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|Should I include a speaking occasion on my CV if I never actually spoke?
3 - Well, inspiration is a tricky wave to catch. The important thing is to try to muster some real spirit...
LettersEllan - Dec 19, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Dec 24, 2009
|My answer for the prompt of HSBC MT program. What do you think?
3 - What do you think about the grammar? I have a serious trouble in grammar and tense. I need a...
Letterstwchan - Dec 6, 2009 / twchan - Dec 7, 2009
|'I hope that you can give me some latitude on this' - my e-mail sent to UC Davis
3 - Great job Jonathan, thanks! I'll help a little, too: However, the school had not received my transcript request when...
Lettershylacy - Dec 3, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Dec 5, 2009
|Coast Guard internship interview questions. Does it sound okay to you? Thank You
2 - uniquely different sounds redundant. I feel as if is unassertive. harm's or harms' You...
Lettershakimhusein - Dec 5, 2009 / meisj0n - Dec 5, 2009
|Reference letter for a post grad Telecomms research degree
6 - psst<good thing he didn't discover I work in a gas station. Whew!...
LettersGrntMnk - Nov 16, 2009 / Jeannie - Nov 21, 2009
|Don't expel my classmates - letter to the principal (practice)
6 - Yes, that is beter. I like sentences with no comma! They are swift and forthright....
Lettersshing200584 - Feb 13, 2008 / EF_Kevin - Nov 11, 2009
|Need help for IOWA MBA Application cover letter
4 - Oh, good point Jeanie, we are lucky to have you here. This looks very professional, and people appreciate...
Lettersallenjoy - Nov 7, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 9, 2009
|Information Technology graduate - review my professional experience
2 - Very impressive accomplishments, very good organization. You had some awkward sentences, but here are my ideas: ...with six...
Letterskajayk - Nov 2, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 4, 2009
|I've been in my field for about 15 years ; PhD Cover letter for Irish Uni?
2 - Hello! Please post that CV only if it does not appear anywhere else on the Internet. Sounds like...
LettersShaari - Oct 30, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 3, 2009
|SPECIAL: A documentation explaining my homeschooled background.
7 - Thank you Sean! I have written my list into an essay. Now... I'm having a little problem editting #1...
LettersNinja - Oct 25, 2009 / Ninja - Nov 2, 2009
|"don't want to scare you away" - Stanford Roommate Essay
6 - Awesome! You let your personality shine through very well. I like the fact that you used a metaphor, but...
Letterssherbert - Oct 25, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Oct 31, 2009
|CV for universities
2 - Hi you should add previous volunteer work and intern experiances to boost your overall resume...
Lettersellab1363 - Oct 19, 2009 / jenchow1992 - Oct 20, 2009
|my CV.. adoptive immunotherapy and the study of cytotoxic T lymphocytes (CTLs)
2 - I don't know enough about this kind of science to advise you content-wise. The only thing I can suggest...
Letterskek - Oct 15, 2009 / EF_Stephen - Oct 15, 2009
|I do not have excellent English skills; COVER LETTER for postdoctoral position
1 - Studying Immune Cells Function Dear Prof. OOO I am writing to apply for the postdoctoral position at...
LettersEunkyung Kim - Oct 13, 2009 / — -
|Response to the advertisement; SCHOLARSHIP (MSc in Public Health)
3 - Thank You so much. I really do appreciate....
Letterspakz - Sep 25, 2009 / pakz - Sep 25, 2009
|Does my resume look alright to you?? any help would be great! thank you soo much
3 - You have included more or less the right sort of information. You should probably expand on some of your...
Lettershakimhusein - Sep 21, 2009 / EF_Sean - Sep 21, 2009
|Impressed by her enthusiastic manner; Recommendation written by teacher
7 - Ok.. actually this is the second paragraph of the recommendation. Thank u anyway. Well, that is nice, the "student-run...
Lettersmikowoo - Sep 14, 2009 / mikowoo - Sep 16, 2009
|My Job App-- Some Descriptions for my current job and expectations
5 - ^I just want other people's opinion on this. If it is one of the 'largest shipping companies in...
Lettersbaobei841130 - Sep 14, 2009 / Liebe - Sep 15, 2009
|"the fast food industry" - english assignment
4 - What exactly do you need help with? As Simone pointed out, you have a clear next step laid out...
Letterssiofio - Aug 9, 2009 / EF_Sean - Aug 30, 2009
|My cover letter (a dietary supplement company in Auckland)
9 - Very helpful,thanks.I didn't know this before, thanks for sharing with me!...
Letterslynn - Aug 12, 2009 / lynn - Aug 24, 2009
|A letter to congress - RE: Cash For Clunkers
8 - Thank you all for your help in editing this letter. I also have a professional freelance editor as...
LettersPele - Aug 15, 2009 / Pele - Aug 21, 2009
|'working in teams' - admission to a PhD program - cover letter
5 - Right, either you want a pure cover letter that says nothing other than "here are my materials" or you...
Letterszawash - Aug 14, 2009 / EF_Simone - Aug 15, 2009
|Cover letter for postdoc application
5 - Thank you guys. All suggestion is highly appreciate....
Lettersgoldlaid - Aug 1, 2009 / goldlaid - Aug 9, 2009
|motivation letter (engineer in mechanical engineering)
4 - Upon reading this letter I began to wonder if English not your native language. Yup, your University is in...
Lettersmohamed22 - Jul 28, 2009 / kenziii - Jul 28, 2009
|Letter to a Manager; You were delivered with different items to what you ordered!
9 - you have done a great job for your first letter. It contain mistakes but thats usual at first step,...
Lettersboonwah - Jul 16, 2009 / Cosmo Resources - Jul 22, 2009
|I want to attend construction managment
5 - That's a very good idea....
Lettershsedigh - Jul 10, 2009 / EF_Simone - Jul 21, 2009
|Invitation letter for visa - British Embassy in Cameron. Can you check grammar and spelling mistakes
3 - "Mr. Serg and Mrs Rosa Domingos Marcial Manuel are both Angolan citizens with diplomatic passports ; they are going...
Letterssinaraneto - Jul 7, 2009 / EF_Simone - Jul 8, 2009
|complaint letter to landlord about the new hired house
6 - You should repair and replenish it before letting people rent it, just my two cent....
Letterstieuzidane - Jun 16, 2009 / MoeMoe1 - Jun 28, 2009
|Cover Letter for internship with a Member of Parliament
5 - ^I agree with Sean. 'I perceive an internship in Westminster to be an exciting and useful enrichment.' ^You...
LettersPhiliboy - Jun 20, 2009 / Liebe - Jun 26, 2009
|Graduate Mechanical Engineer; Recommendation Letter for John Doe
10 - Instead of the 1, 2 list, perhaps you could integrate your examples into the preceding paragraph, and elaborate a...
LettersEsun - Jun 22, 2009 / EF_Sean - Jun 23, 2009
|Statement in support of application for a Research Technician
3 - Aye, the content of these sorts of essay tend to be fairly standard. You have to talk about certain...
LettersSpellbound - Jun 19, 2009 / EF_Sean - Jun 19, 2009
|Cover letter to a Screening Committee; Network Support Specialist
4 - Thanks to both of you...
Lettersjermaine14903 - Jun 12, 2009 / jermaine14903 - Jun 14, 2009
|help with my cover letter, response to job offer for a retail sales clerk
4 - "I have more than just the required experience, am a hard worker and have good organization skills." So...
Lettersjenny411 - Jun 12, 2009 / EF_Sean - Jun 13, 2009
|Letter to Superintendent re: extending high school to 5 years
4 - thankssssssssss...
Lettersjud - Jun 11, 2009 / silentheart - Jun 12, 2009
|Fraternity Interest Letter
6 - Your letter is a bit vague. Try adding some specifics to make in more interesting. What qualities specifically do...
Lettersambitious1 - May 26, 2009 / EF_Sean - Jun 2, 2009
|Job Portfolio: What do I include?
7 - Eric already mentioned this, but it bears repeating: a sample article tailored to the place you are applying would...
LettersMJames - May 5, 2009 / EF_Sean - May 27, 2009
|Letter to Director of Financial Aid
7 - thank you for your help. I gladly appreciate it. and not to sound obviously, that mistake in the second...
Letterschelisajk - May 11, 2009 / chelisajk - May 18, 2009
|Query Letters to Publishers? Need advice
3 - Some excellent advice from Eric. You might also want to head to your local library and check out some...
Letterswriterchick555 - May 12, 2009 / EF_Sean - May 13, 2009
|Graduating from college, cover letter is needed
1 - hi, everyone. I'm a newcomer. This June i'm graduating from college. Of course, Cover letter is needed. Coud you...
Lettersngocyen - May 12, 2009 / — -
|Rinor: My first CV for a job application
6 - Thank you Notoman, EF_Sean, elzbietabielec, michaelfrye1970. Your advices really help me to rebuild my CV. I do appreciate your...
Lettersrinori89 - Apr 26, 2009 / rinori89 - May 7, 2009
|Globalization - an opinion letter in essay form
12 - But this would a be a good thing, surely? If you eliminate the notion of money, which seems...
Lettersttc1234 - Mar 26, 2009 / EF_Sean - May 4, 2009
|letter of concern (human cells) - investigate the facts
2 - Well, libraries are great places to conduct research. If you don't have time to wait until the library opens,...
Lettersgacesaa - Apr 23, 2009 / EF_Sean - Apr 23, 2009
|Response to Dr. Kings Letter to Clergymen Essay
3 - Are you supposed to write a response to Dr. King from a modern perspective, or as if you were...
Lettersnthomasdonalds - Apr 14, 2009 / EF_Sean - Apr 17, 2009
|Appeal letter - Goals, Good Intentions, Seeking Reevaluation
7 - I hope you get to do what you want to do! If you have a clear vision of what...
Letterskrzyazn - Apr 8, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Apr 11, 2009
|How to Effectively Write an Excellent Cover Letter?
1 - If you think writing a resume is hard, try writing a cover letter. Remember, the cover letter is what...
LettersEF_Team - Apr 9, 2009 / — -
|importance of learning new culture and language(for volunteer position)
4 - Thank you so much :) ugh so many grammar mistakesssss anyways, thanks again for correcting my paragraph...
Letterskaynling - Apr 4, 2009 / kaynling - Apr 5, 2009
|How to Write a Perfect and Winning Resume?
1 - If you're starting from scratch, writing an excellent resume can seem like a daunting task. Never fear! Take things...
LettersEF_Team - Apr 3, 2009 / — -
|Can someone help with me with this letter i wrote to the College President
3 - This essay is upbeat and energized. You seem to have a cool personality. I think I understand you about...
Lettersdewain - Mar 26, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Mar 26, 2009
|Seeking Internship; COVER LETTER - Computer Networking
7 - thank you all .....
Lettersreza adinata - Jan 9, 2009 / reza adinata - Jan 10, 2009
|Resume for State College Admission
3 - This is a great excuse to call the admissions office and make a good impression. Win them over with...
Lettersmtsnook - Dec 29, 2008 / EF_Kevin - Dec 30, 2008
|"independent thinking" ; Reference letter (teaching experience)
2 - During every class, she follows what I say and responds with enthusiasm. Whenever she comes across difficulties, she...
Lettersseatoy - Dec 11, 2008 / EF_Kevin - Dec 11, 2008
|I am pleased to recommend Mr. Chang : reference letter
3 - thanks, it is a great help. seatoy...
Lettersseatoy - Dec 9, 2008 / seatoy - Dec 11, 2008
|" extraordinary young man" ;recommendation letter by homeroom teacher
2 - Several times , his language teachers celebrated his essays and stories as the best in the class. He...
LettersPing2008 - Nov 30, 2008 / EF_Kevin - Dec 1, 2008
|Knows the goal and how to achieve it; Letter of Recommendation from Chemistry teacher
6 - Thanks, Kevin! You really brighten my day. :D...
LettersAmyRemus - Nov 27, 2008 / AmyRemus - Nov 28, 2008
|FSU Resume; 'letterman on my high school football team'
4 - Thanks both. that helped alot...
LettersSportjag - Oct 15, 2008 / Sportjag - Oct 15, 2008
|Rogerian Essay: A Letter to My Parents
3 - Actually, this essay requirement is to convince someone in a nicely way, under a letter form. I chose the...
Letterstaiyaki - Oct 3, 2008 / taiyaki - Oct 3, 2008
|Don't change our teacher - keep him until the end of the course 059.
2 - Good evening. What are the specifics of your assignment? Thanks. Regards, Gloria Moderator, EssayForum.com...
Lettersflor - Sep 25, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Sep 25, 2008
|Letter about "My most unhappy experience" - party at Jane's house
1 - Good evening, Gloria. Please help me check this letter out. "Dear Mary, How have you been doing? I'm...
Letterssweetbitterrose - Sep 16, 2008 / — -
|Locklist ----Letter of appeal for continuance workstudy
1 - Didn't know where this letter should be placed. Need help in proofreading, grammar and remain parallel in my sentence...
Lettersbabydoll - Sep 8, 2008 / — -
|Formal recommendation letter re: the vacation job
4 - Any time. Regards, Gloria Moderator, EssayForum.com...
Letterslearningtowrite - Jul 25, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Jul 31, 2008
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