Dear Sir or Madam,
As the director of IB department in Beijing Huijia Private School, I am pleased to recommend Mr. Chang He, a student enrolled in 2006. He is an academically excellent and integral boy and strong in organizing and leadership. Therefore, he is one of the students I am most proud of.
Mr. Chang He played an important role in class and school activities. When he entered into IB department, he had hard time getting used to studies and life here, but after quick self-adaptation, he soon became an active member of the class. He joined Loving Heart Society and led other students to clean classroom and other public areas. Due to his responsibility and thoroughness, he was selected as the executive person and organized various charity activities such as donation to Sichuan quake-stricken areas and charity sales. All these activities are well echoed and his performance was also well acclaimed.
Mr. Chang is a warm-hearted, sympathetic and responsible boy. He visited Old Person's Home and orphanage in LangFang, Hebei Province. There he helped the elder wash clothes and chatted with them. He also joined the trip to Guizhou, an underdeveloped province in Southeast China. Witnessing the misery of local students, he made a lofty decision to build a library for them. He told me he wanted to become a philanthropist and help more people.
As a diligent and motivated boy, he won the trust from teachers and students. For the past two years, whenever he was responsible for club activities or others of bigger scales, he carried out his duty faithfully. He also purchased printers and took the maintenance job. In addition, he was awarded several prized in dormitory show.
In all, I am pleased to recommend such a diligent and loving student to you. Therefore, I sincerely hope you can offer him an opportunity for further studies and I am sure he can make valuable contributions to your university and the whole society.
Thanks for posting! Here are some corrections, though your English is very good already.
He is an academically excellent and integral boy, strong in organization and leadership. I am exceedingly proud of him.
There he helped the elders wash clothes and chatted with them.
In addition, he was awarded several prizes in a dormitory show.
Overall, I am pleased to recommend such a diligent and loving student to you. I sincerely hope you can offer him an opportunity for further his studies, and I am sure he can make valuable contributions to your university and the whole society.
