, below are my thoughts on your article summary. - Google'sThis is google's new strategy of -...
Writing FeedbackAbrahamlincoln - Oct 7, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 7, 2016
|The things we learn from our friends are more important than what we learn from our family
Writing Feedbacklinanovirawati - Oct 7, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 7, 2016
|Why Bilingual Language Education Have To Be Implemented Since Earliest
2 - Hi Mr X Let me give you some correction Universal language that havehas to be honed since... ...
Writing FeedbackMonkeyD_Saolo - Oct 7, 2016 / Yonathan - Oct 7, 2016
|Children can be introduced to a foreign language from their first years of study
3 - Hi Fauziyah.. I am pleased to read your writing because you have shown positive progress. You have written your...
Writing Feedbackfauziyahtami - Oct 6, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Oct 6, 2016
|People have different views regarding the best age to learn new languages
3 - Hi Goldvina, please find a few additional suggestions below; - On the other hand, gradersstudents studying - only...
Writing Feedbackgoldieu - Oct 6, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 6, 2016
|Nowadays, we live in a highly competitive world, crammed with many challenges and obstacles.
2 - Hi Ivan, I believe this is the first time I'm going to review your essay and for starters, we...
Writing FeedbackLola12 - Oct 6, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 6, 2016
|Merits and demerits regarding learning of foreign language in a primary school
NEW - The blooming of English in the modern era encourage educators to accelerate the introduction of English in the...
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|Young age around student in primary school is the best time to learn new knowledge
Writing Feedbacksasariri - Oct 6, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 6, 2016
|The authority is required to create publicity for familiarizing renewable sources of energy
3 - Hi Lincoln, below is my take on your essay. - The majority of people state that the authority...
Writing FeedbackAbrahamlincoln - Oct 6, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 6, 2016
|Government should pay more attention to the encouragement in altering the energy resources
3 - Hi Rizaldo, first of all WELCOME to the Essay Forum Team, we hope that you find this website to...
Writing Feedbackzalzalzal - Oct 6, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 6, 2016
|Recently, many politicians and academician discuss about renewable energy and its benefits
5 - Hi Yonathan, I believe you must've read a few writing projects that answered the prompt and I believe that...
Writing FeedbackYonathan - Oct 6, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 6, 2016
|In the modern era, English has a momentous role to hone communication ability of pupils
4 - Hi.,.Nousha your IELTS writing is great, you have presented and organized the ideas appropriately. however, here some advice for...
Writing FeedbackAfdhel - Oct 6, 2016 / hasbi - Oct 6, 2016
|OPEC agrees its first production cut since 2008
3 - ... (OPEC) made a decision thatIN WHICH member of this (...) cartel system becauseSINCE Iran and Saudi Arabia wasARE...
Writing FeedbackPHA2016 - Oct 6, 2016 / RAY93 - Oct 7, 2016
|TED Review:Why some people are more altruistic than others by Abigail Marsh
4 - Hi Yonathan, here's another one fro my end. - ... an experience when someone saves saved her life,...
Writing FeedbackYonathan - Oct 6, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 6, 2016
|TED Beau Lotto, the TED speaker, began his speech with a game.
Writing FeedbackDioba - Oct 6, 2016 / Abrahamlincoln - Oct 31, 2016
|Aziz Abu Sarah, a tourism entrepreneur and peace builder from Palestine - report
3 - Hi Rosa.. It is a good job because this is free of major mistakes. However, you have to remember...
Writing Feedbackrosadesiana - Oct 6, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Oct 6, 2016
|Article Review: Mini Dog Robot can Bounce, Open Doors and even Climb Fences
4 - Hi Yonathan, Actually, it is a good summary. However, let me help you to finalize this. Meet my notes...
Writing FeedbackYonathan - Oct 6, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Oct 7, 2016
|TED Summary: The next outbreak? We're not ready
3 - ... like nuclear weapon CAN CAUSE in the future. The problem is, THAT there are far more (...) but...
Writing Feedbackkiev - Oct 6, 2016 / RAY93 - Oct 6, 2016
|Haunting photos of polar ice (TED Summary)
4 - Humans are not separated by FROM nature and WHILE everything is interconnected each other. Iceberg is come...
Writing Feedbackfauzankrn - Oct 6, 2016 / RAY93 - Oct 6, 2016
|Article Summary - How to Use Google to Plan Your Trip
3 - Hi Lincoln, I would like to share a few insights for your essay. - travelers planning their trips....
Writing FeedbackAbrahamlincoln - Oct 6, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 6, 2016
|Anthony Goldbloom, Machine learning expert, shared his experience in TED channel.
Writing FeedbackPHA2016 - Oct 6, 2016 / kiev - Oct 6, 2016
|Go Ahead, Make Up New Word! Summary Ted
3 - Hello Att98! I will give you some opinions about your summary. Paragraph 1: Lexicographer is a job...
Writing FeedbackAtt98 - Oct 6, 2016 / septiadara29 - Oct 26, 2016
|Summary Article: Russia stresses importance of cyber-security cooperation with Indonesia
2 - Hi Ibal. I am delighted to read your summary because you have shown the better progress. One having to...
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