|IELTS 2 - Diagrams about the life of the salmons - from "fry" to the adult salmons
5 - Thank you so much for your kind advice! I will paraphase next time, have never realised the importance...
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|Essay about teenage problems
3 - The first problem that heavily weighs down your essay is the lack of proper formatting. Your second paragraph is...
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|High wages are believed as a prominent part of delighted life rather than a sense of satisfaction
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|IELTS Academic 14, test 2: one of the biggest problems of our time is the loss of particular species
6 - I think you should write one more paragraph before the closing to directly give your opinion about this problem....
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|The investments of many governments in the arts are pointless and should be reallocated elsewhere
3 - In my opinion, I am very interested in your ideas as it very clear, but there are some things...
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|IELTS writing task 2: Teenage and adult life as the happiest time of lives
3 - The justification paragraphs are not properly formatted. While you did good work in referencing second person pronouns, you should...
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|Essay about reasons and keys to recent situations of local attractions
5 - Your second and third paragraphs need more development. The second paragraph should focus on the reason why people from...
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|IELTS WRITING TASK 2: what do you think - are entertainers worth their fortune?
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|IELTS WRITING TASK 2: provide almost all young adults with access to tertiary education
2 - You did not need to include irrelevant information in the opening paraphrase. Use only the information located in the...
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|Young generations now spend more time and money following fashion trends. To what extend do you agre
5 - hi, i have some comments for you. 1. you should not use personal example in an academic essay...
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|IELTS TASK 1: Employment Rates of four Countries (bar graph)
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|How has technology improved our daily lives?
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|IELTS TASK 2: RECRUITMENT ( INNOVATION OR TEAMWORK )
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|Statistics of people who used Internet among the USA, Canada and Mexico citizens (1999-2009)
2 - You have an acceptable presentation. All the facts are there and the essay can be considered informative for something...
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|IELTS Writing Test 2 Part 2 Book 14 Cambridge: Environmental Problems
2 - There are several environmental prompts for the Task 2 test. Without a specific reference to the correct prompt, I...
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|The table below shows the percentage of the population by age groups in one town who rode bicyles
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|Writing task 2: discuss about the extinction of animal species
3 - the extinction of animals should be obligated by countries and individuals -> Countries and individuals should shoulder their responsibility...
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|IELTS: BOTH VIEW - Some people say that there is no need to go the Cinema
2 - You may want to reconsider your word count for the Task 2 essay. As you are required to proof...
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|Certain benefits - advantages and disadvantages of studying abroad
2 - Hi! Here are some feedback based upon my knowledge: - I think that the word "demerit" is not suitable,...
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|Topic: Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices is wrong
2 - The prompt requires you to discuss both views and give your opinion. There is no clarity in reference to...
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|Explain the main causes and effects of childhood obesity, and sugesst some possible solutions.
3 - You are not properly developing your paragraphs. You need to use related information from topic to topic per paragraph....
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|IELTS-Task 1 AGRICULTURAL PRODUCION IN THE EASTERN AND WESTERN REGION-BARRON'S WRITING FOR THE IELTS
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|IELTS Book 10 Test 3 Task 2- more similarities between different countries
3 - There are 2 errors in your opening statement: - Lack of paraphrase for the phrase " the same products...
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|IELTS Book 10 Test 3 Task 1 - Charts about the destination of UK graduates and postgraduates in 2008
3 - You did not outline the sectors being measured in the graphs within the summary overview. These sectors will help...
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|IELTS WRITING TASK 2_ Avantages and Disadvantages of owning a smartphone.
3 - The more appropriate number of words for the Task 2 essay is 275-290 words. An essay written within that...
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|The use of mobile phone is as antisocial as smoking. Mobile phone should be banned like smoking?
3 - While your response is correct, your reasoning paragraph could have been better. When asked to give an extent response,...
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|Make an enquiry (formal letter) - looking for a garment manufacturer
3 - The letter is one form of the Task 1 test. Therefore, it falls under the same word requirement of...
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|IELTS: Globalization has both advantages (economy) and disadvantages (diseases)
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|Older people struggle with use of modern technology. Reasons and solutions
5 - Clearly you have written under the required word count, and it is likely that you will be penalized for...
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|Concerning Chevening personal statement/essay - essays written separately 500 words each?
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