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|Some think that foreign language better to be taught since elementary school rather than high school
2 - Hi Fauziyah. These below are my view focusing on the contents of your writing Hopefully, they can help you...
Writing Feedbackfauziyahtami - Oct 5, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Oct 6, 2016
|People have to be more careful for choosing their clothes because it may cause some problems
5 - Hello, here's my suggestion Beside that there is A person GIVING comment about their appearance. SEVERAL FEATURES CONCERNED......
Writing Feedbackandika08 - Oct 5, 2016 / Huynh Anh - Oct 22, 2016
|Writing Task 2 Colors As A Reflection Of People's Personality
2 - Hi Farida here some suggestions to improve your writing Apple and Wikipedia use it in their logos (each...
Writing FeedbackFaridadwi18 - Oct 5, 2016 / Cachaaaaaaaa - Oct 21, 2016
|Is the Internet really dangerous? Inappropriate contents, lack of direct communication
3 - Hello Abraham, ... approaches could be theaddressedin solution to overcome suchsome phenomenon. ... set of restriction to ban...
Writing FeedbackAbrahamlincoln - Oct 5, 2016 / PHA2016 - Oct 6, 2016
|People can be measured by their habits, not by the clothes they wear, as some suggest
3 - Hi Ryan, you have a pretty good essay, the following are my comments: This is because people who...
Writing Feedbackryan31 - Oct 5, 2016 / Fitri12 - Oct 6, 2016
|The triumph of the Internet has initiated a new era: The Merits and Drawbacks of The Internet
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|IELTS Writing Task 2 : Money is one of the most essential factors in promoting happiness.
3 - Hi naruetai.i give some advice,perhaps useful for you. 1.It is considered bysome that money is a key to happiness....
Writing Feedbacknaruetai - Oct 5, 2016 / Dioba - Oct 6, 2016
|Problem and Problem-Solving of the Internet Drawbacks
5 - Hi Alfa, you have a pretty good writing, unfortunately on the second paragraph, you have not fully developed the...
Writing Feedbackalfa7 - Oct 5, 2016 / Fitri12 - Oct 6, 2016
|What's wrong with your password?
2 - Hi.. your essay is quite brief.. I have something for you.. Password Is Important for privacy your computer...
Writing Feedbackarifin354 - Oct 5, 2016 / korbansuspendcuy - Oct 5, 2016
|Internet Problem, ex. inappropriate content, infected websites, etc.
3 - Helllo Brother Let me give you some advices Please pay attention with your singular or plural. ......
Writing FeedbackYonathan - Oct 5, 2016 / Abrahamlincoln - Oct 5, 2016
|Wiriting Task 2: Problems associated with the internet and what solutions ?
3 - Hi Pandai, running through your essay, I must say that you have made a very clear view of your...
Writing FeedbackMFES2016 - Oct 5, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 6, 2016
|TED Summary: What it Takes to be a Great Leader by Roselinde Torres
2 - Hi Yonathan.. These below are my thoughts towards your summary. I really hope you can review those and avoid...
Writing FeedbackYonathan - Oct 5, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Oct 5, 2016
|Article Summary Task: Physic Nobel goes to discovers of world of stranger things
2 - Hello Yonathan, Their work involved by using the mathematical (...) superconductors and superfluidssuper-fluids. This Those/these work will...
Writing FeedbackYonathan - Oct 5, 2016 / PHA2016 - Oct 5, 2016
|TED Talk Summary: Patricia Ryan; Do Not Insist in English
Writing Feedbackkorbansuspendcuy - Oct 5, 2016 / ryan31 - Oct 5, 2016
|Article Summary: The Economist; The 2016 Nobel prize for medicine goes to biological recycling
2 - Hello Korbansuspendcuy, I want to you gain some suggestion from me here we go Autophagy, the process...
Writing Feedbackkorbansuspendcuy - Oct 5, 2016 / alfa7 - Oct 5, 2016
|THE VICE PRESIDENTIAL DEBATE WAS A LOT MORE FUN ON TWITTER
2 - Hi PHA Let me give you some correction ... vice presidential debate of the 2016. Along(with) session, Kaine...
Writing FeedbackPHA2016 - Oct 5, 2016 / Yonathan - Oct 5, 2016
|Kio Stork made an explanation how we can create an exquisite relationship with strangers we meet
2 - ......, smile to them are such weird and avoidED things to do by majority ... It is a dangerous...
Writing Feedbackrosadesiana - Oct 5, 2016 / RAY93 - Oct 5, 2016
|Article Summary - The Best -and worst- places to be a working woman
5 - hai lincoln here's my suggestions for you hope it works ... that aims to reports the most suitable...
Writing FeedbackAbrahamlincoln - Oct 5, 2016 / ryan31 - Oct 22, 2016
|Summary of Artile World's hardiest animal has evolved radiation shied for its DNA By: Andy Coglan
2 - ...,water bear, is the most toughest creatures on the planet, [NO NEED COMMA] which can survive in AN extreme...
Writing FeedbackIfan21 - Oct 5, 2016 / RAY93 - Oct 5, 2016
|TED Summary: The Truth about Lying
Writing FeedbackFitri12 - Oct 5, 2016 / Ifan21 - Oct 5, 2016
|Summary article_Your Birth Control Pill Might Raise Your Depression Risk
2 - A research institute in Denmark conducted a study involving more that 1 million women and adolescent girls about...
Writing FeedbackDavid54 - Oct 5, 2016 / RAY93 - Oct 5, 2016
|Summary of article : Japanese Scientist Yoshinori Ohsumi Wins the Nobel Prize in Medicine
Writing FeedbackBekuk22 - Oct 4, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Oct 7, 2016
|The Internet Effects Based on Social Networking
3 - Hi Hirani Here some suggestions for your writing ... site helps people to be closedcloser each other. ...
Writing Feedbackhirani03 - Oct 4, 2016 / Cachaaaaaaaa - Oct 23, 2016
|There is advice that teenagers should reach a job before continuing to study in school or university
2 - Hello Your text will sound much more professionally written if you apply the following adjustments to it: ...
Writing FeedbackBekuk22 - Oct 4, 2016 / Wolf Larsen - Oct 5, 2016
|Many newspapers and magazines feature stories about the private lives of famous people
NEW - Ielts writing TASK 2 - Word usage and sentence length problems! Many newspapers and magaziens feature stories about...
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|Article Summary - Hurricane Matthew Makes Landfall in Haiti
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|Parents are able to understand their children perfectly, like no one else does.
3 - Hi i have some feedback for you >>> Introduction ( it is better to paraphrase the question in...
Writing Feedbackvoducduy - Oct 4, 2016 / eve01 - Oct 23, 2016
|Social networking is the leading cause why individuals are losing interaction among family members
2 - Hi Ilmy. I am pleased to read your essay because you have understood about the systematic of the essay....
Writing FeedbackIlmi_03 - Oct 4, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Oct 5, 2016
|The free movement of goods across national borders; IELTS writing task 2
Writing Feedbackkorbansuspendcuy - Oct 4, 2016 / ryan31 - Oct 4, 2016
|Internet-based social networking sites are designed to help bring people together or bring drawbacks
2 - Hi, Here's some comment from me: However, i agree that such communications should deteriorate individual ... ...
Writing Feedbackekalamarsyari11 - Oct 4, 2016 / kiev - Oct 5, 2016
|The comparison of relations between workers and their supervisor, and workers among their colleagues
3 - Hello, here some inputs for you The presented pie charts presentgive information about the comparison of ......
Writing FeedbackCachaaaaaaaa - Oct 4, 2016 / fauzankrn - Oct 6, 2016
|The free movement, is it necessary for economy or not?
2 - Hi Lincoln. In this meeting with you, I only focus on contents of your essay. Please, meet my notes...
Writing FeedbackAbrahamlincoln - Oct 4, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Oct 5, 2016
|The pie charts gives information of survey result in 2005 and 2009 about employee and their bosses
3 - Hi andikaa. Here I left some suggestion for you. Hope it can help. Overall, the percentage of respon...
Writing Feedbackandika08 - Oct 4, 2016 / ibal28 - Oct 5, 2016
|Survey of Workers at Work (Supervisor and Co-workers)
2 - AtIN 2005, survey of relationships with supervisor shows that61 percentof workerShavehad a very good relation with their bosses. which...
Writing Feedbackmem77 - Oct 4, 2016 / Ilmi_03 - Oct 4, 2016
|Ted Summary: The Single Biggest Reason Why Startups Succeed
2 - These are my few suggestions for your summary There are some findings INVENTIONS by Bill Gross about what...
Writing Feedbackgoldieu - Oct 4, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Oct 5, 2016
|Result of the survey on workmen's relations with the chiefs and colleagues
2 - it is important to present the graph here The given pie charts provide information about the percentage of...
Writing FeedbackHujjatul19 - Oct 4, 2016 / ekalamarsyari11 - Oct 4, 2016
|Writing Task 1 - The relationship at work and with co-workers
3 - Hi Fadhil Let me give you some correction ... at work, there are(is a) distinction in data of...
Writing Feedbackfadhilmd25 - Oct 4, 2016 / Yonathan - Oct 5, 2016
|The outcome of observation on the relationships among employees with their manager and partnerships
2 - ... about the relationship ofamong employees with their manager and partnerships inboth year , 2005 and 2009 and itwhich...
Writing Feedbackryan31 - Oct 4, 2016 / hirani03 - Oct 4, 2016
|Ghosts and Poltergeists: more common than you think?
2 - ... by some people causing the negative energies phenomenonenergy phenomenons ; such as heard ... However, the ghost...
Writing Feedbackkiki23 - Oct 4, 2016 / hirani03 - Oct 4, 2016
|Speaking like a leader - most people does not have good speaking skills
2 - Helllo brother Let me give you some advices ... in the several countries do not have good manner...
Writing FeedbackBams17 - Oct 4, 2016 / Abrahamlincoln - Oct 4, 2016
|TED summary- A New Way to Heal Hearts without Surgery
2 - Hi fauziyah, here is some suggestions for your writing in order to improve it. This phenomenon is caused...
Writing Feedbackfauziyahtami - Oct 4, 2016 / Hujjatul19 - Oct 4, 2016
|Social media on the Internet are getting improved, to make most people around connect to one another
2 - Hi Fadhila Let me give you some correction ... social media brings (a) negative effect on adolescent behavior(behaviour)...
Writing FeedbackFadhilahumar91 - Oct 4, 2016 / Yonathan - Oct 5, 2016
|The experience of working and saving money for the higher education - gap year from school benefits
2 - Hi Fadhil Let me give you some correction Teenagers get advices(piece of advice) by older people to have...
Writing Feedbackfadhilmd25 - Oct 4, 2016 / Yonathan - Oct 5, 2016
|Many media celebrities allegedly exert negative implications on youth generation
3 - Dear Ronaldo, here are some advices for your essay, feel free to correct me, Many media celebrities -->...
Writing Feedbackronaldover71 - Oct 4, 2016 / fadhilmd25 - Oct 4, 2016
|Ted Summary - Technology hasn't changed love. Here's why
3 - Hi Fadhil, I have some advice for you - Helen Fisher started her presentation by the overview of...
Writing Feedbackfadhilmd25 - Oct 4, 2016 / goldieu - Oct 4, 2016
|SUMMARYS The colorful propaganda maps in 20 century wars
4 - Helo bams, Hope you doing well, lemme give you some suggestion ==> Maps made to persuade to the...
Writing FeedbackBams17 - Oct 4, 2016 / fauziyahtami - Oct 4, 2016
|Writing Task 2 Social Media Have Negative Or Positive Effects?
2 - Dear Faridadwi, here are some advices for your writing, feel free to correct me if I get wrong, ...
Writing FeedbackFaridadwi18 - Oct 4, 2016 / fadhilmd25 - Oct 4, 2016
|Common Painkillers 'increase heart failure risk'
Writing Feedbacksasariri - Oct 4, 2016 / dils - Oct 31, 2016
|TEDx Summary How the Panama Papers journalists broke the biggest leak in history by Gerard Ryle
3 - Hello You have a good summary I have some corrections Economic controls the world. That first sentence (...)...
Writing Feedbackalfa7 - Oct 4, 2016 / andika08 - Oct 5, 2016
|Free Trade System - a long-life controversy in myriad side of array of countries
2 - hai alfa I have several suggestions for you I hope it helps avoid to use subject pronoun such...
Writing Feedbackalfa7 - Oct 4, 2016 / ryan31 - Oct 4, 2016
|Robotic race cars. The autonomous vehicle was a dream and it has been dream since 1939
Writing FeedbackDioba - Oct 4, 2016 / Faridadwi18 - Oct 4, 2016
|The new developed ink can be used to 3D-print flexible bone implants in any size, shape and form
2 - Hello Yonathan These below are my thoughts towards your summary. Hopefully, that can help you significantly. Check it out...
Writing FeedbackYonathan - Oct 4, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Oct 4, 2016
|How Child Trauma Can Cause Trauma Aging
Writing FeedbackAris05 - Oct 4, 2016 / rosadesiana - Oct 10, 2016
|Most of professions such as lawyer and doctor will see a significant change, as result of machinery
2 - Hi kiev, this is some advice for you. Perhaps useful for you. 1.wrong spelling word proffessions ---->profesions as...
Writing Feedbackkiev - Oct 4, 2016 / Dioba - Oct 4, 2016
|TED Summary: Why we Need to Talk About Depression by Kevin Breel
5 - Hi Jojo, Here some suggestions for you. Kevin Breel, is a person who suffering from depression about...
Writing FeedbackYonathan - Oct 4, 2016 / dils - Oct 31, 2016
|A Five-hundred-meter Aperture Spherical Telescope called FAST was began spying on outer space
2 - HiDioba Let me give you some advice ... in which 200 meters bigger than its(it is) closest rival,...
Writing FeedbackDioba - Oct 4, 2016 / Yonathan - Oct 4, 2016
|8 secrets of success (TED Summary)
Writing Feedbackfauzankrn - Oct 4, 2016 / Faridadwi18 - Oct 10, 2016
|How Young Malawian Boy Build a Windmill
Writing FeedbackPHA2016 - Oct 4, 2016 / Wolf Larsen - Oct 4, 2016
|TED Summary - Ken Robinson says schools kill creative
3 - Hello Abraham Lincoln, However, If childrenthey [may use adverb] are not prepared to be ... the This...
Writing FeedbackAbrahamlincoln - Oct 4, 2016 / PHA2016 - Oct 4, 2016
|How Did a Blind Man Climb Yosemite's El Capitan in a Day?
3 - Hi there, Here's is some of feedback from me. The first blind climber ever was Erik Weihenmayer in...
Writing Feedbackmdamanhuri77 - Oct 4, 2016 / kiev - Oct 4, 2016
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