Msx punk 2 / 15 Aug 8, 2012 #1Hey guys, this is Mehmood from Dubai. Well, guys I'm 13 years. My dream is to becom ena engineer. I want to settle in engineer. Once my dad said that If i wanna settle there then I've to score some band in 'TOEFL', so I have registered in this site. I've wrote an essay plz correct my mistakes!!!Dear Sir/Madam,I'm writing this letter to inform you about lost bag. Unhappy accident occurred yesterday afternoon - 5.08-2012 - on an immigration road Canberra-Oxford. The bus which I took in Sydney arrived at station Canberra Oxford Square around 5 pm. I don't know exact number of the bus. However driver's name was Bill and he was driving white bus, with black stripes on each side. I forgot the bag at the right-back row. It is a common student bag, with one leather strap, brown color and big black text on a rear sideIn case anything similar appears or is returned to the office, please notify me on my mobile phone or use email.Many thanks for your help and co-operation.Warm regards,Mehmood Ahs
EllieR - / 1 Aug 12, 2012 #4I think it's a great dream to become an engineer and I wish you the best of luck!I'm writing this letter to inform you about MY lost bag. THE unhappy..Other than that the two above me got the rest!