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A Study plan for Canada Study Permit - a professional master in Digital Media from a mature student

3 - @Holt I was aware that my application would be hard, so I tried my best to cover the potential...

Letters songoftruth - Jun 19, 2022songoftruth - Jun 20, 2022
Express motivation to pursue a Master Business Analytics & Econometrics study

2 - This is a personal statement. It should not be confused with a motivational letter. The motivational letter focuses on...

Letters pudtarn - Jun 10, 2022Holt - Jun 10, 2022
A motivation letter for why I want to read Geoengineering at the University of Florence, Italy.

2 - The experience your father had when you were 8 years old is irrelevant. It is a stretch to believe...

Letters henryasareadjei - Jun 9, 2022Holt - Jun 9, 2022
The Ministry of Foreign Affairs and International Cooperation - Motivation Letter

2 - The motivation letter does not have a prompt, which makes writing it difficult. Without guidance, your tendency will be...

Letters Kelly1998 - Jun 9, 2022Holt - Jun 9, 2022
E-mail: Request for a recommendation letter for the graduate program

2 - The professor is going to decline your request yet again. The reason will be that you are seemingly dictating...

Letters jsadu - May 29, 2022Holt - May 29, 2022
Ielts writing task 1: A response to a complaint of your neighbors about the noise from your house.

2 - The letter is using an inapplicable scenario. The prompt indicates that the noise problem must be a current problem...

Letters Lanita - May 23, 2022Holt - May 23, 2022
Becoming an entrepreneur in the software industry; Motivation Letter for foreign university

2 - The opening statement is acceptable for the most part. However, I am confused as to whether you are applying...

Letters nisshankaul - May 18, 2022Holt - May 18, 2022
Academic (LOR) Letter of recommendation for MS in Civil Engineering

2 - It is good but could be more informative. The first paragraph is taken as the opportunity for the recommendee...

Letters Ahmed Aborai - May 18, 2022Holt - May 18, 2022
The Software Development and Entrepreneurship Degree - Motivation letter for BSC

2 - The first paragraph is well developed and serves as an effective lead-in to the actual motivational considerations the student...

Letters dineshni - May 16, 2022Holt - May 16, 2022
SAP Appeal Letter Review for College

2 - If the applicant is not willing to get personal with this letter of appeal by offering information that would...

Letters abeishere - May 12, 2022Holt - May 12, 2022
Accounting - Letter of explanation for study permit in canada

2 - The entire letter is not going to be believable to the consular or visa officer upon first, second, or...

Letters Mikebael - May 10, 2022Holt - May 11, 2022
Motivational letter for the University Paris-Saclay, Master's in English for Specific Purposes

2 - It should not only be shortened, it should be deleted in totality with a more appropriate motivational letter written...

Letters Dina K - May 6, 2022Holt - May 7, 2022
Master Environment and Energy Management Motivation letter (UNIVERSITY OF TWENTE)

2 - The response to the first few questions of the essay are on point. The paragraphs respond to the questions,...

Letters yosuarmand - Apr 25, 2022Holt - Apr 26, 2022
Motivation Letter for Admission Postgraduate Certificate in Global Business Management at University

2 - Saying that "I love business" is too amateur. It is almost high schooler in sentiment. I would not use...

Letters tayyabqureshibe - Apr 25, 2022Holt - Apr 26, 2022
Msc Human technology in Sports and medicine - my motivation letter

3 - @Holt Thanks a lot for the reply. Yes, I will consider the changes you have recommended. Thank you...

Letters Vk18luv - Apr 18, 2022Vk18luv - Apr 19, 2022
COVER LETTER APPLY TO SCIENTIFIC DEVELOPER POSITION AT SCHRODINGER, INC.

2 - The letter is not clear about whether the position being applied for is currently open or if the applicant...

Letters dolong2110 - Apr 14, 2022Holt - Apr 15, 2022
Letter of Motivation PhD (research-based, with pre-defined research topic)

2 - Seeing how the motivation for your studies stems more from related experiences after completing the masters course, the molrational...

Letters edgmin - Apr 12, 2022Holt - Apr 13, 2022
Master Environment and Energy Management Motivation letter

2 - I would have to say that the writer over-developed the content of the letter to the point where it...

Letters vincdels - Apr 12, 2022Holt - Apr 12, 2022
You have received an email from the manager of Science club

2 - The sentence structure and word usage in this letter is so bad, the letter loses all its meaning and...

Letters quynha1603 - Apr 11, 2022Holt - Apr 11, 2022
Letter of recommendation for Berea College

2 - The recommendation letter is highly individualistic in focus. It speaks only of the solitary nature of the student. This...

Letters yejiitzy - Apr 9, 2022Holt - Apr 10, 2022
Motivation letter - Master of Science in Spatial data science - Munster, Germany

2 - The 2000 word maximum need not be used if the writer tends to over-extend his motivational letter with non-motivational...

Letters abdelrhmanCS - Apr 6, 2022Holt - Apr 6, 2022
Teaching and National Prizes in Computer Science - Letter of recommendation for GKS-U

3 - Hi, it is my first time here so i didnt notice that. Btw, i cant see my lor...

Letters britonnn - Apr 4, 2022britonnn - Apr 5, 2022
Application for the Master of Education program in Canada - plan of study essay

2 - 11 paragraphs proves to be too long for a study plan explanation. The winter takes several paragraphs before it...

Letters jenny_ye - Apr 1, 2022Holt - Apr 1, 2022
LOR/Recommendation letter for undergraduate - Business Administration

2 - The letter does not contain the same academic tone that it should have, if a teacher had actually written...

Letters kayce - Mar 31, 2022Holt - Mar 31, 2022
Motivation Letter - Research Master in Business - Maastricht University - The Netherlands

2 - The response essay needs to be better structured by creating a clear relationship between the courses of interest to...

Letters hdmquan - Mar 27, 2022Holt - Mar 27, 2022
Erasmus Mundus Master In Impact Entrepreneurship (EMMIE)-- Motivation Letter

2 - The current letter can be made shorter and direct to the point. Remember that there are thousands of applicants...

Letters zack1211 - Mar 21, 2022Holt - Mar 22, 2022
Letter of Motivation Masters in Cybersecurity (Germany)

2 - The historical references in this essay are all more than 5 years old making these irrelevant in relation to...

Letters Rishi986 - Mar 21, 2022Holt - Mar 22, 2022
Statement letter for pursuing a master's degree in petroleum refining.

2 - The letter is too weak as it does not represent a strong and imperative reason for your decision to...

Letters Theep - Mar 15, 2022Holt - Mar 15, 2022
Motivational Letter for the PhD doctoral course in Computer science

3 - Thank you so much for your feedback....

Letters muhammadbinsaif0 - Mar 3, 2022muhammadbinsaif0 - Mar 4, 2022
[GKS-G] Letter Of Recommendation on behalf of my PROFFESOR for application to SNU

2 - There are conflicting statements in the recommendation letter. An example of the conflict is with regards to the thesis...

Letters ViktoriAnders - Mar 3, 2022Holt - Mar 4, 2022
Management Engineering focusing on circular economy motivation letter

2 - A motivational letter aimed at attending an international university masters course is not an academic and internship biography. The...

Letters Julyffff - Mar 1, 2022Holt - Mar 1, 2022
Erasmus Mundus European Politics and Society – Václav Havel Joint Master - Motivation Letter

3 - You need to work more in your background, what makes you the best candidate for them? Prove that you...

Letters iamzakariakk - Feb 28, 2022Julyffff - Mar 1, 2022
MOTIVATION LETTER FOR SUSTAINABLE FOOD SYSTEM MASTER PROGRAMME AT SLU (SWEDEN)

2 - Disposable sentence. It does nothing to help the essay move forward. Since the prompt already indicates everything the...

Letters nhidinh2998 - Feb 23, 2022Holt - Feb 23, 2022
My time in Sweden - Motivation Letter For SI scholarship

3 - Hey Holt Thanks for your feedback. That was my mistake when I forgot to remove the first sentence. That...

Letters nghiabui - Feb 22, 2022nghiabui - Feb 22, 2022
Scholarship Motivation Letter - Lund University, Sweden 2022

2 - This is a waste of space in your motivational letter. Sure the words of Sherly Sandberg were inspirational...

Letters serra_biels - Feb 21, 2022Holt - Feb 22, 2022
Motivation Letter for Scholarship admission in Sweden - The environmental master's programs

2 - Why at this institute? How does the knowledge you will gain translate into a benefit for the institute?...

Letters ansurya - Feb 19, 2022Holt - Feb 19, 2022
Motivation Letter for Turkiye Burslari Scholarship - Food engineering

3 - I think it is better to merge these paragraphs which have the same contents to make your assay with...

Letters jklkoskal - Feb 18, 2022Loren - Feb 19, 2022
Upon returning to Vietnam - Motivation Letter For SI scholarship

2 - you only need 2 paragraphs for your motivational letter. Merge the first and last paragraphs since the plans you...

Letters nghiabui - Feb 17, 2022Holt - Feb 17, 2022
Motivation letter for MSc in Business Analytics

2 - This paragraph is more geared towards a statement of purpose rather than a motivation letter since it describes...

Letters fiorepaola - Feb 14, 2022Holt - Feb 15, 2022
Motivation Letter for Sustainable Product Creation - Msc in Engineering

2 - It is always easiest to open with words of wisdom from someone else. It helps you tell the...

Letters Emjay - Feb 13, 2022Holt - Feb 14, 2022
Public health - Motivation letter review for scholarship

2 - Address them formally either as Dear Consortium or To the Consortium. It is more acceptable than using the...

Letters Ahmedd - Feb 12, 2022Holt - Feb 12, 2022
From Germany to Africa - MOTIVATION LETTER FOR A MASTERS DEGREE IN ECONOMICS

2 - Only paragraphs 2,3,5,6, and 7, work for the motivational statement. The rest of the essay is irrelevant to a...

Letters Hephzibar - Feb 7, 2022Holt - Feb 7, 2022
Canadian Study Permit SOP - I was already refused once

2 - From the very start of the letter, I already saw at least 2 strong weaknesses in the presentation. One...

Letters anaadi - Feb 5, 2022Holt - Feb 6, 2022
Recommendation letter from principal for undergraduate

2 - The letter needs to be professionally written by a writer who can use this as the actual basis of...

Letters heartadnail - Feb 2, 2022Holt - Feb 2, 2022
EPOG Scholarship sustainability consultant motivation letter.

2 - You have chosen 2 areas of study here. A major and a minor, both related somehow to your...

Letters Julyffff - Jan 30, 2022Holt - Jan 31, 2022
Erasmus - Track F Glocal - green consulting

3 - Thank you so much for your advices and efforts to put all together. Really appreciated it!...

Letters Julyffff - Jan 23, 2022Julyffff - Jan 30, 2022
Motivation letter for the erasmus mundus program in green networking and cloud computing

2 - The applicant lacks the required professional experience to be admitted into the EM program. The consortium will have to...

Letters aminebdj - Jan 29, 2022Holt - Jan 29, 2022
Electronics and Telecommunication Engineering - Erasmus mundus motivation letter

2 - So what? Every student has an ambition to pursue their studies in their field of work. There is...

Letters Sanketnawale101 - Jan 28, 2022Holt - Jan 29, 2022
Law student - Erasmus mundus motivation letter

3 - @Holt Thank you so much for your honest review. I narrowed my topic to a singular theme as you...

Letters gabriellacosta - Jan 27, 2022gabriellacosta - Jan 28, 2022
Practice and theory. Motivational letter for MBA in university of Padua (Italy)

2 - The quotations, regardless of whether these are original or taken from someone else, are not necessary in a motivational...

Letters ahmadshk8888 - Jan 26, 2022Holt - Jan 27, 2022
Write a motivational letter for MSC scholarship swedish University of Agricultural Sciences

3 - @Holt Hi Thanks so much I will do as advised...

Letters Glow92 - Jan 26, 2022Glow92 - Jan 26, 2022
Motivation Letter for Masters at Tampere University in Peace, mediation and conflict research

2 - The overall letter is not applicable as a motivational reference. The content is more of a conversational personal statement....

Letters aayushmaniktalia - Jan 25, 2022Holt - Jan 26, 2022
Reference letter for Master of Design program in Hungarian university

2 - The first paragraph must contain a clear reference to the position of the person making the reference. It must...

Letters Ani0506 - Jan 25, 2022Holt - Jan 26, 2022
Motivation letter for applying to master in renewable energy in the marine environment program

2 - Since you are applying to the program with a handicap, the lack of at least 2 years relevant work...

Letters okurus - Jan 23, 2022Holt - Jan 24, 2022
Write an email for Jude about Saturday trip

2 - Unfortunately, the writer only wrote 89 words for a letter that must contain at least 150 words. This will...

Letters ButterTrieu - Jan 22, 2022Holt - Jan 22, 2022
Motivation letter for the Erasmus Mundus Master in Marine and Maritime Intelligent robotics program

3 - @Holt Thank's for your feedback. so except the fact that I didn't emphasize about my interest in maritime technology,...

Letters sofiane - Jan 20, 2022sofiane - Jan 21, 2022
Motivation Letter for Imaging and Lighting in Extended Reality Programme (Erasmus Mundus)

2 - Review the requirements of the motivation letter. Compare it to what you have written. Your motivational letter does not...

Letters bushranajeeb - Jan 19, 2022Holt - Jan 19, 2022
Development Economics - Student Exchange Motivation Letter

4 - The reason why you wish to become a participant in the program is not convincing. The reason used is...

Letters alyssa2036 - Jan 18, 2022Holt - Jan 18, 2022
Write a letter, offering practical advice and reassuring students that they do not need to worry

2 - Since this is a letter to a fellow student, you can take a less formal tone in response....

Letters Doie - Jan 17, 2022Holt - Jan 18, 2022
Medical Laboratory Science graduate - Motivation Letter for Stipendum Hungaricum

3 - Hello! you use words such as I really want which is kinda informal. Also the second paragraph is too...

Letters Tulasse - Jan 17, 2022summerarcadia - Jan 17, 2022

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