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|Is facebook a toxic addiction? Threats associated with the enormous usage of social networking sites
2 - Riaz, are you writing an op-ed piece for a newspaper? I mean, are you supposed to be writing a...
LettersRiaz148 - Jan 26, 2016 / vangiespen - Jan 26, 2016
|Motivation letter for Norwegian Language Course in Volda University Collage
3 - elena, as you describe your interest in learning about Nyorsk, you should always remember to relate it to the...
LettersElena_Hatle - Jan 23, 2016 / vangiespen - Jan 23, 2016
|Banking and Capital Markets Traineeship: Motivation for the department
6 - Thank you very much for your prompt response vangiespen! Those additional sentences make the overall essay much stronger, I...
LettersAsiaL - Jan 22, 2016 / AsiaL - Jan 23, 2016
|I am applying for a Medical Summer Program at GTU, and some Criticism would be really helpful!
4 - - Also,( avoid using "Also" as this depicts a minor or lesser importance in the sentence ) T he...
LettersDanimal15 - Dec 31, 2015 / justivy03 - Jan 17, 2016
|A letter to my 45 years old self
2 - Pan, the assumption of the letter to your 45 year old self is that you have already achieved all...
LettersCrystal angel - Jan 14, 2016 / vangiespen - Jan 14, 2016
|'preliminary preparation' - Motivation Letter for Master Program in Sustainable Energy Technology
3 - Reza, I'd like to share my remarks for the last 2 paragraphs of your essay as the other parts...
Lettersraditya - Jan 5, 2016 / justivy03 - Jan 14, 2016
|'Dear Partner' - an opinion letter to a company, help me edit this text
Lettershaiyen123 - Jan 12, 2016 / haiyen123 - Jan 12, 2016
|IELTS GT: contact insurance company for the item lost
Lettersrralex - Jan 11, 2016 / rralex - Jan 11, 2016
|Absorbing breadth of knowledge to fulfil my background - motivation letter for Holland Scholarship
10 - Not necessarily English culture, but it does have to do with culture. When one says; "a basic understanding of...
LettersCharlottefang - Dec 11, 2015 / vangiespen - Dec 15, 2015
|'Enjoying electronics' - Motivational letter for erasmus mundus master's program.
4 - Leena, in my opinion, there is only one section of this extremely long and irrelevant motivational letter that should...
LettersLeena_06 - Dec 18, 2012 / vangiespen - Dec 14, 2015
|Facebook a "toxic addiction" a persuasive letter.
2 - Riaz, since I don't have a copy of the article by Ms. Street-Porter to refer to in the overall...
LettersLord_business - Dec 14, 2015 / vangiespen - Dec 14, 2015
|IELTS WRITING TASK1: Your friend wants you to take care of her child in the weekend
3 - Hi, vangiespen. Thank you for your advice, coz they are sooooo helpful. You really hit the nail on the...
LettersMike Wong - Dec 6, 2015 / Mike Wong - Dec 7, 2015
|Motivation letter for Erasmus mundus scholarships - English isn't first language
Lettersroseochoa - Nov 27, 2015 / roseochoa - Dec 1, 2015
|'immersed in fine arts' - Motivation letter for applying for BA International Studies to Leiden Uni.
16 - Charlotte, as much as you want to highlight all your achievements in one go, I mean one essay, this...
LettersCharlottefang - Nov 17, 2015 / justivy03 - Dec 1, 2015
|Write a card to send to Jo - you need to delay visit.
7 - Hi Tu, just to make sure that I would not miss any vocabulary words, I just edited and revised...
Lettershuutu289 - Nov 14, 2015 / vangiespen - Nov 18, 2015
|Letter of Reccomendation for Education Master Program - on behalf of my Professor
8 - Fadila, you have been specific as you clearly stated the year so there the "about" should go away....
Letterskookycuckoo - Nov 11, 2015 / yan500 - Nov 16, 2015
|No longer attend regular English class
Lettersdenish1987 - Nov 15, 2015 / denish1987 - Nov 15, 2015
|'benefit from the opportunities' - Letter of Motivation for Master Program in Development Studies!
9 - Hi Mayara, don't worry about the posts or replies on your letter, somehow it got rolled over and the...
Lettersm4louso - Nov 8, 2015 / justivy03 - Nov 12, 2015
|Formal Letter to my local council
3 - Juan, let me give you a direct remark in writing a letter. Lucena, Córdoba 10th November 2015 ...
Lettersjuangl23 - Nov 10, 2015 / justivy03 - Nov 10, 2015
|I will be a exchange student. This is a letter that I will sent my future host family.
2 - Hi Vy, you are still young but your English is good. I guess English is not your first language...
Lettershoangtram - Nov 4, 2015 / fahmisadja - Nov 4, 2015
|I wasn't very happy about perspective sharing my place with a roommate - Stanford letter
3 - Celine, I am of a different opinion than Saskshi. I am looking at the letters that you wrote from...
LettersCeline12345 - Oct 31, 2015 / vangiespen - Nov 1, 2015
|Argument paper review - letter to the President of United States - question about Foreign Policy
LettersYooavponi - Oct 27, 2015 / Yooavponi - Oct 27, 2015
|'My interest on Forestry' - Letter of Motivation
1 - Letter of Motivation My interest on Forestry was sparked when I entered into the realm of the environment...
Letterssheel30 - Oct 27, 2015 / — -
|Recommendation Letter on behalf of my Supervisior - For MBA
5 - Dear Vangiespen, Thankyou so so much. Your words have really give a boost to my confidence. :)...
LettersErudite - Oct 20, 2015 / Erudite - Oct 20, 2015
|Investigation of the corrosion inhibitive behavior of some quinoxaline derivatives; Chemistry letter
Letterszouzou - Oct 18, 2015 / zouzou - Oct 19, 2015
|Opportunity to study with the Graduate Institute of International and Development Studies
3 - Thank you so much,after going through it I have started with my new letter which would be more professional...
LettersHargun003 - Oct 18, 2015 / Hargun003 - Oct 18, 2015
|The most outstanding trademark of Ms. X is her creativity. Letter of Recommendation from my teacher
4 - Shiyun, I can understand where your confusion might be coming from. However, you have to understand that these recommendations...
Lettersbonboncase - Oct 14, 2015 / vangiespen - Oct 14, 2015
|Recommendation letter from my internship supervisor
2 - Shiyun, the letter of recommendation that you have contains a number of redundancies that you should remove. Even though...
Lettersbonboncase - Oct 11, 2015 / vangiespen - Oct 12, 2015
|Writing a personal letter: write letter to your friend to talk your past experience
Lettersnguyenhoaithi - Sep 20, 2015 / justivy03 - Oct 10, 2015
|How should I write my email to my teacher?
5 - Johnny, never apologize for your English skills. What matters is that you can speak the language and can be...
LettersCPlayer - Oct 3, 2015 / vangiespen - Oct 9, 2015
|Letter to express an intention of continuing studies as a fourth year college student of DFCAMCLP
2 - Reign, there are actually parts in the letter where it sounds like you are whining and already complaining about...
Letterschui - Oct 7, 2015 / vangiespen - Oct 8, 2015
|Letter request for CAT exemption...
4 - Ralph, this is not a very good exemption letter. It does not carry any weight nor valid reason for...
Letterscanillo16 - Sep 14, 2015 / vangiespen - Sep 18, 2015
|Topic: You are on your holiday in Bayview hotel. Write to your friend.
2 - Tran, your letter has a number of grammatical errors that need to be corrected. For example: Grammar...
Lettersblue 23 - Sep 17, 2015 / vangiespen - Sep 18, 2015
|Requesting a recommendation letter to professor to transfer to university
2 - You should probably include what you want to study so that the professor can have a better idea of...
LettersPablo54 - Sep 11, 2015 / klyteshep07 - Sep 12, 2015
|Spanish language is my passion. Letter of motivation for internship opportunity
3 - - At this time( this phrase is not necessary) I am pursuing my Bachelor's degree... - During my degree...
LettersMatisse2 - Sep 1, 2015 / justivy03 - Sep 2, 2015
|I need HUMOR; roommate letter / 'No curfew!' / CIA mission - Stanford Essay
Letterskrobledo226 - Aug 5, 2015 / krobledo226 - Aug 30, 2015
|A formal letter I want to write to a notebook provider
4 - - Dear Sir/Ma'am - I successfully purchased successfully a notebook.. - ..from your own shop three days ago....
Lettersluongk3n - Aug 14, 2015 / justivy03 - Aug 30, 2015
|'I hope my dream-study in America will come true'. How to introduce myself in this letter?
4 - Natalii, I agree with EF_Kevin, your English is good but not perfect which is absolutely fine because everyday is...
LettersNatalii - Aug 15, 2015 / justivy03 - Aug 21, 2015
|My recommendation letter for a Miss entry to the postgraduate course
Letterspukpui - Aug 13, 2015 / ChristineB - Aug 15, 2015
|I've asked myself countlessly: "Is this a good decision?" - My family and educational ambitions
3 - - I started to pay more attention to my own studystudies and slowly.. -... where despite the fact that...
Lettersgloria_kito - Aug 2, 2015 / justivy03 - Aug 7, 2015
|Formal Letter to a Lawyer - some health issues should be discussed
3 - Hello, I would like to give you some assistance. First, I feel there are some missing words. The...
Lettersplayaveli - Aug 3, 2015 / lcturn87 - Aug 3, 2015
|Motivation Letter for the Özyeğin University - Architecture and Design faculty
2 - Added and edited Motivation Letter for the ÖZYEĞİN UNIVERSITY Hello guys, I'm posting my motivation letter for the...
Lettersfauzi27 - Jul 31, 2015 / fauzi27 - Aug 2, 2015
|Letter for research opportunity position - collaborative governance
3 - Naime, first of all your letter is quiet short, it is very short that the reader will not understand...
Lettersnaimehmohammadi - Jul 28, 2015 / justivy03 - Jul 31, 2015
|Appeal Letter to reconsider decision on granting with the Dean Scholarship
2 - - .. this up coming fall semester.. - I appreciate you taking the time to read this letter. -...
Lettersdcheco - Jul 28, 2015 / justivy03 - Jul 29, 2015
|Readmission Letter Appeal Help, Withdrew without Suspension
4 - Hi again. Her are some more of my suggested changes, focusing on grammar: ------------------ I have been...
Lettersmattmac - Jul 16, 2015 / ChristineB - Jul 17, 2015
|Multi-Genre Fiction Assignment Sheet / Acceptance Letter
4 - @ChristineB & @ Justivy03 I am so thankful for your feedback. I have worked on and applied your...
LettersBlueBabey - Jul 6, 2015 / BlueBabey - Jul 15, 2015
|Covering letter for the job of United Nations Young Professionals Programme
2 - I represent myself as a muscular candidate for the job of a young professional programme of the united Nations....
Letterskurdish - Jul 10, 2015 / Hoang Ha ktl - Jul 10, 2015
|How do any of you think a roommate will react to this? (This is for Stanford)
Lettersaraaura0 - Jun 18, 2015 / lightfox - Jun 19, 2015
|Letter of plea for transcript to be wiped.
Lettersthrowaway90 - Jun 14, 2015 / justivy03 - Jun 15, 2015
|Instruction of Forestry in the Non-Degree Access Studies Program - Letter of Academic Intent
Lettersjamesfischbach - Jun 10, 2015 / jamesfischbach - Jun 10, 2015
|The letter to express my dissatisfaction with my roommate.
3 - I can not sleep... CORRECTED: I cannot sleep. Also, to address this concern you need to add how...
Lettersmymi - May 27, 2015 / EF_Carol - Jun 4, 2015
|Persuasive letter (a candidate for a prize of a trip)
3 - Hello dear, I suggest you consider on matrix for your letter and define your statements with reasons and examples...
Lettersjennym82 - May 21, 2015 / Naph - May 22, 2015
|An undergraduate student of Telecom Saint-Etienne writes the Motivation Letter for Brasil exchange
2 - - I am currently an undergraduate student of Telecom Saint-Etienne at the University of Saint-Etienne. ( be careful of...
Lettersfranklin62 - May 20, 2015 / justivy03 - May 20, 2015
|NUS FASS appeal letter (after being rejected) - would I be granted with an offer?
2 - - ..my course of study has exposed me to a wide range of societalsociety issues as the arts hold...
Letterslittlecredits - May 16, 2015 / justivy03 - May 16, 2015
|Appeal letter to my dream university (SMU School of Business)
5 - I am going to give you a few changes on how you can improve. There are minimal changes. Please...
LettersSATscorer - May 11, 2015 / lcturn87 - May 15, 2015
|Waiter position - job application letter General Writing IELTS TASK 1
4 - Just be careful about the sentence formation and generally no personal details are provided in the job application mail....
Lettersyeungwww - May 4, 2015 / vidya200675 - May 4, 2015
|Design separation processes field in the MSc chemical Engineering - recommendation letter
3 - thanks a lot remain text is true????? Mrs. xxxx was a postgraduate student in the MSc chemical Engineering (Design...
Letterswater angel - May 2, 2015 / water angel - May 2, 2015
|I want to serve as a Peace Corps Volunteer because...
2 - Hi, ameenphillips. I think you need to start your essay with an explanation of why you want to join...
Lettersameenphillips - Apr 28, 2015 / ChristineB - Apr 29, 2015
|The internship in the Human Resources section opens wide opportunities for me
3 - Working in the foreign affairs arena will result in a priceless experience for me, especially ... After finishing the...
Lettersruslan321 - Mar 18, 2015 / irhame - Apr 16, 2015
|Excluded from Uni 7 years ago - Readmission Letter
6 - I understand that another reason may be not as frowned upon. However, I think honesty is the best policy,...
Lettersthrowaway90 - Apr 15, 2015 / throwaway90 - Apr 16, 2015
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