Hello, I am very new but I find that this is a wonderful website. My native language is not English so please give me some review for this letter of recommendation for my student. Thanks a lot !
January 8, 2008
To Whom It May Concern:
I am very pleased to recommend xxx for admission to your college program. As his principle teacher for four years, I have watched this young man develop both academically and personally into a mature individual, ready in every way for his college years.
As a monitor in his class, xxx is always the leader in every aspect and holds the highest position in his class's rating for four consecutive years. Being his teacher, I can vouch that he is one of the most brilliant and kindhearted student that I have encountered in my career. He is an energetic, enthusiastic leader in all jobs of his class as well as voluntary activities held by school. xxx is also very responsible to his work and is able to handle the pressure of deadlines very well. He has an extremely amiable personality and is popular among his classmates as he shows great consideration and deep respect for others. On many occasions, he helps his classmates in various subjects, especially Mathematics. Being honest and hardworking, he demonstrates the best of behavior and excellent study habits.
With an outstanding intellectual ability and strong leadership qualities, xxx has led his classes in numerous subjects as well as other extracurricular events successfully.
As his teacher, I strongly believe that his perseverance, intellectual ability and enthusiasm for learning and working are qualities that should help him well in his future jobs. He is undoubtedly the type of student that has the potential for great success at the college level. His indefatigable efforts, combined with his work ethic and ability to self-improve, are recipes for success in the years to come. I wholeheartedly recommend him for admission to your institution and wish him the very best in his further endeavors.
Your letter of recommendation is an excellent one! I have just a few editing tips:
As a monitor in his class, xxx is always the leader in every aspect and has held the highest position in his class's rating for four consecutive years.
as well as voluntary activities held by school. - I'm not sure exactly what you meant here. Are you referring to extracurricular activities? Be sure to use an article before the noun: "the school."
xxx is also very responsible in his work
On many occasions, he has helped his classmates in various subjects,
I'm sure this letter will be very beneficial to your student!