|IELTS Writing task 1: Lifespan of salmon
4 - I think you should illustrate both stages individually. You should've explained lifecycle differently and salmon size differently and please...
Writing Feedbacknhiduong2001 - May 19, 2020Hardy_tom - May 26, 2020
|Money is the best option when choosing a career, do you agree or disagree?
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|Career change from Finance to Bioinformatics - MS SoP review
2 - This is an excellent personal statement. It doesn't really provide the necessary information to prove that you have a...
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|Nowadays, the number of plants and animals is decreasing. What are the reasons and some solutions?
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|How many marriages and divorces took place in the UK, in the period of 25 years
3 - @Holt Thank you a lot for helpful advices to my essay, i really appreciate it. Can this essay get...
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|How to write an essay in TOEIC : You prefer working in the small or large company?
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|Task 1 - Line Graph indicates the average yearly money spent on mobile phones and stationary phone
5 - You could have done individually comparison like in one para you could have gave information about cellphone and in...
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|advantage and disadvantage essay - With the rise of e-books comes the decline in paper books.
2 - The maximum paragraph requirement of the task 2 essay is 5. You are over by 1 paragraph because you...
Writing FeedbackmywritingsTT - May 18, 2020Holt - May 18, 2020
|Compare and contrast essay: The culture of small towns and cities
2 - Your essay is very good because your brilliant ideas and vocabularies used in the essay. however, you made some...
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|You have just spend a week with a friend for holiday. You realised you had left your wallet there.
2 - Spelling Errors: Fedex ( Proper Noun) - FedEx noddle = noodle Vocabulary Errors: Wonderfully / wonderful -...
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|Do you like watching films at home or in the cinema? Why
7 - I wondering if the expression 'being freedom of myself' is correct. 'having freedom of myself' might be better? ...
Writing Feedbacklamkhanh - May 18, 2020Riley L - May 27, 2020
|Governments should impose heavy tax on car drivers and make improvements to public transportation
3 - I cannot deny that you have a rich lexical resource which contributes the best to rising your band score....
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|The chart illustrates changes in the figure for electricity generated by three different sources
3 - You should write 1 or 2 more sentence in your overview, I think yours is short and not enough...
Writing Feedbackpha - May 17, 2020nhiduong2001 - May 21, 2020
|Living in the urban areas may cause many awful effects on citizens' health and I am aware of it
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|Advertisements have appeared ubiquitously in today's daily life
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|The issue of communicating using the second language in foreign countries
4 - The essay will most definitely get a score of 1. The overall discussion format is incorrect. There is no...
Writing FeedbackKhai - May 17, 2020Holt - May 18, 2020
|With the growing world population, there's the problem of feeding such a large number of people
3 - thanks for the feedback holt. i have one more query. in the questions "to what extent.." or "do you...
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|Today parents spend little free time with their children. Why is it the case ? Who are more affected
3 - The facts that you mentioned in the essay are not strong enough to describe the disadvantages.You should provide more...
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|Society should make efforts to save endangered species if humans affected
5 - @Holt Thank you so much for your response. I will definitely work on my content and post it again...
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|Writing Task 1 - The figure for marriages and divorces in the UK over a period of 25 years
5 - Grammatical mistakes . It can be easily to seen is not a correct statement should have been replaced by...
Writing Feedbackpha - May 17, 2020Hardy_tom - May 26, 2020
|From the chart: Australians in terms of physical activity they partook in on a regular basis in 2010
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|Tourism except benefits can also pose several problems
4 - My apologies. The vocabulary explanation for a different post was accidentally attached to your essay. No worries though. You...
Writing Feedbackvlnga - May 16, 2020Holt - May 16, 2020
|Writing task 2 - Education is free. Do you agree or disagree?
2 - There are actually 2 discussion prompts based on your discussion topic. Since you did not provide the original prompt,...
Writing FeedbackTrinh Phon Tinh - May 16, 2020Holt - May 16, 2020
|The advantages and disadvantages of living in the modern world
4 - I will not mention the grammar error anymore because you already have the feedback. Here, I would like to...
Writing Feedbackphx - May 16, 2020Lunn Htar Moe - May 20, 2020
|The line graph illustrates the number of people aged 65 and more - over 100 years period
2 - The summary overview is complete in content. However, the presentation will not help your GRA score as you did...
Writing Feedbacknhuquinhh - May 16, 2020Holt - May 16, 2020
|Children watch a lot of TV and play video games - writing task 2(IELTS)
2 - The TA score for this essay will be 1. Your answer was completely unrelated to the task. You did...
Writing FeedbackGATE - May 15, 2020Holt - May 16, 2020
|Writing task 2 - IELTS Academic - economic growth as the only way to end hunger and poverty?
3 - Thank you so much for your comments. They've helped me a lot in figuring out how I should write...
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|The graph illustrates the fish, lamb, beef and chicken consumptions in an European country
3 - I think the organization of paragraphs should be considered more carefully, as Holt has suggested. I would also recommend...
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|IELTS- T2: Why do some people continue to commit crimes after they have been punished?
Writing FeedbackMinhthuy1993 - May 15, 2020huyjunnie - May 16, 2020
|I trust my government to take care of my life and climate change
NEW - Climate change is a big problem Government can not be expected to solve this problem. It is the responsibility...
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