no bumping :P if no one posts, it'll stay in unanswered
what is this really about? an english paper? is the recipient a friend? i dont quite get the first paragraph otherwise.
****, what you presently have, or how your website is currently running is not satisfactory.
woah. some what strong, maybe not a bad thing. but sudden
You can do, have, or be more and generate exceptional profits.
im confused here
My advice has helped many people just like you get improved results.
and here. maybe because of the extended "helped...get improved..." <sounds somewhat forceful again.
reading up to the 2nd paragraph, i don't see anything about your one "ideas" where are they :?
self-discipline.
what does this have to do with web design? unless the real reader knows, im clueless
By developing an interactive layout for your website, you can increase the average time spent on your site.
nice, the first piece of obvious advice.
it is essential to keep your site creative, interesting, and interactive.
ok, but what else, other than the obvious, have you stated here?
By offering a newsletter that gives updates, information, and discounts, you will be able to connect with the viewer. Another way to maintain a high retention rate is by creating a forum.
great advice. finally something solid
Spending a little money and giving 33% effort is better than being cheap and giving 100% effort.
again, puzzled here.
I hope everything goes well and I know you will be successful, yet again.
the ending part is good. but the "yet again," why say this?
overall, your advice is somewhat meager. make a forum, vamp up the interactiveness of the site, make a newsletter, and fluff. the structure of the intro to ending is decent, by long winded on the intro part. your own advice is meager compared to pleas to accept the advice. good luck here~