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Letter to a friend inviting for a party at home


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Oct 28, 2013   #1
You want to have a party at your house.Write an email to your friend and invite him/her to come . Tell your friend when you are having the party and ask if she/he knows how to get there. Tell your friend what to bring .

(About 120 words)

Please correct me
I would appreciate any ideas

Hi there, John
Long time no see. Hope all's well in your world! 

I would like to tell you that i have a party next week on Tuesday September 23,and i would like to invite you.I am sure you will have a great Time if you join us in the party. As you know due to my new job, i moved to a new address which is 155, Fitz Boy Ave, Birmingham. I know that from your home to here you have to pass through M41 Motorway.So you have to be careful because the Motorway is really busy on Tuesdays and you may get delayed.I would like to recommend that you start your journey one hour earlier .You don't need to worry about a parking place because i am going to hire my neighbor's parking place.For the party night please wear (Fancy dress costumes) so make sure that you bring extra clothes to enjoy the party and spend a great time together.

Cheers
Mark
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Oct 28, 2013   #2
Long time no see

Well.... this is a pretty slang saying. This is obviously an informal letter so you have lots of flexibility. But, if this is for some writing purpose, they you should not have slang phrases in your writing.

Hope all's well in your world! 

.... this one is fine

I would like to tell you thatiI have a party next week on Tuesday September 23,and i would like to invite you.I am sure you will have a great

I am going to have a party at my place on next Tuesday, 23rd September. I am inviting you too and I am sure you would be there and have great fun with us.

As you know due to my new job, i moved to a new address which is 155, Fitz Boy Ave, Birmingham.

I guess you know that I have moved into a new address, which is 155, Fitz Boy Ave, Birmingham.

I know that from your home to here you have to pass through M41 Motorway.

It's not very difficult to find. Take M41 Motorway...


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