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Pygmalion Paragraph for brochure

3 - Hey, that is good stuff from Sean! Yes, the parts where you tell some of what happens in the...

Writing Feedbackmenamilad - Mar 21, 2009EF_Kevin - Mar 22, 2009
Should the policy of supplying textbook for free adhere to colleges?

16 - The first sentence is manifestly false. First, as it stands, you are saying that most adults and high school...

EssaysMSNYCBRATTY - Mar 20, 2009EF_Sean - Mar 29, 2009
Term paper based on "Brave New World, Nineteen Eighty-Four, and our World"

3 - You might also want to focus more on the main difference between the two novels, which is that the...

Essayskahadi - Mar 20, 2009EF_Sean - Mar 21, 2009
Bachelor's degree in Nursing - my background, attitudes, and interest essay

5 - I agree with Kevin -- the first paragraph should go. Apart from that, the essay looks good....

Undergraduatedenndj1 - Mar 20, 2009EF_Sean - Mar 21, 2009
Essay on Professor's house & Old Mortality

4 - Alright, I will give it a shot first. Thanks!...

Essayssams - Mar 20, 2009sams - Mar 22, 2009
"PGD method" - feetback on introduction of short academic essay

12 - "a morally problematic way of thinking that the Holocaust should have taught us to avoid." Avoid comparing things to...

Writing FeedbackTAMTAM - Mar 20, 2009EF_Sean - Mar 30, 2009
writing about gay couples, need ideas

4 - You might want to decide which aspect of the topic you want to write about. You could argue that...

Essaysvictorialeann - Mar 19, 2009EF_Sean - Mar 20, 2009
Goals: Dancer, Hairdresser, Musician

5 - The first goal beside that of becoming a dancer is to become an elementary school teacher. One reason...

Writing Feedbackanzgurl - Mar 19, 2009EF_Kevin - Mar 21, 2009
Characteristics of a Dramic Script

3 - You could write a story about an experience of comparing a script to a novel... or writing a script...

Essayskimstroug - Mar 19, 2009EF_Kevin - Mar 20, 2009
Motivation to Business Studies; Degree at JKP

8 - Thank you very much, Kevin!!...

Undergraduatetaodo - Mar 19, 2009Hoa Tien - Mar 23, 2009
Viktor Frankl's words; MSc in Human Resource Management

3 - Today, I take pride myself in being an extrovert. ..."helping me secure the 3rd rank in the school...

Graduatesaloni - Mar 19, 2009EF_Kevin - Mar 20, 2009
Meaning of "Memo & Articles of association are the constitution of a limited company"

4 - Hi Kevin Thanks you very much. that helped me. you guys didn't let me down. Again Thanks...

Essaysireland2002 - Mar 19, 2009ireland2002 - Mar 26, 2009
I have to write a senses poem for my assignment ("feeling doubt")

17 - a single leaf is falling swung by the wind dried and dead now not knowing where it goes tree...

Poetryamie - Mar 19, 2009EF_Kevin - Mar 29, 2009
A short story draft - dirty job, "Dear Diary" comment

7 - tnx sean, but i dont get ur question....

Writing Feedbacknewsha31 - Mar 18, 2009newsha31 - Mar 20, 2009
Essay on: "I am very happy to meet my mother for the first time"

6 - Pay close attention to detail, and description here - really try and use imagery and send the reader into...

Essaysalwin - Mar 18, 20091s2a3s - Apr 5, 2009
"What did you want to be when you were a child" - 5 paragraph essay

4 - However, when I got older, I realized that being a dancer was not my top goal anymore, because I...

Writing Feedbackanzgurl - Mar 18, 2009anzgurl - Mar 19, 2009
Summary and Personal Response "Hills Like White Elephants" grammar check

4 - At some point you might want to think about the two main meanings of the phrase "white elephant." It...

Writing Feedbackkinghippo - Mar 18, 2009EF_Sean - Mar 20, 2009
"My bad school experience" - academic paragraph

7 - This is a real good oppertunity for you to enage the reader...if it can be fictional then maybe you...

Essayswaf - Mar 18, 20091s2a3s - Apr 5, 2009
An essay about a movie with strong ideology

8 - Hi Shivani) What is the name of the movie? Is it Blood Diamond with DiCaprio? And could you be...

Essaysplugging_along - Mar 18, 2009KhanhZ - Aug 13, 2013
Hamlet Theme Essay Introduction Help

7 - Think, how is betrayal evident in Hamlet? There's Claudius' rise to the throne; Gertrude's marriage to Claudius; Rosencrantz and...

Book Reportslucky - Mar 18, 2009Kitsumi - Jan 9, 2013
Writing an essay about anything we feel dear (graphic design)

3 - Great! Can you look at how art associated with Hinduism is being used on the Internet? Look at websites...

EssaysPriya Nayer - Mar 18, 2009EF_Kevin - Mar 19, 2009
"Lithuania Environmental problems" essay - correct my mistakes

3 - Nevertheless, Lithuania has problems involving the quantity of garbage, car ... Yeah... you need to be more specific. What...

Writing Feedbackjurgita - Mar 18, 2009EF_Kevin - Mar 19, 2009
"high regards on my education" - Need Imput/Editing on My Statement

4 - Your last paragraph seems a bit desperate. I think you should focus less on the hopelessness of the situation...

UndergraduateWritersBlock - Mar 18, 2009flight23 - Mar 21, 2009
psychological phenomena in shrek 2 - essay question

4 - Oh man! Isn't that the one where he is having to deal with the donkey played by Eddie Murphy?...

Essaysbabsushe - Mar 18, 2009EF_Kevin - Mar 18, 2009
"three unique factors" - Is my short answer response too weak?

15 - That will help. The idea is to stay fairly neutral yourself, to avoid seeming overly religious or overly critical...

Undergraduateflight23 - Mar 18, 2009EF_Sean - Mar 21, 2009
Using personal pronouns and personal examples and opinions in an essay

5 - Thank you soooo much :)...

UndergraduateChidem - Mar 18, 2009Chidem - Mar 19, 2009
Student Government Speech

4 - In the first two paragraphs, get rid of all those uses of the word "I" because, whenever you are...

Speechescowman809 - Mar 18, 2009EF_Kevin - Mar 18, 2009
Focault Methodology for research on contemporary mobilization of the GLBT

2 - I think it will look more "solid" if you merge these two paragraphs: will be utilized... Michel Focault...

Research Papersreciprocal - Mar 17, 2009EF_Kevin - Mar 18, 2009
rhetorical analysis of Martin Luther king letter from the Birimingham Jail

6 - No one who lives in the United States can be considered an "outsider." These are brilliant, specific arguments:...

Essaysjgore9 - Mar 17, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 4, 2009
essay on the topic "who i am"?

7 - With regard to the essay about who "you" are, you could argue that every single quality embodied in you,...

Undergraduateemmi - Mar 17, 2009Mustafa1991 - Mar 29, 2009
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