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"What did you want to be when you were a child" - 5 paragraph essay

4 - However, when I got older, I realized that being a dancer was not my top goal anymore, because I...

Writing Feedbackanzgurl - Mar 18, 2009anzgurl - Mar 19, 2009
Summary and Personal Response "Hills Like White Elephants" grammar check

4 - At some point you might want to think about the two main meanings of the phrase "white elephant." It...

Writing Feedbackkinghippo - Mar 18, 2009EF_Sean - Mar 20, 2009
"My bad school experience" - academic paragraph

7 - This is a real good oppertunity for you to enage the reader...if it can be fictional then maybe you...

Essayswaf - Mar 18, 20091s2a3s - Apr 5, 2009
An essay about a movie with strong ideology

8 - Hi Shivani) What is the name of the movie? Is it Blood Diamond with DiCaprio? And could you be...

Essaysplugging_along - Mar 18, 2009KhanhZ - Aug 13, 2013
Hamlet Theme Essay Introduction Help

7 - Think, how is betrayal evident in Hamlet? There's Claudius' rise to the throne; Gertrude's marriage to Claudius; Rosencrantz and...

Book Reportslucky - Mar 18, 2009Kitsumi - Jan 9, 2013
Writing an essay about anything we feel dear (graphic design)

3 - Great! Can you look at how art associated with Hinduism is being used on the Internet? Look at websites...

EssaysPriya Nayer - Mar 18, 2009EF_Kevin - Mar 19, 2009
"Lithuania Environmental problems" essay - correct my mistakes

3 - Nevertheless, Lithuania has problems involving the quantity of garbage, car ... Yeah... you need to be more specific. What...

Writing Feedbackjurgita - Mar 18, 2009EF_Kevin - Mar 19, 2009
"high regards on my education" - Need Imput/Editing on My Statement

4 - Your last paragraph seems a bit desperate. I think you should focus less on the hopelessness of the situation...

UndergraduateWritersBlock - Mar 18, 2009flight23 - Mar 21, 2009
psychological phenomena in shrek 2 - essay question

4 - Oh man! Isn't that the one where he is having to deal with the donkey played by Eddie Murphy?...

Essaysbabsushe - Mar 18, 2009EF_Kevin - Mar 18, 2009
"three unique factors" - Is my short answer response too weak?

15 - That will help. The idea is to stay fairly neutral yourself, to avoid seeming overly religious or overly critical...

Undergraduateflight23 - Mar 18, 2009EF_Sean - Mar 21, 2009
Using personal pronouns and personal examples and opinions in an essay

5 - Thank you soooo much :)...

UndergraduateChidem - Mar 18, 2009Chidem - Mar 19, 2009
Student Government Speech

4 - In the first two paragraphs, get rid of all those uses of the word "I" because, whenever you are...

Speechescowman809 - Mar 18, 2009EF_Kevin - Mar 18, 2009
Focault Methodology for research on contemporary mobilization of the GLBT

2 - I think it will look more "solid" if you merge these two paragraphs: will be utilized... Michel Focault...

Research Papersreciprocal - Mar 17, 2009EF_Kevin - Mar 18, 2009
rhetorical analysis of Martin Luther king letter from the Birimingham Jail

6 - No one who lives in the United States can be considered an "outsider." These are brilliant, specific arguments:...

Essaysjgore9 - Mar 17, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 4, 2009
essay on the topic "who i am"?

7 - With regard to the essay about who "you" are, you could argue that every single quality embodied in you,...

Undergraduateemmi - Mar 17, 2009Mustafa1991 - Mar 29, 2009
Admission Form - General Admission Questions

6 - Thanks Essay Forum. Thanks Everybody for sharing the knowledge....

Graduatekasun - Mar 17, 2009kasun - Mar 19, 2009
From Bioinformatics MSc In Finance

3 - If there is no obvious tie-in between the two, focus on making your reasons for changing as thoughtful and...

Graduateeshu - Mar 17, 2009EF_Sean - Mar 17, 2009
Law & Society - Essay Proposal

3 - Perhaps you might ask yourself what social harm, if any, would come from letting everyone, male and female, wander...

Essaysd3sire - Mar 17, 2009EF_Sean - Mar 17, 2009
Essay for Study Abroad -- Language and Humanities

2 - I am not only I gifted in the study of languages and humanities, but also in math and science....

Undergraduatematts05 - Mar 16, 2009EF_Kevin - Mar 17, 2009
Need some help with research "Comics in Education"

3 - Comics are all about archetypes and invented mythologies, so that gives you a couple of subjects they could be...

Research PapersMurdoc113 - Mar 16, 2009EF_Sean - Mar 20, 2009
What do you think composition is? (this is the essay title we were given)

5 - Thank you so much for everyones input into my essay.i have learnt somethin for a change.now i need help...

Writing FeedbackPriya Nayer - Mar 16, 2009Priya Nayer - Mar 17, 2009
The Importance of Choosing Strong Verbs

2 - A better developed verb presentation in a creative writing essay can also be helped or further strengthened by the...

Grammar, UsageEF_Sean - Mar 16, 2009Holt - Mar 2, 2017
Essay for TOEFL: "establishing a new university in your community"

5 - This essay already seems to be in good shape, after Tyler and Kevin's excellent advice. One thing I would...

Writing Feedbackmogul - Mar 16, 2009EF_Sean - Mar 17, 2009
Career Goals Essay for scholarship -- Love of numbers leads to accounting

NEW - I need help with a scholarship essay... I need to know what one thinks of this essay.. What can...

ScholarshipWritersBlock - Mar 16, 2009 -
a psychology research paper

3 - Hello! Gloria is not active as a moderator right now, but there are a few others of us... ...

Writing Feedbackjenhur - Mar 16, 2009EF_Kevin - Mar 17, 2009
"Why do you slay the righteous?"/ Narrative Essay - Story or Narration?

13 - yeah i probably should've quoted, i thought it was from somewhere i just didnt know exactly where....

EssaysUMK - Mar 16, 2009UMK - Mar 22, 2009
I hopefully graduate suma cum laude in Cinematography

5 - For the sake of making that first paragraph well-structured, I think you should find a way to add one...

Scholarshipsharkbait09 - Mar 15, 2009EF_Kevin - Mar 23, 2009
Personal Statement for Masters in Chemical Engineering

2 - During my secondary education , I accumulated hands-on experience in adjusting and operating experimental equipments, acquiring and analyzing data,...

Graduatetopnosh - Mar 15, 2009EF_Kevin - Mar 16, 2009
'Focusing to get some sleep' - Upenn, 300-page autobiography

4 - Page 217 in an autobiography does seem like it would cover material that happens well after the age of...

Undergraduatekarena89 - Mar 15, 2009EF_Sean - Mar 17, 2009
Leon Trotsky, writing a research paper

3 - yes, the thing to do is read what others have written about him. (That is not stealing ideas from...

Research Papersseneca - Mar 15, 2009EF_Kevin - Mar 16, 2009
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