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motivation letter for my masters degree in international relations in the university of palmero



historian 003 1 / 2  
Sep 20, 2026   #1
My passion for History started when I was a child, driven by a curiosity to understand how societies evolve and the forces that shape them. I was curious to know how, who, and why my environment and the societies around me became the way they were then. This curiosity drove me to pursue a Bachelor's degree in History and International Studies at the University of Ilorin, Kwara State, Nigeria. During the course of my studies, my interest in global politics, international law, foreign policies, and bilateral trade grew increasingly, especially with the introduction of courses such as International Politics, International Systems, Philosophy of History and International Studies, and Contemporary History of the Middle East. This interest followed me throughout my journey in History and International Studies and became one of the major reasons why I am seeking deeper knowledge in International relations at the University of Palermo.

During my undergraduate studies. I conducted a historical research on the economic impact of Oja-Oba (the King's Market), the oldest market in Ilorin, Kwara State, Nigeria. Applying my knowledge in historical methodology, I collected data using both primary and secondary sources. I then analyzed and interpreted my data. which helped me introduce more structure, detail, and clarity while also identifying and filling gaps in the existing related projects. In addition, my analytical and interpretative skills were further strengthened during my visit to the Osun-Osogbo Sacred Grove and the Ooni of Ife Palace in Osun State, where I was required to write a detailed report about my experiences and lessons with some evidences of pictures. Those experiences enhanced my abilities as a historical analyst and also improved my problem-solving, communication, and decision-making skills. I am highly motivated and eager that this will contribute to my learning experience in the classroom. However, they also revealed a gap I am determined to fill: a deeper understanding of global politics, international trade and relations, international security, international law, and relations between states.

This is why I am particularly drawn to the University of Palermo, as its multidisciplinary approach to research aligns closely with my academic and career path. I am also encouraged by the department's commitment to academic quality and its responsiveness to students' needs, which reflects a supportive learning environment that prioritizes student development. In addition, the emphasis on seminars and workshops that translate academic knowledge into practical skills is particularly important to me, as it bridges the gap between theory and real-world application.

My career ambition is to become an International Policy Analyst, conducting research on global political, economic, and environmental trends to provide informed recommendations that support effective foreign affairs and environmental policymaking for governments, non-governmental organizations (NGOs), and international institutions. i am especially impressed by the opportunities the department offers students to engage with professionals in the field. I believe these interactions will provide valuable practical insights and help me develop the professional skills and experience necessary to excel in my chosen career. Thank you for considering my application . I look forward to the opportunity to join this prestigious department at the University of Palermo.
Holt  Educational Consultant - / 16208  
Sep 20, 2026   #2
My passion for History started when I was a child

This is a very generic claim that the reviewers, regardless of the school or scholarship being applied to, does not believe. They want to know when this realization actually happened. Not the age, but the event and the impact that it had on you that inspired you to follow this path.This whole paragraph does not stand out as a hook or introduction. It does not contain any memorable information that would persuade the reviewer to continue reading your statement.

The work focuses too much on your academic background rather than presenting an equal discussion regarding your academic background summary and how you have applied these studies to your current profession. That way, the progression towards a masters degree, and your choice of the University of Palermo will have a connected presentation consideration for the reviewers and admissions committee members. To the trained eye, the post study career plan does not make sense because we do not know at what point your career is at right now.
OP historian 003 1 / 2  
Sep 22, 2026   #3
@Holt
thank you for your review, when you spoke about how i have been able to apply the studies to my profession, i am a fresh graduate with no work experience relating to my field. what i do currently is not connected to my field of study. how do you suggest i tailor that into my motivation letter
Holt  Educational Consultant - / 16208  
Sep 22, 2026   #4
Without the professional relationship, it will be difficult to say how well this essay will be received by the scholarship admissions committee. While EM is open to new graduate applicants, only those with the strongest internship and student work experience often get the opportunity to avail of the scholarship. That is not to say that the essay you are presenting is weak. It is sufficient. My worry though is how well it will stand up to the competition who might have more relevant experience credentials than you do. How well will this essay and your other documentations stand up to the competition? The only way to find out is to submit your application and see if you will be successful. There is no fixing the essay that you have now because the work experience does not exist. So your academic exposure will have to suffice. Good luck with your application. Do let us know how it goes for you.
OP historian 003 1 / 2  
Sep 23, 2026   #5
@Holt It's actually a motivation letter for admission into the university not scholarship. However, Thank you for your response. I will let you know how it goes


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