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|The employment in the modern world, computer era.
Writing FeedbackBill Freo - Oct 20, 2016 / Bill Freo - Oct 20, 2016
|Computers have contributed to medicine, but they brought many hindrances in human development
Writing FeedbackMarcos - Oct 19, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 20, 2016
|Computers are made with expecting purpose helping people's life more easier. And negatives?
3 - Hi guy, I have just improved something in your paragraph, I hope it is correct and helpful for you....
Writing Feedbackprettyinside - Oct 19, 2016 / Fancl - Oct 20, 2016
|..it's hard to live without it.. The advantages and disadvantages of the invented computer;
3 - Hello Samson!! Making a few changes. Hope it helps!! I would suggest Starting off the esay with the...
Writing Feedbacksamson - Oct 19, 2016 / DoctorWho - Oct 19, 2016
|Climate change: human's role and effects - exploratory essay
4 - Your thesis is too broad in the sense that you are talking about human activities in general. That makes...
Writing Feedbackkhoado - Oct 19, 2016 / Holt - Oct 22, 2016
|Why do you think people decide to go to school? Use specific reasons and examples.
5 - Hello again, justivy03! "However, the succeeding paragraphs, the 3rd and the conclusion is not as strong as it...
Writing FeedbackActivelung - Oct 19, 2016 / Activelung - Oct 21, 2016
|This Baby Got Herpes After Being Kissed By a Stranger (Article Summary)
2 - Fauzan, it looks like the summary is informative but in need of grammar correction in order to make it...
Writing Feedbackfauzankrn - Oct 19, 2016 / Holt - Oct 19, 2016
|The stress in not our enemy - it may become a friend
2 - Hi Rosa, right of the bat, the title of the essay is quite confusing; Kelly McGonigal: How to...
Writing Feedbackrosadesiana - Oct 19, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 19, 2016
|There are four ways to become powerful when we are speaking in front of people
Writing FeedbackGigih12 - Oct 19, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 19, 2016
|IELTS Task 2: The roles of computers in the modern life
4 - Hello Tony Nguyen, this is some correction from me and feel free to correct me too! In recent...
Writing FeedbackVjnhnguyen - Oct 18, 2016 / mem77 - Oct 22, 2016
|Could a Saturn Moon Harbor Life? (TED Summary)
3 - Hi Fauzan, here's another one from my end; - Cassini Spacecraft had landed and reported - active region...
Writing Feedbackfauzankrn - Oct 18, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 18, 2016
|As Iraqi and coalition forces invade Mosul, the last ISIS stronghold in Iraq
2 - here is my opinions, hope it's useful for you: -a million people >> millions of people -you can use...
Writing FeedbackPHA2016 - Oct 18, 2016 / trangthuynguyen - Oct 18, 2016
|Overweight mothers give birth to biologically older babies
2 - This summary is full of problems. Part of the problem with your work is that you use the wrong...
Writing FeedbackBams17 - Oct 18, 2016 / Holt - Oct 18, 2016
|The advantages caused to humans when the computer was invented.
5 - When the computer was born, people used it to make their work more efficient. After the invention of computer...
Writing FeedbackQtraam - Oct 17, 2016 / inav321 - Oct 22, 2016
|The Power of Negative Thinking by Tomas Chamorro-premuzic
2 - ... research F or almost a decade between REGARDING people's perception on OF their abilities ... true abilities to...
Writing Feedbackkiev - Oct 17, 2016 / Holt - Oct 17, 2016
|TED SUMMARY - Jim Hemerling: 5 ways to lead in an era of constant change
3 - Hi Rosa, upon reading this summary essay as well as the other essays you have written, it is of...
Writing Feedbackrosadesiana - Oct 17, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 19, 2016
|There are several steps to make a forest. Firstly, by spreading the seeds into the moist soil.
3 - HI Gigih, here's another one from my end. - Nowadays,the ( don't forget your linking verbs ) forest...
Writing FeedbackGigih12 - Oct 17, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 19, 2016
|The death of the Thai king throws the country into turmoil
Writing FeedbackPHA2016 - Oct 17, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 18, 2016
|Facebook and Google Will Stretch Internet Cable from LA to Hong Kong (Article Summary)
3 - Hi Fauzan, here's another one from my end; - TheThis two internet colossal - collaboratecollaboration to build advance...
Writing Feedbackfauzankrn - Oct 17, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 20, 2016
|The ubiquitous fast-paced development in many technological areas
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|How many books have been read at Burnley by men and women?
6 - hi lola ^,^ i would give you some feedback >>>put picture graph that you explain then readers...
Writing FeedbackLola12 - Oct 16, 2016 / eve01 - Oct 21, 2016
|The report show that toursim has many negative effects on the countries that people travel to.
3 - Hello Nguyen Anh, this is some correction from me and feel free to correct me too! Tourism is...
Writing Feedbackdaunguyen2910 - Oct 16, 2016 / mem77 - Oct 22, 2016
|A number of jobs have been lost when computers replaced many positions
2 - Hi Luu, below are my thoughts for your essay; - FromOver the last century, - the technology has...
Writing Feedbackltduc97 - Oct 16, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 16, 2016
|The UK'S Ageing Population In 1985 and Prediction for 2035
2 - Hi Muhammad, I hope my remarks and corrections for your analysis essay is not too late. First stop,...
Writing Feedbacknaelendra - Oct 16, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 20, 2016
|People's reasons for using the car in city
4 - Other use!! (used) for Taking children to school and to ... Only 15 % transportation used for shooping!!...
Writing Feedbacknaelendra - Oct 16, 2016 / SaharHdi - Oct 18, 2016
|Negative impacts of tourism and suggestions to improve it better
2 - Hi Emily, WELCOME to this very helpful and valuable website, Essay Forum has helped a lot of students and...
Writing FeedbackEmily Tran - Oct 16, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 16, 2016
|Changes in annual spending by local authorities in Someland in 1980, 1990 and 2000
2 - The given three pie chart information the chart give information about the spending (...) starting from 1980. 1990...
Writing Feedbacknaelendra - Oct 16, 2016 / Thuy Trang - Oct 17, 2016
|One of the worst effects of tourism is environmental destruction
3 - Hi Ngo, WELCOME to the Essay Forum Family, please find a few suggestions below; - Tourism ofin many...
Writing Feedbackanhngo - Oct 16, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 16, 2016
|Caring for people and spreading happiness
4 - Hi Annie, WELCOME to the Essay Forum Family, we hope to assist you in your writing by providing you...
Writing Feedbackanniele01 - Oct 15, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 18, 2016
|A bucket and pulley system
2 - Hi Linh, first of all, I would like to say that you are very fortunate in discovering this website,...
Writing FeedbackLinhArs - Oct 15, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 16, 2016
|A difference between tourism now and in the past.
Writing FeedbackHong Na - Oct 15, 2016 / mem77 - Oct 22, 2016
|Computers can help people save much time and money, but they are not flexible
3 - Hi Tuyet, below are my thoughts on your essay. - In the modern world, the technology has developing...
Writing Feedbacksnowrussia95 - Oct 15, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 16, 2016
|Topic: According to an international travel magazine, many tourists today fly straight to their holi
6 - Hi Linh, Let's start small as i suggested in previous post. You could start with short writings (around...
Writing Feedbacklinhenglish - Oct 15, 2016 / Adreanna - Oct 15, 2016
|Describe some jobs positions that may be lost because of computers, and discuss at least one problem
2 - Hi Huynh Anh. your explanation is good and interesting either. here is my suggestion for you ... (AI)...
Writing FeedbackHuynh Anh - Oct 14, 2016 / ivanmsiegfried - Oct 14, 2016
|Motorways reduce time and distance of arriving to other cities, but they are also dangerous
8 - Oh that's great to hear, Danial! There's nothing more than a word of approval and appreciation of our inputs...
Writing Feedbackpluskid - Oct 14, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 15, 2016
|A Walk to Margaret Falls. (Due Monday) Proof Read + Editing for Descriptive Essay
5 - Hi JC, thank you for writing back and acknowledging our assistance here on EF, I hope your revision is...
Writing FeedbackPewPew - Oct 14, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 19, 2016
|TASK 1 - downward and upward trend concerning value of fuel exports.
2 - Hi Timur_Ergashev, Check the amendment below. Overall,there werewas at highest amount in 2005 ... However,this trend which was...
Writing FeedbackTimur_Ergashev - Oct 14, 2016 / Naoki28 - Oct 14, 2016
|Discuss about computers are replacing more and more jobs nowadays.
2 - Hi nguyeneze7496. here are my suggestions for you: ... believed to bring a more modern and convenient life...
Writing Feedbacknguyeneze7496 - Oct 14, 2016 / ivanmsiegfried - Oct 14, 2016
|Based on the previous question, what do you think XX's business will be like in the next ten years?
6 - Hi Yunyi, thanks for your feedback and for appreciating what we do here on EF, well, I changed "have"...
Writing FeedbackKillua - Oct 14, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 14, 2016
|What effects will these birth rate predictions have on developed countries
2 - Hallo Naoki28, I'll give you my opinion about your essay. Introduction: I think it will be good enough,...
Writing FeedbackNaoki28 - Oct 14, 2016 / septiadara29 - Oct 14, 2016
|What happened that people replace their work by use computer?
2 - Hi Trang I suppose that this essay is not for scholarship purpose but for IELTS one. Please kindly...
Writing FeedbackTrang Antigone - Oct 14, 2016 / Adreanna - Oct 14, 2016
|Happy partners were significantly more likely to report better health
4 - Hi Eva, I believe this is my first review of your essay and I hope my suggestions are helpful....
Writing Feedbackeve01 - Oct 13, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 19, 2016
|Cuba's Underwater Jewels Are in Tourism's Path
3 - Hallo Ryan31, I will give you my opinions about your article summarize ..., marine life in Cuba was(because...
Writing Feedbackryan31 - Oct 13, 2016 / septiadara29 - Oct 14, 2016
|Summarize article : Extremely Dangerous' Hurricane Nicole to Pummel Bermuda
4 - Hi Andika, here's my take on your essay; - Hurricane N icole makemade anthe - effect forto the...
Writing Feedbackandika08 - Oct 13, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 18, 2016
|Article review _ Are crocodiles warm or cuddly mothers?
Writing FeedbackCachaaaaaaaa - Oct 13, 2016 / randompenguin - Oct 14, 2016
|Problem Solving About Pedestrian Areas with polluted air
4 - Hi! I have some feedback for you! Solution for those problems, the big cities must have... should be...
Writing Feedbackmem77 - Oct 13, 2016 / kiki23 - Nov 17, 2016
|A Questionnaire essay : What values do you share with XX's "Pleasant Life" philosophy?
Writing FeedbackKillua - Oct 13, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 15, 2016
|The government must make choices about how to spend money from taxes
Writing Feedbackzhdw1128 - Oct 13, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 14, 2016
|The more people travel, the more rubbish are thrown away.
6 - Hi Nguyen. please find additional suggestions below; - I thinkbelieve this statement is true - because the number...
Writing Feedbackalvisphantom - Oct 13, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 14, 2016
|Keep your goals to yourself by Derek Sivers
2 - Hi Patta, please find a few additional suggestions for your analysis essay. - Many people have personal goals...
Writing FeedbackPHA2016 - Oct 13, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 13, 2016
|A Day in the Life of Hollywood Paparazzi
7 - Hi Kiki, Below some feedback from me: It IS UNDENIABLEcannot be denied that famous people IS surrounded...
Writing Feedbackkiki23 - Oct 13, 2016 / kiev - Oct 17, 2016
|The Public Transportation and The Fundamental Part of Modern City
2 - Hallo Abdel I want to leave a comment about your article The fact shows that there areis three...
Writing FeedbackAfdhel - Oct 13, 2016 / naelendra - Oct 13, 2016
|The urban areas should have good traits of rural areas. Issues of living in a large community
2 - Hello You have a good summary I have some corrections for you ... gradually replaced by the crowded...
Writing FeedbackHangPham287 - Oct 13, 2016 / andika08 - Oct 22, 2016
|Should we let ex-prisoners, who have become good people, talk to youngster about committing a crime?
4 - Hello nguyendo, I will give you some opinions about your essay Introduction : "It is true that a...
Writing Feedbacknguyendo - Oct 13, 2016 / septiadara29 - Oct 14, 2016
|10 things we need to apply in the way we talk to other people without feeling bored
2 - Hi Russell. In this moment, I do not suggest about your summary because the basic rule for creating the...
Writing FeedbackCachaaaaaaaa - Oct 12, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Oct 12, 2016
|Unlike tourists in the 1960s and '70s, tourists return home with no experience of the local culture
Writing FeedbackQuetquet103 - Oct 12, 2016 / Activelung - Oct 13, 2016
|"Mentor is not always those one who still alive" - TED Summary by Tai Lopez (The law of 33%)
2 - Hi Russell.. These below are my thoughts about your summary. Hopefully, those can help you greatly and finalize yours...
Writing FeedbackCachaaaaaaaa - Oct 12, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Oct 12, 2016
|TED SUMMARY : OCEAN LIFE IN THE SEA FLOOR
2 - Hi Riandi.. These are my thoughts towards your summary. I hope you review my notes and deal with them....
Writing Feedbackryan31 - Oct 12, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Oct 12, 2016
|Every country should develop tourism more, as well as enhance management
3 - Hi Yuh would like to give some opinions about your writing ... may cause the lack of accomodations...
Writing FeedbackYuh - Oct 12, 2016 / naelendra - Oct 13, 2016
|The Key to Family Happiness is Really Simple
3 - Hi Muhamad, before I give you a few suggestion in enhancing your essay, I must say that I agree,...
Writing Feedbackmem77 - Oct 12, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 12, 2016
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