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6 - Hi @juliachung As far as I know, the primary cause for global warming is not overconsumption of plastic...
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|STUNED ESSAY. MSc of International Land and Water Management at WUR
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|Discuss both views: joining university or leave school to get a job
4 - @lynguyen2912 Here's a structure you can use for this which works everytime with this question prompt: INTRO: Restate...
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2 - For starters, you are not writing enough words to merit a high TA score. While the minimum word count...
Writing Feedbackpeter4904 - Mar 21, 2021Holt - Mar 21, 2021
|Usage of margarine, butter, low fat and reduced spreads - IELTS TEST
2 - - Ending when? The information is incomplete. The summary must include the start and end date of the...
Writing Feedbackalexrussso - Mar 20, 2021Holt - Mar 21, 2021
|An argument about whether the country should be the host for a worldwide sports event or not
3 - @Holt Thank you so much. Can I ask you what is the right pattern for comparative discussion? I'm quite...
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|Business Management course - STATEMENT OF PURPOSE FOR UNIVERSITY PROGRAM AND SCHOLARSHIP
3 - @Holt Thank you so much for your contribution. But as I am a high school student and I'm applying...
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|The graph below shows UK acid rain emissions, measured in million tonnes from four different sectors
5 - Hi. As a reader, I'm not happy with the "enormous change" sentence. First, I think you could make...
Writing Feedbackngockhanh181107 - Mar 19, 2021LadyOfClockwork - Mar 26, 2021
|IELTS Writing task 2 - Discussion - The effects of international tourism to local countries
2 - Good work on the 2 restatement sentences. You covered the interpretation excellently. However, the need for the thesis statement...
Writing Feedbackbeloyal - Mar 19, 2021Holt - Mar 20, 2021
|Gender Gaps in the Workplace (AAS Supporting Statement)
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|Going to school or homeschooling
5 - The way that you are using to divide your essay is inappropriate. There should not be just one sentence...
Writing Feedbackmiraitowa - Mar 19, 2021giangkc1811 - Mar 28, 2021
|Anesthesiologist Assistant Program Personal Statement: Experience with Healthcare Disparities?
2 - I can understand how your father's illness would have opened your mind to considering a career in healthcare. However,...
GraduateGenJen - Mar 18, 2021Holt - Mar 19, 2021
|Why becoming a GOI-IES Scholar matters to you, what you'll gain from this scholarship?
2 - This is actually an ordinary essay that does not have any stand out points or references that could catch...
Graduatemebax64893 - Mar 18, 2021Holt - Mar 19, 2021
|iELTS essay about the internet which has brought significant changes to our lives in recent years
4 - Hi friend, I have taught that we should avoid using generalization in the essay. "nobody can deny the fact...
Writing Feedbackhphnngcquan - Mar 18, 2021juliachung - Mar 20, 2021
|IELTS TASK 2 - WHAT ARE THE CHALLENGES WHEN MOVING TO NEW PLACES AND STRATEGIES
2 - Yes, you wrote it within 40 minutes. However, you are still over explaining and using useless sentences that do...
Writing Feedbackjuliachung - Mar 18, 2021Holt - Mar 19, 2021
|Museums and art galleries are not needed today, because of technology
3 - Hi Long231312, I think there has been an unclear idea in your statement. Although you claim to be partially...
Writing FeedbackLong231312 - Mar 18, 2021juliachung - Mar 18, 2021
|Short essay about Heuristics (Questbridge College Prep Scholars Program) 1st prompt
2 - If you are really confident that you wish to be a Cognitive Science student, then you should not be...
Scholarshipradioq - Mar 17, 2021Holt - Mar 18, 2021
|Workforce Competency Development through TESOL (Australia Award Scholarship)
2 - The information you provide as an introduction is specific to only your country. You make it appear as if...
ScholarshipDA786 - Mar 17, 2021Holt - Mar 18, 2021
|Motivation Letter for Scholarship from a final-year chemical engineering student
3 - @Holt Thank you for your feedback. Is there any feedback for the fifth paragraph and the rest of the...
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|fossil fuels are the main sources of energy,alternative energy should be encouraged for used
2 - The original prompt for this essay asks if you think this is a positive or negative development. Since your...
Writing Feedbackminhngan - Mar 16, 2021Holt - Mar 17, 2021
|Nowadays many ecosystems in the world are experiencing problems
2 - - Whose extinction? What is this discussion about? What is the purpose of this essay? The original prompt...
Writing Feedbackpeggyhan - Mar 16, 2021Holt - Mar 17, 2021
|Japan - An event has that influenced you - STUDENT EXCHANGE PROGRAM
3 - @xin18 In my opinion, I personally think that I would not have the interest to read it to the...
Scholarshipxin18 - Mar 16, 2021wyh99 - Mar 16, 2021
|Essay 1 - examples of the benefits that the GOI-IES would provide me
2 - The professional aspect does not have a convincing motivation for your application. The reason for your desire to receive...
Scholarshipnatfernandesss - Mar 16, 2021Holt - Mar 16, 2021
|eCommerce - Goal of study and detailed study plan - you in advance wish you all the best
3 - I didn't see any content that describe your study plan. Maybe you have missed it so here's my soft...
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|Letter of Intent for undergrad Turkey Burslari scholarship application - Computer science degree
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|Personal Statement For KGSP Graduate Program 2021 - Master's Degree in Psychology
3 - @Holt Thank you very much for your constructive comments. I will try to modify those information to makes my...
Scholarshipwyh99 - Mar 15, 2021wyh99 - Mar 16, 2021
|Sports science - Personal statement for KGSP-G (2021)
2 - The motivational questions you are using in this essay are very shallow and basic. These do not represent a...
ScholarshipBhardwaj7714 - Mar 15, 2021Holt - Mar 16, 2021
|The difference between men and women who did daily physical activity in Australia
NEW - fit people in aUSTRALIA The bar chart provides information about how difference between men and women who live...
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|The potential damage for children when they are overusing computers. Write 250words
3 - Sorry, an important exam of mine is coming and I have to prepare quickly by writing two simultaneously. Thanks...
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|English Learning during Covid-19 and ESP for Young Adults - TESOL Master Degree Essay (AAS)
2 - The paragraph about the pandemic should be worked into the motivation for your desire to complete the masters program....
ScholarshipDA786 - Mar 15, 2021Holt - Mar 15, 2021