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GKS personal statement - physical therapy scholarship application

2 - The combined personal and motivational statement for the GKS-U program is one that requires directed discussion, and integrated character...

Scholarshipchisimdi Juliet - Aug 20, 2026Holt - Aug 20, 2026
fortune-teller - Common app

2 - This is not a common app response that will help your application. The reason for this is because I...

Undergraduateuserbabycuteasia - Aug 18, 2026Holt - Aug 18, 2026
visual expression - NTUST taiwan uni admission

2 - The reviewer will not take this claim seriously. You cannot develop a passion for something at that age...

Undergraduatererecords - Aug 17, 2026Holt - Aug 17, 2026
Autobiography - University Application Essay (Taiwan)

5 - This is my revised biography. I have shown this to a few people, and some of them said that...

UndergraduateHoriz0ns - Aug 16, 2026Horiz0ns - Sep 9, 2026
"dropped out of olympiad training program" CUHK personal statement

2 - I do not suggest that you use the 3 section outline that you listed. The writing prompt is very...

Undergraduatesimper - Aug 15, 2026Holt - Aug 15, 2026
"Inspiring others with zero funds" - my leadership eassy

2 - While this may be the niche that you are involved in, it is important not to box in...

ScholarshipSalah_jo - Aug 15, 2026Holt - Aug 15, 2026
Motivation letter for MSc Human Intelligence System Management

3 - One thing I'd add to Holt's feedback is to make the motivation for choosing this specific MSc more personal....

Letterssilviaholmes - Aug 15, 2026emillindberg - Aug 20, 2026
GKS-U Smart Security personal statement

2 - The personal statement is highly insightful on a personal scale which would serve the purpose well for any other...

ScholarshipDez - Aug 14, 2026Holt - Aug 15, 2026
Personal Statement on Obesity??

3 - @Holt Thank you so much for the advice!...

Undergraduatedablobking - Aug 12, 2026dablobking - Aug 13, 2026
Learing to invent - Chevening scholarships - Career

2 - The discussion needs to follow a specific career development path. From the minute you graduate from the program, what...

ScholarshipByoulws - Aug 10, 2026Holt - Aug 10, 2026
My grandfather - accomplishment essay or event

3 - Has anyone else noticed how the best memories often happen when you ditch the plan and wander into something...

UndergraduateUr dream bf - Aug 10, 2026pemaptheki - Aug 17, 2026
Chevening scholarships - Closing the Gap Between Design and Scale

2 - You have incorrectly responded to the prompt so you will have to do some research and write a totally...

ScholarshipByoulws - Aug 10, 2026Holt - Aug 10, 2026
Reciting weather - Common App

2 - I understand what you are trying to explain in this essay but the relation to your current situation came...

Undergraduatesojinaz - Aug 10, 2026Holt - Aug 11, 2026
Volunteer essay of McCall McBain Scholarship application

2 - The prompt is asking you to choose your most important organizational participation during your current professional career. The reviewer...

Scholarshipphuongvqueen - Aug 9, 2026Holt - Aug 10, 2026
Tough Short Essay of McCall McBain Scholarship application

2 - This portion needs a bridge paragraph or sentence. There must be a connection between the person who was...

Scholarshipphuongvqueen - Aug 9, 2026Holt - Aug 10, 2026
Leadership essay: Overcome difficulties

2 - You do not need to overwhelm the reviewer with too many leadership scenarios. One highly reflective situation womill suffice....

ScholarshipByoulws - Aug 9, 2026Holt - Aug 9, 2026
Networking essay : Laboratory Journey

2 - The way that you discussed the network that you have grown over the years is quite interesting. You truly...

ScholarshipByoulws - Aug 9, 2026Holt - Aug 9, 2026
"A Junior Manage" - Chevening Leadership Essay

2 - The response you have given is too generalized for it to pass as evidence of your ability to accomplish...

Scholarshipwhitewalker - Aug 9, 2026Holt - Aug 9, 2026
Materials engineering for biomedical applications - on McCall McBain Scholarship application

2 - The first 2 paragraphs sounds like an ad verbatim cut and paste from the University website for this course....

Scholarshipphuongvqueen - Aug 8, 2026Holt - Aug 9, 2026
It's quite competitive ... McCall McBain Scholarship application

2 - The essay needs to be more focused on the communities you worked within rather than including the discussion about...

Scholarshipphuongvqueen - Aug 8, 2026Holt - Aug 8, 2026
Before the Explanation - Common App Personal Statement

2 - This essay shows a lot about sibling attitude within your family and how it played out during some important...

Undergraduatesojinaz - Aug 5, 2026Holt - Aug 6, 2026
What paper cannot write - Common App Personal Statement

2 - I know that you are trying to go for a deeply insightful tone in your writing. You are trying...

Undergraduatesojinaz - Aug 5, 2026Holt - Aug 5, 2026
If you look good, you will feel good, and your day will be good

3 - @Holt Its more of a college essay, im not really sure what a good target outcome would be ,but...

Undergraduatececehascalledu - Aug 4, 2026cecehascalledu - Aug 5, 2026
Should Students Be Allowed to Have Their Cell Phones at School During Emergencies?

3 - @Holt Thank you for the feedback!...

Writing Feedbackjzufelt9 - Aug 3, 2026jzufelt9 - Aug 4, 2026
Factors That Contribute to Long Term Recovery - ENG102

2 - I noticed that the paper seemed to written I a rushed manner. It is almost as if you were...

Writing Feedbackcrystalline - Aug 2, 2026Holt - Aug 3, 2026
NUS application essay (Q3): How can I make my response better?

3 - @Holt Thank you very much...

UndergraduateMaria16 - Aug 2, 2026Maria16 - Aug 2, 2026
IELTS Essay - Scientific Research

2 - I would like to remind you that the alloted writing time for this task is only 40 minutes. The...

Writing Feedbackthanhdan00 - Aug 2, 2026Holt - Aug 2, 2026
streamlined nonprofit regulation amendments

2 - The opening paragraph is not directly related to the topic being discussed. The podcast reference and 24 hour news...

Research Papersmat2192765 - Aug 2, 2026Holt - Aug 2, 2026
Population Concentration in Seoul and Regional Inequality in South Korea

2 - As an overview of the actual research paper, I have to say that this actually works. It is a...

Research Papersyessang02 - Jul 26, 2026Holt - Jul 29, 2026
Importance of Early Autism Diagnosis in Children and Its Long-Term Impact on Development

2 - So what solution will your research propose then? It is important to present a summarized solution at the...

Research Papersnlrohmann - Jul 25, 2026Holt - Jul 26, 2026
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