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|We need to take an action - daily diet and physical activities to reduce the number of obese kids
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|Question about AAS Support Statement for Master of Business Administration
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|The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed driving test-task1
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|Motivation Letter For Master's in Embedded Systems at the University of Saarland, Germany
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3 - The first problem this presentation has is formatting. Divide the short, medium, and long term plans into paragraphs. The...
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|"Raising in a middle-class family was indeed demanding" Commonwealth Scholarship Personal Statement
2 - The essay is on point until you get to the last paragraph. Since it appears that you are going...
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|Is society's overall success more important than individual well being?
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|IELTS writing task 2: Punishing children at an early age, agree or disagree?
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|Supporting Statement AAS Scholarship for Master Degree in Public Health
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|Personal Statement for MSc Data Science scholarship in Sweden
3 - Thank you for your advice. Do you mean that I need to combine Machine Learning, Business, and Big Data...
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|SHORT ESSAY FOR LLM PROGRAMME AT THE UNIVERSITY OF EAST FINLAND
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|SOP MCs Computer Science - EPFL - academic background and career strategy
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2 - Your summary overview is incorrect. It must give a description and identification of the images being provided. You are...
Writing Feedbacklahieuu63 - Mar 30, 2021Holt - Apr 8, 2021
|For a happier tomorrow - The American University in Cairo essay
2 - You described what the university is best known for in relation to Psychology. You have not described how you...
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|Why is cycling not popular in many places? And how to increase its popularity?
2 - You are being asked 2 direct questions at the end of the original prompt. You are required to give...
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|Writing task 1 the alteration of country's export of several products for one year from 2015
2 - Your information in the first sentence is incorrect. First of all, there are two images represented, a table chart...
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|Reasons to support the idea of having new teachers each year
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|English teacher - TESOL and the prospect for my future career (AAS)
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|My Interest in Life Sciences - NUS Personal Statement
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|Development Impact Plan - Theme: Science and Technology - Commonwealth
2 - Your response is widespread but common. It does not present a proper representation of each development issue as it...
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|Possibility of space tourism and its impact on astronomic
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|Study plan for master's of enterprise management for university in China
2 - This is not a study plan. This is a personal statement. There is nothing in this presentation that represents...
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|Writing task 1: The chart show households in renting and owning accomocation in English and Wales
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