alswn95 11 / 28 Jul 26, 2010 #1Volunteer, YMCA Richmond Hill, Ontario 2009 - to the presentLearnt leadership skillsLearnt how to solve problemsLearnt how to communicate effectivelyVolunteer, Medic 8 Clinic Richmond Hill, Ontario 2010 - to the presentLearnt how to fileLearnt how to organize fileOrganized and tidied the areaAssistant Helper, Young Nak Church Toronto, Ontario 2010Made powerpoint presentationPhotocopied papersParticipated in group activitiesChild Care Taker, Young Nak Church Toronto, Ontario 2010Took care of children under the age of 13Organized gamesKept childrenObjective:Objective: Seeking a position as a Abercrombie part time impact team member where my communication and organizations skills will be utilized to their maximum
rajeshaaidu 2 / 31 Jul 26, 2010 #2Dear Kang,You should modify the objective of the resume. It's somewhat offensive. Please, try to make it something like that where both of you (you and team) will be benefited by working together.Thanks,Rajesh
EF_Kevin 8 / 13,321 129 Jul 27, 2010 #3Add an anecdote or example to each of these job descriptions. They are unimpressive if left the way they are. It is better to write a little descriptin of each job and use complete sentences. Can you think of an example for each job?I also recommend writing a little introductory blurb to tell the reader why you are interested in this company. You can be honest. If you have a sincere, modest goal and want to do a good job, and if you mention the employer's name on the resume, they will be very impressed! So, I think it is great that you put the company's name in the objective. But make a change:Seeking a position as a Abercrombie part time impact team member where my communication and organizational skills will be make me a valuable asset.