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|WRITING TASK 2 : HOW TO KEEP FIT IN MODERN ERA
2 - Most people believe THAT lives LIVE in the modern (...) technology makes CAN MAKE THE society complicated BE COMPLICATED...
Writing Feedbackryan31 - Sep 27, 2016 / Ucha MSN - Sep 28, 2016
|Writing task 2 _ Some people think having healthy lifestyle is difficult while others think it is ea
6 - Hallo Hajjatul These following correction are suggested for your writing : ... become a a trend IN SOCIETY...
Writing FeedbackHujjatul19 - Sep 27, 2016 / Ifan21 - Sep 28, 2016
|Be the professional photograph by using smarthphone
4 - Hello Giansy, your writing is excellent, however, I suggest some suitable words which can be used to produce well...
Writing FeedbackGiansy11 - Sep 27, 2016 / Anaguna - Sep 27, 2016
|Two billion people, at least in America, India and Southern East Asia, learn English worldwide
4 - Hi Andika, as I go through your essay, I believe there's something wrong with how you understood the TED...
Writing Feedbackandika08 - Sep 27, 2016 / justivy03 - Sep 27, 2016
|In modern era, there are many ways to keep body healthy. It depend on the people
Writing Feedbackandika08 - Sep 27, 2016 / Hujjatul19 - Sep 27, 2016
|Summary of TED The secret, social lives of bacteria (Bonnie Bassler)
4 - The microscopic organism on the earth ,contain ... => The microscopic organism on the earth that contains only few...
Writing FeedbackIfan21 - Sep 27, 2016 / ekalamarsyari11 - Sep 27, 2016
|What can be done to encourage people to use bicycles as their main form of transport?
Writing FeedbackGiansy11 - Sep 27, 2016 / Yonathan - Sep 28, 2016
|Summary Article: Staying up late, the healthy way
2 - Hello You have a good summary I have some corrections The night activity such as which are study...
Writing Feedbackibal28 - Sep 27, 2016 / andika08 - Sep 27, 2016
|Summary article_Happy People Make Their Spouses Healthier
3 - Hi David, it's my pleasure to share. Your writing is pretty good,since I found only slightly mistakes. Currently,...
Writing FeedbackDavid54 - Sep 27, 2016 / Fitri12 - Sep 28, 2016
|The Number of Computer Science Students from Native and International Student at a UK University
Writing FeedbackSari Trisna - Sep 27, 2016 / andika_soppeng - Sep 29, 2016
|THE NUMBER OF FOREIGN STUDENTS HAD INCREASED SIGNIFICANTLY AND IT HAD BEEN DOMINATED BY MALE.
4 - Hi Fauziyah. Let me help you to finalize your writing. Please, meet my note and deal with them. ...
Writing Feedbackfauziyahtami - Sep 27, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Sep 27, 2016
|Summary --- Bill Gates: Teachers need real help, need a coach.
Writing Feedbackkiroro - Sep 27, 2016 / Iedha01 - Sep 28, 2016
|Home and International Students who Studying Computer Science in UK, 2010-2012
3 - Hi Ucha MSN Let me give you some advice.. .... However, it was increased steadily to 43 ... ......
Writing FeedbackUcha MSN - Sep 27, 2016 / Sari Trisna - Sep 27, 2016
|The advancement of machines cannot solve novel situations which can merely be conducted by people
Writing Feedbackzul2805_es - Sep 27, 2016 / ibal28 - Sep 28, 2016
|Think about something you want to add and try in the next 30 days
5 - Hi Kiev, hopefully the followings input will help TED Summary - Try something new for 30 days by...
Writing Feedbackkiev - Sep 27, 2016 / Fitri12 - Oct 1, 2016
|Article Summary: Women's Running Magazine Featured A Woman In A Hijab On The Cover
3 - At the first time, in the history of fitness She has several uniques experiences ... that she areis...
Writing FeedbackIedha01 - Sep 27, 2016 / bismillah - Sep 27, 2016
|(IELTS ES) Summary the one of National Geoghaphic's article
Writing Feedbackrasedasda24 - Sep 27, 2016 / justivy03 - Sep 27, 2016
|The development of technology, traditional skills die out, but it is pointless to keep is alive.
NEW - Technology is an important factor that affects all countries around the world in many ways, it seems that the...
Writing FeedbackHarris Lee - Sep 27, 2016 / — -
|About thirty per cent of travellers each year choose learning programs to be their holiday purposes.
2 - Hi Rizaldo.. Actually, your summary is a good job. However, let me finalize this. ... common for all...
Writing Feedbackrizaldohabibie - Sep 27, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Sep 27, 2016
|On learning vacations the travelers may enjoy their time off by learning something new
3 - Hii Alam Baka.. i have no doubt that you are great in writing, but lemme give you some corrections.....
Writing FeedbackAlamsyah Ismail - Sep 27, 2016 / Giansy11 - Sep 27, 2016
|TED summary: Steve Howard; Let's go all-in on selling sustainability
3 - Hii rizaldohabibie.. Here I give you some comments. Hope it can helps you. We are now building cities('we...
Writing Feedbackrizaldohabibie - Sep 27, 2016 / ibal28 - Sep 27, 2016
|People have the stereotype that introverts are solitary and unsociable.
Writing FeedbackFatirtalent - Sep 27, 2016 / eve01 - Sep 27, 2016
|Shawn Anchor believes that our brain views can shapes our reality.
Writing FeedbackDioba - Sep 27, 2016 / Holt - Nov 21, 2016
|IELTS SUMMARY MONTH IS LEARNING VACATION
6 - Hai Bismillah You've done well, but there are several inputs for you. ... which is many people wants,such...
Writing Feedbackbismillah - Sep 27, 2016 / rasedasda24 - Sep 27, 2016
|IELTS SUMMARY TED MONTH IS NEW POWER - it is like currency
2 - Dear Salam You've done well. but there are several inputs. 1. The interested interesting of new power is...
Writing Feedbackbismillah - Sep 27, 2016 / Fatirtalent - Sep 27, 2016
|Summary TED: Let's design social media that drives real change
3 - Hi @ MFES2016 Your essay is good. I can see the idea immediately. The information is well presented...
Writing FeedbackMFES2016 - Sep 27, 2016 / wew018 - Sep 27, 2016
|Summary of Article - David Letterman Tackles Climate Change
2 - hi.. i have some comments for you.. David Letterman is well-known as Comedian, spread[spreading] happiness and laughter. After...
Writing FeedbackFatirtalent - Sep 27, 2016 / rizaldohabibie - Sep 27, 2016
|IELTS Writing Task 1 Summary TED: A project of peace painted across 50 buildings
3 - Hi Alamsyah, it's my pleasure to share. Here is my feedback. How to construct a city where had...
Writing FeedbackAlamsyah Ismail - Sep 27, 2016 / Fitri12 - Sep 27, 2016
|Three exported products (graph) such as meat products, dairy products, and international tourism
2 - Hi let me give you some grammar corrections and my suggestions: The given bar chart informs the comparisons aboutcompares...
Writing FeedbackFatirtalent - Sep 27, 2016 / mualla - Dec 15, 2016
|TED Summary : Let's Teach for Mastery by Sal Khan
11 - Salman Khan criticizescriticized the traditional academic model when the teacher givesgave many homework to students(full stop .)and teacher judgejudged...
Writing FeedbackYonathan - Sep 27, 2016 / hirani03 - Oct 10, 2016
|Animals Starving in Venezuela Zoos
2 - Dear Aris You've done well, i adore the way of your writing. But, there are several inputs for me....
Writing FeedbackAris05 - Sep 27, 2016 / Fatirtalent - Sep 27, 2016
|The history of England Conquest
3 - Hi Pha, the followings are my humble comments In the 11th century, England had responsible twice invasions which...
Writing FeedbackPHA2016 - Sep 27, 2016 / Fitri12 - Sep 27, 2016
|Almost one-third of travelers each year prefer learning program more than other types of vacations
2 - In recent years, surveys shows almost one-third of travelers each year more prefer choose( redoundand) learning program more ......
Writing FeedbackDioba - Sep 27, 2016 / BAMS14 - Sep 27, 2016
|What happens within a procrastinator's brain and a rational decision maker's brain
4 - extremely complex and complicated to force it becomes only a sentence you may write: A write blogger who...
Writing Feedbackrosadesiana - Sep 27, 2016 / RAY93 - Sep 27, 2016
|Youngest female airline captain' - 26-year-old Kate McWilliams
2 - hi friend i have some suggestion for making essay to be better in reading she never thought before...
Writing FeedbackUcha MSN - Sep 27, 2016 / bismillah - Sep 27, 2016
|Rebecca MacKinnon: We can fight terror without sacrificing our rights
2 - there are still some similarities between your work and the source vocabulary that mean you still need to show...
Writing Feedbackmdamanhuri77 - Sep 27, 2016 / RAY93 - Sep 27, 2016
|A record audience is expected to watch tonight's presidential debate
3 - this is your sentence. on the article it is written: SOME 100m people are expected to tune in...
Writing Feedbackmdamanhuri77 - Sep 27, 2016 / RAY93 - Sep 27, 2016
|Make People Listen To Our Speak
2 - Hi Ucha Let me give you some advice Most of people always speak without havingmeaningfulness(meaningless) and powerfulness(powerless) ....
Writing FeedbackUcha MSN - Sep 27, 2016 / Yonathan - Sep 27, 2016
|In this topic, the speaker talks about the idea of mastery and mind
Writing FeedbackAris05 - Sep 27, 2016 / wew018 - Sep 27, 2016
|The hidden light of Afghanistan (TED Summary)
4 - Helllo my frined I will try to give you some comments Afghanistan people were suffering from Taliban tribe...
Writing Feedbackfauzankrn - Sep 27, 2016 / Abrahamlincoln - Oct 4, 2016
|The best speaker must be able to present HAIL - honestly, authenticity, integrity, love
2 - instead of wrote those as two simple sentences, you may enhance your work by writing: speaking is vital...
Writing FeedbackBAMS14 - Sep 27, 2016 / RAY93 - Sep 27, 2016
|In our daily life, we often meet strangers or our neighbors in the street and we just greet them
Writing FeedbackSari Trisna - Sep 27, 2016 / Cachaaaaaaaa - Sep 27, 2016
|How to make work-life balance work by Nigel Marsh
2 - Nigel Marsh lays out [explained/highlighted/pointed out/came up with an idea about/described/spoke, etc. use past tense since it just a...
Writing FeedbackPHA2016 - Sep 27, 2016 / RAY93 - Sep 27, 2016
|Summary News from BBC: Aid reaches Madaya and other besieged towns
2 - Hello Pizarro.. Welcome to Essay Forum. I am delighted to tell you that you have been the right medium...
Writing FeedbackAfdhel - Sep 27, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Sep 27, 2016
|Anthony Goldbloom's new perspective on what machines can and can't do
4 - you may more effectively write :......a company which operates the cutting edge learning machine and ....... This...
Writing FeedbackIedha01 - Sep 27, 2016 / RAY93 - Sep 27, 2016
|An Article Summary: Everything You've Heard about Alcohol being Good for You is a Lie By Elizabeth N
3 - from the structure or function, since you wrote 'as' in the beginning , you still need to add...
Writing FeedbackFitri12 - Sep 27, 2016 / RAY93 - Sep 27, 2016
|Someland's main exports in 2005, 2015 and predictions for 2025
2 - Hi @Yonathan Your essay is good. The information are well presented. Just consider some issues I have noticed...
Writing FeedbackYonathan - Sep 27, 2016 / wew018 - Sep 27, 2016
|The chart shows international tourism is the highest incomes
6 - hello dioba it is great writing, but I have several advices hope it can improve your writing skills ...
Writing FeedbackDioba - Sep 27, 2016 / ryan31 - Oct 1, 2016
|The number of export commodities and service from Someland in one decade
Writing Feedbackrizaldohabibie - Sep 27, 2016 / fauziyahtami - Sep 27, 2016
|In 2015 export of dairy products had dominated comparing to other products
2 - Halo, you have done great I will try to give some advice ... exports of Someland which devided...
Writing FeedbackAlamsyah Ismail - Sep 27, 2016 / fauziyahtami - Sep 27, 2016
|Bill Gates finding about effective method of teaching
3 - Mohammad, I am not sure about how to review your essay. That is because you failed to provide the...
Writing Feedbackmdamanhuri77 - Sep 27, 2016 / Holt - Jan 1, 2017
|Summary TED: Speak Up for Syrian People
6 - hi friend i have some suggestion to you they were there due to....... they believe...... we deserve the better...
Writing FeedbackAfdhel - Sep 27, 2016 / bismillah - Sep 27, 2016
|TED Summary: Changing the Face of Fashion By Mariah Idrissi
Writing FeedbackFitri12 - Sep 27, 2016 / RAY93 - Sep 28, 2016
|The New Power Of Collaboration -TED
3 - Hi there, As far I concern, there are some grammatical issues in your summary. I suggest you to vary...
Writing FeedbackGiansy11 - Sep 26, 2016 / Iedha01 - Sep 27, 2016
|Job interview just a piece of cake
2 - Hi Giansy here are my suggestions ==> the answers (response) they should give of the questions (along the...
Writing FeedbackGiansy11 - Sep 26, 2016 / rosadesiana - Sep 26, 2016
|Good News: The tech to change your grandma's life is already here (Summarizing)
3 - This daycurrently and age, either mine or grandma or all grandparents across ... ... from one place to another...
Writing Feedbackzul2805_es - Sep 26, 2016 / mdamanhuri77 - Sep 27, 2016
|The number of people, who want o leave Bulgaria according to their education rank around three years
Writing FeedbackGiansy11 - Sep 26, 2016 / rosadesiana - Sep 26, 2016
|Summary of TED How does cancer spread through the body ? (Ivan Seah Yu Jun )
4 - Cancer has become a common problem yet because thorny problem in ... The predominant qiestionquestion comes cancer distribution ......
Writing FeedbackIfan21 - Sep 26, 2016 / mdamanhuri77 - Sep 27, 2016
|Sports heroes in the field of badminton in Indonesia
3 - Hi Att, Sharing is fun, right!? The followings are my humble comments for u. Indonesian citizens cheered shortly...
Writing FeedbackAtt98 - Sep 26, 2016 / Fitri12 - Sep 27, 2016
|Comparing car theft - numbers of robbed vehicles in different countries
4 - Hi rizaldohabibie,after reading your summary, i have some suggestions, perhaps useful for you. 1.presents the information about car robbery...
Writing Feedbackrizaldohabibie - Sep 26, 2016 / Dioba - Sep 27, 2016
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