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Designated Driver - (UC prompt 1 - my world)

5 - Well, if the word limit allows for you to write a bit more, I suggest that you add one...

Undergraduatembhaire - Nov 29, 2008EF_Kevin - Nov 30, 2008
Marriage in "The Story of an Hour" and "A Sorrowful Woman"

2 - A common, naïve assumption is that, once a couple is married, love will overcome all problems. However , the...

Book ReportsRuby3561 - Nov 29, 2008EF_Kevin - Nov 30, 2008
words contrasting the way in which people live their lives

3 - This essay will investigate the contrasting ways in which people live has changed in the current financial crisis. The...

Essayssinaraneto - Nov 29, 2008sinaraneto - Dec 1, 2008
"Do a good turn daily." - Rutgers Essay

4 - You got some good feedback from mstratton8, and i would add that this sentence can be improved: ...some...

UndergraduateErocknroll212 - Nov 29, 2008EF_Kevin - Nov 30, 2008
"I feel it is better to be a leader than a follower." - UC Personal #2

6 - You can begin with this: As a child, I lacked self-confidence and was very shy. Also: ...

Undergraduatebcbossman - Nov 29, 2008EF_Kevin - Nov 30, 2008
foil essay on Wuthering Heights

4 - wow kid wow....

Writing Feedbackkelseyyes - Nov 29, 2008shrooms - Dec 7, 2008
'early stages of my life were transient' - UC Prompt #1; Mechanical Engineering

NEW - Alright, here's a draft of my Prompt #1 essay and its late I know. But due to compulsory military...

Undergraduateleej88 - Nov 29, 2008 -
"I am proud to be a freethinker" - UC prompt 2

2 - Excellent sentence right here: Suddenly, everything right felt so wrong, and everything wrong felt so right, yet my mind...

Undergraduateashelle - Nov 29, 2008EF_Kevin - Nov 30, 2008
Elaborate One of Your Activities - my father's golf club

2 - In my junior year, I worked in my father's golf club, Lao Lao Bay Golf Club. I served food...

Undergraduateop2607 - Nov 29, 2008EF_Kevin - Nov 30, 2008
My Environment - Moving to the Philippines and to a new school

2 - However, after three whole years of life in the contrasting environment, I found myself sharing commonalities with the people...

Undergraduateop2607 - Nov 29, 2008EF_Kevin - Nov 30, 2008
UC TRANSFERRING ESSAY PROMPT 1 & 2, I have a traveler's eye

3 - thank you!...

Undergraduategua - Nov 29, 2008gua - Nov 30, 2008
"America can change. Yes we can." UC #1

5 - Cool, I bet they'll love it. Thanks!!!!...

Undergraduatealexteele - Nov 29, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 1, 2008
wonder and intrigue on how my high school career would unfold; UC essay "My urge for determination"

3 - I was faced with fear, wonder and intrigue about ... I see that in many places you have...

Undergraduateteddy411 - Nov 29, 2008EF_Kevin - Nov 30, 2008
"my drink" - UC Prompt #1

4 - I found some improvements to make in the segment below: This drink I that hold in my hands...

Undergraduatefabxx - Nov 29, 2008EF_Kevin - Nov 30, 2008
Response to question "to what other colleges..."?

3 - Thanks, Kevin! You're always here to give me helpful advice. :) ^___^ A_R ^___^...

UndergraduateAmyRemus - Nov 29, 2008AmyRemus - Dec 1, 2008
"my intended major is history" - UC personal statement. Prompt 2

2 - Use two commas here: When I got to college, though, I realized that just because I was good...

Undergraduateanastasiab17 - Nov 29, 2008EF_Kevin - Nov 30, 2008
"to talk about an issue I concern" (Wallstreet) - UT TOPIC B

2 - The nation's economy is in a recession, this year's college graduates face a job market that is not very...

UndergraduateZoeL14 - Nov 29, 2008EF_Kevin - Nov 30, 2008
"my first-ever vacation" - UC app- prompt 2

5 - For this senence, I thanked him and we parted ways when I retrieved my food. I think...

Undergraduatesvcdt - Nov 29, 2008EF_Kevin - Nov 30, 2008
"a world filled with materialistic propaganda" - UC Prompt 1

NEW - I'd really appreciate any feedback! Thanks a lot! I'll post the prompt in bold, as well as my essay...

Undergraduatemstratton08 - Nov 29, 2008 -
so far, everyone who has read it says it's good....Magic of Music ---UC #1

8 - oh i see lol thats a really good point thanks for ur input...

Undergraduatedodohuipy - Nov 29, 2008dodohuipy - Dec 15, 2008
Mohammed Ibn Abdullah has made an impact on my life

3 - Oh, this is terrific! I only want to offer changes for the last paragraph: I live my life...

Undergraduateaz2845 - Nov 29, 2008EF_Kevin - Nov 29, 2008
Essay feedback - Issue of terrorism and its significance to me

2 - Instead of using contractions (i.e. "didn't"), write the two words separately. For me, this meant being looked at...

Undergraduateaz2845 - Nov 29, 2008EF_Kevin - Nov 30, 2008
UC application (Activities & Awards, community service, additional comments

3 - Oh thank you for your help:) and..i have one more question actually.. for the 3rd statement, since it...

Undergraduateksj430 - Nov 29, 2008ksj430 - Nov 30, 2008
My older sister and her impact on my life - essay

4 - I once heard a quote about the people we come to meet, how only... Usually, you should not...

UndergraduateRden - Nov 29, 2008EF_Kevin - Nov 30, 2008
"I am not a "nobody" - UC Prompt 2

3 - That was what I told myself when I decided to run for a position in the executive committee of...

Undergraduatewongxy - Nov 29, 2008EF_Kevin - Nov 30, 2008
'passion for saxophone' - Additional Information about Myself

3 - Thank you so much! It helped a lot^^...

Undergraduateop2607 - Nov 28, 2008op2607 - Nov 29, 2008
'Ready, OK!' - Cheer UC admissions Essay

2 - Lets put these words in quotation marks: "Ready, Ok!" These are the words... Also, I corrected this...

Undergraduatejessicagomez - Nov 28, 2008EF_Kevin - Nov 29, 2008
Inspiring Book that Changed My Life (holocausts)

2 - I recommend Man's Search for Meaning by Frankl!! About this essay, I think you could add one final...

Undergraduateop2607 - Nov 28, 2008EF_Kevin - Nov 29, 2008
SAIC Personal statement - your personal vision

2 - Hi, what you wrote is all good, but you need to choose carefully what to include in this statement...

Undergraduatepsypsy - Nov 28, 2008EF_Kevin - Nov 29, 2008
UT ESSAYS - Leadership, Setback, Challenge

5 - the first essay...you kept mentioning "the club", what is this club? Frankly, i think you need to revise...

UndergraduateZoeL14 - Nov 28, 2008trinilissabee - Dec 10, 2008
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