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|Letter of Recommendation to Master Degree in Marketing
5 - Sorry Wipu, I was wrong. "Risk"and "profit" are uncountable nouns. Thank you Kevin for the right sentence....
Lettersscarecrowd - Sep 9, 2010 / Tomomi - Sep 14, 2010
|describe about myself in interview for logistics & shipping job
2 - Hello, I'm glad you are a member now. Thanks for letting us participate in your process... So, what...
Lettersjoes - Sep 7, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Sep 8, 2010
|Specialist in Turbomachinery Power Engineering - check my Motivation Letter.
3 - Thank you for helping me....
Lettersengineer10 - Sep 1, 2010 / engineer10 - Sep 3, 2010
|(background in Accounting and Financ) - Scholarship Cover Letter Review
3 - ...increasing the my chances of developing myself and my career. I have a background in Accounting and...
Letterssoftbaby - Aug 23, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Aug 24, 2010
|recommendation letter for a job offer in the field of architecture
8 - Just google this for examples: professional letter template I would use single spaced paragraphs with a space between...
Lettersqqpp - Jul 31, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Aug 4, 2010
|Abercrombie part time impact team member - How to make this resume sound better
3 - Add an anecdote or example to each of these job descriptions. They are unimpressive if left the way they...
Lettersalswn95 - Jul 26, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Jul 27, 2010
|"Drowning are all preventable" - LETTER TO THE EDITOR
2 - it is our responsibility to take action it is our loss, not those who follow it...
Lettersalswn95 - Jul 8, 2010 / vrajveer89 - Jul 9, 2010
|1st application letter for Life information science
3 - I am impressed by those first two sentences, and I think all readers will be impressed by them. They...
Lettersryansun - Jul 3, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Jul 4, 2010
|Informal letter to the embassy in London to explain what happened
6 - You could also do this: Recently something really embarrassing has happened to me; I have a problem that I...
LettersTetanya - Jun 30, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Jul 1, 2010
|ILETS: informal letter to the London Information Centre.
4 - It look better If your letter is in following format Dear Ms./Mrs./Mr.Name Subject: Title of Subject ...
LettersTetanya - Jun 24, 2010 / vaishali1980 - Jun 26, 2010
|English Proficiency Letter - writing ideas?
2 - Maybe you should write about the instructions in your college. Remember this: one paragraph = one idea one good...
Letterswalaa - Jun 18, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Jun 19, 2010
|Post doctorial position of chemical/material engineering engineering -cover letter
5 - You're welcome! If you have time, provide other people with feedback sometimes here, and check out essayforum.com/ef-contributor-page/ We...
Lettersmonamijx - Jun 15, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Jun 19, 2010
|"Candidate for study under the Phd program in Nanoscience" letter of recomendation
3 - I have known Mr. XX since 2004 when he began his studies at the Faculty of Physics, XXX University,...
Letterscabronski - Jun 14, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Jun 15, 2010
|International Affairs Department, Correct My Reference Letter..
6 - Yes, I was looking at the other one, too, and it seems okay. I was trying to say, though,...
LettersNitaNA - May 25, 2010 / EF_Kevin - May 27, 2010
|Cover letter for a Data Analyst internship placement
3 - Dear Kevin, Thank you very much for your comments! They are very helpful!)...
LettersNafffania - May 22, 2010 / Nafffania - May 24, 2010
|Cover Letter for an application for an intern position at HSBC
6 - The general association of a Cover Letter is with a Resume. However, you can use a Cover letter for...
LettersDannyBoy - Apr 28, 2010 / Letters - May 19, 2010
|the Architecture program at Tulane University - my Admissions Letter
5 - Here is what I think the admission officer should remarkably take: Of course when you are applying for...
Letterstwinky - May 11, 2010 / triplesmickey - May 12, 2010
|Query letter for agent/publisher
4 - Your years of experience are impressive. I would like listen to what anyone has to say if she has...
Lettersizawriter - May 4, 2010 / EF_Kevin - May 6, 2010
|The internship program with Bloomberg - cover letter
4 - excellent sir thank you very much...
Lettersalibaba 1983 - Apr 25, 2010 / alibaba 1983 - Apr 28, 2010
|A recommendation letter ("a candidate for a position in your institution")
2 - This part could be made much more interesting if you add one more sentence to the end --...
Lettersalibaba 1983 - Apr 23, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 24, 2010
|"I was the interviewer"; Reference letter (my own recommendation letter, MSc)
2 - I have known Gaukhar Amirkhanova since 2009, when I was her interviewer for the position of marketing assistant. She...
LettersGauhar_vip - Apr 7, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 8, 2010
|My CV for undergraduate admission (economics, experience, leadership, activity)
4 - * Lived in crude prefabricated house and slept for ten days on bed combined by constructed from nine desks,...
Lettersyeseniyaus - Mar 29, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Mar 30, 2010
|I applied for a position with you company X; Letter on Project Initiatives
2 - In 2005, I applied for a position with your company, X. In 2006, you contacted me about a...
Lettersbsunjohnson - Mar 17, 2010 / EF_Susan - Mar 18, 2010
|Cover letter for engineering research assistant post
8 - Congratulations!! That's great. Enjoy your process, and please check out essayforum.com/ef-contributor-page/ Use your powers to uphold justice and...
Letterssusana8ar - Feb 18, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Mar 12, 2010
|English career Course -- resume and cover letter
9 - What is MAR? Monthly activity report? I'm sorry, I really don't know. You probably have to ask them for...
Lettersno183 - Mar 4, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Mar 12, 2010
|Persuasive Letter (proposal for change, rapport, credibility, logical arguments)
4 - Well, to tell the truth, this essay benefited me a lot. I think that it is great advice, and...
LettersAMS3010 - Feb 20, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Feb 21, 2010
|curriculum vitae for the admission in p.hd.-SMA (singapore M.I.T.ALLIANCE)
4 - Yes, that advice from Jon is pretty great. I also want to add that I think you should start...
Lettersmaneesha - Feb 20, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Feb 21, 2010
|Appeal a letter of denial for admissions (The University of South Florida)
3 - EF_Kevin Thank you so much! I really appreciate the help Kevin....
Lettersjackiierawkzzz - Feb 15, 2010 / jackiierawkzzz - Feb 16, 2010
|Letter of motivation for a master's degree in petroleum engineering
5 - thanks a lot for the modifications.This is very helpfull. But I feel that ther is something missing may be...
Lettersnoussa - Jan 29, 2010 / noussa - Jan 30, 2010
|Letter to the editor to encoruage others to do volunteer work. (500words)
2 - You should have more confidence in your writing. As i read the first paragraph, I see that you have...
LettersJack__EX - Jan 26, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Jan 27, 2010
|MSc Entrepreneurship program application letter
4 - THX, yours answer really give me a great help!...
Lettersxyq068798 - Jan 10, 2010 / xyq068798 - Jan 18, 2010
|Question About Order in a Résumé
6 - you could write the activity in different categories example: Activity Year Competition 2010...
Lettersa9961m - Jan 11, 2010 / lowcal - Jan 17, 2010
|I need a resume and cover letter for a job, don't know where to start
5 - Definitely look up for some examples on Google. Also, what kind of job are you looking for?...
Lettersraymeaiment - Dec 9, 2009 / sydney32 - Jan 16, 2010
|Multiple national and international awarded mathematical -Admission Resume
4 - it is too long and try to connect it with your career/profession...
LettersSimonaB - Dec 29, 2009 / chitown31 - Jan 9, 2010
|is my motivation cover letter for a research fellowship ok?
3 - Thank you very much for your help! I'll do it! Ana...
Lettersanita - Dec 24, 2009 / anita - Dec 28, 2009
|Letter of Motivation for applying Computer Science related fields
12 - yes I guess you're right...
Lettersleonardo092 - Dec 8, 2009 / psykosonik - Dec 28, 2009
|autobiography/ why you want the job (summer adventure camp)
5 - This is what the completed essay would look like (roughly): My name is Jereme Carpe*ter. I play the flute,...
Letterssekiu98381 - Dec 20, 2009 / KeyJewel - Dec 28, 2009
|Should I include a speaking occasion on my CV if I never actually spoke?
3 - Well, inspiration is a tricky wave to catch. The important thing is to try to muster some real spirit...
LettersEllan - Dec 19, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Dec 24, 2009
|My answer for the prompt of HSBC MT program. What do you think?
3 - What do you think about the grammar? I have a serious trouble in grammar and tense. I need a...
Letterstwchan - Dec 6, 2009 / twchan - Dec 7, 2009
|'I hope that you can give me some latitude on this' - my e-mail sent to UC Davis
3 - Great job Jonathan, thanks! I'll help a little, too: However, the school had not received my transcript request when...
Lettershylacy - Dec 3, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Dec 5, 2009
|Coast Guard internship interview questions. Does it sound okay to you? Thank You
2 - uniquely different sounds redundant. I feel as if is unassertive. harm's or harms' You can make it more personal...
Lettershakimhusein - Dec 5, 2009 / meisj0n - Dec 5, 2009
|Reference letter for a post grad Telecomms research degree
6 - psst<good thing he didn't discover I work in a gas station. Whew!...
LettersGrntMnk - Nov 16, 2009 / Jeannie - Nov 21, 2009
|Don't expel my classmates - letter to the principal (practice)
6 - Yes, that is beter. I like sentences with no comma! They are swift and forthright....
Lettersshing200584 - Feb 13, 2008 / EF_Kevin - Nov 11, 2009
|Need help for IOWA MBA Application cover letter
4 - Oh, good point Jeanie, we are lucky to have you here. This looks very professional, and people appreciate...
Lettersallenjoy - Nov 7, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 9, 2009
|Information Technology graduate - review my professional experience
2 - Very impressive accomplishments, very good organization. You had some awkward sentences, but here are my ideas: ...with six...
Letterskajayk - Nov 2, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 4, 2009
|I've been in my field for about 15 years ; PhD Cover letter for Irish Uni?
2 - Hello! Please post that CV only if it does not appear anywhere else on the Internet. Sounds like...
LettersShaari - Oct 30, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 3, 2009
|SPECIAL: A documentation explaining my homeschooled background.
7 - Thank you Sean! I have written my list into an essay. Now... I'm having a little problem editting #1...
LettersNinja - Oct 25, 2009 / Ninja - Nov 2, 2009
|"don't want to scare you away" - Stanford Roommate Essay
6 - Awesome! You let your personality shine through very well. I like the fact that you used a metaphor, but...
Letterssherbert - Oct 25, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Oct 31, 2009
|CV for universities
2 - Hi you should add previous volunteer work and intern experiances to boost your overall resume...
Lettersellab1363 - Oct 19, 2009 / jenchow1992 - Oct 20, 2009
|my CV.. adoptive immunotherapy and the study of cytotoxic T lymphocytes (CTLs)
2 - I don't know enough about this kind of science to advise you content-wise. The only thing I can suggest...
Letterskek - Oct 15, 2009 / EF_Stephen - Oct 15, 2009
|I do not have excellent English skills; COVER LETTER for postdoctoral position
1 - Studying Immune Cells Function Dear Prof. OOO I am writing to apply for the postdoctoral position at...
LettersEunkyung Kim - Oct 13, 2009 / — -
|Response to the advertisement; SCHOLARSHIP (MSc in Public Health)
3 - Thank You so much. I really do appreciate....
Letterspakz - Sep 25, 2009 / pakz - Sep 25, 2009
|Does my resume look alright to you?? any help would be great! thank you soo much
3 - You have included more or less the right sort of information. You should probably expand on some of your...
Lettershakimhusein - Sep 21, 2009 / EF_Sean - Sep 21, 2009
|Impressed by her enthusiastic manner; Recommendation written by teacher
7 - Ok.. actually this is the second paragraph of the recommendation. Thank u anyway. Well, that is nice, the "student-run...
Lettersmikowoo - Sep 14, 2009 / mikowoo - Sep 16, 2009
|My Job App-- Some Descriptions for my current job and expectations
5 - ^I just want other people's opinion on this. If it is one of the 'largest shipping companies in...
Lettersbaobei841130 - Sep 14, 2009 / Liebe - Sep 15, 2009
|"the fast food industry" - english assignment
4 - What exactly do you need help with? As Simone pointed out, you have a clear next step laid out...
Letterssiofio - Aug 9, 2009 / EF_Sean - Aug 30, 2009
|My cover letter (a dietary supplement company in Auckland)
9 - Very helpful,thanks.I didn't know this before, thanks for sharing with me!...
Letterslynn - Aug 12, 2009 / lynn - Aug 24, 2009
|A letter to congress - RE: Cash For Clunkers
8 - Thank you all for your help in editing this letter. I also have a professional freelance editor as...
LettersPele - Aug 15, 2009 / Pele - Aug 21, 2009
|'working in teams' - admission to a PhD program - cover letter
5 - Right, either you want a pure cover letter that says nothing other than "here are my materials" or you...
Letterszawash - Aug 14, 2009 / EF_Simone - Aug 15, 2009
|Cover letter for postdoc application
5 - Thank you guys. All suggestion is highly appreciate....
Lettersgoldlaid - Aug 1, 2009 / goldlaid - Aug 9, 2009
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