I have built a strong business foundation and have learned how to diversify and challenge myself to overcome many obstacles.
I have built a strong foundation in the field of finance and also learned how to be pro-active to overcome the possible obstacles in the business world.
-------------- I just tried to say something relevant to your studies...for this sentence, you need to establish a link with your academic background. .... Polish it as you like because you are the best person to know what you have gained from your studies that can help you perform better in this bank. :)Additionally, I identified and assessed each customer's needs and to the best of my ability, I helped them leave with a smile.
------ strong point and nicely presented :)Providing excellent customer service is vital in banking and that is precisely what I will offer
when I get hired by XXX.if I get an opportunity to join your prestigious organization.surveyed our graduation class to calculate the expected demand,
I suggest;conducted surveys to assess the expected demandWe
greatly exceeded our
goalstargeted budgets,This unique experience instilled in me the confidence that my monetary experience, interpersonal skills and goal-oriented mindset will be an asset to your branch.
This exposure not only helped me gain skills such as interpersonal, attention to detail (i included this because you talked of checking accuracy and reliability of payments ) and target oriented but also made me a confident team player.Good Job and good luck!
:)