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Job Application for a part-time job


rinirini 2 / 5  
Dec 13, 2017   #1

registering letter for an employment office



You are looking for a part-time job.Write a letter to an employment agency. In your letter:
Introduce yourself
Explain what sort of job you would like
say what experience and skills you have


I am writing to register in your job-bank database as a job seeker. I am a student at the Oxford University in the UK. I would be indebted to you if you could guide me to grab an appropriate job. Please allow me to elaborate.

As you see from my CV, I have to attend classes in the forenoon; I would appreciate a part-time job. I will be available for an afternoon at 2 pm to midnight. Needless to say, I would need some time to sleep too. Therefore, am willing to do any job that suits my timetable.

As far as experience is concerned, I have worked as a delivery guy in Mc Donald for 1 year. This was followed by 2 years' experience in customer care. Hence I have strong communication skills and still have valid two wheeler and four-wheelers licence.

I look forward to your reply

Yours faithfully,
Vishnu Prasad
Holt  Educational Consultant - / 14,767 4770  
Dec 13, 2017   #2
Vishnu, the letter that you wrote is not properly developed. You only delivered the most specific prompt requirements as indicated in the list. You need to expand upon that presentation in order to make it more effective. For example:

To Whom It May Concern,

I am XXX, a current student at Oxford University who is in need of a part time job. I heard about your agency from XXX. It is upon his recommendation that I am eager to become part of your data base. I have work experience as a food delivery person at McDonald's and I am a licensed driver. Being a full time student though, I am only available to work part time in the afternoons starting at 2 PM on-wards. I have attached my resume to this letter in order to familiarize you with my other talents and skills that you may find employable. I would like to highlight a few of my strengths as worker for your consideration:

(bullet points listing of strengths and applicable training)
I trust that my talents and skills will make me highly employable in today's part time job market. I do not doubt that your company has the ability to match my skills with the perfect employer. You may contact me at XXXXXXX in case you need additional information or have a potential job for me to interview for.

With much thanks,
XXXX


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