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2 - This is a motivational letter that should be focused on your post study ambition. The motivation should explain how...
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4 - @Holt and @nhunggngu Thank you for taking the time to give some advices. I'm glad that I started early...
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3 - @Holt Noted with thanks. Here's the second draft. A math teacher once told me that, whenever a daunting...
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|Writing task 1 IELTS Cambridge 9 about how the island changes
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2 - You are not being on point or direct in your restatement of the original prompt. Do not insert subjects...
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|IELTS Writing task 1 - Line graph - Wheat exports
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|Studying with a group of students in a classroom is more beneficial than learning online at home.
3 - Hi, your essay is pretty good. However, your conclusion can not summarize the general viewpoint because you mentioned too...
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|Motivational letter for a Master's program at the Tampere University. Finnish Govt Scholarship
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|Pharmacist - Personal Statement & for Commonwealth PhD Scholarship Application
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|Motivation Letter for Erasmus+ EMJMD Management and Engineering of Environment and Energy+ (ME3)
2 - Dear concerned who? For a proper opening salutation, simply address the members of the scholarship admissions committee. Say, "To...
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|Stipendium Hungaricum - letter of motivation - What qualities make you a good candidate?
2 - For starters, you only use the term "dear" if you know who you are addressing such as "Dear Members...
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|Motivation Letter for Stipendium Hungaricum, Vehicle Master Degree
2 - You should first, explain how your undergraduate studies have prepared you to face the demands of the government project....
Lettersndhnif - Jan 15, 2021Holt - Jan 15, 2021
|Academic objectives and indicate how these are appropriate to your long-range goals.
2 - Start off with the actual topic sentence. Reverse the presentation to kick - off with, "Being an avid technophile..."...
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|Essay about the host of international sporting events
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|"𝙈𝙤𝙣𝙨𝙩𝙤𝙗𝙚𝙧 𝙁𝙚𝙨" Halloween 2020
NEW - translation from my university's newspaper On the night of October 30, 2020, at Hall A, "𝙈𝙤𝙣𝙨𝙩𝙤𝙗𝙚𝙧 𝙁𝙚𝙨" Halloween...
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|The Gala to welcome Freshmen 2020
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|Motivation Letter for Stipendium Hungaricum in Engineering field - Education is the key
3 - Hi there! Nice to know you. Dear @Holt, please excuse me, I'd like to add more feedbacks on this...
Undergraduateswitnaura - Jan 14, 2021yesayagm - Jan 15, 2021
|UBC PERSONAL PROFILE, WHAT IS IMPORTANT TO YOU AND WHY? "Effort"
3 - Hi! I believe you have written a highly impressive response which is sure to reflect well on your application....
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3 - @Holt I apologize for everything I have said I was just completely lost at the time and was desperate...
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|Stipendium Hungarigum Scolarship / Engineering / Motivation Letter
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2 - - This is not an acceptable reason for the reviewer. Remember, you completed an English language course in...
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|The Global UGRAD Program is for young leaders committed to serving their home communities
2 - You have an effective background as far as qualifications are concerned. You meet the marks when it comes to...
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|Motivation letter - Stipendium Hungaricum - MA Tourism Management
2 - Truth be told, the essay is not remarkable, nor is it memorable. It is forgettable. The presentation does not...
Lettersnatura - Jan 13, 2021Holt - Jan 14, 2021
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|Statement of Purpose - Masters Degree in Education Leadership, Organizations, and Entrepreneurship
2 - I am not sure if this incorrect statement of purpose will help your application to Harvard. Specially since it...
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|[KGSP-G] - International Trade Studies (GSIS) - Personal Statement
3 - @Holt Thank you so much for your helpful comment. I will fix it according to your suggestions. Have a...
Scholarshipnhunggngu - Jan 13, 2021nhunggngu - Jan 15, 2021
|The total count of girls per hundred boys took admissions at a different level of education
2 - Please do not expect a thorough and efficient review of your report essay because you forgot to upload the...
Writing Feedbacknehash - Jan 13, 2021Holt - Jan 14, 2021
|The Ashram visit - a personal life experience that has had particular significance for you
3 - @Holt I have modified the essay. Please take a look and suggest any more changes. Thank you for...
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