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"You don't choose your family." - Turning Point Essay Edit

4 - Every time I talk to my parents, I always feel that they're always yelling at me and they don't...

Writing Feedbackzouter - Mar 6, 2009EF_Kevin - Mar 7, 2009
"Life is like riding a bicycle.."

5 - Was this suppose to relate to the quote about life being like riding a motorcycle? you need to find...

Writing FeedbackAaron - Mar 6, 2009sharkbait09 - Mar 15, 2009
Management issues @ McDonald's Corporation; Org. & HR Mgmt Homework & Need your help

7 - Don't forget that if you post the draft of your answers to the question here, we will be able...

EssaysPlaintiff - Mar 6, 2009EF_Sean - Mar 8, 2009
Statement of Purpose for Msc.International Trade Policy

3 - Yes, this is like a perfect, model essay, and I might use it as an example to show other...

Graduateandref - Mar 6, 2009EF_Kevin - Mar 7, 2009
Ethics and Values BA Hons Social Work

3 - First thing I notice is a mistake with the APA in-text citation: ...social interaction." (Fook, 2007, pg 52)....

Writing Feedbackelzbietabielec - Mar 6, 2009EF_Kevin - Mar 7, 2009
Cause and effect essay: 1 introduction, 2 cause, 2 effect and 1 conclusion

9 - No i believe you better go with cause 1 , effect 1 ..cause 2 , effect 2..so that the...

Essaysalfonzoww - Mar 5, 2009menamilad - Mar 21, 2009
Oh Spring! Where is your sense of humor?

5 - Wow, that is some impressive advice. I had to take a minute to acknowledge that Sean gave some excellent...

Writing Feedbackjohnyeeto - Mar 5, 2009EF_Kevin - Mar 6, 2009
"Driving Under the Influence" - Thesis

4 - You could narrow your theses if you wanted to, and would probably have to if you were writing a...

Essaysbezabee98 - Mar 5, 2009EF_Sean - Mar 5, 2009
Flight & Growing Up -Comparive Essay

3 - Here are a few other fixes to go with the great advice from Sean; This metaphorically means that...

Writing Feedbackmohsin_ahmad - Mar 4, 2009EF_Kevin - Mar 6, 2009
'It's time to start my career building' - review achievement essay

4 - Thank you both very much for your feedback!...

Graduatered13 - Mar 4, 2009red13 - Mar 5, 2009
Personal Essay (Questions are a necessary part of life)

12 - good essay...very good use of diction...

Undergraduateshadowx - Mar 4, 2009sharkbait09 - Mar 15, 2009
How to Choose the Members of Your Doctoral Committee?

NEW - The members of the doctoral committee are an integral part in pursuing and achieving the doctorate degree in any...

DissertationsEF_Team - Mar 4, 2009 -
Shopping is a necessity in our life

5 - What exactly is the point of your essay? You say you like shopping, but you also say shopping can...

Writing Feedbackjurgita - Mar 4, 2009EF_Sean - Mar 4, 2009
Hospitality is a virtue passed down to me from my family; NYU sup 5 short answers

4 - Thankx Tyler! I am staying in Singapore. And everyday is summer here. That's a huge blind spot. And Kevin...

Undergraduatealright - Mar 4, 2009alright - Mar 5, 2009
Looking for information on the modern culinary brigade system for paper.

6 - Something you have probably already just learned, but it bears repeating -- waiting until the day before your essay...

Research Papersjorsb - Mar 3, 2009EF_Sean - Mar 4, 2009
Reading - My favorite subject essay

6 - Kevin's advice is great. That would turn the essay into an essay on your favorite books, which, if you...

Writing Feedbackmystery200 - Mar 3, 2009EF_Sean - Mar 4, 2009
Jame Joyce's Portrait

11 - If this is supposed to be a literary essay, you have some more work to do. The essay doesn't...

Writing FeedbackNecrovex - Mar 3, 2009EF_Sean - Mar 4, 2009
King Lear. How To Write An Essay "the audience is sympathetic towards King Lear"

7 - Could you add more details about the title, may be about customer loyalty?...

Essaysamiiowens - Mar 3, 2009selena y - Jan 25, 2013
Essay to Compare your Two Teachers

10 - i agree with snowman...when I make outlines of a subject I'm about to write on, I find that I...

Writing Feedbackchubbybear - Mar 3, 2009sharkbait09 - Mar 17, 2009
Neruda Poem, a reply to the author

5 - Now, try making it more poetic. Really, anything without meter isn't a true poem, so the obvious approach would...

PoetryMustafa1991 - Mar 3, 2009EF_Sean - Mar 3, 2009
Castin Characters #1: Jim

8 - haha yeah i know sean...thats kinda smart too....

Writing Feedbacknewsha31 - Mar 2, 2009newsha31 - Mar 4, 2009
Why I Would Like to Transfer? - Common App

5 - I wanted a job that would truly challenge me and give me room to grow, and I realized that...

Undergraduaterobbyj123 - Mar 2, 2009EF_Kevin - Mar 3, 2009
eating disorders (Anorexia Nervosa), introductory paragraph

10 - Aha! We stumped the moderator. This calls for a vampire laugh. MMUUUAHAHA...

Writing Feedbackshan - Mar 2, 2009Gautama - Mar 5, 2009
Essay on two different shows and how they construct gender stereotypes

4 - If you are still stuck after reading Tyler and Kevin's advice (all of which is great, btw) just pick...

EssaysReo0hhh__95 - Mar 2, 2009EF_Sean - Mar 2, 2009
Explain why you feel you merit consideration as an applicant for an award or scholarship

11 - hey molly! Not once, in my whole high school career, have I said to myself, "Self, what you...

Scholarshipmolzeeee - Mar 1, 2009sharkbait09 - Mar 17, 2009
I made a decision that change my life completely; Why I Want to Transfer to Cornell

4 - The ending isn't that bad. It clearly refers back to the opening, "We are raising you and your siblings...

Undergraduatepvg - Mar 1, 2009EF_Sean - Mar 3, 2009
In my own words: Why is a scholarship important to you?

5 - Ok thank you all very much. This was a great help!...

Scholarshipneonnelson - Mar 1, 2009neonnelson - Mar 10, 2009
'unexplainable bond' - Burnett Honor College Essay for Entrance

4 - Specific is good, as the others have mentioned. In addition to specific anecdotes, you might want to discuss some...

Undergraduatescholargirl - Mar 1, 2009EF_Sean - Mar 2, 2009
Essay on a personal challenge at school

5 - "My friends and I often do our homework together, but they always got done before me. " You should...

Writing Feedbackmystery200 - Mar 1, 2009EF_Sean - Mar 5, 2009
SBU Essay - An Intellectual Experience

5 - When you say, "mounting the horse with a bizarre passion that was overwhelming in its sincerity," it sounds really...

Undergraduatemadihalubsyoux3 - Mar 1, 2009EF_Kevin - Mar 1, 2009
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