|Esssay about should be encouraged to use computers from an early age(agree or disagree)
2 - The increased word count did not help this essay achieve a passing score. That is because the proper discussion...
Writing Feedbackjohnnguyenav - Oct 30, 2023Holt - Oct 31, 2023
|WHO ARE YOU? WHAT ARE YOU MOST PROUD OF? AND HOW WOULD YOUR FRIENDS, FAMILY, AND PEERS DESCRIBE YOU.
2 - You misunderstood the prompt. You are supposed to highlight several aspects of your personality, from the point of view...
Undergraduatemauu - Oct 30, 2023Holt - Oct 30, 2023
|The chart provides information about UK immigration, emigration and net migration; IELTS TASK 1
2 - You must always identify the type of image being presented for clarity purposes. Simply saying a chart was presented...
Writing FeedbackSakuradesu - Oct 29, 2023Holt - Oct 30, 2023
|[COMMON APP] HARD WORK ISN'T EQUAL TO SUCCEESS
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|ielts writing task 2: Fossil fuels (e.g. coal and natural gas) are the main source of energy
3 - @Holt thank you sm for your feedback, that's so true, i just want it to be convincing as much...
Writing Feedbackpeanutandanchovy - Oct 29, 2023peanutandanchovy - Oct 31, 2023
|IELTS Writing task 1 - pie charts present the expenditure of senior students in 3 high schools
2 - Kindly identify the type and number of images next time you write a task 1 essay. It will help...
Writing Feedbackvaananh - Oct 28, 2023Holt - Oct 30, 2023
|Writing task 1: Compare maps - changes in a Science Park since 2008
3 - You should use more grammar structures as I notice most sentences are written in passive voice, which could be...
Writing FeedbackCamellia0611 - Oct 27, 2023chau_pham - Nov 2, 2023
|Some educationalists argue that non-exam, arts-based subjects, such as music, drama, art and craft
2 - Good response. What is the basis? Where is the thesis statement meant to support your opinion? You should...
Writing Feedbackcrazycat1139 - Oct 27, 2023Holt - Oct 30, 2023
|IELTS WRITING TASK 2 - READING BOOKS AMONG KIDS IS IN DECLINE
NEW - The number of children that read books for fun has dropped dramatically in recent years. What are the reasons...
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|Chevening Essay on Relationship building and shared learning
2 - You hit the notes needed for the networking aspect of the discussion. but you are lacking in the diversity...
Scholarshipardiarmanto - Oct 27, 2023Holt - Oct 30, 2023
|Battling With A New Environment - Common App application essay
2 - When you say you are battling a new environment, you should first, explain what your original environment was. How...
ScholarshipSanB - Oct 26, 2023Holt - Oct 30, 2023
|IELTS WRITING TASK 2 - SELF STUDY for secondary school students
NEW - "It is said that self-study is very important for secondary school students". Do you agree or disagree with the...
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|How you meet the key selection criteria for the Scholars Program At University of Edinburgh
2 - You cannot select which portions of the criteria to address in the essay. Those are not optional questions or...
ScholarshipAamxr - Oct 26, 2023Holt - Oct 30, 2023
|Some people say that it is necessary to use animals for testing medicines intended for human use
3 - The introduction paragraph has more potential to be paraphrased compare to the current version to support your opinion towards...
Writing Feedbackbbaoling - Oct 26, 2023ardiarmanto - Oct 31, 2023
|IT IS BETTER TO SPEND TIME WITH A GROUP OF PEOPLE THAN TO SPEND TIME ALONE
2 - Please rewrite this essay. It is not the kind of essay that you can complete within 40 minutes. It...
Writing Feedbackfateema - Oct 26, 2023Holt - Oct 30, 2023
|IELTS WRITING TASK 2 - TECHNOLOGY (COMPUTERS)
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|WRITTING TASK 2 : OPINION ON FREE COLLEGE
3 - Besides of the length of words that insufficient for the test's standard, there are so much lacks from your...
Writing FeedbackTung VIETNAM - Oct 26, 2023ardiarmanto - Oct 27, 2023
|[IELTS WRITING TASK 2] Free libraries vs Internet
4 - Well written essay, yet too long since the maximum count words is 350 words only. Try to use more...
Writing Feedbackgreattako - Oct 26, 2023ardiarmanto - Oct 31, 2023
|The urbanisation rate in South Korea and Indonesia
2 - Point deductions will be applied for the insufficient image description. Majority of the images presented in a task...
Writing Feedbackkhanhvy206 - Oct 25, 2023Holt - Oct 26, 2023
|IELTS Writing task 1:The process diagram details the steps by which pineapples are produced for sale
Writing Feedbackvinh_xuan_nguyen - Oct 25, 2023vinh_xuan_nguyen - Oct 28, 2023
|TASK 2 People are living longer after they retire. What are the problems? What can be done to solve?
3 - in the first paragraph, do not use 'I' if the question doesn't include the word 'you'. Besides, your introduction...
Writing Feedbackphamkhuyen - Oct 25, 2023wanttobebetter - Oct 26, 2023
|The graph below shows the consumption of fish and three kinds of meat from 1979 to 2004
2 - While the presentation does indicate a chart, you did not identify the kind of chart presented, which poses...
Writing Feedbacklanhoangngoc - Oct 24, 2023Holt - Oct 26, 2023
|IELTS task 1: The bar chart compares five countries in terms of movies' production from 2007 to 2009
2 - The essay is unnecessarily long. You wrote more than 250 words, making this a task 2 essay presentation instead...
Writing FeedbackLillingg - Oct 24, 2023Holt - Oct 26, 2023
|Chevening Essay on Leadership and Influence - Forest Restoration Leadership
3 - @Holt kindly review my revision according to your feedback. thank you in advance! The most prominent aspect that...
Scholarshipardiarmanto - Oct 24, 2023ardiarmanto - Oct 31, 2023
|The graph and table shows the amount of water used for various purposes
2 - Your first paragraph is going to earn you a failing preliminary GRA score. Avoid writing long sentences in that...
Writing Feedbacknghiaphong - Oct 23, 2023Holt - Oct 26, 2023
|The line graph below shows changes in the youth unemployment rate from 2000 to 2012.
2 - The essay is overwritten. You should not be writing more than 200 words maximum for a 20 minute writing...
Writing Feedbackkrystal2023 - Oct 23, 2023Holt - Oct 26, 2023
|[WRITING TASK 1] The diagrams below show the site of a school in 2004 & the plan for changes in 2024
2 - This vocabulary is too simple. You want to use somewhat advanced or intermediate English vocabulary to increase your...
Writing Feedbacklaura2024abroad - Oct 22, 2023Holt - Oct 26, 2023
|[WRITTING TASK 1-MAP] The maps show the changes that happened to an island called Paradise.
2 - You are missing an important element in this essay. Where is the summary overview? You began with the trending...
Writing Feedbackquanessayforum - Oct 21, 2023Holt - Oct 25, 2023
|Task1 line chart - overseas travel to an european country
2 - This is a missing element in your summary overview. You need to mention these 3 places immediately for...
Writing FeedbackCandy123 - Oct 21, 2023Holt - Oct 25, 2023
|Should English be the official language in Vietnam? Write an 400 word essay with clear explanantion
4 - Your writing demonstrates a good level of vocabulary accuracy and coherence. However, there are a few areas where you...
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