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|A Thank you note to a teacher - opening sentence?
4 - You won't sound ridiculous, friend! Just post your paragraphs here, and we'll correct any errors. Writing the first sentence...
Letterscraving4suga - Jun 7, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jun 8, 2011
|Letter: You will move to a new city for work. You know some people who live there.
3 - I'll add some commas and make some changes: I am writing this letter to you, because I am...
Lettersdhammika1973 - Jun 2, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jun 6, 2011
|APPEAL FOR NUS PROJECT AND FACILITIES MANAGEMENT
2 - Add mention of 3 - 5 short term goals. Switch the order of the first 2 paragraphs so that...
Letterscookieoh - Jun 1, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jun 3, 2011
|Appeal for Admission into Sociology undergraduate course at NUS
2 - I saw a great post where you helped Mingkuan -- thanks for all the time you spent there! ...
Lettersel0637 - Jun 1, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jun 3, 2011
|cover letter for neuroscience postdoc
3 - Mingkuan, I removed your email address so you won't get a lot of spam. :-) I see...
Letterssunxingzhe - Jun 1, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jun 3, 2011
|This resume can serve to provide you with greater details of my background and what I have to offer.
4 - I am writing to express my interest in an internship position this summer. For the past year, I...
Lettersaaronbounce - Jun 1, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jun 3, 2011
|"required of me to think logically" - Motivation letter power engineer
4 - Well... good luck, friend. Hey, doesn't the company have a website? You can probably learn about it and maybe...
Lettersartoor - May 27, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jun 2, 2011
|An abroad trip for language training - a recommending letter.
4 - Good question. I don'[t know... it's kind of unclear. I guess you can write as an employee or...
Lettersnzx7jv - May 30, 2011 / EF_Kevin - May 31, 2011
|Motivation Letter for Swiss Student Visa (International Hospitality Management)
4 - Upon completing my education, I intend to further develop myself and pursue a Masters Degree in Quality Management and...
LettersREHAIMI - May 28, 2011 / EF_Kevin - May 30, 2011
|Master Programme in Mechanical Engineering -letter of motivation / Swiss student visa
3 - I agree with Linmark.. the letter is very impressive. To make it even better, try to SHARPEN the...
Letterseric_07 - May 23, 2011 / EF_Kevin - May 24, 2011
|Me and my family decided to spend vacation in your hotel - we need reservation
5 - Here is something you can use as a guide, Meena: greenholidaysandadventures.com/sample-template-of-a-hotel-reservation- letter/ Keep practicing! :-) English writing is...
Lettersmalikawan4u - May 13, 2011 / EF_Kevin - May 20, 2011
|(to work in an international team) Motivation letter for intership
3 - I'll make some changes to improve the clarity: I am a creative, goal-orientated student ready to apply my...
LettersArnii - May 12, 2011 / EF_Kevin - May 14, 2011
|CV - PR executive / Event planner internship position
3 - Thanks a lot !!! I read it ... like a thousand times but I can not find these errors,...
LettersAnh_Thu1905 - May 6, 2011 / Anh_Thu1905 - May 7, 2011
|I am excited to apply for the PR-intern position; Cover Letter
5 - Here is my editing. Dear Ms. Thuy, Greetings. This is Diep Anh Thu. On April 2011,...
LettersHapCata - May 1, 2011 / extrafresh - May 6, 2011
|Cover Letter - enthusiasm and creativity, architecture internship.
3 - Hi Andre and babybloom, I want to mention that I like "excited" more than "writing in..." When you say...
LettersAndreiLuca - May 1, 2011 / EF_Kevin - May 4, 2011
|"a letter to the hotel making the arrangements and reservation" - my formal letter
7 - I am writing this letter to appreciate your amazing photos and all that you did for me during the...
Lettersakm2446 - Apr 24, 2011 / EF_Kevin - May 2, 2011
|"response to the advertisement of PostDoc position" - a cover letter
2 - Let's be more formal and call it a postdoctoral position, even if it says PostDoc on the ad....
Lettersbatsaikn - Apr 27, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Apr 29, 2011
|Letter of motivation for Russian and East Central European Studies.
2 - I found a little grammar error here: My strong academic background in intercultural communication and my ethnic background (Russia)...
LettersNataliaaa - Apr 23, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Apr 24, 2011
|Resignation letter (from SM Camaraza Enterprises Inc)
3 - I like this advice! That is a powerful way to communicate. Grisbel, what is your intended outcome?...
LettersBelle15 - Apr 20, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Apr 22, 2011
|Leadership, Knowledge, Adversity, Service, Challenge, Goals - insight resume
5 - Kevin ... Thanks you so much ... It helps alot...
Lettersselam19 - Apr 11, 2011 / selam19 - Apr 15, 2011
|Motivation letter for bachelor's degree in International business
4 - Thanks, Kevin! I'm glad to see I can be helpful, and, yes, I did just post an essay a...
Lettersvolt32 - Apr 11, 2011 / AmyCarol - Apr 14, 2011
|Cover letter for post-doctoral position in synthetic biology.
3 - Thanks a lot for your constructive advice, Kevin. I can see my letter looks better now....
LettersGF_Han - Apr 10, 2011 / GF_Han - Apr 13, 2011
|A new immigrant to Canada; Volunteer Research position Enquiry
2 - I am writing to apply for the volunteer position at your department.---If there's a specific department, you should mention...
LettersUmme Amara - Mar 30, 2011 / EF_Susan - Apr 2, 2011
|Research Studentship - covering letter or letter of application for PhD studentship
11 - I have a research plan to develop more points about the possible subject of the common motivated (What...
Lettersleereel - Mar 7, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Apr 1, 2011
|A Bachelor Degree in Marketing Management programme - Motivational Letter
4 - Marketing will also give me practical entrepreneurial skills to be enable me to handle my ... personal...
Lettersgiggyluv43 - Mar 16, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Mar 20, 2011
|Research on missiles; cover letter- PHD in astronomy
6 - You're welcome. I wish you make it for the Phd program....
Letterskalyani - Mar 13, 2011 / Rajiv - Mar 19, 2011
|Salary requirements after an interview
5 - Hmm..IMO, I think "my salary requirements are __" sound a little too demanding, and you don't want to say...
Lettersohsyntaxerror - Feb 14, 2011 / crossxhearts - Mar 14, 2011
|Asst. Manager Safety/HSE Superintendent position - Cover Letter
4 - ...as a Faculty faculty member, and I have enclosed... You did a great job! I like your closing...
Lettersmeraj114 - Feb 27, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Mar 10, 2011
|"I work in the robot age" - About page of personal blog
4 - Life is amazing. Unconceivably amazing. Incredible. One thinks one knows life, and then something new crops up which boggles...
Lettersidigitall - Mar 3, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Mar 9, 2011
|HOUSE KEEPING RESUME
4 - "Youthful man" does not seem to really work. I don't see any errors, but I think you should...
LettersMaxOneMillion - Feb 26, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Mar 6, 2011
|"I am a kind of person who loves and care silently"; An Open Letter to Your Parents
4 - You did do a great job with this, for sure! I think you are missing an opportunity to do...
Lettersrottencandy - Feb 18, 2011 / EF_Susan - Feb 26, 2011
|Cover letter for PhD in cancer. Confused if it looks like SOP?
4 - Thank you for your feedback. I will try to incorporate the corrections and suggestion you have given in my...
LettersNH Blush - Feb 3, 2011 / NH Blush - Feb 24, 2011
|"Education is my way of escape" - admissions letter
4 - My name is Yohana Tesfamariam, and I was born and ... ...the major tool for achieving success. ...
Lettersyoyott - Feb 11, 2011 / EF_Susan - Feb 19, 2011
|LETTER: Writing a letter to a bus company, informing them about a bag loss.
9 - This thread is great... I bet it will benefit a lot of people who look at it in the...
Lettersm00ny - Feb 11, 2011 / EF_Susan - Feb 18, 2011
|Cover letter post-doctoral position in chemistry
4 - It's a great pleasure to have a chance to write to you. I have come to know of you...
LettersDomisyl - Feb 11, 2011 / EF_Susan - Feb 18, 2011
|Memo to the plant employees about the company's Christmas party, Memo writing
5 - Excellent i like your idea sounds good thanks...
Lettersironhawk893 - Feb 11, 2011 / ironhawk893 - Feb 14, 2011
|"Congressman, Denny Rehberg" - USMA Recommendation Letter Essay
2 - It is with great honor ---Ah, I think this is kind of a cliche. My interests and involvement...
LettersMonica W - Feb 7, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Feb 10, 2011
|A letter to the embassy (the compulsory military service in the country)
4 - Ah, great edit, Joseph. I like the way you fixed that first sentence. Pippen, do you see your mistake?...
Letterspippen168 - Jan 31, 2011 / EF_Susan - Feb 7, 2011
|MATHEMATICS QUEEN OF SCIENCE- MOTIVATION LETTER
3 - I don't think you should start with "I have always been"... that is what all students do! Everyone has...
Letterswinnner2011 - Jan 11, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Feb 7, 2011
|" Dear selection committee" ;Recommendation letter (economics class student)
8 - I think it's good for students to write their own recommendation letters even though it adds an extra headache....
LetterssabLeya - Jan 30, 2011 / sabLeya - Feb 3, 2011
|Letter to the president explaining a problem, suggesting a solution (Global warming)
6 - The polar bears are thinner and less healthier healthy than those of 20 years ago. Many of...
Lettersthania93 - Jan 29, 2011 / EF_Susan - Feb 2, 2011
|Key Laboratory of Biotechnology & Crop - A cover letter for postdoctoral position
3 - Thank you very much, Kevin. I appreciate your helping. v...
Letterszziipp - Jan 14, 2011 / zziipp - Jan 18, 2011
|An entrance letter to my english learning center in Korea
3 - I thought carefully about my future during my high school years, especially about what ----This is the first sentence...
Letterschn424 - Jan 10, 2011 / EF_Susan - Jan 17, 2011
|Lab research on an undergrad resume appealing to companies
2 - You have a lot of options. Look at some examples of ressumes online. You will see that some have...
LettersHughRederDuhn - Jan 14, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jan 16, 2011
|Architecture, Contents and Grammar corrections for M.Arch Recommendation letters
5 - Hi Wendy N. Your edition is quite clear and consistent. It represent for a real chief designer's style. Short...
LettersSidTrieu - Dec 18, 2010 / SidTrieu - Jan 9, 2011
|Cover Letter for my English writing portfolio
1 - I've never done this before, is that OKay? Any suggestions are welcomed! Dear Ms. XX One year has...
Letters39steps - Jan 5, 2011 / — -
|Education /Activities / Work, Volunteer / Honors / Skils / Interest - Resume of UMICH
5 - Thank you for your advice mundaka! Anyone else gives me comments ? My question is how to...
Letterscalvinhmw - Dec 28, 2010 / calvinhmw - Jan 4, 2011
|Cover letter for a young graduate trainee placement
5 - Hi Andreas, sorry I was to slow to participate in this thread before you sent it out. I wanted...
Lettersa_oberg - Dec 15, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Dec 26, 2010
|Letter of Motivation for applying Master course of Mechanical Engineering
1 - LETTER OF MOTIVATION - MECHANICAL ENGINEERING I am writing to express my interest in applying for the master...
Letterskingdvd - Dec 26, 2010 / — -
|I am a multi-wavelength young astrophysicist; COVER LETTER- PhD position/astronomy
3 - It would be good if you could specify an aspect of their requirements here, and that would make...
Lettersmahmoud2010 - Nov 30, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Dec 5, 2010
|"the position of process engineer" - introduce myself on job interview
6 - i want to mean that i am proficient in standaedization management. the section in red is translated on...
Lettersbaixueyingying - Oct 25, 2010 / baixueyingying - Oct 28, 2010
|Writing cover letter (a postdoctoral position)
2 - Check out Strunk and White for good writing style. As a PhD student at the University of ,...
Lettersklins3 - Oct 22, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Oct 27, 2010
|cover letter for the postdoctoral position (in astronomy)
4 - I think it will look good if XXXXX, XXXXX, and XXXXX are three areas very relevant to the...
Letterschanggoo - Oct 16, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Oct 23, 2010
|"discovering the talents I possess" - Writing a cover letter.
4 - It's not necessarily wack. :-) Globalization and the internationalization of business, social networking, education, and EVERYTHING...
LettersTarekElsakka - Oct 16, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Oct 19, 2010
|Medical area - Recommendation letter for undergraduate
3 - Thanks Kevin and Name here, I appreciate all your comments. I have some anecdotes about her but I did...
Lettersvanchau1988 - Oct 15, 2010 / vanchau1988 - Oct 18, 2010
|Assistant professor cover letter;Dept of Mathematics @ University of Virginia Tech
4 - Thanks a lot for your help I appreciate your help...
Letterskaffel07 - Oct 9, 2010 / kaffel07 - Oct 16, 2010
|UK CV format - personal profile, delayed graduation, strange background
3 - EFKevin, thanks a lot for your answer and encouragement :) It's just that I've been searching a lot...
LettersVovaizanglia - Oct 12, 2010 / Vovaizanglia - Oct 16, 2010
|Job application (the role of an Italian speaking Research Consultant)
2 - I am writing in response to the position to express my interest in an available position as... ...
Lettersdani_are - Oct 8, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Oct 11, 2010
|Master course in Computer Science in Europe, help proofread my Letter of Motivation
7 - Thank you very much. I feel quite confident now with my application....
Letterscyberbrain - Aug 29, 2010 / cyberbrain - Oct 2, 2010
|Letter From the Renaissance to Alfonzo
3 - No you don't! How did you learn to write so well? If you know of any books that...
LettersJolee - Sep 16, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Sep 19, 2010
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