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|How the cement is produced and how to create concrete, based on the combination of cement
2 - The process to create the cement is begunTHE PROCCESS OF CREATING CEMENT IS BEGUN from the limestone and the...
Writing FeedbackFadhilahumar91 - Oct 10, 2016 / Bams17 - Oct 11, 2016
|The diagrams display the tools and steps to create cement in the cement production
2 - Hi Faridadwi Here some suggestions to improve your writing We can see that It is obviously seen that...
Writing FeedbackFaridadwi18 - Oct 10, 2016 / Cachaaaaaaaa - Oct 20, 2016
|Bird Migration to Another place - they manage to accurately travel connecting distant locations
2 - Hi, Naelendra :) Relocation is the accustomed weight bunch of ... It is better to pay more attention...
Writing Feedbacknaelendra - Oct 10, 2016 / Ilmi_03 - Oct 10, 2016
|The negative effect of illegal logging
3 - hello Saolo ... industry can cause the negative impact oftowards environment. The impact ofbut this situation is able...
Writing FeedbackMonkeyD_Saolo - Oct 10, 2016 / hailun11 - Oct 10, 2016
|The core solution on traffic and pollution are raising the gasoline prices
NEW - Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent...
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|A policy to raise the price of petrol to solve congestion and emission problems
2 - Alternatively, government can builtRAISE THE NUMBER OF public transportationTRANSPORTATIONS in which have lower ... ... the price of train...
Writing FeedbackFaridadwi18 - Oct 10, 2016 / Ucha MSN - Oct 10, 2016
|The stages to produce cement including the equipment needed and the composition of the cement
2 - Hi, I think you did a good job in describing the diagrams - here are some specific suggestions: ...
Writing Feedbackekalamarsyari11 - Oct 10, 2016 / TJLuschen - Oct 10, 2016
|Birds fly hundreds and thousands of kilometers to find the best conditions and habitats
3 - Hello, Asma :) Migration is a usual mobility (need an article) of animals, especially birds, and ... ...
Writing FeedbackAsma Raj - Oct 10, 2016 / Ilmi_03 - Oct 10, 2016
|Cutting Edge Observation: Migration of Bird
2 - hi @WasishaSisha i have little bit suggestion to make better your essay. is it ok right ? This...
Writing FeedbackWasishaSisha - Oct 10, 2016 / MonkeyD_Saolo - Oct 10, 2016
|Mott Hall Bridges Academy opened in 2012 that have simple target: open a school to close a prison
5 - Hello mathew, i will give you suggestion: 1. Be care full tense using, please make it clear Mott...
Writing FeedbackMathew8 - Oct 10, 2016 / ReskiRamadani88 - Oct 28, 2016
|The immense phenomena regarding migration of birds
2 - Hi, Afdhel :) The migrationno capitalization of birds has attracted attention ... The migratory bird's pattern is...
Writing FeedbackAfdhel - Oct 10, 2016 / Ilmi_03 - Oct 10, 2016
|TED Reviews: The simple Cure for Loneliness by Baya Voce
4 - Hello Yonathan :) Baya said once that loneliness is (...) feel disconnected,(full stop).L oneliness is a public health...
Writing FeedbackYonathan - Oct 10, 2016 / hirani03 - Oct 10, 2016
|Logging brings harm to the ecosystem. The damage causes habit loss, pollution and climate change.
4 - It brings harm effects to the ecosystem. The damage causes habitat loss, (...) change that hashave been spreadingspread from...
Writing Feedbackfauziyahtami - Oct 10, 2016 / Ilmi_03 - Oct 10, 2016
|Refinement of mass transports and high tax regulation to solve the congestion and environment damage
2 - Hi ekalamarsyari11, I want to give some suggestions Some governments perceive that the best ... ... should...
Writing Feedbackekalamarsyari11 - Oct 10, 2016 / Afdhel - Oct 10, 2016
|Environmental Impacts of Logging; most industries use crates and paper bags as their shipping
2 - night @elasyari93. Nowadays, i intend to give a couple correction. is it nevermind right ? ... the logging...
Writing Feedbackelasyari93 - Oct 10, 2016 / MonkeyD_Saolo - Oct 10, 2016
|Rainforests are a vital natural supply with widespread biodiversity and inimitable. Logging danger.
5 - Paper product made from plant, material product prepare by logging industry send by shipping to Logging manufacturer send by...
Writing Feedbacknaelendra - Oct 10, 2016 / ekalamarsyari11 - Oct 10, 2016
|Devastating Consequences of Logging
3 - Hai asma it is a great essay I have several suggestions for you hope it helps Logging industry...
Writing FeedbackWasishaSisha - Oct 10, 2016 / ryan31 - Oct 10, 2016
|Logging actions also interplay on both water and land ecosystem like nutrients, water, and shelter
2 - Hi, I don't have access to the original article, but your paraphrase sounds pretty good. Here are some...
Writing FeedbackUcha MSN - Oct 10, 2016 / TJLuschen - Oct 10, 2016
|THERE ARE ADVANTAGES AND DISADVANTAGES TO BECOMING AN INHABITANT OF A MODERN CITY
3 - Here are a little correction for your writing, hope this helps. I am a beginning learner of English...
Writing FeedbackNam Sang - Oct 10, 2016 / ashelarisa48 - Oct 10, 2016
|BIRD MIGRATION TO BREED DURING THE WARM SEASON
5 - gold halo I want to give some advice on your writing ... conditions important for species to poliferate...
Writing Feedbackgldvn - Oct 10, 2016 / naelendra - Oct 10, 2016
|How Much Water should you drink a day? Your Throat will Tell You
3 - Hi Yonathan ! According to a study conducted by Michael Farrell and his team atin Monash (...), our...
Writing FeedbackYonathan - Oct 10, 2016 / dinartika19 - Oct 10, 2016
|Summary: The logging industry stocks the incomplete materials products
3 - hii.. Unfortunately, the feeling of trees isare not without the environmental damage. Directly,while The harm (it need noun)...
Writing FeedbackAfdhel - Oct 10, 2016 / Fadhilahumar91 - Oct 10, 2016
|Young people have to move to cities to get a good job.
4 - You should give an example at least once for each paragraph. Spend more time on reading. Keep writting!...
Writing Feedbackrecycle0509 - Oct 10, 2016 / clone0509 - Oct 12, 2016
|The logging industry provides a huge number of raw materials for producing many useful products
3 - Hello Asma, you have a good summary there! Several things that I like the most are how you put...
Writing FeedbackAsma Raj - Oct 10, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Oct 10, 2016
|Rural life and modern life. What is better ?
3 - Hello Qtraam, I would like to give some corrections to you essay. 1. These sentences: "So, which is...
Writing FeedbackQtraam - Oct 10, 2016 / Asma Raj - Oct 10, 2016
|The importance of balancing our income and expense. Money Management.
5 - Hi Killua Let me give you some correction ... numerous bills, all of these showshowed the increasing importance...
Writing FeedbackKillua - Oct 10, 2016 / Yonathan - Oct 10, 2016
|Bird Migration - Animals normally move to a land to breeding
3 - Helo Fauziah, I want to gige some suggestions Birds travel to higher traverse ... (Birds travel to higher...
Writing Feedbackfauziyahtami - Oct 10, 2016 / Afdhel - Oct 10, 2016
|Each species respond to develop and spread out into an ecological niche. Bird Migration
2 - aloha, here are my thoughts; - Several kindkinds(several+plural noun) of animals do migration, ... -a Bird migration (...)...
Writing Feedbacksasariri - Oct 10, 2016 / ibe13 - Oct 10, 2016
|Plenty of trees are cutted. Paraphrase from "Environmental Impacts from Logging"
NEW - Logging has serious damage to natural environment such as habitat loss, pollution and climate. However, the cutting down trees...
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|Haitians Worship Among Devastation Caused by Hurricane Matthew
2 - According to current official reports , approximately 522 inhabitants died due to this tragedy; moreover, it is, not included...
Writing FeedbackAris05 - Oct 10, 2016 / angga93 - Oct 10, 2016
|Nowadays, people like living in big and developed cities.
3 - Hi Snowrussia Let me give you some correction ... and disadvantages to having livinglive in small communities. ...
Writing Feedbacksnowrussia95 - Oct 10, 2016 / Yonathan - Oct 10, 2016
|Let's All Obsess Over This Intricate Map of Alt Music History
3 - The history of band music performance started to ... The history of band music performance dates back to 4...
Writing FeedbackPHA2016 - Oct 10, 2016 / angga93 - Oct 10, 2016
|There are many industries that have to cut down the trees to fulfill their materials
3 - Hi Goldvina.. Your writing is increadible. Let me give you some advice... Trees are become a home for...
Writing Feedbackgldvn - Oct 10, 2016 / sasariri - Oct 10, 2016
|Let is simplify legal jargon By Alan Siegel
2 - Hi, pha. Here are my thoughts ... talked that today government was complexity responsible has complex responsibility which...
Writing FeedbackPHA2016 - Oct 10, 2016 / Aris05 - Oct 10, 2016
|IDEAS WORTH DATING, ideas which will be matched with character,
3 - Helo rosa, hope you doing well well, you've done graet (great), yet lemme give you some suggestion ==>...
Writing Feedbackrosadesiana - Oct 10, 2016 / fauziyahtami - Oct 10, 2016
|AN ARTIST'S UNFLICHING LOOK AT RACIAL VIOLENCE
3 - hi i enjoy reading your essay.keep spirit In 2005, one of the black race arts's created six (...),...
Writing FeedbackBams17 - Oct 10, 2016 / ondemande20 - Oct 10, 2016
|People use their voice to tell others what they want to hear, instead of what they need
3 - Nowadays, most of people use their voice to telling people the things they wanted to hear instead of the...
Writing Feedbackfauzankrn - Oct 10, 2016 / angga93 - Oct 10, 2016
|A sister is worth a thousand friendships- Comparison/ Contrast essay
2 - Hi,leldredge,nice to see your essay.Here are some corrections for you,hope these may help you. Everyone has heard the...
Writing Feedbackleldredge - Oct 9, 2016 / Killua - Oct 10, 2016
|Selection (out of 5) for Summative Essay (1)
Writing FeedbackJustin13601 - Oct 9, 2016 / elonbrahm - Oct 10, 2016
|Housing and economic. Summarise the information and make comparisons where relevant
3 - Thank you for your corrections!Actually I couldn't find many relation between the two charts so I had to write...
Writing FeedbackKillua - Oct 9, 2016 / Killua - Oct 10, 2016
|People nowadays spend much more time, than they should, using text messages and new technology
2 - ... it stimulates people to contact with each other more . However, some others may take an opposite ......
Writing Feedbackmarzbanm - Oct 9, 2016 / Ifan21 - Oct 10, 2016
|The online shopping sales for retail sectors in New Zealand's market, in 2003 and 2013; Task 1
Writing Feedbacksasariri - Oct 9, 2016 / ryan31 - Oct 9, 2016
|'4 reasons to learn a new language' by John McWhorter - Summary of TED
2 - Hi Ifan.. these are my thoughts for summary grammatically. Check it out "English WHICH is taking over" is...
Writing FeedbackIfan21 - Oct 9, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Oct 9, 2016
|TOEFL independent writing: People now can better protect the environment than they could in the past
3 - Thank you so much! The unidiomatic sentences like "intenser sense of protecting the environment" are my headaches, I can't...
Writing Feedbackthinkhowxh - Oct 8, 2016 / thinkhowxh - Oct 12, 2016
|Some parents order their children to work hard for their physical and mental improvement
Writing FeedbackTimur_Ergashev - Oct 8, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 9, 2016
|Before I lived in Canada, I was born in South Korea. Past choices and your life.
Writing Feedbackblizzard49 - Oct 8, 2016 / ryan31 - Oct 9, 2016
|'American dream' Writing a Synthesized Essay, tips, help, guidance or advice?
3 - Hi Danny, first of all, I believe you have understood what is asked of the prompt and the hindrance...
Writing FeedbackNiuWang - Oct 8, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 9, 2016
|Bringing enjoyment. Movies take us to the world of imagination.
4 - By providing the context when language is used, movies support us so that we can study the language faster...
Writing Feedbackwaterforce1205 - Oct 8, 2016 / Huynh Anh - Oct 12, 2016
|Why are group study sessions more helpful and efficient than studying alone?
6 - Rick, it sounds to me like you were supposed to write a comparison essay based upon the title that...
Writing FeedbackActivelung - Oct 8, 2016 / Holt - Oct 17, 2016
|A number of large cities with skyscrapers and shopping centres replacing small villages
2 - Hi.. Let me help you to finalize your essay. In this moment, I only focus on your contents of...
Writing Feedbacknguyeneze7496 - Oct 8, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Oct 9, 2016
|People from small villages or remote areas are trying to seek a way to live and work in large cities
2 - BesidesAfter all , there are many advantages ... ... chances for them to contact withapproach the global knowledge...
Writing FeedbackHuynh Anh - Oct 7, 2016 / waterforce1205 - Oct 8, 2016
|Writting TASK II The criminality is one of the crucial problems faced by people recently
Writing Feedbackarisandy14 - Oct 7, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 9, 2016
|Daniel Levitin tells how to figure out a problem before it happens or how to minimise the damage
3 - Ho Yonathan Here some suggestions for your writing and he shared his experience when he cannot could not...
Writing FeedbackYonathan - Oct 7, 2016 / Cachaaaaaaaa - Oct 20, 2016
|TED Summary - Rory Steart: Time to end the war in Afghanistan
2 - The war in Afghanistan has been existing for decades. However, Afghanistan does not to pose and existential threat to...
Writing FeedbackAbrahamlincoln - Oct 7, 2016 / RAY93 - Oct 8, 2016
|People have different views about the decision-making to sentence the crime action nowadays
2 - ... to sentence the crime action PERPETRATORS nowadays. .., I believe that adjudication ADJUDICATORS have to...
Writing Feedbackfauzankrn - Oct 7, 2016 / RAY93 - Oct 8, 2016
|The punishment depends from different circumstances and motivations of the crime
2 - at first, it is evident that you need to practice and learn more on how to compose a well-structured...
Writing FeedbackPHA2016 - Oct 7, 2016 / RAY93 - Oct 8, 2016
|Essay about issue of the crime punishment - evaluation of the guilt
2 - overall, it is evidence that you already have a good pattern on composing essay while write your sentences with...
Writing FeedbackAris05 - Oct 7, 2016 / RAY93 - Oct 8, 2016
|Earliest grade students are required to learn foreign language
Writing FeedbackUcha MSN - Oct 7, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 7, 2016
|IELTS Summary Task U.S. Hasn't Gone This Long Without a Big Hurricane in 150 Years
3 - Hi Dioba, here's another one from my end. - NowadaysToday , Hurricane Matthew slams - into Haiti and...
Writing FeedbackDioba - Oct 7, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 7, 2016
|The punishment should be fixed without considering the background of the criminal crime
2 - Hi Bambang, please find additional help below; - Several humanspeople think of - that crimes must have punishment...
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