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Essay on mandatory School Uniforms. Need revision help.

2 - The most noticeable problem with this essay is that you cut back and forth between both sides of the...

Writing Feedbackmollyvdb88 - Dec 11, 2008EF_Sean - Dec 12, 2008
HEOP ESSAY SCHOLARSHIP

6 - you can make it flow better by reading your essay out loud to yourself...it removes any awkwardness and make...

Scholarshipfelixs07 - Dec 11, 2008fastracker91 - Dec 15, 2008
Marist Supplent (1000 characterS)

2 - 'when i am finished with college,my goal is to work for a big corporative company......

Undergraduatefelixs07 - Dec 11, 2008prl - Dec 12, 2008
"My Dad in Me" essay need help with editing and any other things you notice

4 - thank you to the people you helped this helped a lot! :D...

Writing Feedbackstef777 - Dec 11, 2008stef777 - Dec 13, 2008
Campus / Let love speak - Tufts Supplements

9 - admissions.tufts.edu/?pid=203 i'm not sure what the maximum is but it says here 50 words so i'm not so...

Undergraduatetiffanyh5849 - Dec 11, 2008zowzow - Dec 18, 2008
Why XYZ college?

4 - Thank you both very much. Your suggestions help me a lot....

Undergraduatejerry - Dec 11, 2008jerry - Dec 13, 2008
"My hobby" essay (reading)

4 - Yes, how do you convey a feeling? I recommend making some time to read stephen king's On Writing. ...

Writing Feedbackjerry - Dec 11, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 14, 2008
"independent thinking" ; Reference letter (teaching experience)

2 - During every class, she follows what I say and responds with enthusiasm. Whenever she comes across difficulties, she...

Lettersseatoy - Dec 11, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 11, 2008
the Singapore Youth Flying Club - college admission essay

6 - Well, there is more than one right way to do it, of course, but keep in mind that you...

Undergraduateraisin - Dec 11, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 12, 2008
Talking about Disney in my admission essay - Is that too childish?

4 - Hi, thanks so much for your constructive feedback! (: I took your advice and searched Google Scholar but...

Undergraduateraisin - Dec 11, 2008raisin - Dec 12, 2008
Essay on personal experience to NUS

2 - What people say is true: college life is a landmark of a person's life. To me, being a college...

UndergraduateAmyRemus - Dec 11, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 11, 2008
U of Ill. extra-curricular activities

5 - Here is a sentence that you can cut: Ezra and I spent the day talking, painting, dancing and...

Undergraduateprincetongirl - Dec 11, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 12, 2008
"I love my friends" essay, help edit

3 - Yes, your writing is technically sound, so that is great. You have good spelling and grammar. Now, can...

Writing Feedbackstef777 - Dec 10, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 11, 2008
'economics and law, calculus and chemistry, and philosophy and film' -Why Duke? Short

4 - Discuss a quality of Duke, and how that quality will affect your passion for political science....

Undergraduaterandomzm - Dec 10, 2008shahindian2009 - Dec 12, 2008
Chivalry Essay, Advantages and Disadvantages

2 - Too much retelling of the story, not enough analysis. Also, what analysis there is tends to miss the mark....

Writing Feedbackvkwang - Dec 10, 2008EF_Sean - Dec 10, 2008
'girl from a foreign country had impact' - harvard common app

26 - chink i need ur help again lol after the climax " see you later big brother" should...

Undergraduatequack09 - Dec 10, 2008quack09 - Dec 26, 2008
'Better cooking' - Lafayette Supplement

4 - If you can make it so that this experience occurred when you were very young, you could tell the...

Undergraduatefelixs07 - Dec 10, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 11, 2008
What is the difference between a hypothesis & aim?

5 - Please write down what is most compelling out of the research you have done? then we can build on...

Grammar, Usagecharlqua - Dec 10, 2008linmark - Nov 4, 2012
An autobiographical essay this is for pace university

2 - I'd suggest you start by expanding on your struggles with dyslexia. You use that as a theme to unite...

Undergraduatemetsfan2044 - Dec 10, 2008EF_Sean - Dec 10, 2008
'economics and business complete' - Jp Morgan scholarship essay

3 - Hi! I know it's hard to get an essay to "flow." The trick is to link one idea to...

Scholarshipmetsfan2044 - Dec 10, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 11, 2008
points on how to write an essay about myself; give me a sample

12 - ok... i was thinking that tooo hahah !! anywayz thnx !...

Essaysnanayaws - Dec 10, 2008tae9141 - Jan 1, 2010
Toefl: What is a very important skill a person should learn

2 - This essay needs revising to be clearer throughout. You can start by defining in your introduction what you mean...

Writing Feedbackcamellia2008 - Dec 10, 2008EF_Sean - Dec 10, 2008
essay about world crisis

3 - The economic crisis, which was only rumors few months ago, is making hard to get credit and work for...

Writing FeedbackGustavo - Dec 10, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 11, 2008
"differences in work" essay

NEW - Hi all, firstly I would like to say that I'm very glad to find this forum, which is a...

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'forgiveness and understanding' - Why essay to Trinity College

2 - By reading THE TRINITY COLLEGE STUDENT INTEGRITY CONTRACT, I learned that Trinity College puts a extreme emphasis on honesty,...

Undergraduatecharliesun - Dec 10, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 10, 2008
A letter to my first-year roommate. I have no idea what to talk about.

19 - Tell him how cool or nerdy you are:P. What awesome gadgets you have which you can share with him...

EssaysSofia - Dec 10, 2008ceberus - Feb 15, 2009
Starting on GWU Essay - what most influenced you to apply

5 - Great essay. Impressed on how you got something after having nothing so quickly. And to Kevin...nice quip...haha....

Undergraduatedennyssampler - Dec 10, 2008gmailblows31 - Dec 17, 2008
Columbia essay - convey a message on who you are.

5 - The thing is, about your essay, is that it captures me. It's a good essay, however, you can improve...

Undergraduateeiiia - Dec 10, 2008Angela629 - Dec 12, 2008
Upenn essay - need help on starting

5 - Okay! I get the idea. Thanks a lot! :D...

Undergraduateeiiia - Dec 9, 2008eiiia - Dec 13, 2008
'twelve years of Catholic schooling' who or what influenced your decision to apply-BU

7 - Just some adjustments to the first line of last para for your consideration: The diversity at BU creates...

Undergraduatejrand17 - Dec 9, 2008eiiia - Dec 12, 2008
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