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|Article Summary - Russia and MH 17 Brought to BUK
3 - Hello, Abrahamlincoln! Your essay is good, but I would give you corrections 1. Australia, Belgium Malaysia and...
Writing FeedbackAbrahamlincoln - Oct 3, 2016 / erwiin1 - Oct 3, 2016
|An Eruption at Rinjani in Indonesia Traps Hundreds of Tourists (Article Summary)
2 - Hello You've done well. However, there are inputs for you. Barujari mount which is located in inside caldera...
Writing Feedbackfauzankrn - Oct 3, 2016 / Abrahamlincoln - Oct 3, 2016
|Success is a continuous journey (TED Summary)
4 - Many people think that success is just one straight way. This is can[DOUBLE VERBS] explain why dopeople reach success...
Writing Feedbackfauzankrn - Oct 3, 2016 / RAY93 - Oct 3, 2016
|Star basketball player endorses Hillary Clinton
3 - Cavalier stars basketball player STAR, James LeBron [NEED COMMA] has supported Hillary Clinton for TO BECOME THE...
Writing FeedbackPHA2016 - Oct 3, 2016 / RAY93 - Oct 4, 2016
|Writing Task 1: The Men and Women Attending Various Evening Courses at an adult education centre
2 - Hi Goldvina, Welcome to EssayForum :) The detailed descriptions below are my contributions towards your report summary of...
Writing Feedbackgoldieu - Oct 3, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Oct 3, 2016
|Whether or not someone achieves their aims is mostly by a question of luck.Do you agree?
2 - Hello, neikneu! Your essay is very good, but I would give you the corrections for your essay ...
Writing Feedbackneikneu - Oct 3, 2016 / erwiin1 - Oct 3, 2016
|TED Summary: A Rich Life with Less Stuff: The Minimalists
4 - Hi Fitri, Your summary is excellent. The topic is interesting and informative. However, I noticed some grammatical issues. -Luckily,...
Writing FeedbackFitri12 - Oct 3, 2016 / Iedha01 - Oct 3, 2016
|An Article Summary: Climate Change Could Destroy Wild Relatives of Cereals By 2070
Writing FeedbackFitri12 - Oct 3, 2016 / RAY93 - Oct 3, 2016
|"I HAVE A DREAM" IS STILL A DREAM! ARGUMENT ESSAY
2 - Hi, I really liked your essay, but your prescriptions seemed very vague. Exactly how do you propose drawing...
Writing Feedbackathra - Oct 2, 2016 / TJLuschen - Oct 2, 2016
|The pie chart gives explanation of land quality deterioration worldwide
2 - ... the table indicates the differences in causes of land degradation by in three regions: (...) which is are...
Writing Feedbackerwiin1 - Oct 2, 2016 / Abrahamlincoln - Oct 2, 2016
|Over-grazing was the most dominant aspect of worldwide land degradation. IELTS chart
6 - Hii, there is my advice for you: 1. The given chart presents the predominant causes why agriculture land...
Writing FeedbackAbrahamlincoln - Oct 2, 2016 / Gigih12 - Oct 31, 2016
|Sources of energy have been playing a vital role in economic development in industrialized countries
2 - hi friend i have some suggestions for you I strongly believe that this change is an inevitable trend....
Writing Feedbackbichduyen1901 - Oct 2, 2016 / bismillah - Oct 2, 2016
|IELTS SUMMARY MONTH IS COMPARING BETWEEN TABLE AND PIE CHART
5 - Hi Syukron, first of all, WELCOME to the Essay Forum Team, I hope you find this website to be...
Writing Feedbackbismillah - Oct 2, 2016 / justivy03 - Nov 1, 2016
|The today's world has three major sectors which created circumstances of land degradation
3 - Hai Alfa I have known the process of writing this post. However, you have to refer the explanation based...
Writing Feedbackalfa7 - Oct 2, 2016 / Abrahamlincoln - Oct 3, 2016
|Top Honeymoon Destinations - the information of eight popular places for new British couples
2 - Hi debby, what bar chart? You are suggested to upload picture/diagram/chart for IELTS task 1 practice. Do...
Writing Feedbackdebby17 - Oct 2, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Oct 2, 2016
|The preferred evening course that both males and females (various ages) have recently attended
2 - Hi Sari, The detailed descriptions below are my analysis towards your report summary of IELTS task 1. I...
Writing Feedbacksasariri - Oct 2, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Oct 2, 2016
|The pie chart and table represent information about three vital reasons that caused land degradation
3 - Hi Ismail, Here's my contributions towards your IELTS task 1 essay. I hope you can follow through. ...
Writing FeedbackAlamsyah Ismail - Oct 2, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Oct 2, 2016
|Task 1- The proportion of women and men attending various evening courses
2 - Hi Ardian354.. Let me give you some advice.. The bar chart give(s) information about amountnumber of man and...
Writing FeedbackArdian354 - Oct 2, 2016 / sasariri - Oct 2, 2016
|Chart analysis: the over-grazing had the biggest factor of unproductive land worldwide
2 - Hello Yonathan i think there ara no correlation between your summary and your picture that your upload .....
Writing FeedbackYonathan - Oct 2, 2016 / Alamsyah Ismail - Oct 2, 2016
|TED Summary - How Great Leader Inspire Action by Simon Sinek
4 - HI there, Your summary is excellent. It has a good flow and understandable. However, thre are only some grammatical...
Writing Feedbackdebby17 - Oct 1, 2016 / Iedha01 - Oct 3, 2016
|Differences in rates of various evening courses at an adult education center
3 - Hi Fauziyah, below are my thoughts on your analysis and I hope it helps with your revision. -...
Writing Feedbackfauziyahtami - Oct 1, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 1, 2016
|TED Summary: How Playing an Instrument Benefits Your Brain by Anita Collins
Writing FeedbackFitri12 - Oct 1, 2016 / debby17 - Oct 2, 2016
|Air Leakage, Cooling Problems - wasted energy
2 - Hi Riandi, below are additional enhancements for your essay and I hope you follow through. - The diagrams...
Writing Feedbackryan31 - Sep 30, 2016 / justivy03 - Sep 30, 2016
|The air circulation into and out of the house, resulting in a loss of heat from inside the house
2 - Hi Andika, I suppose you can add the diagram the next time you write an analysis, this will help...
Writing Feedbackandika08 - Sep 30, 2016 / justivy03 - Sep 30, 2016
|M.S.Dhoni: The Untold Stroy ( Film Review)
Writing FeedbackAqsa Aqeel - Sep 30, 2016 / justivy03 - Sep 30, 2016
|The future of early cancer detections - Jorge Soto (Summary of TED)
Writing FeedbackIfan21 - Sep 30, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 1, 2016
|Every conversation have a potential to start a conflict; how to improve face-to-face communication?
3 - Hi Sari, hopefully the followings will help .....they talks about something offensive. (this sentence is confusing. You also...
Writing Feedbacksasariri - Sep 30, 2016 / Fitri12 - Oct 1, 2016
|There is opening a high school in your community. Comment and discuss about the effects.
4 - Hi M. Javed, High school is the important medium to educate ... (You may also write: High school...
Writing Feedbackm javed - Sep 30, 2016 / Fitri12 - Oct 1, 2016
|After leaving a school youngsters prefer to stay with their friends instead of living with parents
2 - ... some countries especially in india this practice of leaving ... ... dicisions at this age because they...
Writing Feedbackdolly24 - Sep 30, 2016 / sario2k - Sep 30, 2016
|Summary : Scramble to rescue tourists on slopes of Lombok volcano (source : The Times)
6 - Halo there, Let me give some suggestion regarding to your summary I' ve notived that you contructed your...
Writing Feedbacksasariri - Sep 30, 2016 / Iedha01 - Oct 3, 2016
|It seems that people are very thrifty in regard to expenditures on leisure and education
3 - hello vina it is great writing but I have several suggestions for you hope it helps ... items...
Writing FeedbackVina12 - Sep 29, 2016 / ryan31 - Sep 30, 2016
|How to start a movement in public area by Derek Sivers.
3 - Hi Riandi, please find additional help from my end; - This summary essay will discuss - about how...
Writing Feedbackryan31 - Sep 29, 2016 / justivy03 - Sep 29, 2016
|Electronic media has changed the way people relate one another
3 - Hi Russell, first of all, I would like to share that, topics like this are definitely the topics that...
Writing FeedbackCachaaaaaaaa - Sep 29, 2016 / justivy03 - Sep 30, 2016
|Electronic devices have some downsides for individuals in their relation with others
3 - Hi Giansy, as I was going through your essay, I believe you made a very strong point in stating...
Writing FeedbackGiansy11 - Sep 29, 2016 / justivy03 - Sep 29, 2016
|Percentage of national consumer expenditure by category - 2002 (Writing Task 1)
Writing Feedbacksasariri - Sep 29, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Sep 29, 2016
|Sending a message via social media is much faster than using a letter.
3 - Hi Riandi, please find a few suggestions that will hopefully enhance your essay. - Connections amongst society will...
Writing Feedbackryan31 - Sep 29, 2016 / justivy03 - Sep 29, 2016
|Most of the money in Ireland, Italy, Spain, Sweden and Turkey went on food, drinks and tobacco
3 - HI I had read your writing task 1 carefully,,, however this essay is quite difficult to understand...
Writing Feedbackfauziyahtami - Sep 29, 2016 / andika_soppeng - Sep 30, 2016
|More spendings for Food, Drink & Tobacco rather than Clothing/Footwear in some European countries
2 - Hi Ucha, I believe this is the first time I'm going to review your writing project / analysis and...
Writing FeedbackUcha MSN - Sep 29, 2016 / justivy03 - Sep 29, 2016
|Writing Task 1 - the proportions of students attending
4 - Hello I will give you suggestion: 1. Please check your sentence using 2. Be careful preposition and conjunction using...
Writing FeedbackAbrahamlincoln - Sep 29, 2016 / ReskiRamadani88 - Oct 31, 2016
|The table shows secondary school attendance during period of 2000 to 2009
3 - hello, here i left comment for you. The table shows ==>(you can paraphrase the word with describes, illustrates,...
Writing Feedbackdils - Sep 29, 2016 / Att98 - Sep 30, 2016
|TED summary: How does my brain work?
2 - Hi Fauziyah.. These below are my thoughts towards your summary. Please, check it out.. ^_^ ... parking area...
Writing Feedbackfauziyahtami - Sep 29, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Sep 29, 2016
|Summary- China wants its nuclear industry to grow dauntingly fast
2 - HI Fuziyahtami your summary is intersting, But here some suggestion to improve your writing China has had ...
Writing Feedbackfauziyahtami - Sep 29, 2016 / Cachaaaaaaaa - Sep 29, 2016
|There were three secondary schools that declined the interest of children
2 - Hi, I have some advice Voluntary-controlled schooland there were ones that were community schools increased from 2000 to...
Writing FeedbackMFES2016 - Sep 29, 2016 / rizaldohabibie - Sep 29, 2016
|TED: A school for the suicide bombers.
Writing Feedbackarisandy14 - Sep 29, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Sep 29, 2016
|Summary of 5 Things you can learn from being ugly
Writing Feedbackalfa7 - Sep 29, 2016 / rizaldohabibie - Sep 29, 2016
|Kashmir attack: India 'launches strikes against militants' (Summary of BBC News)
2 - Hi Nousha, as I go through your essay, I must say, there is really a thin line between summarizing...
Writing FeedbackAfdhel - Sep 29, 2016 / justivy03 - Sep 29, 2016
|Summary of TEDx How women wage conflict without violence
Writing Feedbackalfa7 - Sep 29, 2016 / debby17 - Oct 2, 2016
|Proposition of Adolescents Attendeing Four Secondary Schools
3 - Hi Alfa, right of the bat mind the words you incorporate in your essay, just like your title, I...
Writing Feedbackalfa7 - Sep 29, 2016 / justivy03 - Sep 29, 2016
|TED Summary - My Seven Species of robot - Dennis Hong
4 - hi.. I have some suggestions for you.. This in[is] absolutely principal because often students [are] [often] fear of...
Writing FeedbackAbrahamlincoln - Sep 29, 2016 / rizaldohabibie - Sep 29, 2016
|IELTS Writing Task 1 Summary Article: Ancient Bee fosil reveals secrets of human ancestor's habitat
Writing FeedbackAlamsyah Ismail - Sep 29, 2016 / justivy03 - Sep 29, 2016
|Article Summary: Shadow on the South China Sea
4 - Hi Erwin, below are my thoughts for your article summary. - The first is about the tiny islands...
Writing Feedbackerwiin1 - Sep 29, 2016 / justivy03 - Sep 29, 2016
|Introduction to text about spacecraft measurements
Writing FeedbackMaKa - Sep 29, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Sep 29, 2016
|MONTH IS THE PEOPLE - COME TO THE MARS YET
3 - Hello Bismilah There are some advice from me After months?????? of anticipation ...... i think you mean is...
Writing Feedbackbismillah - Sep 29, 2016 / Alamsyah Ismail - Sep 29, 2016
|Camille A.Brown represents people who love to dance
4 - .., educator and performances PERFORMER [comma] talked for TED about dance, [no comma here]she TO represents the people who...
Writing Feedbackrosadesiana - Sep 29, 2016 / RAY93 - Sep 30, 2016
|The new finding - birds can avoid crashing in flight
4 - Hi Bam I would like to note you some advises hope it works >> birds can avoid crahsingcrashing...
Writing FeedbackBAMS14 - Sep 29, 2016 / MFES2016 - Sep 29, 2016
|TED Summary: You can Grow new Brain Cells Here How by Sandrine Thuret
2 - Hello Yonathan, I want you obtain some suggestion for you essay from me, here we go: Many peoples...
Writing FeedbackYonathan - Sep 29, 2016 / alfa7 - Sep 29, 2016
|Some extraordinary events, such as super moon, harvest moon and total blood moon.
3 - ... as they are able to see an SOME extraordinary eventS, such as super moon,.. On S eptember 30,...
Writing FeedbackAris05 - Sep 29, 2016 / RAY93 - Sep 30, 2016
|Specialist schools, grammar schools, voluntary-controlled schools are programs and their pupils.
2 - HI DIOBA, I HAVE READ YOUR WRITING,,, HOWEVER, THIS WRITING SEEMS CONFUSING TO ME ... of pupils attending...
Writing FeedbackDioba - Sep 29, 2016 / andika_soppeng - Sep 29, 2016
|Today parents do not think that their kids will be better off than they were
2 - Hi! Here some inputs for you. The lifesthatquietly play out quietly under the scream afof headlines. This true...
Writing Feedbackbismillah - Sep 29, 2016 / fauzankrn - Sep 29, 2016
|Christina Warinner: Tracking ancient diseases using ... plaque (TED)
4 - ... Medicine at the University of Zurich, hope HOPES to well-understand abou THE evolutionary vulnerabilities (...) we can enhance...
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