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|Summary of TED How does cancer spread through the body ? (Ivan Seah Yu Jun )
4 - Cancer has become a common problem yet because thorny problem in ... The predominant qiestionquestion comes cancer distribution ......
Writing FeedbackIfan21 - Sep 26, 2016 / mdamanhuri77 - Sep 27, 2016
|Sports heroes in the field of badminton in Indonesia
3 - Hi Att, Sharing is fun, right!? The followings are my humble comments for u. Indonesian citizens cheered shortly...
Writing FeedbackAtt98 - Sep 26, 2016 / Fitri12 - Sep 27, 2016
|Comparing car theft - numbers of robbed vehicles in different countries
4 - Hi rizaldohabibie,after reading your summary, i have some suggestions, perhaps useful for you. 1.presents the information about car robbery...
Writing Feedbackrizaldohabibie - Sep 26, 2016 / Dioba - Sep 27, 2016
|The percentages of Bulgarian people who wished to live abroad
5 - Hi Cachaaaa Let me give you some advice.. The given bar chart givesyou could change with other vocab...
Writing FeedbackCachaaaaaaaa - Sep 26, 2016 / Sari Trisna - Sep 27, 2016
|SUMMARY TED 3 of Patti Dobrowolski - how to reach a dream
5 - hi.. i wanna suggest some advices.. Draw[drawing] a picture at our current condition and draw[drawing] a picture at...
Writing Feedbackrosadesiana - Sep 26, 2016 / rizaldohabibie - Sep 27, 2016
|The rank of education of Bulgaria citizens who chose to live in another country
3 - hallo there are few advice for you Base on bar chart, the highest percentage of education rank to...
Writing FeedbackBekuk22 - Sep 26, 2016 / BAMS14 - Sep 26, 2016
|TED Summary : Teach every child about food
7 - Hi there, Let me give you some inputs regarding to your summary, -Causes of death, people need revolution...
Writing Feedbackandika08 - Sep 26, 2016 / Iedha01 - Sep 27, 2016
|Most People are missing out on incredible opportunities all of the time, making bad decisions
2 - Hii Eve.. it is clearly summary, i only want to give some suggestions. 1. carefully with the capital...
Writing Feedbackeve01 - Sep 26, 2016 / Giansy11 - Sep 26, 2016
|The percentage of Bulgarians who were expecting to live abroad, based on their education
2 - Hi Eva. Let me help you to finalize your writing. In this moment, I only concentrate to your contents...
Writing Feedbackeve01 - Sep 26, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Sep 27, 2016
|The grade of school of Bulgarian students who were anxious to leave their country and stay abroad
2 - Hi Andika. These are my thoughts for your writing. Please, you meet my notes and deal with them. ...
Writing Feedbackandika08 - Sep 26, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Sep 27, 2016
|Butter, margarine and other spreads consumed during 26 years timeline
3 - the highest consumption it was clearly that butter consumption rose from around 140 to 160 grams...
Writing FeedbackUcha MSN - Sep 26, 2016 / Diqon - Sep 27, 2016
|U.S Meat & Poultry Consumption, Per Capita, Boneless By Species - Writing Task 1
2 - Hi fatirtalent, I made some corrections which I think you might appreciate on your writing task 1 It...
Writing FeedbackFatirtalent - Sep 26, 2016 / Janet7 - Sep 26, 2016
|From 1981 to 2007 butter was the most popular spread that was consumed by people
2 - Between 1981 and 1986, butter consumption rose from around 140 to a peak of 160 gramsTHAT IS NOT MATCH...
Writing FeedbackSari Trisna - Sep 26, 2016 / BAMS14 - Sep 26, 2016
|In 1981 butter was the most popular spread among others
2 - Hi fauziyahtami, you have done a great job, here are my suggestions for you ==> The graph below...
Writing Feedbackfauziyahtami - Sep 26, 2016 / rosadesiana - Sep 26, 2016
|Artic snow dissolved are killing animals and will be caribou aground
Writing FeedbackPHA2016 - Sep 26, 2016 / rosadesiana - Sep 26, 2016
|Creativity is as important in education as literacy and we have to treat it with same status.
3 - Hi Aris05 In this topic, the speaker would sayspeak about creativity. ... education as literacy,and we ... ......
Writing FeedbackAris05 - Sep 26, 2016 / Janet7 - Sep 26, 2016
|Summary Article: Keep your goals to yourself
2 - Hi Atthya, first of all, WELCOME to the Essay Forum Family, I hope you find this website to be...
Writing FeedbackAtt98 - Sep 26, 2016 / justivy03 - Sep 26, 2016
|TED Summary: Forget Multitasking, try monotasking by Paolo Cardini
2 - According to merriam webster [capitalization issue ] dictionary, multitasking is the ability ... ... on monotask project and...
Writing Feedbackkiev - Sep 26, 2016 / RAY93 - Sep 26, 2016
|GPS Accuracy in Australia versus moves of tectonic plates in America
5 - confusing sentence. = at this moment, Australia continent has shifted it is a common phenomenon which...
Writing FeedbackBAMS14 - Sep 26, 2016 / RAY93 - Sep 26, 2016
|Theft crimes in some countries in regard of cars
2 - Hello alamysah, The line graph comparesshows which comparison the theft of car in four ... It is...
Writing FeedbackAlamsyah Ismail - Sep 26, 2016 / PHA2016 - Sep 26, 2016
|COMPARISON OF THE CAR THEFT IN EUROPE AND CANADA
3 - Hi bismillah. Here I left some suggestions for you, hope it can helps you. The line graph shows...
Writing Feedbackbismillah - Sep 26, 2016 / ibal28 - Sep 27, 2016
|A Fuel Tanker Fire in Mexico's Gulf Coast
5 - capitalization issue, it is a name of a company. successfully andwhiletheythose [refer to firefighting boats, not firefighters...
Writing FeedbackAris05 - Sep 26, 2016 / RAY93 - Sep 26, 2016
|Going to Mars Could Mess Up the Hunt for Alien Life
3 - America made a great celebration of its independence day by properly landing thousand rovers on the surface of...
Writing Feedbackmdamanhuri77 - Sep 26, 2016 / RAY93 - Sep 26, 2016
|An Article Summary: William, Kate, George, and Charlotte Arrive in Canada for the Royal Tour
3 - Hi Ali, below are my thoughts on your summary essay. 2nd paragraph - The whole family members appeared...
Writing FeedbackFitri12 - Sep 26, 2016 / justivy03 - Sep 26, 2016
|Overall, there are four kind of meat noted in the graph: Beef, Pork, Broilers, and Turkeys.
2 - The graph presents information about you need verb meat and poultry consumption in US( at introduction you should be...
Writing FeedbackYonathan - Sep 26, 2016 / BAMS14 - Sep 26, 2016
|Try a lot of different things in a month by Mutt Cutts
Writing FeedbackPHA2016 - Sep 26, 2016 / rosadesiana - Sep 26, 2016
|Summary : Jack Ma can't solve Indonesia's e commerce dilemma
2 - Ryan, welcome to the big family of EssayForum, a place where you can ask for writing help. You can...
Writing Feedbackcat10 - Sep 26, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Sep 26, 2016
|Resume : Janet Iwasa: How animations can help scientists test a hypothesis
3 - Scientists usually use a small objects[singular/plural issue] as objects of research andwhich must be seen directly, sometimes it difficult...
Writing Feedbackzero01 - Sep 26, 2016 / RAY93 - Sep 26, 2016
|Summary of article Blind people use brain's visual cortex to help do maths ( Colin Barras)
3 - Hello Ifan i have advice to you about your spelling simple mental arithmatic orservation .... observation inside...
Writing FeedbackIfan21 - Sep 26, 2016 / Alamsyah Ismail - Sep 26, 2016
|The only way for women to show their qualities is by getting involved in economy and politics
2 - it is evidence that you have a passable writing skill proved by you well-structured sentence and paragraph. you, somehow,...
Writing FeedbackFitri12 - Sep 26, 2016 / RAY93 - Sep 26, 2016
|The Rewards of Taking Risks: Facing my Fear of Public Speaking
2 - ..., the bullying escalated in middle school to the point where I ... -I think you should remove the...
Writing Feedbackleo nma - Sep 26, 2016 / akn_24 - Sep 26, 2016
|TED SUMMARY: The Courage To Tell A Hidden Story by Erman Mohammed
Writing FeedbackIedha01 - Sep 26, 2016 / RAY93 - Sep 26, 2016
|IELTS Task 2 - surveillance technologies provide individual tracking information
2 - Since early 21 century surveillance ... Governments in this case aim [...] those undercover observation .Its an opinion discussion...
Writing Feedbackekalamarsyari11 - Sep 25, 2016 / Mayank7g - Sep 26, 2016
|The proportion of e-commerce in four retail trade in New Zealand between 2003 and 2013
2 - Hi @llmi_03 Your essay is good. However, I noticed some errors as I read your composition. Similarly...
Writing FeedbackIlmi_03 - Sep 25, 2016 / wew018 - Sep 26, 2016
|The Survey of Electronic Commerce in Four Main Parts In New Zealand During a Decade
Writing Feedbackhirani03 - Sep 25, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Sep 26, 2016
|TED Summary Task: A new way to grow bone
3 - Molly Steven is a head of a biomaterialsbio materials lab and she is one who really fascinated about material...
Writing FeedbackDioba - Sep 25, 2016 / ekalamarsyari11 - Sep 25, 2016
|CCTV Cameras Are Being Used To Monitor People Activity - Writing Task 2
2 - Hi Faridadwi Let me give you some advice... In several cases, inhabitants(citizen) who are monitored do ... ......
Writing FeedbackFaridadwi18 - Sep 25, 2016 / Yonathan - Sep 26, 2016
|Significant ramifications to secure human activity by utilizing closed-circuit television (CCTV)
NEW - Nowadays technology is increasingly being used to monitor what people are saying and doing (for example, though cellphone tracking...
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|TED Summary Lighting Up Indonesia's Future
2 - ... Minister of Education which is aim to developing develop our education in Indonesia. The backgrounds of this program...
Writing FeedbackDioba - Sep 25, 2016 / Iforsa - Sep 25, 2016
|Online sales in retail sector between 2003 and 2013
4 - The pie chart presents IMPARTING KNOWLEDGE about the percentage of ... ... was followed by clothes as the...
Writing FeedbackFadhilahumar91 - Sep 25, 2016 / Ucha MSN - Sep 27, 2016
|There is no doubt that everybody wants to be a famous person. Not everything is so great though.
Writing FeedbackMayank7g - Sep 25, 2016 / Iedha01 - Sep 26, 2016
|Two major factors that influence happiness among young people: achievement at work and doing hobbies
Writing Feedbackekalamarsyari11 - Sep 25, 2016 / BAMS14 - Sep 26, 2016
|Cellphone tracking and security cameras - modern technology spy on people
Writing FeedbackFadhilahumar91 - Sep 25, 2016 / Iedha01 - Sep 26, 2016
|Summary TED: Your Body is My Canvas
Writing FeedbackAlamsyah Ismail - Sep 25, 2016 / Aris05 - Sep 26, 2016
|Professional sport plays a huge role in the USA. Persuasive Finals Essay (Professional Athletes)
2 - Hi, I have a few suggestions for you: -The introduction sounds a little repetitive (For two of these sports,...
Writing Feedbackjmike710 - Sep 25, 2016 / amyg4140 - Sep 25, 2016
|Using Security Cameras in the Supermarket
Writing Feedbackashelarisa48 - Sep 23, 2016 / justivy03 - Sep 24, 2016
|Identify your greatest interest, find career that match what you love, and pursue it no matter what
Writing Feedbackryan31 - Sep 23, 2016 / justivy03 - Sep 24, 2016
|Bill Gates and his presentation in Long beach California
3 - Hi Patta, at a glance, I noticed the spelling of the month of "Februari",at the end of the essay,...
Writing FeedbackPHA2016 - Sep 23, 2016 / justivy03 - Sep 23, 2016
|TEDX Finding work you love dont Follow your passion
Writing FeedbackBAMS14 - Sep 23, 2016 / Faridadwi18 - Sep 25, 2016
|Being social makes us happier, healthier and we live longer than people who are less connected.
3 - Hi Patta, the summary essay is missing a few punctuations marks (e.g., comma) as well as linking verbs in...
Writing FeedbackPHA2016 - Sep 23, 2016 / justivy03 - Sep 23, 2016
|The advertising of certain food products should be banned
Writing Feedbackhoangduc241096 - Sep 23, 2016 / justivy03 - Sep 27, 2016
|Want to sound like a leader - start by saying your name right - Laura Sicola | 7 Band Candidate
2 - Hi @fatirtalent I have seen some common errors in your composition. Also, I explained everything what makes it...
Writing FeedbackFatirtalent - Sep 23, 2016 / wew018 - Sep 23, 2016
|Why we need introvert leader - Angela Hucles EILTS Summary Exercise to gain 7 Band
2 - alfatir, I can tell that you gain improvement in this time, particularly the flow of your ideas. Keep learning...
Writing FeedbackFatirtalent - Sep 23, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Sep 23, 2016
|Brave to disagree - Margaret Heffernan
2 - Hi @fatirtalent I have here some corrections that I noticed in your composition. It also has explanation why...
Writing FeedbackFatirtalent - Sep 22, 2016 / wew018 - Sep 23, 2016
|Summary TED Willie Smits: Samboja Lestari
4 - Hi MJT,after reading your summary, i have some suggestions, perhaps usefull for you 1."Samboja Lestari, East Borneo, one of...
Writing FeedbackMJT - Sep 22, 2016 / Dioba - Sep 25, 2016
|A national issue that concerns me is the media's contribution to the rise of eating disorders
2 - Hi @jmaga1997 Your essay is good. In my opinion, it will be better to make your 2nd paragraph...
Writing Feedbackjmaga1997 - Sep 22, 2016 / wew018 - Sep 23, 2016
|Writing task 2 - in some countries, secondary schools aim to
3 - Hi Rosa. See u again. In this moment, I will review contents of your writing. Let me help you....
Writing Feedbackrosadesiana - Sep 22, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Sep 23, 2016
|Summary of TED Old books reborn as art (Brian Dettmer)
4 - Hi Ifan. Here are my few suggestions to finalize your summary. An obsolate OBSOLETE book could be...
Writing FeedbackIfan21 - Sep 22, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Sep 23, 2016
|An Assistance Request from More Capable Essay Writers - the impact of social media on society
2 - Hi please find comments, Start like this. In recent years, popularity of social media has been increased. ...
Writing FeedbackCartie - Sep 22, 2016 / Mayank7g - Sep 22, 2016
|Writing IELTS Task 1 : How to process the cocoa and how much its costs
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