here is my letter of motivation for a master's degree in petroleum engineering. Please review. I would appreciate your comments and suggestions.
thank you for your help
Dear Sir, Madam
Extremely interested of oil industry and seduced by your prestigious institute, I am writing to you to pursue a master's degree in petroleum engineering. I am a last year engineer student of the National School of Engineers of Sfax (ENIS) and I would like to become a qualified petroleum engineer.
During my university education, I started paying more attention to the energy needs of our planet and realized the increasing reliance of humanity on oil and its products. And I think that the demand for safe, affordable, clean energy is increasing constantly. All these reasons solidify my desire to become a successful petroleum engineer to make a difference in the world.
The missions I am particularly passionate in are examining the production potential of deposits as well as technical means to implement to maximize recovery rates.
As a future graduate of Electrical Engineering, I have acquired a science-engineering program emphasizing math, chemistry, and physics which provides the necessary background for petroleum engineering. Practically bilingual, I also have a very good level in English and a working knowledge of German.
While waiting to meet you to explain more my motives, please accept, Madam, Sir, the assurances of my highest consideration.
While waiting to meet you to explain more my motives, please accept, madam, sir, the assurances of my highest consideration.
I would take that out...but overall its a good letter. :)