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2 - Good morning. Since the prompt for this assignment was not posted, I can edit for grammar and mechanics...
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|Will take great pride in wearing the garnet and gold - FSU admissions essay
NEW - For almost one hundred years, the Latin words, "Vires, Artes, Mores" have been the guiding philosophy behind Florida State...
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|Four ways to control stress, take up a hobbies, exercise regularly, set realistic goals, etc.
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|The reasons for transfering - Transfer Admissions Essay
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|"I have been in that very arena many times" - FSU admissions essay
3 - It is absolutely a good thing. The more secure and confident you are in your writing, the more confident...
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|I love the campus, student life, and school - UCF essays
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|Ethical dilemma, risk, achievement - common apps personal essay
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|help with an essay on propaganda
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|Introduction-contrast, it needs to be long and catchy
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|Narrative Essay about a personal experience in which impacted your life
5 - Good afternoon. The essay is currently successfully written in present tense. The times when you are thinking back...
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|Adolescence is the precursor to adulthood. - UF Admission Essay
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|"I am not able to isolate one of three Latin words" - FSU admission essay
NEW - Looking back on my life, I realized that I am not able to isolate one of three Latin words....
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|FSU Essay: Family is more than one word to me.
NEW - "Vires, Artes, Mores" are words that are both a guiding philosophy for Florida State University and for my life....
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|Three main reasons that have inspired me to continue my education
4 - I think with the corrections this essay will answer the prompt easily. Your thinking and writing skills are illustrated,...
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|Understand the situation & be less judgementl; What concept intellectually excites me
NEW - What concept intellectually excites you... (500 max.) We all travel down a path, thoroughly encrusted with speed bumps,...
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|"Project Big Dipper changed my mindset" - Common apps short question
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|"I have never had a musical bone in my body" - common app essay
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|"There is a trace of each of these old values" - FSU Essay Evaluation
4 - Just that; relaxed "can't", "won't", etc. These are things we use because we are linguistically lazy. Formal academic writing,...
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|Memoir - Analysis of how music changed my life for AP11 English
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|My high school career is drawing to an end - UF Admissions Essay
3 - I believe your essay answers the prompt effectively. You use good examples and have a good intro as well...
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|obstacles (definition essay)
2 - Good evening. What is/are the prompt/specifics for this assignment? I am afraid I will need more details to...
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|Nameless Girl - An essay about someone who has made an impact on...
12 - calend4r, I agree; it's much nicer when we've got the whole picture. Regards, Gloria Moderator, EssayForum.com...
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|I have a close relation to the Latin word "Mores" - FSU Admission Essay
NEW - In comparison to the motto of Florida State, "Vires, Artes, Mores", I believe I have a close relation to...
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|Addictive tendencies - family history, culture, or environment
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|"Can we make a difference in the world?" Notre Dame
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|"The Melting Pot" - Common app Main essay
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|Miami Rowing Club; MY activities
NEW - 154 words, help!! also,***please edit**** A thousand and one doubts floated through my head as I anxiously sat...
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|The school has always been a dream of mine. fsu essay "vires, artes, mores"
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