|GKS SCHOLARSHIP / PERSONAL STATEMENT FOR INTERNATIONAL STUDIES - EMBASSY TRACK, COLOMBIA
Scholarshipdani1694 - Jan 17, 2020dani1694 - Jan 18, 2020
|IELTS Writing task 2 - Curfew effects on teens
6 - I don't think it is necessary to write like this ... during weekdays as well as weekends. It is...
Writing Feedbackprab0694 - Jan 17, 2020trvaanh - 2 days ago
|IELTS Writing Task I: UK Cinema Attendance of different age citizens, from 1990 to 2010
3 - When it comes to task 1 essays, there are two options, either classifying the graph items considering their general...
Writing Feedbackkanzanism - Jan 17, 2020juhuihjijuh - 15 hrs ago
|IELTS WT2: Studying other country's cultures
2 - Where is your response to the prompt requirement? I do not see it in the final sentence of your...
Writing FeedbackThanghoang - Jan 17, 2020Holt - Jan 17, 2020
|IELTS 2. Children should always follow parents advice till they become more independent and mature
2 - One of the first things that the examiner will check for with your essay is the word count. You...
Writing Feedbackdikyung - Jan 17, 2020Holt - Jan 17, 2020
|Why I'm not motivated in highschool
3 - I'm not sure if lack of motivation is what they're looking for, typically I believe this is used for...
Undergraduatehowardturtle - Jan 17, 2020georgiaberg - 2 days ago
|One employment opportunity - it's impact and the greatest learning outcome for me
2 - As of the moment, what I think is implied in the essay is that you are a self-centered person...
UndergraduateSakyo107 - Jan 16, 2020Holt - Jan 17, 2020
|UW AIF Part B: Question 4. Data Science / Machine Learning
2 - This statement is meant to get to know you beyond your interest in Data Science and Machine Learning. I...
Undergraduatejust_a_gene - Jan 16, 2020Holt - Jan 17, 2020
|Governments should not have to provide care or financial support for elderly people because ...
3 - @Holt Thank you for your comments. I was aiming for a "balanced" view response not "strong " or "partially...
Writing Feedbackparviz - Jan 16, 2020parviz - Jan 17, 2020
|Motivation Letter for a Machine Learning Master at a Swedish University
3 - @Holt Hi Holt, thank you for the feedback! really appreciate it! While yes I'd love to restructure my essay...
Letterschewedmentos - Jan 16, 2020chewedmentos - Jan 18, 2020
|Uw AIF for computer science coop. Part A Question 1
3 - As Holt mentioned, try to be more specific in your goals and what led you to them. For example,...
UndergraduateIR_567 - Jan 16, 2020just_a_gene - Jan 16, 2020
|Writing my personal statement on moving states and finding myself
2 - Try to make this essay stronger by explaining what research path you wish to take. If it is laboratory...
Undergraduatenormsauce - Jan 15, 2020Holt - Jan 16, 2020
|Opinion Essay. City or country?
2 - This essay is riddled with grammatical errors. The sentences do not make any sense in most instances due to...
Writing FeedbackMartaJones - Jan 15, 2020Holt - Jan 16, 2020
|Ielts 1 - The proportion of household expenditures between Japan and Malaysia in the same year 2010
Writing Feedbackhau15122001 - Jan 15, 2020hau15122001 - Jan 16, 2020
|'to make a difference in Prague' - ERASMUS MUNDUS SCHOLARSHIP: TOURISM DEVELOPMENT AND CULTURE (MSC)
2 - The last paragraph should be the opening paragraph of this essay. It carries your actual motivation for your desire...
UndergraduateVitova6 - Jan 15, 2020Holt - Jan 16, 2020
|IELTS Writing Task 1 - UK telephone calls, by category, 1995-2002 - local, international, mobiles
Writing Feedbackbestsp - Jan 15, 2020bestsp - Jan 16, 2020
|Task 1: the percentage of water for different purpose - industry, agriculture and domestic
2 - I cannot accurately review your work without the chart / image provided for this task. Please remember to include...
Writing Feedbackkelly33 - Jan 15, 2020Holt - Jan 15, 2020
|IELTS task2: man-made activities are making global temperatures higher
3 - Thank you! That is really helpful. I will practice how to paraphrase according to you suggestion!...
Writing FeedbackAnnie97 - Jan 15, 2020Annie97 - Jan 17, 2020
|"adaptable" - UBC application essay----tell us about yourself
2 - You only responded to the last part of the essay regarding what you are proud of. You failed to...
Undergraduatekarmalea - Jan 15, 2020Holt - Jan 15, 2020
|IELTS line graph - task 1 - thefts per thousand vehicles in four countries between 1990 and 1999.
Writing Feedbackjuhuihjijuh - Jan 14, 2020trvaanh - 2 days ago
|IVEY AEO ESSAY (Character in Leadership)
2 - The opening paragraph doesn't hold the interest of the reader. Open immediately with the relevant discussion instead. In this...
Undergraduateyellowjello123 - Jan 14, 2020Holt - Jan 15, 2020
|TOEFL ESSAY - About restriction for marketing strategies directed at kids (eg. TV's advertising)
2 - It is not a question of whether more regulation is required when it comes to advertising to children, it...
Writing Feedbackkokot - Jan 14, 2020Holt - Jan 15, 2020
|The statistics of afforestation on all continents over the world
4 - It will be extremely difficult for you to gain a passing score for this type of presentation. The main...
Writing Feedbackangelaaa - Jan 14, 2020Holt - Jan 18, 2020
|I am putting forward my candidacy for enrollment in electrical engineering of an University
2 - Don't just rely on Elon Musk and his accomplishments in the field of neural science to prove your motivation...
Undergraduatemoog2001 - Jan 14, 2020Holt - Jan 15, 2020
|The internet provide us with easy connection to other people, however it also isolates us
2 - The complete prompt for this essay indicates that requires a clear degree of dis/agreement with the given topic. As...
Writing FeedbackMsm87 - Jan 14, 2020Holt - Jan 14, 2020
|ielts task 2; Millions of people doing unhealthy activities which are harmful
3 - The introduction must accurately summarize the content of the prompt in order for it to gain a proper TA...
Writing Feedbackmichellejoy1222 - Jan 14, 2020Holt - Jan 15, 2020
|The band that I organized by myself. Activities that are most important to you
Undergraduaterichardli0124 - Jan 14, 2020richardli0124 - Jan 14, 2020
|Waterloo Engineering and AFM AIF - Accounting and Financial Management
UndergraduateWaterCivEngAFM - Jan 14, 2020WaterCivEngAFM - Jan 14, 2020
|Structure of SOP essay for UX and UI design
2 - The missing element in this version of your study plan is ; what is the relevance of this research...
Graduatejos3ph - Jan 13, 2020Holt - Jan 14, 2020
|Engineering as a major - China student enrolling in USA
3 - @Holt I really appreciated your response, and I tried to fix my answer by the order of question that...
UndergraduateHotDragon10 - Jan 13, 2020HotDragon10 - Jan 15, 2020