|Children's success depends on their parents
2 - To provide a stronger thesis statement. Indicate your agreement with a sense of reasoning. Rather than saying "for...
Writing Feedbacknavy8303 - Nov 22, 2021Holt - Nov 23, 2021
|The unlimited possibilities of engineering. Accomplishment that sparked a period of personal growth.
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|Hungaricum Stipendium Master Scholarships; this writing as a proof of my interest and motivation
3 - I think you should also add why you should be chosen from this scholarship that stands out from the...
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|The activity of cycling is admittedly no longer popular. How to change this trend?
2 - Good discussion with a few grammar and cohesive discussion problems for you to take note of. The errors stem...
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|Employers should give longer vacations to employees ( writing task 2)
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|Motivation letter for Ph.D. in Max Planck School of Cognition (Cognitive Psychology & Neuroscience)
NEW - PROMPT: maximum one page.. and no other than that. A Personal Statement typically covers the following topics, but may...
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|Essays about Causes of stress in modern society and ways to reduce this problem
2 - The essay presentation is actually good, if I were not to consider the scoring requirements of the task 2...
Writing Feedbacknguyenminhhuyen - Nov 21, 2021Holt - Nov 22, 2021
|Essay about replacing Art, Sport and Music subjects with subjects such as Information Technology
NEW - some school subjects are not necessary There is an upward trend of replacing Arts and physical-training subjects with...
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|NOWADAYS, SOME PARENTS PUT A LOT OF PRESSURE ON THEIR CHILDREN.
2 - This is not a part of the orginal topic presentation. The writer must keep his opinion to himself...
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|A prediction that drivers would be unnecessary in the future due to the development of technology
2 - Wrong word usage. The negative representation of merit is demerit. Contrasting features is not a normal representation for...
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|Allowing to visibly carry a gun in public places
2 - Why? The discussion response is complete, but the thesis outline is messing. Clue in the reader as to...
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|All youngsters should do volunteer work in their leisure time to support the community?
2 - This is an incorrect response. The provided discussion instruction pertains to the extent of your (dis) agreement with...
Writing FeedbackMing Fuong - Nov 21, 2021Holt - Nov 22, 2021
|Write a letter of complaint to a store where you purchased a faulty new phone
3 - Hi poster, The letter lacks the vital information that will improve your score. You didn't give enough detail...
LettersFreya01 - Nov 21, 2021ToluTemi - Nov 23, 2021
|Statement of Purpose of Masters in Miage By Course IKSEM Information Knowledge Systems Engineering
Scholarshiplenjoy - Nov 21, 2021Holt - Nov 22, 2021
|MOTIVATION LETTER (LOM) - REVIEW - M. Engg. in TECHNOLOGY & INNOVATION MANAGEMENT
3 - The opening statement is great. You showed the problem you are trying to solve with the masters degree. However,...
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|Should the government put a tax on unhealthy food to encourage people to eat more healthily?
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|The average amount of carbon dioxide emitted per each individual person in four European countries
2 - Be mindful of the writing time deadline. Practice writing with a timer in an actual exam set-up. By doing...
Writing Feedbackquynhmai - Nov 20, 2021Holt - Nov 21, 2021
|The bar chart compares the number of 15-year old students chose to study French and Japanese
2 - Selecting to study what? The summary must be clear about its reference to the age group in relation...
Writing FeedbackMai 123 - Nov 20, 2021Holt - Nov 21, 2021
|NTU SCHOLARSHIP ESSAY - "Accept it and move on!"
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|Writing task 2 - A look into students poor behavior; parents support importance
2 - The prompt restatement is over presented to the point where the author already shares personal insights on the topic....
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|Identify the adverse impacts of online learning and propose solutions.
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|The developments along Olive Drive before and after the construction of new facilities 1980-2010
2 - The writer opted to identify the changes based on the year representations of the urban plan and design presentations....
Writing Feedbacktrang12345 - Nov 19, 2021Holt - Nov 20, 2021
|The number of women aged 16-25 in particular country playing sport or watching sport
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|Discuss both view about learning with teacher and learn by internet
2 - This is a failing essay had this been an actual test. The prompt restatement + personal opinion is tremendously...
Writing Feedbackvannhan - Nov 19, 2021Holt - Nov 20, 2021
|Writing task2 - Team/group activities can teach more important skills for life than those activities
2 - This is a personal reflection of the author. It is not an accurate prompt restatement. Kindly remember that...
Writing Feedbackellenchen - Nov 19, 2021Holt - Nov 20, 2021
|Book review: Chapter 1 of Predictably Irrational
2 - The first chapter needs to offer a solid representation of the book and its author. The first paragraph should...
Book Reportsthuongnguyen259 - Nov 19, 2021Holt - Nov 20, 2021
|WRITING TASK 1 - BAR CHART ABOUT DIVORCE RATES IN FINLAND AND SWEDEN FROM 2011 TO 2015
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|Writing - How to write an effective formal email
4 - @Holt Thank you verry much for your feedback. I have mistaken the writer name. Kamal Satinder is the writer...
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|There is an argument about whether we should protect all the fauna or not
2 - When you are asked to give both views and provide your opinion, the writing method of the task totally...
Writing Feedbackministran - Nov 18, 2021Holt - Nov 19, 2021
|Statement of Purpose - For Ph.D. in Atmospheric Science- Massachusetts Institute of Technology
2 - There is a far more impressive version of the statement of purpose that you should use to catch the...
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