|TU Delft MsC of Computer Science motivation Letter
NEW - Dear Admission, I am Peter. I grew up in a family with a strong football atmosphere, where my...
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|Writing task 2: The increase in the production on the natural environment
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|The graph below gives information about the percentage of people living in Australia who were born
2 - You summary overview is not very clear. Are you trying to tell us that the line graph shows information...
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|Common app essay "My mother's Hardships and how it helped me grow as a person"
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UndergraduateAbdullahKhan114 - Nov 23, 2023Holt - Nov 27, 2023
|Combining arts and coding texas A&M engineering essay
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|Some people think that people who chose a job early and keep doing are more likely to get satisfying
2 - Where are you basing this reference on? The original prompt only indicates a job. The type of job...
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|UNDERGRADUATE PROGRAM IN BIOLOGICAL SCINCE ESSAY
NEW - During my secondary school years, with a lack of experience, I possessed a naive outlook on the world and...
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|The graphs below show the employment rate of each gender in four different contries in 2002
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|to low- cost airlines, many people can travel abroad. Is it a positive or negative?
2 - You already indicated that low cost travel is a positive development in your writer's opinion paragraph. It was clearly...
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|Essay about why I want to transfer to Spelman College
2 - Well, this is most certainly a very personal essay. Thank you for sharing it with us. It is emotional...
Undergraduatelivvv12 - Nov 20, 2023Holt - Nov 27, 2023
|Question: Films were produced by big companies in the past, but today people are able to make a film
2 - You have not taken the correct approach to writing this essay. Based on the given writing guide question, you...
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|Increasing reciprocal exchange is positive or endanger cultural identity. Discuss both views.
2 - The essay is actually overwritten at 326 words. You do not have the time to write that many words...
Writing FeedbackAnhwuan - Nov 19, 2023Holt - Nov 27, 2023
|IELTS TASK 2 - STUDYING ABROAD
2 - You forgot to mention working abroad as well. It is important not to miss out on reference points...
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|Some students prefer to take a year off between school and university, to work or to travel.
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|"Leadership at Prosper's case comp" - UBC SAUDER (UNFAMILIAR SITUATION PROMPT)
2 - You do not really need to enumerate the names of the team members in this case. Group pronouns will...
Undergraduateramenlegend - Nov 18, 2023Holt - Nov 27, 2023
|UBC - Explain how you responded to a problem and/or an unfamiliar situation. (MAX 1500 Characters)
2 - This is an excellent reference point for the prompt you have chosen. It is light, heartwarming, but indicative of...
Undergraduateapplepie132 - Nov 17, 2023Holt - Nov 27, 2023
|Risk and resource management - Scholarship Essay - Study Plan
2 - Kindly indicate which journal it was published in, the publication date, volume, and series number for the reference...
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|Essay about global warming
2 - The writing is so bad that it is obvious you have not taken any English classes whatsoever. You are...
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|The pie charts compare ways of accessing the news in Canada and Australia in 2018.
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|The chart below shows the numbers of three types of visitors to a museum between 1997 and 2012.
2 - You have tried to go a good job on presenting the information in an analytical way. However, the way...
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|using network in classroom or traditonal class
2 - I was confused by the grammar used in this presentation. I can somehow fill in the blanks and do...
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|The impact AI has on our day to day lives essay, peer edit my essay <3
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|Motivation letter for the University of Padua - Management for Sustainable Firms
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|The chart below shows information about the problems people have when they go to live in other count
2 - The summary overview is incomplete. It should represent a more summative presentation of the image over at least 3...
Writing FeedbackAnnaAlysia - Nov 14, 2023Holt - Nov 27, 2023
|How studying in your chosen specialization will help you achieve your goals? MM - Mahidol University
2 - The main problem with this essay is that you do not speak in complete sentences. It is almost as...
Graduatemjsty - Nov 14, 2023Holt - Nov 27, 2023
|SOP for Parsons School of Design, M.P.S in Communication Design
2 - There is too much focus on your past experiences in this essay. While I am not negating the need...
Graduatejonamon - Nov 14, 2023Holt - Nov 27, 2023
|The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities.
2 - May Ii ask where you got the reference for the underground network? There is no such indicator in the...
Writing FeedbackKhoiNguyen - Nov 14, 2023Holt - Nov 27, 2023
|Motivation Letter for the Master in Computer Science (Machine Intelligence) at ETH Zurich
NEW - I am applying for the Master's program in Computer Science, specialized in Machine Intelligence, offered by ETH Zürich because...
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|What are the causes of criminals committing more crimes upon being released from prison and solution
2 - The thesis statement and writer's opinion is well developed in this essay. The topic is clearly restated, along with...
Writing Feedbackductam06 - Nov 13, 2023Holt - Nov 27, 2023
|short and long term academica and professional in SOP
2 - Since you are being asked for your long and short term academic goals, you should feel free to mention...
Graduateshaimkibria - Nov 13, 2023Holt - Nov 27, 2023