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|A Fuel Tanker Fire in Mexico's Gulf Coast
5 - capitalization issue, it is a name of a company. successfully andwhiletheythose [refer to firefighting boats, not firefighters...
Writing FeedbackAris05 - Sep 26, 2016 / RAY93 - Sep 26, 2016
|Going to Mars Could Mess Up the Hunt for Alien Life
3 - America made a great celebration of its independence day by properly landing thousand rovers on the surface of...
Writing Feedbackmdamanhuri77 - Sep 26, 2016 / RAY93 - Sep 26, 2016
|An Article Summary: William, Kate, George, and Charlotte Arrive in Canada for the Royal Tour
3 - Hi Ali, below are my thoughts on your summary essay. 2nd paragraph - The whole family members appeared...
Writing FeedbackFitri12 - Sep 26, 2016 / justivy03 - Sep 26, 2016
|Overall, there are four kind of meat noted in the graph: Beef, Pork, Broilers, and Turkeys.
2 - The graph presents information about you need verb meat and poultry consumption in US( at introduction you should be...
Writing FeedbackYonathan - Sep 26, 2016 / BAMS14 - Sep 26, 2016
|Try a lot of different things in a month by Mutt Cutts
Writing FeedbackPHA2016 - Sep 26, 2016 / rosadesiana - Sep 26, 2016
|Summary : Jack Ma can't solve Indonesia's e commerce dilemma
2 - Ryan, welcome to the big family of EssayForum, a place where you can ask for writing help. You can...
Writing Feedbackcat10 - Sep 26, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Sep 26, 2016
|Resume : Janet Iwasa: How animations can help scientists test a hypothesis
3 - Scientists usually use a small objects[singular/plural issue] as objects of research andwhich must be seen directly, sometimes it difficult...
Writing Feedbackzero01 - Sep 26, 2016 / RAY93 - Sep 26, 2016
|Summary of article Blind people use brain's visual cortex to help do maths ( Colin Barras)
3 - Hello Ifan i have advice to you about your spelling simple mental arithmatic orservation .... observation inside...
Writing FeedbackIfan21 - Sep 26, 2016 / Alamsyah Ismail - Sep 26, 2016
|The only way for women to show their qualities is by getting involved in economy and politics
2 - it is evidence that you have a passable writing skill proved by you well-structured sentence and paragraph. you, somehow,...
Writing FeedbackFitri12 - Sep 26, 2016 / RAY93 - Sep 26, 2016
|The Rewards of Taking Risks: Facing my Fear of Public Speaking
2 - ..., the bullying escalated in middle school to the point where I ... -I think you should remove the...
Writing Feedbackleo nma - Sep 26, 2016 / akn_24 - Sep 26, 2016
|TED SUMMARY: The Courage To Tell A Hidden Story by Erman Mohammed
Writing FeedbackIedha01 - Sep 26, 2016 / RAY93 - Sep 26, 2016
|IELTS Task 2 - surveillance technologies provide individual tracking information
2 - Since early 21 century surveillance ... Governments in this case aim [...] those undercover observation .Its an opinion discussion...
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|The proportion of e-commerce in four retail trade in New Zealand between 2003 and 2013
2 - Hi @llmi_03 Your essay is good. However, I noticed some errors as I read your composition. Similarly...
Writing FeedbackIlmi_03 - Sep 25, 2016 / wew018 - Sep 26, 2016
|The Survey of Electronic Commerce in Four Main Parts In New Zealand During a Decade
Writing Feedbackhirani03 - Sep 25, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Sep 26, 2016
|TED Summary Task: A new way to grow bone
3 - Molly Steven is a head of a biomaterialsbio materials lab and she is one who really fascinated about material...
Writing FeedbackDioba - Sep 25, 2016 / ekalamarsyari11 - Sep 25, 2016
|CCTV Cameras Are Being Used To Monitor People Activity - Writing Task 2
2 - Hi Faridadwi Let me give you some advice... In several cases, inhabitants(citizen) who are monitored do ... ......
Writing FeedbackFaridadwi18 - Sep 25, 2016 / Yonathan - Sep 26, 2016
|Significant ramifications to secure human activity by utilizing closed-circuit television (CCTV)
NEW - Nowadays technology is increasingly being used to monitor what people are saying and doing (for example, though cellphone tracking...
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|TED Summary Lighting Up Indonesia's Future
2 - ... Minister of Education which is aim to developing develop our education in Indonesia. The backgrounds of this program...
Writing FeedbackDioba - Sep 25, 2016 / Iforsa - Sep 25, 2016
|Online sales in retail sector between 2003 and 2013
4 - The pie chart presents IMPARTING KNOWLEDGE about the percentage of ... ... was followed by clothes as the...
Writing FeedbackFadhilahumar91 - Sep 25, 2016 / Ucha MSN - Sep 27, 2016
|There is no doubt that everybody wants to be a famous person. Not everything is so great though.
Writing FeedbackMayank7g - Sep 25, 2016 / Iedha01 - Sep 26, 2016
|Two major factors that influence happiness among young people: achievement at work and doing hobbies
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|Cellphone tracking and security cameras - modern technology spy on people
Writing FeedbackFadhilahumar91 - Sep 25, 2016 / Iedha01 - Sep 26, 2016
|Summary TED: Your Body is My Canvas
Writing FeedbackAlamsyah Ismail - Sep 25, 2016 / Aris05 - Sep 26, 2016
|Professional sport plays a huge role in the USA. Persuasive Finals Essay (Professional Athletes)
2 - Hi, I have a few suggestions for you: -The introduction sounds a little repetitive (For two of these sports,...
Writing Feedbackjmike710 - Sep 25, 2016 / amyg4140 - Sep 25, 2016
|Using Security Cameras in the Supermarket
Writing Feedbackashelarisa48 - Sep 23, 2016 / justivy03 - Sep 24, 2016
|Identify your greatest interest, find career that match what you love, and pursue it no matter what
Writing Feedbackryan31 - Sep 23, 2016 / justivy03 - Sep 24, 2016
|Bill Gates and his presentation in Long beach California
3 - Hi Patta, at a glance, I noticed the spelling of the month of "Februari",at the end of the essay,...
Writing FeedbackPHA2016 - Sep 23, 2016 / justivy03 - Sep 23, 2016
|TEDX Finding work you love dont Follow your passion
Writing FeedbackBAMS14 - Sep 23, 2016 / Faridadwi18 - Sep 25, 2016
|Being social makes us happier, healthier and we live longer than people who are less connected.
3 - Hi Patta, the summary essay is missing a few punctuations marks (e.g., comma) as well as linking verbs in...
Writing FeedbackPHA2016 - Sep 23, 2016 / justivy03 - Sep 23, 2016
|The advertising of certain food products should be banned
Writing Feedbackhoangduc241096 - Sep 23, 2016 / justivy03 - Sep 27, 2016
|Want to sound like a leader - start by saying your name right - Laura Sicola | 7 Band Candidate
2 - Hi @fatirtalent I have seen some common errors in your composition. Also, I explained everything what makes it...
Writing FeedbackFatirtalent - Sep 23, 2016 / wew018 - Sep 23, 2016
|Why we need introvert leader - Angela Hucles EILTS Summary Exercise to gain 7 Band
2 - alfatir, I can tell that you gain improvement in this time, particularly the flow of your ideas. Keep learning...
Writing FeedbackFatirtalent - Sep 23, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Sep 23, 2016
|Brave to disagree - Margaret Heffernan
2 - Hi @fatirtalent I have here some corrections that I noticed in your composition. It also has explanation why...
Writing FeedbackFatirtalent - Sep 22, 2016 / wew018 - Sep 23, 2016
|Summary TED Willie Smits: Samboja Lestari
4 - Hi MJT,after reading your summary, i have some suggestions, perhaps usefull for you 1."Samboja Lestari, East Borneo, one of...
Writing FeedbackMJT - Sep 22, 2016 / Dioba - Sep 25, 2016
|A national issue that concerns me is the media's contribution to the rise of eating disorders
2 - Hi @jmaga1997 Your essay is good. In my opinion, it will be better to make your 2nd paragraph...
Writing Feedbackjmaga1997 - Sep 22, 2016 / wew018 - Sep 23, 2016
|Writing task 2 - in some countries, secondary schools aim to
3 - Hi Rosa. See u again. In this moment, I will review contents of your writing. Let me help you....
Writing Feedbackrosadesiana - Sep 22, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Sep 23, 2016
|Summary of TED Old books reborn as art (Brian Dettmer)
4 - Hi Ifan. Here are my few suggestions to finalize your summary. An obsolate OBSOLETE book could be...
Writing FeedbackIfan21 - Sep 22, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Sep 23, 2016
|An Assistance Request from More Capable Essay Writers - the impact of social media on society
2 - Hi please find comments, Start like this. In recent years, popularity of social media has been increased. ...
Writing FeedbackCartie - Sep 22, 2016 / Mayank7g - Sep 22, 2016
|Writing IELTS Task 1 : How to process the cocoa and how much its costs
Writing Feedbackashelarisa48 - Sep 22, 2016 / Windvalley - Sep 23, 2016
|Summary Article: Indonesia can apply 'clean' coal technology to reduce emissions
2 - It gives some advantagesbenefits for our country to improve... ... than the other technologies in terms offor the sake...
Writing Feedbackibal28 - Sep 22, 2016 / Wilson_Chen - Sep 22, 2016
|Summary Folktayes from Dutch : The cat and the cradle
4 - Hello Firman, ... which tells about a culture in the acientancient era and people ... This is...
Writing FeedbackFirmanRomadhon20 - Sep 22, 2016 / PHA2016 - Sep 23, 2016
|Help me to improve my writing. EILTS 6_Nurse Migration
3 - The Nursing shortage has been a serious problem not only for certain countries but also in the entire world....
Writing FeedbackFatirtalent - Sep 22, 2016 / ashelarisa48 - Sep 22, 2016
|TED Summary; Everything You Think You Know About Addiction Is Wrong - Johann Hari
2 - Hi very good essay just couple of points We always punish=>We always punish wrongdoers instead of judging them severely.=>...
Writing Feedbackrizaldohabibie - Sep 22, 2016 / sinahector - Sep 22, 2016
|TED Summary: HOW TO GROW A FOREST IN YOUR BACKYARD
Writing FeedbackAbu_Gosok - Sep 22, 2016 / PHA2016 - Oct 11, 2016
|The world will become a very scary place if we lose our listening skills
5 - Hi Dioba. I left a few of suggestions. Here they are.. In general, almostmost people (you can use...
Writing FeedbackDioba - Sep 22, 2016 / ibal28 - Sep 22, 2016
|Folklore: Yukki Onna The Snow Woman
3 - hi. your essay is good. I have some suggestions for you. There are[were] two hunters They were hunting...
Writing FeedbackPanjul88 - Sep 22, 2016 / rizaldohabibie - Sep 22, 2016
|TED Summary: How Social Media Makes Us Unsocial by Allison Graham
2 - Hi very good essay just some points the answer probably is only 2 Where do they go=> (maybe) what...
Writing FeedbackFitri12 - Sep 22, 2016 / sinahector - Sep 22, 2016
|In Philippines, many nurses usually choose to look for a job overseas, than stay in their country
Writing FeedbackAlamsyah Ismail - Sep 22, 2016 / Fatirtalent - Sep 22, 2016
|Summary: Being on Facebook Can Actually Make Us Happier
3 - ... social media which can be found installed in every smartphone or computer. In spite of that, some...
Writing Feedbackibe13 - Sep 22, 2016 / ashelarisa48 - Sep 22, 2016
|Summary: Network theory - TED ED - Marc Samet
Writing Feedbackibe13 - Sep 22, 2016 / Sammy Todd - Sep 23, 2016
|The shortage of nurses largely affects the health care system around the world
3 - Hi dils, after reading your summary, i have some suggestions, perhaps usefull for you. 1.Thus , this migration actually...
Writing Feedbackdils - Sep 22, 2016 / Dioba - Sep 25, 2016
|Prosanta Chakrabarty told, that his passion in life is looking at some hidden wonders of life
3 - Hello @Iedha01 could i give little bit suggestion to you here we go 1. "These cave fishes has...
Writing FeedbackIedha01 - Sep 22, 2016 / cinta_dollar51 - Sep 22, 2016
|To become a good citizen or benefit students as individuals
4 - Hello You have a good summary I have some corrections . It is more significant (...) individuals, ....
Writing Feedbackkwang997 - Sep 22, 2016 / andika08 - Sep 26, 2016
|Brain has carrot and stick to teach us how to behave
3 - Hello Jawa, This is some suggestions for you : ... which ensures us do something (it needs adding...
Writing FeedbackJawa - Sep 22, 2016 / FirmanRomadhon20 - Sep 22, 2016
|TED Summary Jamie Oliver Talk About Obesity and Food
3 - ... United States will die because of what they eat every day. In America, the biggest death factor is...
Writing FeedbackYonathan - Sep 22, 2016 / mdamanhuri77 - Sep 27, 2016
|There are many nurses migrating to developed nations in favour of well-paid vacancies.
2 - Hi Rizaldo Let me give you some advice... ... nations in favour of well-paid vacancies(salaries) . ... health...
Writing Feedbackrizaldohabibie - Sep 22, 2016 / Yonathan - Sep 22, 2016
|Today, the health care system world is threatened by nurse migration
5 - Hey Dioba.. It is such a great essay . These following correction are subjected to your essay : ...
Writing FeedbackDioba - Sep 22, 2016 / Ifan21 - Sep 26, 2016
|TED_Video: How to Be a Good Mentor
4 - Hiii ,. here my suggestion for your text. .....set expectations together in the very beginning.... = Redundant (If...
Writing Feedbackhanachi - Sep 22, 2016 / Abu_Gosok - Sep 22, 2016
|TED Summary Why I Read a Book a Day? By Tai Lopez
3 - Hi Yonathan, it's my pleasure to share. the followings are my humble opinions. - I'm sorry to say...
Writing FeedbackYonathan - Sep 22, 2016 / Fitri12 - Sep 22, 2016
|The nursing shortage is still a problem in both developing and developed countries
3 - Hi Yonathan,after reading your summary, i have some suggestions, perhaps usefull for you 1."countries to get better salarysalaries and...
Writing FeedbackYonathan - Sep 22, 2016 / Dioba - Sep 22, 2016
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