I have to describe my reasons for choosing this study programme and the education goals I want
to achieve in Norway on a separate piece of paper. I have to limit my answers to 600 words. Could you please check the structure and grammar of the letter below. I would appreciate any suggestions about making it better!
Dear Professors,
It is with great pleasure that I am submitting my application for The Norwegian language course at V University College to begin in august 2016. I am currently studying Norwegian language at V-n Voksenopplćring with the great interest of getting Master's degree in Economy science or Bachelor`s degree in another field in the future.
To me, continuing my education is crucial because I want to settle here in Norway as quickly as possible, begin to feel a sense of belonging in Norwegian society. The country is dependent on high employment levels and needs a highly educated population. Norwegian course will greatly benefit me to achieve that. I have recently gained the experience within a field of Marketing and Logistics in Academy of Economic Science of MLD during three years of studying and carried out fallowing internships: Production and Licensure at TDL ŤI-ať, which gives me the opportunity to continue my education in Norway and to begin my career here.
It would be a great experience to be a part of the different student organizations and festivals, which are provided by Volda University Collage, learn about the culture, history, geography traditions, religions and ethics in Norway. My future plans are to stay in here, learn Norwegian language, get Norwegian education and become a part of Norwegian society. In the moment, I am learning nynorsk and working in the local kindergarten, which is a beginning of adapting in the new country for me.
I appreciate you taking the time to look over my application and enclosed documents. I look forward to join VUC, it would be a great honour for me.
Yours sincerely,
Elena H
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elena, as you describe your interest in learning about Nyorsk, you should always remember to relate it to the fact that you wish to pursue a masters degree at a Norwegian university. That way you begin to show the foundation that you are creating for your eventual migration to Norway. When you start with the academic level of interest, your reason for pursuing advanced language studies makes more sense. You don't really portray much of that reasoning in the essay. The first part talks about information that the reviewer already knows about the level of need for employment in their country. So that doesn't really help the essay along.
Aside from that, you should proof-read the essay for capitalization issues and structure errors in your sentences. Right now, you are still in the draft stage so the contents of the essay will still change as you write it. However, it is always best to practice self-editing as you go along so that you don't have a lot of editing to do towards the end of the essay.
