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|Recent studies report that the level of people's stress and obesity increased in the last decades.
6 - Hey Paij1830 your have briefly summarized the essay and it's great : here some corrections for you : ...
Writing Feedbackfaizahadina - Sep 16, 2016 / Ifan21 - Sep 17, 2016
|'Sophisticated wearable headset'. Undoubtedly, it is tricky to learn tonal language nowadays.
Writing Feedbackzul2805_es - Sep 16, 2016 / Jawa - Sep 16, 2016
|The information about the amount of books been read in a school, the trends of years 2009-2012.
5 - the number of library books which read (passive Voice always use V3) by boys ... There were (use was...
Writing Feedbackandika08 - Sep 16, 2016 / ALMAJID06 - Sep 16, 2016
|Talent or ability doesn't make courageous. IQ factor and children's intelligence.
3 - Hello mr.gon, thank you very much for your essay and also i really interesting within your topic regarding Grit...
Writing Feedbackgon10 - Sep 16, 2016 / mem77 - Sep 16, 2016
|Opinions about Advertising : The Advantages on Situation
5 - hi..@mem77 let me try to correct your writing make your sentence straight to the point for example,...
Writing Feedbackmem77 - Sep 16, 2016 / Jawa - Sep 16, 2016
|Writing Task 1 Student Cambridge Books
2 - ... of forty books from 100 books which is read by girls, while booksare read by boys has dropped...
Writing Feedbackfadhilmd25 - Sep 16, 2016 / faizahadina - Sep 16, 2016
|The ancient circus was introduced at the time of the Roman Empire.
3 - Hello You have a good summary I have some corrections ... mostly showing popular spectator sport, and chariot...
Writing Feedbackerwiin - Sep 16, 2016 / andika08 - Sep 16, 2016
|Inside Philippine President Rodrigo Duterter's War On Drugs - Summary Articles
3 - ... last drug lord and the last pushersupplier have surrendered ... In histhe last speech, he insulted ......
Writing Feedbackfadhilmd25 - Sep 16, 2016 / Terminal23 - Sep 16, 2016
|On the video, the most things that Gore emphasize are optimistic and awareness.
5 - Hi hujjatul^^ Base on the video, the most thingsthatAl Gore said thatemphasize are optimistic and awareness(I think this...
Writing FeedbackHujjatul19 - Sep 16, 2016 / eve01 - Sep 16, 2016
|"Comparison underground railway systems in 6 major cities."
2 - The data given in the table compares the underground railway systems in 6 major cities. Overall, as can...
Writing FeedbackWindvalley - Sep 16, 2016 / swr10 - Sep 16, 2016
|The number of books that were borrowed and its Book types [IELTS Writing Task 1]
Writing FeedbackPJmustbebetter - Sep 16, 2016 / justivy03 - Sep 24, 2016
|Athletes are obliged to train their skills and focus not only to the muscles or body movements
4 - Hay rosa, i will give you some suggestion Original sentences : The rapidity and accuracy visual is an...
Writing Feedbackrosadesiana - Sep 16, 2016 / Qaranew52 - Sep 16, 2016
|The rise of crime rate as the main worry in some countries. Solution? Invest in basic social rights.
2 - Here my suggestion. 1. Spelling mistakes? > increasements = increase (or you can rewrite your sentence "The...
Writing FeedbackBrunasingh - Sep 16, 2016 / Jnur - Sep 16, 2016
|Rita Pierson: Every kid needs a champion
3 - Hi, You did a good job in your writing. You start it with an opening sentence(Creating bond with all...
Writing Feedbackbung ilham - Sep 15, 2016 / Iedha01 - Sep 16, 2016
|Quickly scanning and noticing tracking objects - an athlete's recipe for success
2 - aloha Bams, here are my thoughts: Being a good athlete just does not only depend on muscles, but...
Writing FeedbackBAMS14 - Sep 15, 2016 / bung ilham - Sep 15, 2016
|The coal was the most popular energy source in France - years 1995 and 2005
Writing FeedbackAris05 - Sep 15, 2016 / ryan31 - Sep 16, 2016
|Contrasting of energy production in France between 1995 and 2005
2 - The pie charts shows compareS kinds of energy THE PERCENTAGES OF FOSSIL FUELS PRODUCED in Ff rance between...
Writing FeedbackBAMS14 - Sep 15, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Sep 16, 2016
|Potential positions which are being inspected for the construction of a new supermarket in Garlsdon
2 - The given mapthe map show compares two potential positions ... ... the first site (S1) is was located...
Writing FeedbackWindvalley - Sep 15, 2016 / Terminal23 - Sep 16, 2016
|Five - second rule revealed (summary)
3 - Hi Hujjatul. I left the comment for you, hope it can help. Overyone surely is familiar with this...
Writing FeedbackHujjatul19 - Sep 15, 2016 / ibal28 - Sep 16, 2016
|Writting Task 1 the comparison of different kinds of energy production of France in ten years
2 - Hi Shandy.. I am delighted to read your writing. In this moment, let me help you to finalize yours....
Writing Feedbackarisandy14 - Sep 15, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Sep 16, 2016
|Bill Gates - how do you stop deadly disease that spread by mosquitos?
3 - Hi @hujjatul19, Nice post from you, it is interesting because you summarized such a renowned person's speech. Regarding...
Writing FeedbackHujjatul19 - Sep 15, 2016 / dils - Sep 16, 2016
|Bill Gates believes, that there are not problems in this world, that cannot be solved
Writing FeedbackALMAJID06 - Sep 15, 2016 / andika08 - Sep 16, 2016
|The table and the bar chart below give information about travelling to work in Houston, Texas.
2 - Hello ALMAJID06, here i left comment for you table (Table) depicts the proportion of ... ... while...
Writing FeedbackALMAJID06 - Sep 15, 2016 / Fira28 - Sep 16, 2016
|The Taklimakan Desert which is a part of Africa's Sahara
Writing FeedbackPHA2016 - Sep 15, 2016 / ryan31 - Sep 16, 2016
|TED Summary: The Art of Free-Stress Productivity by David Allen
2 - when productivity gets low and everything turns unstable. It is called crisis zone. = new sentence = it is...
Writing FeedbackFitri12 - Sep 15, 2016 / RAY93 - Sep 15, 2016
|Writing Task 1; Comparison of five are mining sector categories in France during year 1995 and 2005
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|Summarize TED video : Bill Gates talk about mosquito, malaria, and education
Writing Feedbackmem77 - Sep 15, 2016 / Asma Raj - Sep 16, 2016
|TED Summary : The philosophy of a happy life according to Sam
Writing FeedbackJawa - Sep 15, 2016 / dils - Sep 19, 2016
|Successful performance is not merely physics, it's also a multitude combination of supporting skills
3 - Hi Dhyla.. These are a few suggestions for you to finalize this summary Check my notes and deal with...
Writing Feedbackdils - Sep 15, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Sep 16, 2016
|Some people say that words have stronger power than actions
2 - Namely, people need to havesome experience to be aware ... ... why his words are so impressive is...
Writing FeedbackYuyahhhh - Sep 15, 2016 / Terminal23 - Sep 16, 2016
|HERE'S HOW MANY APPLE CORES IT WOULD TAKE TO POISON YOU
2 - Hi Terminal123, below are my thoughts on your essay, this is very straight forward, in order for you to...
Writing FeedbackTerminal23 - Sep 15, 2016 / justivy03 - Sep 15, 2016
|Writing Task 1 Student Cambridge Books- Travelling to work in Houston, Texas
4 - Hi Fadhil! Sharing is fun, right? The followings are my humble comments: - The table gives information (besides...
Writing Feedbackfadhilmd25 - Sep 15, 2016 / Fitri12 - Sep 16, 2016
|Bill Gates tried to elaborate several problems that humanity is faced all over the world
2 - Hello @fadhilmd25, I would like to give some suggestion for your writing. Here my advice: 1. .......
Writing Feedbackfadhilmd25 - Sep 15, 2016 / abdasyari93 - Sep 15, 2016
|INTERNET: The Drawback and Vantage
2 - Hello Your text is quite readable, but you could use adjusting/rewriting some of the sentences as follows: ...
Writing FeedbackJnur - Sep 15, 2016 / Wolf Larsen - Sep 15, 2016
|There are several ways of transport with different CO2 emissions (measured in kilograms). IELTS
2 - Hello Ryan31, firstly, I think you spent more word at writing task 1. you wrote approximatel 262 that...
Writing Feedbackryan31 - Sep 15, 2016 / PHA2016 - Sep 15, 2016
|The least popular transportation chosen by the workers is cycling or walking
4 - Hi Kiki. These are my thoughts about your writing. In this moment, I only focus on content of your...
Writing Feedbackkiki23 - Sep 15, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Sep 15, 2016
|Summary of Article, the title is "A Musician Creates an Americana Soundtrack for the Colorado River"
2 - hello almajid, it was an interesting topic and also i really appreciate with your efforts to do this essay....
Writing FeedbackALMAJID06 - Sep 15, 2016 / mem77 - Sep 15, 2016
|The bar chart shows amount of carbon dioxide emissions from different forms of transportation
4 - Hello mem77, here i left comment for you (The) table gives ==> (you can change with describes,...
Writing Feedbackmem77 - Sep 15, 2016 / Fira28 - Sep 19, 2016
|The proportion of energy which is produced in one decade, within 1995-2005
2 - The pie charts show the proportion of different types of energy being produced in 1 decade(over a ten-year...
Writing Feedbackrosadesiana - Sep 15, 2016 / gigiqarib - Sep 15, 2016
|TIME FOR KNOWING BEFORE TRAVELING.
2 - hello vkwssh, it was a very interesting essay and i really appreciate with your efforts. but i have some...
Writing FeedbackVK WSSH - Sep 15, 2016 / mem77 - Sep 15, 2016
|It Cannot Be Denied, There are the Pros and Cons of Using Internet for People Appearing in This Life
3 - i give some correction for you.. The Internet is has completely fulfilled individuals ... do business and other activities...
Writing FeedbackAsma Raj - Sep 15, 2016 / ALMAJID06 - Sep 15, 2016
|Animal Rights : a contradictive perspectives about The Rule
Writing Feedbackmem77 - Sep 15, 2016 / Iedha01 - Sep 16, 2016
|Most Americans Think Burgers Are Healthy
3 - It is my suggestion: ... Americans who had ordered a tasty burgertasty burgers instead of healthful ... As...
Writing Feedbackkiki23 - Sep 15, 2016 / swr10 - Sep 16, 2016
|Nowadays, people assume that muscles are the main factor which determine athlete performance
5 - hy nice summarys, there are few suggestion for you Until up recently Right now, people (...) athlete performances...
Writing FeedbackYonathan - Sep 15, 2016 / BAMS14 - Sep 15, 2016
|To winning a match, race or competition, an athlete uses not only his muscles but also extreme focus
Writing FeedbackAlamsyah Ismail - Sep 15, 2016 / Fatirtalent - Sep 23, 2016
|Bill Gates' presentation about diseases, education and technology evolution
4 - ... number of children died who (have not been 5years) before ages 5 Caused (the cause) of malaria...
Writing Feedbackandika08 - Sep 15, 2016 / ALMAJID06 - Sep 15, 2016
|The Old Issues : Gender and Education as Opposite of Globalisation Era.
3 - Yo! here are some feedbacks i got for your essay 1)The the discrimination is an irrelevant in...
Writing FeedbackFirmanRomadhon20 - Sep 15, 2016 / Rinnegan45 - Sep 16, 2016
|This Article Highlight Related The Effect Of Global Warming
5 - hello mr.agung, nice to see your essay and also i really appreciate with your efforts to do this essay....
Writing Feedbackagungdanprakoso - Sep 15, 2016 / mem77 - Sep 16, 2016
|Technology as A Supplement in Education
4 - Hello You have a good summary I have some corrections ... more attractive for students so it will...
Writing Feedbackabdasyari93 - Sep 15, 2016 / andika08 - Sep 16, 2016
|The stress is the body's way of responding to any kind of demand or threat
4 - Hai deanarin i have some advice to you What is the meaning of stress? "The definition of stress...
Writing Feedbackdeanarin - Sep 15, 2016 / Alamsyah Ismail - Sep 15, 2016
|Education Is the Key to Breaking the Cycle of Violence - Summary article
3 - Hello It'll be better if you restructure some of your sentences as suggested below: "School should [...]...
Writing FeedbackDavid54 - Sep 15, 2016 / Wolf Larsen - Sep 15, 2016
|As we attempt to focus, the whole other areas has less brightness and we tolerate the blur
2 - Hello You have a good summary I have some corrections When we carefully noticed that as we attempttried...
Writing Feedbackrizaldohabibie - Sep 15, 2016 / andika08 - Sep 15, 2016
|The table shows percentage of travellers per form of transport and average age of a traveller.
4 - hello andika08. here i left my suggestion for you. The table shows ==> (you can paraphrase the word...
Writing Feedbackandika08 - Sep 15, 2016 / Att98 - Sep 28, 2016
|When people focus on one particular object, they automatically do not notice anything else
2 - Hello You have a good summary I have some corrections When people focus on one particular object, they...
Writing Feedbackfaizahadina - Sep 15, 2016 / andika08 - Sep 15, 2016
|The ability to stay focused positively relates to the quality of athlete's performance
2 - Hello Your text will sound better if you rewrite some of the sentences as suggested below: Athlete's...
Writing Feedbackmawahi bussalam - Sep 15, 2016 / Wolf Larsen - Sep 15, 2016
|Do a weekday vegetarian for a better life (TED Summary)
2 - =our meat diet behavior has caused many problems. Eating hamburger routinely [need to mention how many times...
Writing Feedbackswr10 - Sep 15, 2016 / RAY93 - Sep 15, 2016
|Athlete is not only about muscles but also visual abilities
2 - hai lalsky I have some suggestions for you please check your wordstoo many use not only, but also ......
Writing FeedbackLALSKI - Sep 15, 2016 / ryan31 - Sep 15, 2016
|White Gulls Dependent On Ice Are Disappearing From The Arctic
4 - Hi Andika Let me give you some advice... Life in the world is not(isnt) just humans (but) there...
Writing Feedbackandika08 - Sep 15, 2016 / Yonathan - Sep 15, 2016
|"Reasons for study" four out of five people under 26 take part in courses because of job opportunity
3 - Hallo Windvalley, There are a little corrective, ...majority of young people study because of careerthey want to have...
Writing FeedbackWindvalley - Sep 15, 2016 / David54 - Sep 15, 2016
|Too much, too young should schooling start at age
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