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Personal Essay - Something I've learned through a personal experience

6 - Great essay. I love the way you cross-cut your experience learning the bass guitar with your volunteer experience. The...

ScholarshipTheAnswer - May 26, 2009EF_Sean - May 27, 2009
Fraternity Interest Letter

6 - Your letter is a bit vague. Try adding some specifics to make in more interesting. What qualities specifically do...

Lettersambitious1 - May 26, 2009EF_Sean - Jun 2, 2009
Essay on Early Years Social Policy

4 - Since you have already researched the two acts, why not write up a list of differences between them, and...

Essaysmaextra7 - May 26, 2009EF_Sean - May 27, 2009
SOP - Ph.D in Environmental Engineering is the foundation

8 - A couple of minor fixes for your intro: "Engineering is the foundation on which humankind builds its world...

Graduatehiren1982 - May 26, 2009EF_Sean - May 28, 2009
Essay on the legal drinking age

8 - Your essay come up with a very different way of presentation. I loved it. I will use it...

Writing Feedbackkokujampo - May 25, 2009biggestv - May 28, 2009
'Economics in Chengdu' - Letter of motivation to University of Amsterdam

13 - However, the word "foreigner" is not in and of itself pejorative, as certain ethnic slurs are. If it has...

UndergraduateFederico - May 25, 2009EF_Sean - Jun 3, 2009
Causes of Global Financial Crisis

3 - While moderating here, I have often found myself recommending three books over and over again: Stechen King's On Writing,...

Writing Feedbackferocious12 - May 25, 2009EF_Kevin - May 26, 2009
Essay "The Library is a Shed of Knowledge"

4 - I would like to read how someone can find a book at the library or how the library is...

Essayssepti - May 24, 2009bubuvio - Jun 10, 2009
Firmly believe it is the best university for me; U Ryerson; Why apply?

12 - That's a good suggestion even if your interest is sincere. When writing an application of any kind -- job...

Undergraduatenuri - May 25, 2009EF_Simone - May 29, 2009
WPE --The minimum wage in the U.S.

5 - Yes, that's the one. You know that there are reasons to increase minimum wage (protect workers from exploitation)...

Writing Feedbacksapst21 - May 25, 2009EF_Kevin - May 26, 2009
American Summer Camp in Kayrakkum, Tajikistan

4 - Well, why do you want to attend the camp? Is it to broaden your mind? Meet new people? Experience...

UndergraduateShade45 - May 25, 2009EF_Sean - May 31, 2009
[TOEFL ESSAY ] Should the Government Provide Free College?

4 - Thank you sooooo much. It helps me a lot. :)...

Writing Feedbackrjsdndi - May 24, 2009rjsdndi - May 25, 2009
energy towards college, family personal statement/diversity statement for Law School

4 - Hi JVS, instead of asking people to email their essays to you, please just browse around in EssayForum to...

Graduatejvs2764 - May 24, 2009EF_Kevin - May 25, 2009
Personal Essay (the college of Medicine)

3 - Simone, I'm so glad you mentioned "indecision." I could not find the words to express what I wanted to...

Undergraduatesammour - May 24, 2009EF_Kevin - May 25, 2009
"A Latin-American" - Scholarship/college essay

8 - Since I was a child Good job. Now, go through and remove excessive words that clutter your message....

Scholarshipmishmon - May 24, 2009EF_Simone - May 27, 2009
How can I describe this graph?

7 - I'd say the number for the Master's degree is off. The bar clearly stretches to the $60,000 mark, so...

Essayssoha - May 23, 2009EF_Sean - May 24, 2009
History, Royal Engineer essay.

6 - You also need to work on integrating your quotations better. "The following quote proves my point" is a horrible...

Writing Feedbackeddy9898 - May 23, 2009EF_Sean - May 28, 2009
Toefl: Is this good enough to get 24 score in writing section.

3 - Aye, the more concise the better, as multiple writers have noted. However, your fix for the sentence changes his...

Writing Feedbackbiggestv - May 23, 2009EF_Sean - May 24, 2009
Clep essay-Laws should not be rigid or fixed. Instead, they should be flexible.

4 - Your essay is very general and need specefic examples. Your grammer still need improvement. so I think to improve...

Writing FeedbackIndian - May 22, 2009biggestv - May 27, 2009
Originality means putting old ideas together in new ways

7 - Good work. I liked how you really explored your thesis statement throughout your essay....

EssaysIndian - May 21, 2009Geoff - May 27, 2009
students should work in groups

6 - Peter, You did an excellent job of providing examples for your facts. Good work....

EssaysPeterV - May 21, 2009Geoff - May 28, 2009
TOEFL - Prefer to work for a large company; good material rewards

7 - Actually, it is generally a good idea to avoid labeling your conclusion with one of those phrases. It should...

Writing Feedbackwing - May 22, 2009EF_Sean - Jun 6, 2009
CLEP English Comp. -- "That Government is Best Which Governs Least"

5 - Essay is very nice, I am also planning to take the same test. Your essay helps me knowing some...

Writing FeedbackTWRTW106 - May 21, 2009Indian - May 22, 2009
effective or ineffective decision making and leadership - research question

5 - You'll do best, I think, if you can do as the assignment requires, and write from experience. The assignment...

Research Papersmsennie - May 21, 2009EF_Simone - May 27, 2009
people set the goals in the life which they think they can achieve

6 - Thanks a billion Kevin, I will surely do these things. No I don't have to write sepecifically about...

UndergraduateIndian - May 19, 2009Indian - May 21, 2009
Reading Based and Comparsion

4 - it says to find the period of the style's artwork I cant really seem to find it? Hercules the...

Book ReportsMoeMoe1 - May 20, 2009MoeMoe1 - May 25, 2009
Making this the most persuasive research essay

8 - I'd say your essay needs to deal more with the issue of where graffiti is placed. I don't think...

Research Papersgiovanni33 - May 20, 2009EF_Sean - May 23, 2009
School bus trip - a story

4 - Better yet, write the story so that the theme emerges from it without your protagonist having to reflect on...

Writing Feedbackceberus - May 20, 2009EF_Sean - May 23, 2009
VIETNAM PAPER- Why did we lose?

3 - So, did all of Asia fall under communist rule? Or did the U.S. involvement in Vietnam prevent that?...

Writing FeedbackSmartFelix - May 20, 2009EF_Sean - May 21, 2009
University of Wisconsin essay help - technically I am transferring

6 - I'd say the essays are pretty important, if only because they show how much a student wants to get...

Undergraduatenodnarb402 - May 20, 2009EF_Sean - May 23, 2009
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