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"Describe achievement in your academic experience & how it supports your choice? Graduation plans?"

2 - Please indicate if this is a free certificate course of an open learning course without certification of completion....

Undergraduateeatcheese - Feb 3, 2026Holt - Feb 4, 2026
Erasmus Mundus application motivation letter for edu_mig

2 - There is no need to indicate this in the letter. Instead, try to show your excitement and motivation...

LettersAgnul - Feb 2, 2026Holt - Feb 4, 2026
IELTS Writing Task 2 - Newspapers have a significant influence on people's ideas and opinions

2 - The essay shows a good thought process coming from you. You obviously brainstormed the content of the essay prior...

Writing Feedbackanuse25 - Feb 2, 2026Holt - Feb 2, 2026
Letter of Intent for Türkiye Bursları – Computer Engineering

3 - I agree with the consultant's main point. The letter focuses heavily on what you did, but it doesn't clearly...

Scholarshipwhythere44 - Feb 1, 2026momoo00 - Feb 18, 2026
Gks Ug Personal statement for computer engineering

2 - I am not sure why you posted the same essay twice in the box. It did not help me...

ScholarshipNavya - Feb 1, 2026Holt - Feb 2, 2026
Wirting Ielts part 2: Pros & Cons remote natural

2 - The essay counts only 246 words in the total writing, which means this essay would receive an automatic failing...

Writing FeedbackHelenNguyen712 - Feb 1, 2026Holt - Feb 2, 2026
Motivation letter for Master of Science in Artificial Intelligence at FAU

2 - Kindly remove the academic biography part of this motivational letter. The motivational letter is not the place to discuss...

Lettersshipon - Feb 1, 2026Holt - Feb 2, 2026
Procrastination is a Primary Cause of Low-Quality Academic Work - English 102

2 - The paper is badly missing an effective thesis statement at the start. This can easily be remedied by combining...

Writing Feedbackecelaya - Feb 1, 2026Holt - Feb 2, 2026
PTDF Statement of Purpose (Msc Data Engineering)

2 - I frown upon students who come here with 80% AI generated essays, then ask for my opinion on their...

Graduatephrezzz - Jan 30, 2026Holt - Jan 31, 2026
Letter of Intent for Turkiye Burslari Scholarship - Undergraduate, Automation and Control

2 - You can further develop your graduation thesis in the essay to show your theoretical and skills development at an...

Scholarshiphiraeth - Jan 30, 2026Holt - Jan 31, 2026
Personal Statement for GKS-U Undergraduate in Architecture at PNU

4 - The reviewers actually look for your personality in your writing. An effective personal statement allows you to show your...

UndergraduateLannabia19 - Jan 29, 2026Holt - Feb 4, 2026
Writing Part 2 - Discuss and give opinion about Television

2 - This statement will make the restatenebt+ writer's opinion paragraph fail. The lack of your opinion statement, which would...

Writing Feedbackthebenjamin - Jan 29, 2026Holt - Jan 31, 2026
Motivation Letter - Master's in Human Rights and Multi-level Governance

2 - The way that you used AI to polish this letter will be easily noticed by the reviewer. While you...

Lettersghosttwwriter - Jan 29, 2026Holt - Jan 31, 2026
The Government Should Provide Free Public Libraries - IELTS WRITING TASK 2

2 - The topic restatement will not pass the plagiarism check of the test. You have used almost 80 of the...

Writing Feedbackdatmt333 - Jan 28, 2026Holt - Jan 31, 2026
Personal Statement for ILSPSD Erasmus Mundus Programme

2 - Do not repeat or reference information that is in your CV. The reviewer will already know about that...

Graduateghufran - Jan 28, 2026Holt - Jan 28, 2026
Letter of motivation for a Diploma program in Tourism and Hotel Management

2 - The letter is off to a good start. It should be expanded to meet the 2 page requirement if...

LettersOngAnh - Jan 27, 2026Holt - Jan 27, 2026
IELTS Writing Task 2 - Many countries are experiencing population growth and need to build more home

2 - While this is an acceptable presentation that will receive a fair scoring consideration, it is not totally within the...

Writing Feedbackanuse25 - Jan 26, 2026Holt - Jan 27, 2026
Equitable Urban Heat Island Mitigation: Cool Roofs and Tree Canopy.

2 - It would be nice if you could introduce this topic from your personal opinion instead of using a citation....

Research Papersjosh0144 - Jan 26, 2026Holt - Jan 27, 2026
Master Student Autobiography for Admission in Taiwan University

2 - The academic biography is usually integrated into the Statement of Purpose and motivational letter presentation of the application. So...

Graduatevenki - Jan 25, 2026Holt - Jan 25, 2026
Letter of Motivation for a Master's Programme in Product Service System Design

4 - The pain point is the reference in your essay wherein you indicated that you did extensive research work. Explain...

Lettersshelfish - Jan 25, 2026Holt - Jan 27, 2026
Some people think that a job provides not only an income but also a social life.

2 - You need not repeat the discussion instruction to the examiner. You will receive point deductions for not meeting...

Writing Feedbackdanh123 - Jan 23, 2026Holt - Jan 24, 2026
Statement of Purpose - Reason why I chose a particular laboratory as my preferred host laboratory

2 - Please remove the researched information or reference to the research in the essay. An SOP does not require an...

UndergraduateSarah74 - Jan 22, 2026Holt - Jan 24, 2026
"Luxury Laptop" - letter of intent for the Türkiye Burslari

2 - A letter of intent should not be confused with a personal statement. You wrote a very good personal statement....

Lettersmarvinbruce - Jan 22, 2026Holt - Jan 24, 2026
Msc Marketing - 300 word scholarship essay

2 - You have written a scholarship essay that is heavily AI assisted. While it makes your application look polished and...

Scholarshipminhln02 - Jan 20, 2026Holt - Jan 21, 2026
People In Developed Countries living Alone Or In Small Family Units - IELTS WRITING TASK 2

3 - @Holt Thank you so much for your feedback to my essay. You're absolutely right! I spent nearly 50...

Writing Feedbackdatmt333 - Jan 19, 2026datmt333 - Jan 21, 2026
Australia physical activity - For ESL

2 - The first error in the presentation can be found in the summary overview. You did not completely identify the...

Writing Feedbackplaxnew - Jan 18, 2026Holt - Jan 19, 2026
GKS-U Embassy Track Application, Visual Communication Design

3 - @Holt Thank you so much for the review, I'll change it based on what you said! ^-^...

Scholarshipcel27hala - Jan 18, 2026cel27hala - Jan 19, 2026
Motivation letter for Emotion- An Erasmus Mundus Master

2 - I believe that the essay will be better if you figure out a way to combine the information in...

Lettersjunior4408 - Jan 16, 2026Holt - Jan 17, 2026
IELTS Writing Task 2 - The best way to reduce traffic accidents is to raise the age limit

2 - There is a discussion disconnection in this essay. Although the restatement and writer's opinion is very well presented and...

Writing Feedbackanuse25 - Jan 16, 2026Holt - Jan 17, 2026
In some countries today, many people are having their first child at an older age.

2 - Okay, if you write a task 2 essay at almost 500 words with a time allotment of 40 minutes,...

Writing Feedbackadadeee - Jan 15, 2026Holt - Jan 17, 2026
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