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HOUSE KEEPING RESUME


MaxOneMillion 2 / 5  
Feb 26, 2011   #1
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Can you find any grammar errors? I would like pros and cons please.
Satterfield2006 2 / 3  
Feb 26, 2011   #2
Establishing a relationship with my client so that they are comfortable asking anything and everything of me. I am a youthful man, who takes pride in any given task with an open mind and a positive attitude.which means I am inherently vigorous in my daily habits, and thus I will approach every task given to me; with smiles and vitality.i think u can do w/o this sentenceI do love large families and an comfortable working with them as I come from one myself . I am very reliable and dependable person who understands the importance of a job well done.I think having only missed one day of school this semester proves that point.

Completing Service Learningwhich i s an after school program thatrequires students to take part in cleaning up after the community. is a testament to my house-keeping excellence.This after school program had no requirements other than the common:Completing Service Learning focuses on washing dishes, wiping table tops , putting things in their respective places, and vacuuming. but during my enrollment I went above and beyond.you just want to talk about the program

I would do things such as: un-clog toilets, replace lightbulbs, wipe down door-handles, make sure utensils were spotless.not needed
EF_Kevin 8 / 13,321 129  
Mar 6, 2011   #4
"Youthful man" does not seem to really work.

I don't see any errors, but I think you should try to express an intention. Tell them your real objective. Your objective is not just to be a great employee, but instead there is something that is important to you, some concept that makes you want to do this kind of work. Let the reader know what you are all about.

:-)


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