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Response to Dr. Kings Letter to Clergymen Essay

3 - Are you supposed to write a response to Dr. King from a modern perspective, or as if you were...

Lettersnthomasdonalds - Apr 14, 2009EF_Sean - Apr 17, 2009
"King of the Jungle - story feedback

5 - thank you for looking over my short story...

Writing Feedbackmeshaal - Apr 14, 2009meshaal - Apr 16, 2009
BCC ESSAY on my academic life and career goals - I don't know what do I wanna do in future as my job

24 - I guess you could say, "I never had a paid work experience, but I did learn x, y, and...

Essaysnewsha31 - Apr 14, 2009EF_Simone - Oct 4, 2009
Drinking age, lowering age to 18 - research paper

21 - Hi I recommend that anyone not only have to stop drinking , but also should not drink forever ....

Research Paperskpr1491 - Apr 14, 2009aqeel - Dec 26, 2012
GED Practice essay: Do you think people learn from their mistakes?

7 - Your concluding paragraph could use some beefing up. And I think if you gave some examples of people learning...

Writing Feedbackspczmb - Apr 14, 2009SairaTasartir - Apr 23, 2009
A persuasive speech on discrimination

6 - If you are going to write a persuasive speech, then presumably you will be less interested in what the...

Speechestwashington0541 - Apr 14, 2009EF_Sean - Apr 16, 2009
Early human development is strongly influenced by nature

6 - Is this supposed to be a five paragraph essay, or a 4? For a standard, five paragraph essay, this...

Writing FeedbackAlshebah - Apr 14, 2009SairaTasartir - Apr 22, 2009
Mary Louise Pratt, "Arts of the Contact Zone"

4 - My family was originally from Emporia, Kansas and was, therefore, a lot to get used to. I first...

Essayslitahays91 - Apr 14, 2009silverystars - Apr 18, 2009
500 word image essay (Black Hair Report)

4 - You seem to be on the right track. Now go into more detail. Why were they "jumping" through the...

Writing Feedbackteelyons - Apr 14, 2009EF_Sean - Apr 16, 2009
Art Paper - Elizabeth Murray

4 - Like Kevin said, I would strengthen the first paragraph. One way of doing that is by quoting Murray near...

Writing FeedbackLink42 - Apr 14, 2009silverystars - Apr 18, 2009
We can't negative wholly benefit from nuclear technology

5 - Of course, the mod's are spot on, but I'd like to add that while reading your essay, I was...

Writing Feedbacksecret1302 - Apr 14, 2009SairaTasartir - Apr 23, 2009
TOEFL Essay - Parents are the best teachers (Devotion and penetration)

8 - You might want to "exhort" parents to spend more one-on-one time with their children. That is one way to...

Writing FeedbackMonkeyDDragon - Apr 14, 2009SairaTasartir - Apr 23, 2009
Suxanne - a story about one of my dreams

3 - Wow, your opening imagery is graphic and gripping. Great job. If you want to make your story even stronger,...

Writing Feedbacknizarnasir - Apr 14, 2009EF_Sean - Apr 18, 2009
"the chase" story

4 - thank you guys, ur really helpful. but Sean can u suggest some better verbs. im really bad at this....

Writing Feedbacknewsha31 - Apr 13, 2009newsha31 - Apr 14, 2009
Poetry about the Enron Scandal

7 - oops, i meant add more in haha txs for the advice...

Poetryjianxian - Apr 13, 2009jianxian - Apr 15, 2009
Appeal essay, UC Davis of Engineering

3 - I'm very appreciative that University of California Davis has offered me an opportunity for an appeal. After receiving the...

Undergraduatexwy - Apr 13, 2009EF_Sean - Apr 14, 2009
Stephen King essay (three body paragraphs subject)

7 - FICTION IS THE TURTH INSIDE THE LIE" HOWEVER FICTION CAN ALSO BE THE LIE INSIDE A TURTH. help ME...

Essayskcello - Apr 13, 2009wendyroza - Apr 24, 2012
Essay to Compare and Contrast Two members of Your Family

5 - Ahhh!! That is harsh. Parents are people, too. How would you like to have your mom say she...

Writing FeedbackQueenie31 - Apr 13, 2009EF_Kevin - Apr 14, 2009
Can I get away with recycling an old paper for a new assignment?

9 - I think you should try some other subject matter besides your old research paper. At least you know...

Grammar, Usagedhogan1971 - Apr 13, 2009babydoll - Apr 24, 2009
Psychology Concepts applied to the real world

5 - ...taught them to sew their clothes... She stayed very close to her sister and brought her along so...

Writing Feedbackteelyons - Apr 13, 2009EF_Kevin - Apr 14, 2009
Why you are specifically well-suited to contribute to this internship

2 - I looks like you have a good grasp on the importance of volunteer work. I may change this sentence...

Graduatepia - Apr 13, 2009teelyons - Apr 13, 2009
'Off of an auto-pilot' - Bentley University Transfer Essay

6 - What past work experiences, skills, capabilities do you already have that you can bring onto campus? Using past...

Undergraduatenightgal545 - Apr 13, 2009babydoll - Apr 19, 2009
"Who Swims with the Tuna" by Quammen and "Riches of the Sea" by Scully

3 - I think it was David Brin who first pointed out that environmentalists are always only really concerned with creatures...

Writing FeedbackCodyB - Apr 13, 2009EF_Sean - Apr 14, 2009
TOEFL Essay -Why go to university (career preparation, self-actualization)

7 - Well, i think in TOEFL essay, it is important to use conjunctions. May be instead of saying 'in conlcusion',...

Writing FeedbackMonkeyDDragon - Apr 13, 2009Abby002 - Apr 26, 2009
counselling essay

2 - I would often judge people on assumptions I had been brought up with. Since starting college, I have...

Writing Feedbackkazzy31 - Apr 12, 2009EF_Kevin - Apr 13, 2009
1st person - writing question

12 - well its totally ok. i dont mind at all. good thing u didnt go with "it". lol...

Grammar, Usageluke - Apr 12, 2009newsha31 - May 6, 2009
I need help review this essay ("the greatest goal you hope to achieve")

3 - Please give a little bit more substantial help to other members! Then, I'll spend time helping with your essay....

UndergraduateGrammarFool - Apr 12, 2009EF_Kevin - Apr 13, 2009
"Parting Gift" poem

9 - Hey, good news for me. Sean's advice for you improved my own perspective on poetry a lot. I actually...

Poetrysilverystars - Apr 12, 2009EF_Kevin - Apr 15, 2009
Education Playground -- letters after your name

3 - I got confused when I read this. I realize now that you mean to say "a part of"...

Writing Feedbackzoomdots - Apr 11, 2009EF_Kevin - Apr 12, 2009
Scholarship Essay - Effect of Presidential Election

4 - Yeah, don't use the forum quite that way. It should not be a resource the enable students to avoid...

Scholarshipcali - Apr 12, 2009EF_Kevin - Apr 13, 2009
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