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Scholarship Essay for Warwick Undergraduate Excellence Scholarship

2 - If you feel that you have responded to this question in one of the other essays, then you should...

ScholarshipJinah - May 25, 2026Holt - May 25, 2026
Motivation Letter for Image Processing and Computer Vision Erasmus Mundus Scholarship

3 - Thank you for the feedback. You raise a valid point, the vision is present in the letter but fragmented...

Lettersmujeeb576 - May 24, 2026mujeeb576 - May 25, 2026
The constant issue of over-processed foods and the long term effects

2 - This paper is coming back as having been human tweaked, but heavily AI researched and edited. The dead giveaway...

Research Papersflucero - May 23, 2026Holt - May 23, 2026
How to write a global leadership personal Statement?

5 - I am not sure how I can help you respond to this statement. The essay has to be based...

EssaysSnook - May 22, 2026Holt - May 25, 2026
The effects of vaping on teen health

2 - I believe that this would be improved much more if you present a comprehensive history of vaping at the...

Writing Feedbackellhdz - May 22, 2026Holt - May 23, 2026
Buying goods from all over the world - IELTS Essay Writing task 2

3 - I thank you for your genuine help of my essay Holt. I now clearly understand what to improve in...

Writing Feedbackthanhdan00 - May 22, 2026thanhdan00 - May 22, 2026
Personal statement for Fulbright fellowship program

2 - The Fulbright Fellowship program will allow you to stay in the US to experience a 1 year non-degree academic...

Scholarshipomerkallyy - May 20, 2026Holt - May 21, 2026
Pakistan floods - My Letter of Motivation

2 - The last thing you should do is use the letter of motivation as your personal, academic, and professional experience...

LettersKhubaibkhan - May 19, 2026Holt - May 19, 2026
Persuasive Research Essay on Burnout in Laboratory Staff and Possible Solutions

2 - Provide an example or a few examples of the negative impact that the employees and the hospitals experience...

Research Paperszoe37 - May 17, 2026Holt - May 18, 2026
The graph below shows information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries

2 - One of the main problems in your presentation is the lack of punctuation mark usage. This creates confusion while...

Writing Feedbackngocmyy - May 16, 2026Holt - May 16, 2026
Anesthesia Assistant Masters Application Essay - Nontraditional student.

2 - I realize that you are a non traditional student applying for entry into a Masters course for Anesthesia Assistant....

GraduateVLB07278 - May 11, 2026Holt - May 15, 2026
Losing Focus- The Effects of Short Form Content on Attention Spans

2 - The paper suffers from semantic saturation. By that, I mean there are certain phrases that appear in every paragraph,...

Research Papersjj13689 - May 11, 2026Holt - May 15, 2026
The Recovery Gap: An Integrated Response to Addiction

2 - Well, considering that this is coming across as a human written, but AI polished paper, I would have to...

Research Paperstonyvee83 - May 11, 2026Holt - May 13, 2026
Why you believe you are a deserving candidate with a particular focus on extracurricular activities

2 - The essay discussion is pretty much spot on for the most part. The area that actually needs to be...

Scholarshipbtbl - May 8, 2026Holt - May 9, 2026
Nurse Burnout in the ICU: More Than Just Stress

2 - The thesis statement is clear but lacking in summarized discussion points. At the indicate point, you need to...

Research Papersolenaalan - May 7, 2026Holt - May 9, 2026
MOTIVATION STATEMENT: EURO-ASIAN MASTERS IN MEDICAL TECHNOLOGY AND HEALTHCARE BUSINESS (EMMAH) ERASM

2 - I do not believe this is the word you want to use. I bet you did not look...

Graduateceefortune - May 7, 2026Holt - May 9, 2026
Program: Master of Arts in Teaching (faith based institution)

2 - This personal statement is very insightful and shows a personal connection with your desire to obtain a masters degree....

Graduateevesharo - May 5, 2026Holt - May 6, 2026
Working and studying, challenge or opportunity?

2 - This paper is pretty much a straightforward English language writing exercise and shows that the student is actually making...

Essaysyised - May 5, 2026Holt - May 5, 2026
Bring awareness to the Fentanyl Crisis - Essay for ENG102

2 - The first thing that I would have you check with your paper are your vocabulary usage and grammar. You...

Writing Feedbackmonica01 - May 4, 2026Holt - May 4, 2026
Discuss the relative news and people.

2 - This is not a reference that can be found in the original topic provided for discussion. This is...

Writing Feedbackthebenjamin - May 3, 2026Holt - May 4, 2026
Four-type of housing - Report table chart in 2001 and in 2006

2 - The summary overview does not follow the required formatting for the presentation. It must summarize the information by indicating...

Writing Feedbackthebenjamin - May 3, 2026Holt - May 4, 2026
Flexibility Over Fixation: A Personalized Retirement Age

2 - The sense of writing that has been provided lacks a true human voice. While a majority of the essay...

Research Papersikew679 - May 2, 2026Holt - May 3, 2026
Connected or Controlled? The reality of Social Media Use

2 - It is important that you do not start the essay in the middle of the presentation. Your first paragraph...

Writing FeedbackgabriellaA - May 1, 2026Holt - May 3, 2026
Software Company - Recommendation letter for a Master's program in Marketing in a Korean University

2 - The referee should be introducing her background to the reviewer. That means, giving her full name, position, number of...

Lettersgureumy - Apr 30, 2026Holt - May 1, 2026
"Legal Officer" - AAS Essay - Why did you choose your proposed course and institution?

2 - Your background should be applicable to the university masters courses that you have chosen. It is important to discuss...

Scholarshipsyn1106 - Apr 28, 2026Holt - Apr 29, 2026
Draft for climate change and utilizing renewable energy

2 - I need to point out something that you missed when you researched this paper using an AI assistant. The...

Research Papersjas0190 - Apr 26, 2026Holt - Apr 27, 2026
Academic foundation, experience, family- motivation of why you should be awarded a scholarship

2 - It is important to not come across as demanding in this personal response essay. I would remove this...

ScholarshipBolaji1235 - Apr 26, 2026Holt - Apr 27, 2026
The role of physical strength in sports - IELTS test

2 - While I admire your desire to show your capacity to use English words, oftentimes, you are not using the...

Writing Feedbackraffaahmad - Apr 26, 2026Holt - Apr 27, 2026
News and Life Connection - Ielts 2 (agree or disagree?)

2 - Your reasoning approach to the essay is not on the level that the examiner will be expecting. Since this...

Writing FeedbackQuangNguyenn - Apr 24, 2026Holt - Apr 25, 2026
English Essay Assignment-People should work out more

3 - If you want to get a higher score, you should include personal view point, real life examples and more...

Writing FeedbackTrevortheman - Apr 23, 2026Tamphan - Apr 24, 2026
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