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|My good academic record and motivation make me a strong recommendation for a place at this program.
2 - Hello, This essay was well written overall. You had great organization and good enthusiasm. I made some technical edits...
Letterswasem - Mar 3, 2015 / lynzee22 - Mar 3, 2015
|Germany is considered as pioneer country in the field of different science in Europe
2 - Hello my edits and suggestions are below, By this letter I, WASSIM AL ALI, want to explain (...
Letterswassimali - Feb 26, 2015 / EF_Jasmine - Feb 27, 2015
|I used Gant Chart and histogram highlighting the forecasted completion date of project' key areas
4 - Hi JSU0512, you have made some excellent improvements! Good job! I only see minor things that can be quickly...
Lettersjsu0512 - Feb 11, 2015 / EF_Sheri - Feb 17, 2015
|I speak much English language fluently because when I was 2 I traveled to Britain - I grew up there
1 - Letter of application I want to help in my homework Correcting the grammar English in the apply for...
Lettersmomi24 - Feb 7, 2015 / — -
|Making a cover letter for summer internship in finance - someone with some experience?
25 - The letter you developed is good enough to use. Go ahead and use it in the latest version form....
Letters24mandrake - Jan 20, 2015 / vangiespen - Jan 29, 2015
|Writing a petition to get into graduate school, despite my low GRE scores
2 - Right off the bat I can tell you that trying to discredit a national or international standardized test is...
Lettersjbtaylor - Mar 17, 2013 / vangiespen - Jan 25, 2015
|Garbage is a big global issue nowadays: Discuss on causes and suggest solutions
5 - This is the first time I'm going to post a comment like this: Do you think this short negative...
Lettersah_zafari - Jan 22, 2015 / ah_zafari - Jan 22, 2015
|MOTIVATION LETTER FOR GRADUATE STUDY IN INTERNATIONAL BUSINESS; previous managerial work
2 - While formally called a letter, the format for this paper is actually that of a normal essay. Change your...
Lettersonaive - Nov 12, 2012 / vangiespen - Jan 19, 2015
|Remember the time you finally could not stand on other's mispronunciation of your name? Self letter
2 - Wow! You said a lot about the you from long ago in this letter. Unfortunately, the Jingle that you...
LettersBoa503 - Jan 5, 2015 / vangiespen - Jan 17, 2015
|I am honored to apply for the Erasmus student exchange programme - Motivation letter for erasmus
3 - No... Iam appliying to scholarship , no school invite me thanks very much.......
Lettershassan83 - Dec 23, 2014 / hassan83 - Jan 11, 2015
|When I was born, my dad has founded his computer based company called ''Intuis Computers''
4 - A motivational letter is still formatted as a regular academic essay, not as a formal letter addressed to a...
LettersGuest - Jan 6, 2015 / vangiespen - Jan 7, 2015
|awake "like a cucumber" - From Russia with love
7 - Alina there are a number of required corrections in the paper. Also, you need to reword your first sentence...
LettersAlinaSkripets - Jan 2, 2015 / vangiespen - Jan 3, 2015
|Here's the plan: you cover the microwave, I got the printer. Stanford roommate essay.
6 - Awesome(: this essay was well polished and I think it's definitely ready to submit. You are a perfect example...
Lettersmachyjoy - Jan 1, 2015 / ben_may440 - Jan 1, 2015
|I have confirmed my belief about my career - Cover letter for English language proficiency
5 - I can understand the situation.but,the thing is dead line for the application is 1st of February.(if i missed this...
Lettersayshaa19 - Dec 29, 2014 / ayshaa19 - Dec 29, 2014
|I tweet, a lot, and I am very proud - A letter to isolationists, differentials, and non-tweeters.
6 - Thank you so much for your advice! Hopefully it was specific enough. I will definitely get an older perspective...
Lettersadventoor - Dec 28, 2014 / adventoor - Dec 28, 2014
|INVITATION - we have arranged a meeting - a google hang out.
9 - I like writing so I will start writing in english and posting here for correction. Thank you VERY much...
Lettersheavenplay - Dec 18, 2014 / heavenplay - Dec 21, 2014
|Cover Letter to Space Agency - I wish to work in this industry
3 - Hi, Thank you for your response vangiespen. Your comments are really helpful. I know my letter is too technical...
Lettersaaaallleex - Dec 12, 2014 / aaaallleex - Dec 13, 2014
|I enjoy my job and I am benefited from taking part in project
4 - Hao, it is MS. not MR. :-) Unfortunately, the motivation letter that you wrote does not work very well...
Letterstiyuok - Dec 7, 2014 / vangiespen - Dec 13, 2014
|Cover letter; my skills on researching, my flexibility on cross-cultural teams and my will to learn
3 - Louisa, I'm really glad you mentioned this! To be honest, I hesitated a lot to send the current letter,...
Lettersmakamakafonis - Dec 11, 2014 / makamakafonis - Dec 12, 2014
|In this portfolio I have included all of my work over the course of the semester
10 - good!...
Lettersbriannalottchea - Dec 2, 2014 / vlinh1991 - Dec 9, 2014
|College Portfolio letter about why I chose the essays I did for my portfolio
2 - Alicia, you need to edit the cover letter for redundancies. You mention taboo words and sentence structure problems one...
Lettersaliciamohan - Dec 6, 2014 / vangiespen - Dec 6, 2014
|School Counselor Evaluation - CommonApp
2 - Hello khaled, what type of recommendation letter? But below is a short draft of student recommendation letter for your...
LettersTheBestK - Nov 26, 2014 / Modewap - Nov 26, 2014
|COVER LETTER FOR UN SECURITY OFFICER POST
4 - Here is a sample for you to follow: Dear Mr. G.I. Joe: I am quite interested in...
Lettersrsbm - Nov 20, 2014 / vangiespen - Nov 21, 2014
|I am writing to express my enthusiasm for the Master's program in Computer Science and Engineering
4 - X, don't worry about it. That is why we are here to guide you :-) You do not need...
Letterszuxu - Nov 19, 2014 / vangiespen - Nov 20, 2014
|Recommendation Letter for Interactive Media / Games.
2 - I edited the post to give it a tighter and more informative feel. Let's see if it will work...
Lettersakanarika - Nov 15, 2014 / vangiespen - Nov 17, 2014
|'I was one of his master thesis defense committee member' - Letter of recommendation
6 - Wayne, I feel that this letter is already the best that it can be at this point. It paints...
Lettersveisec - Nov 8, 2014 / vangiespen - Nov 11, 2014
|'I have imbued him with my teachings' - evaluation of a professor, supervisor - letter
5 - Thank you for your feedback. I've updated the same :-)...
Lettersharin9t9t4 - Nov 5, 2014 / harin9t9t4 - Nov 9, 2014
|Hydrocarbon resources plays a vital role to a wide range of fields; purpose letter statement
2 - Olajide, you should save your academic achievements for the latter part of your statement of purpose. The chronological order...
Lettersolajhide197 - Oct 31, 2014 / vangiespen - Oct 31, 2014
|consume the chemical food usually do by people from past time to nowadays, because organic vegetable
3 - Great essay. However, you could easily merge those 2 body paratraphs. In other words, do not attempt to separate...
LettersYULIS - Oct 22, 2014 / Vns9x - Oct 25, 2014
|cover letter - theoretical physics
3 - thanks..but I googled all errors that u found and I think they are correct (?!)..I I have not finished...
Lettersaristotle89 - Oct 22, 2014 / aristotle89 - Oct 23, 2014
|Letter to my Sister's Futile Principal
3 - This isn't really an essay for school, but more of a rant to the principal lol...
Lettersunforgiving - Oct 14, 2014 / unforgiving - Oct 15, 2014
|I believe we will be friends - letter about me to my future roommate
3 - Your note to your roommate should be less formal and more welcoming. In the letters like these that I...
LettersBenjaminAtik - Oct 4, 2014 / vangiespen - Oct 4, 2014
|'Why? It is the question of a child'; motivation letter for a Master in Material Science
3 - I had read the article and it is very well written thanks for sharing this here, I had read...
Lettersnash_c - Sep 14, 2014 / JessieCarpenter - Sep 30, 2014
|Director's admission letter to an International student>
7 - thanks a lot for help...
LettersConsular - Sep 14, 2014 / Consular - Sep 27, 2014
|'self-study programming when i was 17' - letter of motivation for tubitak-2215 scholarship
2 - It is a good letter,I think you should mention your G.P.A and more explanation about your project. I think...
LettersBasilMos - Sep 19, 2014 / Kian1378 - Sep 19, 2014
|'Dear Australian Consulate General Hanoi, Vietnam' - visa application
2 - Mervian, you should not have this letter in an outline form. You need to revise the format and do...
Lettersmervian - Sep 16, 2014 / vangiespen - Sep 16, 2014
|Professor is asking to recommend an International student via common Application - College
14 - Thank you I understand now....
Lettersprofes - Sep 9, 2014 / Consular - Sep 14, 2014
|The feeling you get once you achieve something is extraordinary... my first motivation letter
15 - - ... part of this agency. I believe that working in a position within the agency walls will...
Lettersmatar770 - Aug 27, 2014 / vangiespen - Sep 2, 2014
|my study plan for student visa application
4 - Well, if this letter for applying Student Visa, you need to include these details ; 1. Which University...
LettersLilliannnnnn - Jul 29, 2014 / dumi - Aug 26, 2014
|Bloomberg Sales and Analytic graduate program cover letter
3 - Thanks for advice! I will have to edit a whole bunch! Hopefully I will have a great cover...
Lettersfr97sk - Aug 24, 2014 / fr97sk - Aug 25, 2014
|'I worked in Madagaskar' - Cover Letter Young Professionals Programme at the United Nations
3 - I agree with the previous comments. Instead of telling them about their program, you should instead concentrate on informing...
LettersDeCarvaS - Aug 23, 2014 / vangiespen - Aug 24, 2014
|Letter at the request of a student to apply for the Korean Government Scholarship Program
3 - thank you dear Adelina...
Lettersbbs1994 - Aug 18, 2014 / bbs1994 - Aug 20, 2014
|'social worker' - Description about my current work duty
1 - I am going to apply a job. One of the question is about describing my duties in my current...
LettersSHanafi - Aug 13, 2014 / — -
|'boy in Radiology room' - Motivation letter for a PhD position at a research institution in Ireland
2 - This quote above shows great command of English, except for the extra occurrence of the word 'on' at...
Lettersirilias - Aug 2, 2014 / EF_Kevin - Aug 8, 2014
|a letter of application to the tourism office for a weekend job as a local tour guide
2 - Dear Sir I'm QuangChanh Pham. I have been living in Bentre. I write this letter for you today because...
Lettersmrquangchanh - Aug 7, 2014 / abedkh - Aug 7, 2014
|'I have sent you already our photos' - A letter to my father
5 - it was not working already but when I charged my phone, it was functioning properly...
LettersHenie - Jun 19, 2014 / florszi - Aug 6, 2014
|motivation letter for re-entry visa to Switzerland
3 - Many Thanks "Chloe 224" I really appreciate your reply and give any advices :)...
Letterschanya - Jul 28, 2014 / chanya - Aug 2, 2014
|'I believe that a study in New Zealand will be a fruitful stage of my life' - application letter
2 - My name is Lillian, born on July 2nd[/i] 1993. In 2010, I joined North College of the Beijing University...
Lettersggtutor - Jul 30, 2014 / Gulnar604 - Jul 31, 2014
|Cover letter - visiting laboratory research group (PhD student)
2 - I think you should focus more on the way you you can benefit the research of the professor's lab...
Lettersshetab - Jul 11, 2014 / BasilMostafa - Jul 26, 2014
|Letter of Recommendation - Abbas: bright and energetic young scholar
2 - To whom it may concern; I was Abbas's Lab Coordinator for Electronics Workshop-I Lab and Project Mentor for...
Lettersabzter - Jul 10, 2014 / daylou93 - Jul 17, 2014
|Letter in order to reappeal admission into college during the Fall 2014 semester
4 - Hello, You do not talk about what steps you have taken to ensure that you will not fail...
LettersJetermans - Jun 27, 2014 / admission2012 - Jul 9, 2014
|Scholarship Motivation Letter; IT background with almost 10 years of experience
1 - This is a motivation letter for a scholarship from a company. They ask to explain why I am the...
Lettersjoberti - Jul 3, 2014 / — -
|LETTER OF MOTIVATION FOR THE MASTER OF PUBLIC POLICY (MPP)
2 - I think your essay is to long, you should write the dramatic issue in your country that is urgent...
LettersCarlosei - Jun 22, 2014 / kikiliyik - Jun 30, 2014
|MSC APPLICATION RESUME; RUSSELSMITH NIGERIA LIMITED
2 - I think u should add more certificates and proof for skills that you have...
LettersXavier4 - Jun 21, 2014 / kikiliyik - Jun 30, 2014
|Cover letter for OMV Technical scholarships
2 - I am not really in a position to edit your work (partially due to my ability being incomplete and...
LettersAiman Alrubaie - Jun 20, 2014 / Eddie Han - Jun 29, 2014
|scholarship appeal letter; 'my GPA was a 2.9 - below the minimum requirement'
1 - hello, I have lost my scholarship and am allowed to appeal if I have extenuating circumstances or an intention...
Lettersceramic_pizza - Jun 24, 2014 / — -
|'Being a proud Wits Alumni' - MBA application motivation letter
3 - Thank you so much Kev101...
LettersNtsiki26 - Jun 17, 2014 / Ntsiki26 - Jun 23, 2014
|Letter to dad - he visited us in Philippines
3 - thankyou maam...
LettersHenie - Jun 12, 2014 / Henie - Jun 19, 2014
|Help me to write exemption letter
4 - Please try and start from somewhere then corrections and adjustment will come .It is good to help yourself so...
LettersSohaib799 - Aug 23, 2013 / ibk - Jun 10, 2014
|Scholarship Appeal Letter, failed to meet required GPA, very disappointed
2 - Hi To Whom It May Concern, I am honored to have been a recipient of the Spirit of...
LettersJAMB27 - Jun 9, 2014 / ak2909 - Jun 9, 2014
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