|Is maintaining public libraries a waste of money since the Internet is now replacing their function?
2 - Review the writing instructions. The writing is to be based on "to what extent" a response that you...
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|Some believe that importing foreign movies and TV programs is beneficial for their country's culture
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|MOTIVATION STATEMENT FOR MASTER OF ART IN POPULATION STUDIES
2 - You have written this essay without any consideration for the readily available discussion guidelines for the motivational letter. There...
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|New student enrollment in Top Australian university and their applications majors
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|Rough draft peer review on why play is important for children
2 - The opening statement and the introduction were placed in reverse in the presentation. The second paragraph makes for an...
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|The bar charts show the comparison of salt intake between men and women in different ages in America
3 - I think that your sentences using humans as the subject are too much in your essay. Use more like...
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|Data on Australia exports to four regions: Japan, US, China, and India, over the period of 22 years
2 - This is a confusing statement as there are no categories enumerated in the line graph. Percentage points we...
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|More people put their personal information online (address, telephone number...) for everyday (ielts
2 - Good restatement but it should have had a direct reference to the indicated channels where the use of...
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|GKS SCHOLARSHIP LANGUAGE STUDY PLAN - My Plan Before and After Coming to Korea
2 - For the Korean language learning after arriving in Korea, you seem to think that you can take the TOPIK...
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|(IELTS WRITING 1) PIE CHART The pie charts below show units of electricity production by fuel source
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|[IELTS WRITING TASK 1] The charts below show the most popular films by genre for men and women
3 - @hanhnguyennn you can use another vocabulary to explain film types. such as genre, category, etc...
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|Social Media on the Brain and Mind
2 - The introduction to the topic will be helped if a previous paragraph is presented showing the history of human...
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|Personal Statement for MSc of Statistics and Data Science at University of KU Leuven
2 - The motivation of the writer got lost in translation. The presentation, with heavy editing, will work as a personal...
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|"Today many people are spending less and less time at home". What are the reasons and effects?
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|IELTS Writing Task 2 - Celebrities' viewpoints on a wide range of matters
4 - @Holt Dear Holt, I did read samples of Ielts regarding 'Is this a positive or negative development?' before writing...
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|SCHOLARSHIP or Graduate ASSistance STATEMENT OF PURPOSE IN MASTER IN MATERIAL SCIENCE AND ENGINERING
2 - The essay needs to be written with a clear focus on the intent for studies. The intent should cover...
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|New technologies have changed the way children spend their time
2 - Refrain from changing the original topic presentation by offering a testimonial about the topic. Proving the veracity of...
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|The line graph illustrates the number of tourists travelling to an Caribbean island (2010 to 2017)
2 - The essay is over-analyzed at 127 words. With a writing time allowance of 20 minutes, this should have no...
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|Writing task 2: Students should be primarily taught academic subjects so that they can pass exams
4 - @beloyal Thank you. Can you give me some particularly example about conjuction words in this essay?...
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|Applying for nursing school and would like others to read my short answer response.
2 - Please clarify, are you already working as a nurse or in a related field ? This statement could...
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|Apply MSc finance programme in Trinity College Dublin
NEW - Plz give me advices about my personal statements. ( limitation of 500 words, How can I rewrite some parts...
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|Writing task 2: The main reasons to make people spend most their time working
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|Companies use a variety of methods to improve the sales of their products. What are those methods?
2 - The first paragraph is called the prompt restatement + opinion for a reason. It has to accomplish 2 things:...
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|Grammar/Writing Techniques Cultural Competence in Healthcare as it Relates to the LGBTQ+ Community
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|Personal Statement for MSc in Data Science at University of Michigan
NEW - Hi everyone! For editing, content, and formatting needs please contact us at email@example.com. Thank you! EF Personal...
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|WRITING TASK 2: INTERNATIONAL SUPPORT FROM INTERNATIONAL COMMUNITY FOR LESS DEVELOPED COUNTRIES
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|Statement of Purpose for masters program in Computer Science in the USA - Review request
2 - The second paragraph should have a clearer purpose for your studies. The series of questions does not signify any...
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|Ielts graph about gold sales in Dubai during the year of 2002
2 - The currency of sales needs to be mentioned in the summary overview. As the writer, you need to let...
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|Some people say that physical education classes are an important part of a child's education. Others
2 - When using the 2 paragraph format for this comparative discussion, you must provide your point of view for each...
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|In many countries, children are becoming overweight and unhealthy. Some people think that the govern
2 - The prompt restatement is totally inaccurate. It fails to refer to the original statement as it adds a discussion...
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