'I have imbued him with my teachings' - evaluation of a professor, supervisor - letter

I am deeply elated to write this recommendation letter furnishing my evaluation of Mr.XXXXX's academic aptitude and electronics acumen for your reference.
I have known Mr XXXXX for the past 3 years, both as a professor, an assigned supervisor of his graduation project and even outside the University personally and this gave me the chance to gain perspicacity into the student's dexterity and charisma.

I have imbued him with my teachings on Embedded Systems, Digital Electronics and Microcontrollers over 3 semesters here at Charotar University of Science & Technology. To begin with, he is an excellent student, with a lively curiosity that makes him dissatisfied with superficial explanations. That curiosity frequently led our lecture session's dwell deeper into areas that, otherwise, would have remained unexplored. Never content to settle for conventional wisdom on anything he stands out as a very extraordinary one with his learning competence, ostentatious personality and academic spirit.

Several ambitious projects were undertaken by him enthusiastically over the course of his graduation. He followed through on his promise to present a research paper during his final year. Moreover, he handled the endless revisions and saw the research paper reach through the publication phase. This illustrates his high level of motivation. Mr XXXXX, who always backs up his assertions with research, has his papers meticulously sourced, and he never takes shortcuts when it comes to coursework and special projects. He works well independently and in group settings.

Mr XXXXX has also really well-developed presentation and public speaking skills. His oral presentations and reports at student's conferences were very clear and thoughtful, they were well-received by his classmates and professors. He is articulate and able to express himself very well in formal situations and in informal discussions.

Mr XXXXX happens to have many interests beyond academics. He has participated actively for various social causes & many community welfare programs. Bachpan: An initiative wherein each child in the rural village of Valletva is home schooled by a volunteer every weekdays. Mr XXXXX is well known face among the notorious kids of Valletva village.

Add to all this that Mr. XXXXX is a very congenial person, well-liked by teachers and fellow-students alike, and you will see why I am so positive about this ebulliant and zealous young scholar. I endorse his candidacy with confidence and enthusiasm.

Mr. XXXXX will be graduating as one of the top five in his class. I won't be surprised if he is named salutatorian or even valedictorian. If you're seeking a top student with the character and dedication to excel in college, he is truly one of will to rise to the occasion.

He would be an outstanding asset to your program. I give him my highest recommendation.

If you need any further information about this promising young man, please feel free to contact me.

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Harin, this recommendation letter is too long and needs to be cut down. I will take the opportunity to cut down the content for you, aligning it better with the content of a recommendation letter. Our intention is to present your personality in the point of view of the person writing the letter. Right now, it is too detailed to the point where certain information becomes unnecessary already. The admissions officer has other sources for the same material mentioned in this letter that creates a redundancy.


- Having worked with Mr. XXX over the past 3 years as his professor in the subjects of Embedded Systems, Digital Electronics, and Microcontrollers, graduation project supervisor, and as a personal friend, I am quite familiar with his abilities both professionally and personally. As a student, he has been quite inquisitive, never being satisfied with superficial explanations. His curiosity has always led him to think outside the box so that he can delve deeper into the fields of study that puzzle him. His character is that of one who never settles for conventional wisdom and always seeks extraordinary methods of learning competence.


-I combined these two paragraphs into one for you.


- Having completed several successful projects over the course of his graduation, he has proven to have an uncanny patience for constant revisions, which eventually led to the publication of his research paper. This high level of motivation, combined with his research tenacity and public speaking skills have proven to be his strongest points both as a student and a person. He displays the same excitement and dedication to his extra curricular activities as well by participating in Bachpan, a social intitiative where he works with the rural children of the Valletva village by homeschooling them during weekdays.


- Mr. XXX is an extra ordinary young man with a congenial personality that helps him work with even the most difficult personalities. He is capable of working in the most stressful and difficult work environments and has managed to deliver more than is expected of him with each of his undertakings. All of these are the reasons why he graduated in the top five of his class.Considering everything that thing young man has to offer your university, I know that he will make an excellent addition to your student roster which is why I am giving him my highest recommendation as a student for acceptance into your university.

Can you try to revise the essay in this manner so that it can be better reviewed? I believe that this is a tighter version of the essay and should work well for your purposes. We just need to see it in the revised format to make sure we did not miss anything :-)

Thank you for your feedback. I've updated the same :-)